2020屆山東省新高考模擬英語作文讀后續(xù)寫寫作指導(dǎo)與解讀(含范文)

2020屆山東省新高考模擬英語作文讀后續(xù)寫寫作指導(dǎo)一、續(xù)寫原題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)為150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray(流浪)dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadputoutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseethelittleone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Itookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealthyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguest."Shallwekeephimwithus?"Iquestionedmymom.Likeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttotallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.____Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly____二、下水續(xù)寫總體思路第一段第一句：Spotty有一天回家，斷了一條腿。作者當(dāng)時的反應(yīng)是什么？看到了什么？Spotty狀態(tài)描寫為什么會斷了一條腿？(最難處理)作者一定是誤解了，對Spotty有過激的反應(yīng)。Spotty逃跑到處尋找，但找不到一段時間以后得知真相第二段第一句：一年以后，我們聽到Spotty在氣喘吁吁地叫看到了什么(骨瘦如柴)？為什么Spotty叫起來氣喘吁吁？看到Spotty的情感反應(yīng)并做了什么？為什么Spotty回來？(最難處理)心理的感受是什么？為此做了什么？但幾天以后，Spotty還是死了。作者的心情及感悟是什么(呼應(yīng)開頭...especiallyhiseyes)？下水體會：去掉5個關(guān)鍵詞對續(xù)寫沒有多大的影響。續(xù)寫部分情節(jié)安排太難了！尤其是：一、為什么Spotty會斷了一條腿？二、一年以后Spotty為什么會回來？三、全文的主題是什么？花了不少時間考慮。最后確定將全文主旨定位在人與自然、動物的關(guān)系上--人與動物的和諧關(guān)系。另外，在描寫上將eyes作為全文的一個重要線索并與開頭句...Irememberhisfaceclearly,

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hiseyes呼應(yīng)。Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.""Oh,no!"IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottylimpinginwithapainedexpressiononhisface.ButSpottyseemedtotakenonoticeofmeandhidundermybed,hiswholebodytremblingandhiseyesfullofterroranddistrust.Itwassounlikehimtoreactlikethis,thatforonemomentIwasatalosshowtocoaxhimtome.Feelingalittleupsetandfurious,Isomehowcameholdingalongstick,tryingtodrivehimout.However,beforethestickreachedhim,Spottysuddenlyhowledandescapedthroughthedoor.Inthenextfewdays,wesearchedeverywhereforSpotty,butinvain.Later,wewereshockedtolearnthatamanbeathimwithastickwhenSpottywasapproachingalittlegirl.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.WerushedoutofthehouseonlytoseemySpottylyingonthedoormat,dying.Uponseeingus,Spottyroseawkwardlytohisfeet,wagginghistailandhiseyessparklingwithexcitement.Immediately,Ikneltdowntohughimandtearsbegantowellupinmyeyesuncontrollably.Spottylookedatme,lickingmycheeksasiftotellmesomething.AnditwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedwhySpottyreturnedtome--hehadforgivenmeforwhatIhaddone.Unfortunately,Spottydidn'tstaylongandheclosedhiseyesforeverthenextday.ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthevaluablelessonhetaughtmewillremaininmymemory.參考范文DayspassedonandoneeveningwhenSpottyreturnedfromhislongwalk,heappearedveryexhausted.Hecametomyroomandsatnearme.ItwasthenthatIsawhishindlegwasinjuredandwasbleeding.Icalledoutmymotherandshequicklytiedabandagearoundhislegandgavehimfoodtoeat.Iwasveryupset.Butthenextday,Spottywasuptohisusualpranksthoughhelimpedabit.AfterthisincidentmyrelationwithSpottybecamemoreintense.Ireallyadmiredhimalotforhiscourage.Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Wecameoutandsawthathewasbarkingcontinuouslyheadingsomewhere.AftersometimeSpottybecamequiet.Ipattedhimonhisbackandcameinside.Thenextdaymorning,myheartskippedabeatwhenIdidn’tseeSpotty.Isearchedforhimineachandeverycornerbuthewasnowhere.Andthistimehehadgoneandwouldnevercomeback.Icriedandwaitedforhim.Wewaitedforonelong