2023年內(nèi)蒙古自治區(qū)巴彥淖爾市大學(xué)英語6級大學(xué)英語六級真題(含答案)

【2023年】內(nèi)蒙古自治區(qū)巴彥淖爾市大學(xué)

英語6級大學(xué)英語六級真題（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

Students"InterpersonalRelationship.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前許多大學(xué)生處理不好人際關(guān)系

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我的看法

Students*InterpersonalRelationship

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopic

ofChildrenObesity.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtothe

outlinegivenbelow.

1.學(xué)生的肥胖問題日益嚴(yán)重

2.這一現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因

3.你認(rèn)為應(yīng)如何改變這一現(xiàn)象

ChildrenObesity

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicSay"Thanks"toParents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.很多大學(xué)生從未對父母的養(yǎng)育之恩道過謝

2.請詳細(xì)說明其中的原因

3.你的算法Say"Thanks"toParents

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomplaint

lettertothecustomerservicedepartmentofthecompany,sheadoffice.You

boughtalaptopafewdaysagofromabigcomputerchainstore,butthelaptop

stoppedworking.Whenyoutookitbacktothestore,theyrefusedtodealwith

theproblem.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven

below.

1.計算機出現(xiàn)了什么問題。

2.與店方交涉的經(jīng)過。

3.你希望公司的客戶服務(wù)部門能盡快幫助解決問題。

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyViewonChangesofNationalPublicHoliday.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.在中國實行已久的五一黃金周在2008年被縮短，但是新添了幾個較

短的法定假日

2.這種變化帶來的影響

3.你如何看待這種變化

MyViewonChangesofNationalPublicHoliday

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicALettertoUniversityPresidentaboutSafetyon

Campus.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyour

compositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

假如你叫王明，你就本校安全狀況給校長寫信。你的內(nèi)容涉及宿舍及自

習(xí)室偷盜問題、夜晚校園安全問題等，并提出自己關(guān)于加強校園安全的

建議.

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會和經(jīng)濟發(fā)展.網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2.但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)

站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等

3.我們應(yīng)采取措施制止這些，并建立一個健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledWhatDoYouThinkofChallenge.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.挑戰(zhàn)的意義。

2.如何迎接挑戰(zhàn)。

3.我的看法是……

WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

withthetitleofHowISpendMySummerVacation,describinghowyou

spendoneofyoursummervacationsinthecountryside.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinEnglish:Situation:

Studentshavedifferentwaystospendtheirsummervacations,andyoudecide

totakeyoursummervacationwithyourfamilyinthecountryside.Your

feelingisquitedifferentfromthatinthecity,soyouthinkaboutitdeeply.

10.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

ShouldWeAbolishtheOne-ChildPolicy?Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.有人贊成現(xiàn)在廢除獨生子女政策

2.有人則表示反對

3.我的看法

ShouldWeAbolishtheOne-ChildPolicy?

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

SomeexpertsthinktheFremontwaspushedoutbyotherpeoples,whileother

expertsbelievethattheymovedsouthbecauseofsome.

12.

Corrthinksthatifthereisanyproblemwithadrug,ifsbettertoknowit

13.

Theissueofperformers'ethicshasalwaysbeentoleratedby.

14.

Anyminimaldeviationfromnormalform,andfunctionmaybe.

15.

TheemergenceoflocalsharemarketsoutsideLondonwaspromoted

by.

16.

Theexactprocedures,bywhichonecantellwhetherenoughpainthasbeen

applied,arerevealedinthistext.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.Ifsadvisedtoextendyourprofessionalintereststofieldsthatcomplement

andleveragethework

18.

Incompatiblecommunicationsisacountry-wideproblemintheU.S.because

ofthewhichshouldbeconvertedorreplaced.

19.

Antibioticshavenoeffectondiseasescausedbyviruses.

A.YB.NC.NG

20.

Youraddress,phonenumber,socialsecuritynumber,fullnameorplaceof

employmentshouldnotbemadeknowntoallbecausetheyare.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(28)

A.Theyhelpthestudentstobecomemorecooperative.

B.Theyareverygoodentertainmentforstudents.

C.Theymakelotsofmoneybuysellingtickets.

D.Theyhelpthestudentstobuildgoodteams.

22.

[B4]

23.(22)

A.Thefamousbrands.B.Thecereals.C.Books.D.Meat.

24.

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25.聽力原文：Thereisapopularbeliefamongparentsthatschoolsareno

longerinterestedinspelling.NoschoolIhavetaughtinhaseverignored

spellingorconsidereditunimportantasabasicskill.(26)Thereare,however,

vastlydifferentideasabouthowtoteachit,orhowmuchpriorityitmustbe

givenovergenerallanguagedevelopmentandwritingability.Theproblemis

howtoencourageachildtoexpresshimselffreelyandconfidentlyinwriting

withoutholdinghimbackwiththecomplexitiesofspelling.

Ifspellingbecomestheonlyfbcalpointofhisteacher'sinterest,clearlya

brightchildwillbelikelyto"playitsafe".Hewilltendtowriteonlywords

withinhisspellingrange,choosingtoavoidadventurouslanguage.(27)That's

whyteacherstimeandagainencouragetheearlyuseofdictionariesandpay

attentiontocontentratherthantechnicalability.

Iwasonceshockedtoreadonthebottomofasensitivepieceofwritingabout

apersonalexperience:"Thisworkisterrible!Therearefartoomanyspelling

errorsandyourwritingisillegible*'.Itmayhavebeena(28)sharpcriticismof

thepupil'stechnicalabilitiesinwriting,butitwasalsoasadreflectiononthe

teacherwhohadomittedmentionofthechild'sdeepfeelings.Theteacherwas

notwrongtodrawattentioniotheerrors,(29)butifhisprioritieshadcentered

onthechild'sideas,anexpressionofhisencouragementinthepupil'sfree

presentationwouldhavegivenhimmoremotivationtoseekimprovement.

(33)

A.Thedifficultiesinteachingspelling.

B.Theroleofspellingingenerallanguagedevelopment.

C.Thecomplexitiesofthebasicwritingskills.

D.Thenecessityofteachingspelling.

26.聽力原文：W:Ican'tbelieveit!IletyoustayinmyapartmentwhileIwas

away,andIcomebacktofinditamess.

M:Ishould'vedoneabetterjobkeepingitclean,Iknow;Ifeeljustterrible

aboutit.

Q:Whatdoesthemanmean?

(13)

A.Hedoesn'tthinktheapartmentisamess.

B.He'ssorryabouttheconditionoftheapartment.

C.Hethinkshecleansbetterthanthewoman.

D.Hehadaterribletimestayinginthewoman'sapartment.

27.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2long

conversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbe

askedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbe

spokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,

youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichis

thebestanswer.

聽力原文：M:Excuseme;Idon*tunderstandwhyflight213hasbeendelayed.

Theweatherseemsfinenow.

W:I'mafraidNewYorkgotthreetimesasmuchsnowaswedidhere.It

shouldbeclearbymorningthough.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanimply?

(12)

A.Flight213ispreparingtodepart.

B.ThemanwillhavetostayinNewYork.

C.TheplanecannotlandinNewYorkbecauseofbadweather.

D.Threeflightswerecancelledbecauseofsnow.

28.聽力原文：M:I'malwayslateformymorningclasses.It'sbecauseofall

thetrafficoutnearwhereIlive.

W:Well,youwouldn'thavethatproblemifyoumoveintoourcampus.

Q:Whatdoesthewomansuggestthemando?

(15)

A.Nottohavemorningclasses.

B.Don'thaveanyproblem.

C.Moveintohercampus.

D.Avoidthetrafficjam.

29.(24)

A.Thedirectorcouldn*tgiveheranappointmentrightaway.

B.Theofficewasclosedthefirsttimeshewent.

C.Thecomputerswereoutofservicefilefirsttimeshewasthere.

D.Shedidnothaveacceptableidentificationwithheronherfirstvisit.

30.(31)

A.EveryyearinMarch.

B.Everyotheryear.

C.Fromtwotothreeweeks.

D.Thewinterof1925.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.Atemporarymemorywon'tbecomeanenduringoneunless.

A.itreachesthehippocampus

B.itiscapturedduringsleeptime

C.itistransferredtotheneocortex

D.iteliminatesthememoryunderit

32.SectionB

Directions:Thereare2passagesinthissection.Eachpassageisfollowedby

somequestionsorunfinishedstatements.Foreachofthemtherearefour

choicesmarkedA,B,CandD.Youshoulddecideonthebestchoice.

Lowself-esteempopsupregularlyinacademicreportsasanexplanationfor

allsortsofviolence,fromhatecrimesandstreetcrimestoterrorism.But

despitethepopularityoftheexplanation,notmuchevidencebacksitup.Ina

recentissueofPsychologicalReview,threeresearchersexaminethisliterature

atlengthandconcludethatamuchstrongerlinkconnectshighself-esteemto

violence.HItisdifficulttomaintainbeliefinthelowself-esteemviewafter

seeingthatthemoreviolentgroupsaregenerallytheoneswithhigherself-

esteem."writeRoyBaumeisterofCaseWesternReserveUniversityand

LauraSmartandJosephBodenoftheUniversityofVirginia.

Theconventionalviewisthatpeoplewithoutself-esteemtrytogainitby

hurtingothers.Theresearchersfindthatviolenceismuchmoreoftenthework

ofpeoplewithunrealisticallyhighself-esteemattackingotherswhochallenge

theirself-image:Underthisumbrellacomebullies,rapists,racists,

psychopathsandmembersofstreetgangsandorganizedcrime.

Thestudyconcludes:certainformsofhighself-esteemseemtoincreaseone's

pronenesstoviolence.Anuncriticalendorsementoftheculturalvalueofself-

esteemmaythereforebecounterproductiveandevendangerous.Thesocietal

pursuitofhighself-esteemforeveryonemayliterallyend.updoing

considerableharm."Asforprisonprogramsintendedtomakeviolentconvicts

feelbetteraboutthemselves,"perhapsitwouldbebettertotryinstilling

modestyandhumility."theresearcherswrote.

InaninterviewwiththeBostonGlobe,Baumeistersaidhebelievesthe"self-

promotingestablishment'*isstartingtocrumble."Whatwouldworkbetterfor

thecountryistoforgetaboutself-esteemandconcentrateonself-control.1'he

said.Intheschools,thiswouldmeanturningawayfrompsychicboosterism

andemphasizingself-esteemasaby-productofrealachievement,notasan

endinitself.Theself-esteemmovement,stillentrenchedinschoolsof

education,isdeeplyimplicatedinthedumbingdownofourschools,andin

thedisguisedequalitybehindtheideathatitisaterriblepsychicblowifone

studentdoesanybetteroranyworsethananother.Let'shopeitisindeed

crumbling.

Theresearchersfindthattherearestrongerconnectionsbetween.

A.lowself-esteemandviolence

B.lowself-controlandviolence

C.highself-imageandviolence

D.highself-controlandviolence

33.(60)

五、5.ErrorCorrection。題)

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參考答案

l.OnStudents1InterpersonalRelationshipPositiveinterpersonalrelationships

arevitalforoptimalhumangrowthanddevelopment.Howeverinrecentyears

concernhasbeenexpressedbyeducatorsaboutthequalityofinterpersonal

relationshipamongstudentsininstitutionsofhighereducation.Accordingto

asurveyconductedbyHebeiUniversitymanycollege-agestudentsfind

interpersonalrelationshipthebiggestheadache.Increasingdiversityandrapid

changesinoursocietyaremakinginteractingwithotherscontinuallymore

complexanddifficult.Withlimitedlifeexperiencesandsocialskillscollege

studentsarefacingmorechallengesindealingwithinterpersonalrelationship.

Thisisespeciallytrueforstudentscomingfromruralareas.Becauseof

extremelylimitedsocialskillstheyareoftenrejectedbyothers—and

rejectiongivesthemevenfewerchancestolearnhowtobehavewithothers.

Inmyopinionnowthatinterpersonalrelationshipisimportanttostudents*

developmentcollegesshouldkeepupdatedandoffercomprehensive

interpersonalrelationshipscourse.Thecourseshouldaddresstheknowledge

skillsattitudesandbehaviorsallstudentsneedtoparticipateinpositive

relationshipsinthefamilyandwithindividualsatschoolinthecommunity

andintheworkplace.OnStudents'InterpersonalRelationshipPositive

interpersonalrelationshipsarevitalforoptimalhumangrowthand

development.However,inrecentyears,concernhasbeenexpressedby

educatorsaboutthequalityofinterpersonalrelationshipamongstudentsin

institutionsofhighereducation.AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyHebei

University,manycollege-agestudentsfindinterpersonalrelationshipthe

biggestheadache.Increasingdiversityandrapidchangesinoursocietyare

makinginteractingwithotherscontinuallymorecomplexanddifficult.With

limitedlifeexperiencesandsocialskills,collegestudentsarefacingmore

challengesindealingwithinterpersonalrelationship.Thisisespeciallytrue

forstudentscomingfromruralareas.Becauseofextremelylimitedsocial

skills,theyareoftenrejectedbyothers-andrejectiongivesthemevenfewer

chancestolearnhowtobehavewithothers.Inmyopinion,nowthat

interpersonalrelationshipisimportanttostudents*development,colleges

shouldkeepupdatedandoffercomprehensiveinterpersonalrelationships

course.Thecourseshouldaddresstheknowledge,skills,attitudesand

behaviorsallstudentsneedtoparticipateinpositiverelationshipsinthe

familyandwithindividualsatschool,inthecommunity,andintheworkplace.

2.ChildrenObesityChinaissuper-sizingitschildrenasfastasitseconomy

promptingfearsofobesitycrisis.Today8%of10-to12-year-oldsinChina's

citiesareconsideredobeseandanadditional15%areoverweightaccording

toEducationMinistrydata.Chinahasenteredtheeraofobesityandthespeed

ofgrowthisshocking.Agenerationofeconomicexpansionhasproduced

higherlivingstandardsandallowedChinesefamiliestoputmorefoodonthe

table;once-scarcemeatanddairyproductsnowarewidelyavailable.

Growingprosperityalsohasledtomoresedentarylifestyles:lessphysical

laborfewertripsonfootandbybicyclemoretravelbycarandmoreInternet

usage-allareresponsibleforalargeweightgain.Theintroductionoffast

foodoverseasalsocontributestotheincreaseinobesity.Ithinkifshightime

wefoughtjuvenileflab.Kidsneedtofollowahealthierdiet.Parentsshould

helpkidsbalancedietanddon'ttakethemtoeatfastfoodlikeMcDonald's

andKFCsofrequently.Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoreplaygroundsand

requirestudentstoexerciseorplaysportsforanhouradayatschool.Children

ObesityChinaissuper-sizingitschildrenasfastasitseconomy,prompting

fearsofobesitycrisis.Today,8%of10-to12-year-oldsinChina'scitiesare

consideredobeseandanadditional15%areoverweight,accordingto

EducationMinistrydata.Chinahasenteredtheeraofobesity,andthespeed

ofgrowthisshocking.Agenerationofeconomicexpansionhasproduced

higherlivingstandardsandallowedChinesefamiliestoputmorefoodonthe

table;once-scarcemeatanddairyproductsnowarewidelyavailable.

Growingprosperityalsohasledtomoresedentarylifestyles:lessphysical

labor,fewertripsonfootandbybicycle,moretravelbycar,andmoreInternet

usage-allareresponsibleforalargeweightgain.Theintroductionoffast

foodoverseasalsocontributestotheincreaseinobesity.Ithinkifshightime

wefoughtjuvenileflab.Kidsneedtofollowahealthierdiet.Parentsshould

helpkidsbalancedietanddon'ttakethemtoeatfastfoodlikeMcDonald's

andKFCsofrequently.Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoreplaygroundsand

requirestudentstoexerciseorplaysportsforanhouradayatschool.

3.Say"Thanks”toParents(1)Accordingtoarecentsurveyinvolvingover

4000collegestudents37%ofundergraduateshaveneversaid"Thanks"to

theirparentsbefore.Theirparentshavedonealltheycouldto(2)bringthem

upinthepastscoreofyears(3)buthaveneverbeenrewardedwithgratitude.

(4)Thesubjectsclaimsuchreasonsasfollows.(5)Firstofallaquarterofthe

students(6)interviewedregarditasparents'responsibilitytosupportthem

spirituallyandfinanciallysotheythinkitisunnecessarytoexpress

appreciationtotheirparents.(5)Neverthelessthemajorityofyoungstersare

awareoftheirparents*tenderlovebutstillnotusedtosaying"Thanks".(5)

Someevenfinda(7)generationgapbetweenthemselvesandtheirparents

and(8)thereforeTeelreluctanttoexpresstheiraffectionfortheirparents.(9)

Inmyeyes(10)expressinggratitudetoourparentsisawayofrespecting

themandtheirlove.Weshouldsay“Thanks”toourparentsdirectlyand

bravelyandwhafsmoreimportantisweshoulddoallthatwecantorewand

them.Say"Thanks”toParents(1)Accordingtoarecentsurveyinvolvingover

4000collegestudents,37%ofundergraduateshaveneversaid''Thanks"to

theirparentsbefore.Theirparentshavedonealltheycouldto(2)bringthem

upinthepastscoreofyears,(3)buthaveneverbeenrewardedwithgratitude.

(4)Thesubjectsclaimsuchreasonsasfollows.(5)Firstofall,aquarterofthe

students(6)interviewedregarditasparents'responsibilitytosupportthem

spirituallyandfinanciallysotheythinkitisunnecessarytoexpress

appreciationtotheirparents.(5)Nevertheless,themajorityofyoungstersare

awareoftheirparents*tenderlovebutstillnotusedtosaying"Thanks”.(5)

Someevenfinda(7)generationgapbetweenthemselvesandtheirparents,

and(8)thereforeTeelreluctanttoexpresstheiraffectionfortheirparents.(9)

Inmyeyes,(10)expressinggratitudetoourparentsisawayofrespecting

themandtheirlove.Weshouldsay'Thanks"toourparentsdirectlyand

bravely,andwhat'smoreimportantisweshoulddoallthatwecantorewand

them.解析：［審題］本題要求一篇議論文。所給的提綱清楚明了，按此

行文即可。注意句式的多樣性和用詞的準(zhǔn)確性。

［思路］

第一段說明很多大學(xué)生從未給父母道過謝這種現(xiàn)象；

第二段論述其中的原因；

第三段給出自己的觀點：應(yīng)該給父母道謝：

4.DearSirorMadamIrecentlyboughtaSony452laptopcomputeratHenley

branch.HoweverwithinafewdaysIbegantoexperienceproblemswithit.

Themainproblemswerethatafewoftheprogramsinstalledonitceasedto

functionandthatthelaptoprefusedtoreadanydiscseventhoughthesediscs

arcacceptedbybothmydesktopcomputerandmyfriencfsToshiba2000.

WhenIreturnedtotheshoptoclaimarefundunderthetermsofthewarranty

providedbyyourcompanyIwasinformedthatIwasnotentitledasthe

warrantycardwasinvalid.Thereasonwhythewarrantycardisinvalidwas

notexplainedtome.WhenIaskedforanexplanationthestaffrefusedtogive

meone.Whilstthestaffwerenotrudeassuchtheywereratherabrupt.Asa

resultIamwritingtoyouinordertosortthesituationout.Ibelievethe

warrantycardtobecompleteandvalid.Iencloseaphotocopyforyoutocheck.

Iwouldliketoarrangeformyfaultylaptoptobeexchangedorformymoney

toberefunded.Pleasecontactmewhenyouhavelookedintothematter.

YoursfaithfullyJackyShaoDearSirorMadam,IrecentlyboughtaSony452

laptopcomputeratHenleybranch.However,withinafewdays,Ibeganto

experienceproblemswithit.Themainproblemswerethatafewofthe

programsinstalledonitceasedtofunctionandthatthelaptoprefusedtoread

anydiscs,eventhoughthesediscsarcacceptedbybothmydesktopcomputer

andmyfriend'sToshiba2000.WhenIreturnedtotheshoptoclaimarefund

underthetermsofthewarrantyprovidedbyyourcompany,Iwasinformed

thatIwasnotentitledasthewarrantycardwasinvalid.Thereasonwhythe

warrantycardisinvalidwasnotexplainedtome.WhenIaskedfbran

explanation,thestaffrefusedtogivemeone.Whilstthestaffwerenotrude

assuch,theywereratherabrupt.Asaresult,Iamwritingtoyouinorderto

sortthesituationout.Ibelievethewarrantycardtobecompleteandvalid.I

encloseaphotocopyforyoutocheck.Iwouldliketoarrangeformyfaulty

laptoptobeexchangedorfbrmymoneytoberefunded.Pleasecontactme

whenyouhavelookedintothematter.Yoursfaithfully,JackyShao

5.MyViewonChangesofNationalPublicHolidayFrom2008thepast

nationalholidaypatternhaschanged:thepreviousseven-dayLabofsDayhas

beenshortenedintoathree-dayholidaywithsomenewone-dayholidMy

ViewonChangesofNationalPublicHolidayFrom2008,thepastnational

holidaypatternhaschanged:thepreviousseven-dayLabor'sDayhasbeen

shortenedintoathree-dayholiday,withsomenewone-dayholid

6.ALettertoUniversityPresidentaboutSafetyonCampusDearMr.President

I'masophomoremajoringinenvironmentalengineering.I'mwritingtoyou

tosaysomethingabutthecampussafety.OuruniversityissolargethatIcan't

imaginehowharditistokeepitwiththousandsofstudentsingoodorder.On

thewholestudentsaresomewhatcontentwiththecampussafety.But

meanwhilesomeproblemsdoexist.Inthefirstplacethetheftoncampusisa

hugeheadacheofus.Myclassmatesinstudentdormitorybuilding202have

comeacrossthetheftquitealot.Theirbagsbankcardsradiosetsandother

propertiesarestolen.Thesamethingsalsohappenedintheself-study

classrooms.It'sunbearablethattextbookswithveryimportantnotesare

missingattimes.BesidesIheardthatwalkingaroundthecampusatnightis

notguaranteedbecauseafewgirlswerefrightenedby2strangerslastmonth.

It'surgentthatsomemeasuresbetaken.Educationonmoralityshouldbe

taughtamongallstudentsremindingthemofwhat'sthesensiblethingtodo.

Ouruniversityshouldalsomakesomepolicytoensurethatsafetyregulations

befollowed.Weareexpectingabigchange.AtlastIwanttoappreciateyour

sparingprecioustimetoreadthisletter.Thankyou.YoursrespectfullyWang

MingALettertoUniversityPresidentaboutSafetyonCampusDearMr.

President,I'masophomoremajoringinenvironmentalengineering.I'm

writingtoyoutosaysomethingabutthecampussafety.Ouruniversityisso

largethatIcan'timaginehowharditistokeepitwiththousandsofstudents

ingoodorder.Onthewhole,studentsaresomewhatcontentwiththecampus

safety.Butmeanwhile,someproblemsdoexist.Inthefirstplace,thethefton

campusisahugeheadacheofus.Myclassmatesinstudentdormitorybuilding

202havecomeacrossthetheftquitealot.Theirbags,bankcards,radiosets,

andotherpropertiesarestolen.Thesamethingsalsohappenedintheself-

studyclassrooms.Ifsunbearablethattextbookswithveryimportantnotesare

missingattimes.Besides,Iheardthatwalkingaroundthecampusatnightis

notguaranteedbecauseafewgirlswerefrightenedby2strangerslastmonth.

It'surgentthatsomemeasuresbetaken.Educationonmoralityshouldbe

taughtamongallstudentsremindingthemofwhat'sthesensiblethingtodo.

Ouruniversityshouldalsomakesomepolicytoensurethatsafetyregulations

befollowed.Weareexpectingabigchange.Atlast,Iwanttoappreciateyour

sparingprecioustimetoreadthisletter.Thankyou.Yoursrespectfully,Wang

Ming

7.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]Howevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

tTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternetfl]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

t解析：作文標(biāo)題是“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性這已經(jīng)表明，寫作

的重點是說明“為什么要創(chuàng)建健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境”。但所給出的outline沒有

體現(xiàn)這一點。僅僅根據(jù)。Mine動筆，恐怕寫不出好作文來。

提綱的第1點和第2點都址說背景，是為我們要論述的論點服務(wù)的；第

3點指向“措施”，也與論點有關(guān)。但是，以這三點中的任何一條為中心，

都有可能偏題。

那么該如何做這篇文章呢。不僅要把提綱中的內(nèi)容納入，而且還要特別

淪述“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性要思考那么兒條“重要性”出來，才

能有話可說，切合中心主旨。洲練從不同的角度考慮健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)的重要忤，

培養(yǎng)良好的思維能力，是寫好此類作文的關(guān)鍵。

Analysis

[1]對應(yīng)outline的第1條

[2]對應(yīng)outline的第2條。如果不知道怎么用英潔表達(dá)“炒

作”(drumbeating),不說就是。反正僅僅是不良現(xiàn)象中的一個例子而已。

[3]主題句，對應(yīng)作文標(biāo)題。

[4][5][6]三條理由。健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以：預(yù)防網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪：保護(hù)兒童不受

不良信息的影響；方便我們更好地利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。(這部分可以八仙過海,

各顯神通)

[7]總結(jié)全文.照應(yīng)outline的第3條。

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