新高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型歸納與變式演練專題31 讀后續(xù)寫02 情緒描寫突破（解析版）

專題31讀后續(xù)寫02情緒描寫突破（解析版）目錄TOC\o"1-3"\h\u專題31讀后續(xù)寫02情緒描寫突破（解析版） 1Part1思維導(dǎo)圖 2Part2秘訣（一）：情感似人“手” 2Part3秘訣（二)：情感似對(duì)手 3Part4秘訣（三）：情感似壓迫者 3Part5秘訣（四）：情感似動(dòng)物 4Part6秘訣（五）：情感似光線 5Part7秘訣（六）：情感似重?fù)?dān) 5Part8秘訣（七）：情感似液體 6Part9情緒描寫微技能訓(xùn)練 7一：微技能一（表示感到害怕frightened） 7二：微技能二（表示感到興奮thrilled） 9三：微技能三（表示感到悲傷sad） 10四：微技能四（表示感到開心happy） 11五：微技能五（表示感到羞愧ashamed） 15六：微技能六（表示感到生氣angry） 16Part10模擬訓(xùn)練 191．（2022·山東濰坊·一模） 192．（2022·山東淄博·一模） 223．（2022·福建福州·模擬預(yù)測(cè)） 254．（2022·福建龍巖·一模） 285．（2022·福建廈門·二模） 316．（2022·廣東汕頭·一模） 347．讀后續(xù)寫模擬專練1 378．讀后續(xù)寫模擬專練2 41Part1思維導(dǎo)圖Part2秘訣（一）：情感似人“手”人們常被情感掌控，受其制約。而中文中的“掌控”就是來源于“手掌”。于是，情感就可以比喻成一雙無形的手，也就非常貼切了。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)：用于手的一些動(dòng)作可以直接應(yīng)用于某種情感。這類動(dòng)作有：表示“抓住”類的動(dòng)詞：seize,grasp,grip,takeholdof表示“覆蓋”：cover表示“撕成碎片”：tearintopieces我們來看下面幾個(gè)例句：（1）Feargrippedherheart．她心中充滿恐懼。（grip抓住）（2）Jealousyseizedher.她妒火中燒。（seize抓?。?）Awildjoytookholdofher.她十分快樂。（4）Afeelingofpanicseizedher．她突然驚慌失措。（5）Anxietytoreherintopieces．她焦慮不安身心憔悴。（tore是tear的過去式，表“撕扯”）（6）Angerandbitternesscovereduponmeforweeks．我好幾周都沉浸在憤怒和痛苦中。（bitterness是bitter“痛苦的”名詞形式）Part3秘訣（二)：情感似對(duì)手漢語里也有類似的說法：“我被什么情緒打敗了”。將情感比喻為人的對(duì)手，那么人與情感之間的關(guān)系仿佛在比賽或斗爭。但是漢語中，這種表達(dá)中情緒更多是負(fù)面情緒，而英文中，則沒有這個(gè)限制。我們來看常見的動(dòng)詞有哪些？被情感對(duì)手“擊敗”。于是，動(dòng)詞通常是getthebetterof或者getthebestof（都表示“勝過”）。例如浙江2020年1月高考續(xù)寫文本中就寫到：Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.(他站起來，抱住爸爸媽媽，并露出笑容，努力不讓情感控制他。)在這句里，就用到了getthebetterof的結(jié)構(gòu)，表示“勝過”。我們?cè)倏磶讉€(gè)例子：（1）Enthusiasmgetsthebetterofme．我太激動(dòng)了。（enthusiasm熱情）（2）Boredomoftengetsthebestofthem．他們常感到非常無聊．（boredom無聊）（3）Hiscuriositygotthebetterofhim．他異常好奇，（curiosity好奇心）Part4秘訣（三）：情感似壓迫者我們可以控制情感，反過來，情感也可以變得強(qiáng)大，反客為主，成了統(tǒng)治者，壓迫者，我們被情感控制。這是動(dòng)詞可以是：oppress壓迫，甚至是deprive(表示剝奪，deprive通常與of搭配)，還可以是prey（捕獵，折磨）我們來看下面幾個(gè)例句：（1）Worryingdeprivedhimofsleep．他焦慮萬分，難以入睡。（2）Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech．我激動(dòng)得什么話都說不出來。（3）Astonishmentandhorroroppressedher．她驚恐不安。（oppress壓迫）（4）Angerandbitternesshadpreyeduponmecontinually．我感到憤怒和痛苦。（prey本意是“捕獵”，在這里引申為“折磨”。非常形象的表達(dá)，“憤怒”和“痛苦”像獵人一樣，而“我”成了獵物，不就是我被這兩種情緒折磨著嗎？）Part5秘訣（四）：情感似動(dòng)物情感也會(huì)有動(dòng)物的一些特點(diǎn)，會(huì)悄無聲息地“爬”到你身邊，即用動(dòng)詞crawl／creep（爬），有時(shí)還會(huì)咬(gnaw)、吞噬(swallow/swallow)你。例如：（1）Happinesscrawlsuptothetipsofhisbrows．他喜上眉梢。（字面意思是“幸福爬到他的眉毛尖”）（2）Aslightfeelingoffearslowlycreptonhim．他慢慢感到一絲恐懼。（crept是creep過去式，意思是“爬”）（3）Self-doubtbegantognawawayatherconfidence.自我懷疑正在蠶食她的自信心。（4）Fearswallowedher.她非常驚恐。（字面意思是“恐懼吞掉了我”，是不是很形象？）Part6秘訣（五）：情感似光線有人說：“積極的心態(tài)像太陽，照到哪里哪里亮；消極的心態(tài)像月亮，初一十五不一樣。”所以說，情感和光線變化密切相關(guān)。我們也有這種生活體驗(yàn)在sunny(晴朗)的天氣，人們會(huì)感到開朗高興，情感像光一樣散發(fā)（radiate）與傳播（spreadacross），而在cloudy(陰云密布)或者dark(光線晦暗)則讓人心情阻塞、郁悶不快。例如：（1）Joyshonefromhisbrow．他喜上眉梢。（2）Happinessradiatesfromherface.榮光換發(fā)。（radiate發(fā)散，發(fā)光）（3）Smilespreadacrosshisface.他滿臉笑容。當(dāng)然還有用“人或物”作主語的（4）Shehasbeeninadarkmoodthisweek．她這周心情一直不好。（adarkmood用黑暗來形容心情mood，當(dāng)然是“心情不好”。）（5）Hisfacecloudedoverwhenheheardthenews．聽了這個(gè)消息，他滿臉愁云。（這個(gè)句子把云cloud這個(gè)名詞當(dāng)做動(dòng)詞用，over覆蓋，cloudover這個(gè)詞組把“烏云密布”這種形象就表現(xiàn)出來了）Part7秘訣（六）：情感似重?fù)?dān)在中文中，我們有時(shí)候說某種負(fù)面情緒的時(shí)候，可以這么表達(dá)“很壓抑，壓得我喘不過氣來”，這里的“壓”顯示出，在描寫情感時(shí)候，賦予它重量感。英文也是如此：憂慮、悲傷、憤怒等消極情感猶如重?fù)?dān)bearon(壓在?上面)，需要人們carry(承受),而這些情感負(fù)擔(dān)的unburden(卸去)、lose(失去)則會(huì)讓人感到輕松、獲得解脫。例如：（1）Griefbearsheavilyonher．她承受著悲傷的巨大壓力。還有以“人”作主語的：Hewasburdenedwithworries他心事重重。（burden裝在，負(fù)重。非常有意思是，在漢語中，“心事重重”中的“重”是一個(gè)多音字，也讀zhong,“負(fù)重”的“重”。）（3）Themanagercarriedhisanger．經(jīng)理怒火沖沖。（4）AfterIlostmytemper，Ifeltlighter．發(fā)脾氣之后，我感到輕松多了。（lostmytemper字面意思好像是“失去了脾氣”，其實(shí)就是情緒失控，發(fā)脾氣）（5）Unburdeningherselfofherangergaveherasenseofrelief．釋放了怒火后，她感到一種解脫。（第二個(gè)例子中提到了burden裝在，負(fù)重，加上了否定前綴un，意思為“卸去負(fù)擔(dān)”）Part8秘訣（七）：情感似液體在漢語中，如果用一個(gè)成語來形容兩個(gè)人感情很好，我們可以用“水乳交融”，水和乳都是液體。同樣的道理，在英語中，情感也常常被比作液體。常見的名詞有：波紋（ripple）或wave(波浪)或flood(洪流)，常見的動(dòng)詞有：涌出（wellup），surge(涌動(dòng))甚至sweep(沖；卷)，有時(shí)fill／brim/takepossessionof(注滿／盛滿/占滿)容器，有時(shí)overflow／well(漫出／溢出)容器，在高溫下甚至?xí)oil(沸騰).我們來看下面的例句：（1）Panicsurgedupwithinhim．他惶恐不安。（surge涌起，字面的意思是“恐懼在他身體里涌起”）（2）Theterriblescenefilledherwithfear．恐怖的場(chǎng)景使她十分害怕。（3）Awaveofpanicsweptoverher．一陣驚恐襲上她的心頭。（4）Thelonelinessandgriefcomesinwaves.陣陣孤獨(dú)與痛苦襲上心頭。當(dāng)然還有用“人”做主語的：（1）Hisheartisoverflowingwithjoy．他滿懷喜悅。（2）Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme．我感到怒火中燒。（字面意思是：“憤怒”已經(jīng)“boil沸騰了”）（3）Hewasbrimmingwithsorrowwhenshelefthim．她離開他時(shí)，他滿懷悲傷。（brim是“邊緣”的意思，作動(dòng)詞表示“溢出”。悲傷這種情緒從內(nèi)心溢出來了。）現(xiàn)在我們把學(xué)到的表達(dá)用到作文中，我們用的是2020年新高考全國卷，即山東卷。講述的是：賣爆米花方法救助窮人的故事?！厩榫骋弧縈rs.Meredith聽了孩子們“賣爆米花”的主意之后，感到很滿意，為孩子們的善良機(jī)智而驕傲。我們可以這樣寫：AwaveofsatisfactionandpridesurgedupinsideMrs.MeredithasJohnexplainedhisidea.當(dāng)約翰解釋他的想法時(shí)，梅雷迪思太太心中涌起了一股滿足感和自豪感。(這句話就把驕傲與滿足之感比喻成液體)【情境二】當(dāng)John找到貧困小男孩Bernard，并向他說了幫助他賺錢的主意之后，Bernard十分感動(dòng)。AfterBernardlearnedaboutJohn’sidea,gratitudeobviouslygotthebetterofthispoorboy,andmoistenedhiseyes.在伯納得知約翰的想法后，非常感動(dòng)，他的眼睛濕潤了。（這句話里，把感激比喻成對(duì)手，Bernard忍不住感動(dòng)而流淚。）Part9情緒描寫微技能訓(xùn)練一：微技能一（表示感到害怕frightened）表示害怕的詞/詞組：frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one’skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat;例句：當(dāng)看到那只兇惡的狼時(shí)，我感到很害怕。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。2、請(qǐng)你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltveryscared.2.1）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(嗓子發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟)2）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.(嚇呆了，不敢動(dòng)彈)3）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.(被深深地恐懼感所控制，手心出汗)【高分情緒描寫句子】①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.

②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.

③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...

④Shewaschokedbyfear.

⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.

⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.

⑦Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated(窒息).

⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

【補(bǔ)充：情緒描寫之哭】cry;sob;weep;burstintotears;burstoutcrying;(one’seyes)brimwith/befullof/befilledwithtear例句：他哽咽欲哭。Alumpcametohisthroat.她的雙眼哭得通。Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的眼里滿含淚水。Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.眼淚沿著她的面頰流下來。Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.Oliver獨(dú)自一人在房間里流下了孤獨(dú)傷心的淚水。Aloneintheroom,Olivercriedbitter,lonelytears．Wilbur哭著直到睡著。Wilburcriedhimselftosleep.二：微技能二（表示感到興奮thrilled）例句：當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮極了1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。2、請(qǐng)你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.2.1)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.（激動(dòng)得兩眼放光）2)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.(激動(dòng)得心砰砰跳)3)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awideexcitementtookholdofher.(興奮不能自已)三：微技能三（表示感到悲傷sad）例句：一聽到那個(gè)壞消息，她悲傷不已1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。2、請(qǐng)你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.2.1）Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.(心痛，眼淚直流)2）Uponhearingthebadnews,she,numbwithgrief,hadtroublespeaking.(悲傷到失去知覺，不能開口說話)3）Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.(被一股悲傷之感控制，忍不住哭泣)【高分情緒描寫句子】①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.

③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.

④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.

⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.

⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.

⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.

⑧Afrown(皺眉)nowstoodonhisface.

⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.

⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.四：微技能四（表示感到開心happy）例句：當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時(shí)，小baby開心極了。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。2、請(qǐng)你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.2.1)Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.(非常開心)2)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉開眼笑；笑容照亮房間)3)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hiseyesdancedwithjoyandsweetness.(歡欣雀躍)【高分情緒描寫句子】①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.⑥Awildgaiety(快樂)tookholdofher.⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.【描述喜樂心情的常用詞】1.難以形容的開心：indescribablywildjoy

2.極為感動(dòng)：beoverwhelminglymoved3.幾乎無法掩飾他的興奮的心情：canhardlyconcealhisexcitement4.既興奮又開心：amixtureofexcitementandhappiness5.激發(fā)某人的激情：kindlesb.with/topassion6.顯示出極大的意愿：showagreaterreadiness7.被強(qiáng)烈地吸引：bepowerfullyattractedto8.心情愉快：incheerfulspirits9.振作精神：keepupone·sspirits10.滿意的表情：asatisfiedlook11.對(duì)...感到滿意：becontentwith12.對(duì)...很高興：bedelightedat13.為成功而欣喜：beexcited/thrilledwithjoyatthesuccess14.被...場(chǎng)面所吸引：befascinatedbythespectacleof15.被她的美貌所吸引：befascinatedwithherbeauty16.因...而高興：bejoyfulover/about17.喜愛，對(duì)...著迷:bekeenon

18.快樂至極：beoverwhelmedwith19.高興地跳起來：dance/jumpforjoy20.欣喜若狂：bewildwithdelight21.—個(gè)令人鼓舞的表情：anencouragingexpression22.過一個(gè)愉快的假日：haveapleasantholiday23.心滿意足，非常幸福：onthetopoftheworld24.對(duì)...感到非常高興：overjoyedat/todo【描述喜樂心情的常用句】Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.

他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.(ripplen.波紋；漣漪vt.擴(kuò)散全身)一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過他們。④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.（linger繼續(xù)逗留）笑聲在房間里縈繞。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.

他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。⑥Awildgaiety（快樂）tookholdofher.

一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteady

smile.

令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。

⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.

我欣喜若狂。

⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.

我高興得難以形容。

⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.

她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。

?Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.

她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。

?Sheshedtearsofjoy.

她高興得流下了眼淚。

?Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.

她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。?Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.

她洋溢著幸福。

?Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.(flushv.發(fā)紅）

她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。細(xì)節(jié)描述的萬能小技巧：可以把這些詞和so/such.+adj./nthat...句型連用或者用with+n.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮極了。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.2.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.（激動(dòng)得兩眼放光）3.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.

(激動(dòng)得心砰砰跳)4.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

awideexcitementtookholdofher.

(興奮不能自已)當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時(shí)，小baby開心極了。Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.

Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebaby

wereontopoftheworld.

(非常開心)

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamed(堆滿笑容)andhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉開眼笑；笑容照亮房間)

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,

hedancedwithjoyandsweetness.(歡欣雀躍)【感動(dòng)】①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感動(dòng),我們……②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她熱淚盈眶,表示衷心的感謝。③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...

淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來,……五：微技能五（表示感到羞愧ashamed）例句：她感到非常羞愧。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。2、請(qǐng)你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1:Shefeltashamed.2:1)Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.(臉上滾燙)2)Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.(血液涌上臉頰)3)Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears.(快哭了)六：微技能六（表示感到生氣angry）表示生氣的詞/詞組：feel/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury);eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm(sayangrily);

sth.makessb’sbloodboil(sthmakessbextremelyangry);claspone’shands;clenchone’sfists/teeth;speechless例句：Sheldon感到非常生氣。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。2、請(qǐng)你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1:Sheldonfeltveryangry.2:1)Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.(沖出房間；狠狠摔門)2)Boilingwithrage,Sheldonshookhisfistatme.(怒火中燒；揮舞拳頭)3)Filledwithfury,Sheldonwasunabletoutterasingleword.(充滿憤怒；說不出話)【情感描寫積累】Hereyes

twinkledwithmerriment.

她高興得雙眸閃閃發(fā)亮。Mack

wentintoraptures

and

burstintolaughter.麥克欣喜若狂，大笑起來。Arippleoflaughter

wentthroughthecrowd.

人群中傳來一陣笑聲Lily's

laughterlingered

intheroomforalongtime.

麗麗的笑聲縈繞在房間里久久不能散去。Herhandswere

tremblingwithexcitement

assheopenedtheletter.當(dāng)她打開信時(shí)，她的手激動(dòng)得發(fā)抖。Afterheardthis

satisfactory

outcome,

Steve

felt

asenseofjoy

and

happinesssurgingthrough

him.在聽到這個(gè)令人滿意的結(jié)果后，史蒂夫感到一種喜悅和幸福的感覺涌上心頭。Overwhelmedwith

gaiety,

he

jumpedupandranexcitedlyaroundthe

tree.他欣喜若狂，跳起來并繞著那棵大樹跑了幾圈。Inhisexcitement

hecouldn'trememberhername.他興奮得甚至把他自己的名字都給忘了。Rose

felt

blissful

asif

she

wasinpossessionofeverything.羅絲感到很幸福，好像她擁有了全世界一樣。Shewas

carriedaway

bypleasure.她被快樂沖昏了頭腦。Inodded,witha

bigsmilespreadingacross

mycheek.

我點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，臉上露出燦爛的笑容。She

couldn't

concealtheexcitement

andrushedhome

totellher

motherthegood

news.她掩飾不住興奮，急忙回家告訴母親這個(gè)好消息。Sheisalways

readytohelp

othersinneedandalways

wears

shiningsmileonherface,

somanyclassmatesarewillingtomakefriendswith

her.她總是樂于助人并且臉上總是掛著燦爛的笑容，因此很多同學(xué)都愿意和她交朋友。I'm

over

themoon.

我太開心了Itiseasyto

inferthat

heis

inrapture

through

his

bigsmile.

從他那燦爛的笑容很容易推斷出他是興高采烈的。Hewokeupthatmorningwith

afeelingofexcitement.他一起床就感到很興奮。Her

excitementgrew

asthedayoftheweddingcamenearer.隨著結(jié)婚的日子越來越近，她越來越興奮。Iam

overflowingwith

happiness.我洋溢著幸福。Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourneyapleasantsmilewould

spreadover

Mom'sface.每次我們提到旅途中的趣事，媽媽的臉上就會(huì)浮現(xiàn)出愉快的笑容Asuddenwaveofjoy

sweptoverher.一陣喜悅突然涌上她的心頭。Shegazedupathim,

glowingwithhappiness.她抬頭看著他，臉上洋溢著幸福的光芒。Thechildrenwere

filledwithexcitement

atthethoughtofvisitingDisneyland.孩子們一想到要去迪斯尼樂園就興奮不已。Myheartis

assweetashoney.我的心甜的像蜜一樣。Pleasurewelledup

insideherheart.她心中涌起喜悅。Amusement

gleamedinhiseyes.他眼中流露出愉快的深情.Mother's

eyes

flash

across

the

surprise,

open

smile

ripples.

母親的眼里閃過驚喜，笑容蕩漾開。Shecomeuptome,withasmile

shininglikeadiamond.她帶著燦爛的笑容走到我面前。【高分情緒描寫句子】Iwasseizedbyanger.

②Hewasfumingwithrage.

③Hisangerboiledover.

④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.

⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.

⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.

⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.

⑨Heflaredupattheword.

⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.Part10模擬訓(xùn)練（2022·山東濰坊·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文AGIFTFORGRANDPASummervacationwascoming.JackandhisbrotherBerlinwerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofvisitingtheirgrandparentsagain.Thebigdaycameatlast.Afterthehappyfamilygotready,theysetoutforthegrandparents’eagerly.Ontheway,thebrotherswereexcitedlytalkingaboutthefuntheyhadwithgrandparents.Alittlebluehousewithatallwhitechimneyfinallyappeared.BehindthepropertywastheforestcarryingtheirgoodmemorieswithGrandpa.Theyarrivedatthedriveway,attheendofwhichGrandmawaswaitingforthemjoyfully.JackandBerlineachgaveGrandmaabighugandthenswepttothelivingroom,shoutingexcitedly“Grandpa,weareback!”Seeinghisgrandsons,Grandpawaswildwithjoyandtriedtogetupwithallhisstrengthfromthechairbutinvain.Ahelplessexpressionflashedonhisface.Grandmaexplainedthathishealthwasdecliningrapidlyandmaybecouldn’tstanduponhisownforever.ButGrandpadeclaredstubbornly(倔強(qiáng)地),“Ican!”Certainly,hewasstuckinhisboyishway.Mumandgrandparentswerehappytomeetagainafteralongtime.Theysattogetherandchattedaboutwhathappenedrecently.Thebrothersweresoonboredwithadultconversation,wentoutandwanderedintotheforest.Talltreesstretcheduptotheheavenswithlargebranchescrossingeachother,whileyoungonesrosestraightlikesoldiers.Grandpawasonceagreatexplorerfullofwisdom.Hecouldtellwherethebirdscamefromonlybytheircallsandsongs.Thetrees,birds,lizards,lotsofbugs...HowmanymerrymomentstheyspentwithGrandpainthekingdom!ButnowGrandpacouldn'tgetup.Thismadethemworried.“We’dthinkoutawaytocheerhimup.”Jacksaid.“Grandpaisabirdlover,andwecancatchhimabird.”Berlinsuggested.“Buthehatesbirdsbeingcaged!”Jackshookhishead.ThenabrightideacametoJack’smind.“Whynotmakeacane(拐杖)outofayoungtree!”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea.Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.Jacksaid,“Whatkindoftreeshouldwepickforthewalkingstick?”Berlinthoughtforamomentandsaid,“Ithinkweshouldchooseastraighttree,sonoknotswillscratchgrandpa’shands.”Jacknoddedhisheadinagreement.Theyfoundastraighttreeandsettowork.Theycutthetreedown,andwithaknifetheytookthebarkoff.Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.Theythoughtgrandpawouldloveit.

JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.Whengrandpatookthecane,hishandsshookwithjoy,thinking,“Thisismadebymygrandsonsthemselves.Howpreciousitis!”Jacksaid,“Grandpa,wehopethiscanewillhelpyoustandupandcomewithustoexplorethewoods.”Grandpasmiledanddecidedtogiveitatrysoasnottomakehisgrandchildrendisappointed.Heheldthecaneinhisrighthandandthearmofhischairinhislefthand.Hestoodupwithstrengthonhislegs.Everyonewassurprisedandexcitedtoseegrandpastandup.Atthatmoment,Jacknoticedatearcomingfromthecornerofhisgrandfather’seye.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了暑假即將來臨，杰克和他的弟弟柏林去看望祖父母，他們卻發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺站不起來了，兄弟倆走進(jìn)了森林，杰克突然想到了一個(gè)好主意，就是給爺爺做一根手杖?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“柏林認(rèn)為這是個(gè)好主意?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懶值軅z怎么做手杖。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“杰克和伯林把手杖遞給爺爺?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼憼敔斈玫绞终群蟮姆磻?yīng)。2.續(xù)寫線索：拿工具——做手杖——爺爺嘗試站起來——眾人反應(yīng)3.詞匯激活行為類①拿：get/fetch②砍下：cutdown/chopdown③站起來：standup/risetoone’sfeet情緒類①高興：joy/delight②興奮的：excited/thrilled【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.(由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)[高分句型2]Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.(由關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)（2022·山東淄博·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。TheChristmasSpiritStrikesAgainIalwaysdreamedofmakingabigsurpriseofalifetime.Thankstoalittledetermination,someluck,andageneroushelpingofChristmasSpirit,mydreambecameareality.MyfamilyisCanadian,althoughmysistermoveddowntoAustraliaafewyearsagotostudy.ShewasgraduatingjustbeforeChristmas,butduetomyownscholarlyschedulebackhome,Iwouldbeunabletomakeitdownintimeforhergraduation.Shewasunderstandablydisappointed,andIfeltguiltythatIwasn’tabletobethereforheronthisspecialoccasions.WhileIwastalkingtomyprofessortheweekbeforemysister’sgraduation,shecommented,“Well,ifyouwanttogo,justgoahead!"Icouldn’tbelievemyluck!Inearlyjumpedforjoy.“Justmakesureyougetpermissionfromadministrator(行政主管)，”sheadded.Myheartsank.Theadministrationatmyschoolwasinfamousfordenyinganysortoftime-offrequests.Ialmostdidn’tbotherasking,becauseIknewitwouldbeawasteoftime.Butsomethinginmedecidedtotry,justincase.MaybeitwasthehopethattheChristmasSpiritwouldsomehowaffectstheadministratoratthistimeofyear.WhenIreturnedhometocheckthereplyinmyinbox,Isteeledmyselffordisappointment.Iheldmybreath,openedthee-mail,andstartedtoread.Andre-read,justtomakesureI’dunderstood.Approval?Icouldn’tbelievemyluck!Immediately,Icalledtheairline.Unexpectedly,evenduringthebusyChristmasseason,Iwasabletochangemytickettoarrivethedaybeforemysister’sgraduation.Withnewsthisfantastic,Iwasburstingtotellmysister.But,fingersonthedial((撥號(hào)盤),Ipaused.Wouldn’titbemuchmorefantasticifIcouldsurpriseher?Whatastateofshockshewouldbein!Slowlyagreatideacametomymind.Idecidedamuchmoredramaticarrivalthanjustaringofthedoorbell.WhatifIcouldn’tarriveinabox?Istartedtoplot.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I,hiddeninthebigbox,heardthemailmenringingmysister’sdoorbell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：Paragraph1:Istartedtoplot.Then,agreatideaoccurredtome:gettingdeliveredinaboxtomysister’shouse!IknewifIpulledthisoff,mygrandarrivalwouldbethebestChristmaspresentIcouldevergivemysister.IfranticallystartedGooglingmailcompanies.Fortunately,IcameacrossamailcompanynamedCouriersPleaseandtomygreatamazementtheirmanageragreedtohelpmetofulfillmydream!Thenextday,theyfoundaboxbigenoughformetohidein.TheChristmasSpiritstrikesagain!(86詞)Paragraph2:I,hiddeninthebigbox,heardthemailmenringingmysister’sdoorbell.Theyannouncedtheyhadadeliveryforher.Whentheboxwasopenedandshesawmesittinginsidesmilingupather,mysisterwasatacompletelossforwordsandburstintotears.Iwouldneverforgetthelookonherface.Itwassuchagifttobeabletoattendmysister’sgraduationtoshowhermylove,anditwasamemorythatbothofuswouldcherishforever.SoneverunderestimatethepoweroftheChristmasSpirit(85詞）【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的姐姐在加拿大，即將畢業(yè)，作者想請(qǐng)假去參加她的畢業(yè)典禮，作者忐忑地向自己的學(xué)校請(qǐng)假，令作者出乎意料的是居然被批準(zhǔn)了，作者訂好了機(jī)票，想要給姐姐一個(gè)驚喜?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我開始策劃。”可知，第一段可描寫作者的計(jì)劃。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我躲在大箱子里，聽見郵遞員按我姐姐的門鈴?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者的姐姐看到作者時(shí)的反應(yīng)。2.續(xù)寫線索：想到好主意——聯(lián)系郵件公司——打開箱子——感想3.詞匯激活行為類①想到：occurtosb./strikesb.②偶然遇見：comeacross/runinto③打開：open/unfold④突然哭起來：burstintotears/burstoutcrying情緒類①瘋狂地：frantically/insanely【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IknewifIpulledthisoff,mygrandarrivalwouldbethebestChristmaspresentIcouldevergivemysister.(由關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，省略了that)[高分句型2]Itwassuchagifttobeabletoattendmysister’sgraduationtoshowhermylove,anditwasamemorythatbothofuswouldcherishforever.(由關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)（2022·福建福州·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,andwhatIreallywantedmostwasanewbicycle.ButIknewthatmyfamilycouldn’taffordone,soIsettledforabedsidetablewithlockabledrawers,asafeplacetokeepmyprivatestuff.Wewenttothecharityshopwherewefoundanolddarkone.Itdidn’tlooktoocool,butIthoughtthatIwouldpaintittomakeitlookbetter.Afterwetookithome,Iwasgettingreadytopaintit.WhenIpulledthedrawersout.Ifeltsomethingstucktotheback.Ireachedinalltheway,andguesswhat?Asealedbagwithsomepapersinit.WhenIopenedthebag,Irealizedthatthepaperswereofficialdocuments.And,wrappedinthemwereabunchoftenandtwentydollarbills!Talkaboutfindingatreasure!Andonmybirthday!“Isthissomekindofjoke?”Isaidaloud.I