考點(diǎn)38 應(yīng)用文寫作之征文投稿（核心考點(diǎn)精講精練）（含答案解析）

考點(diǎn)38書面表達(dá)之征文投稿（核心考點(diǎn)精講精練）1.高考真題考點(diǎn)分布年份試卷體裁話題題材內(nèi)容2024新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷告知信學(xué)校生活介紹美術(shù)課的個(gè)人作品和感想全國(guó)甲卷演講稿社會(huì)科技中國(guó)交通發(fā)展天津卷演講稿社會(huì)生活低碳生活浙江卷征文投稿學(xué)校生活課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)2023新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建議信學(xué)校生活給外教提建議全國(guó)甲卷征文投稿歷史文化介紹中國(guó)歷史人物全國(guó)乙卷征文投稿生活學(xué)習(xí)假期習(xí)得新技能天津卷申請(qǐng)信社會(huì)生活“中國(guó)工坊”活動(dòng)浙江卷活動(dòng)報(bào)道學(xué)校生活認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物2022全國(guó)卷乙卷征文投稿調(diào)查結(jié)果學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的狀況全國(guó)卷甲卷征文投稿世界海洋日保護(hù)海洋新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷邀請(qǐng)信文化生活學(xué)校的電臺(tái)訪談?wù)憬硌?qǐng)信學(xué)校生活圖書館開設(shè)了一個(gè)小組學(xué)習(xí)室天津卷視頻文字稿（投稿）學(xué)校生活社團(tuán)活動(dòng)2.命題規(guī)律及備考策略【命題規(guī)律】近3年命題規(guī)律：對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化種類的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有針對(duì)某一具體文化現(xiàn)象的考查；體現(xiàn)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)與時(shí)代發(fā)展相融合；體裁上有：提綱作文；開放性作文；圖表作文；看圖作文；內(nèi)容上選材貼近考生實(shí)際生活。所寫內(nèi)容都是學(xué)生熟悉內(nèi)容。盡管對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容有限制，學(xué)生仍有較大的自由發(fā)揮空間（自己的感想），以展示自己的個(gè)性和創(chuàng)意【備考策略】熟練掌握各種應(yīng)用文的基本構(gòu)架；積累基本詞匯和句式，尤其是簡(jiǎn)單基本句式，寫好簡(jiǎn)單句；背誦優(yōu)美的段落和范文，模仿高級(jí)句式和表達(dá)；加強(qiáng)審題（主題、時(shí)態(tài)）訓(xùn)練；練習(xí)書寫，達(dá)到整潔美觀的程度?！久}預(yù)測(cè)】預(yù)測(cè)2025年應(yīng)用文考查仍然貼近考生實(shí)際生活，以電子郵件和投稿為主，考查考生的解決問題能力。必備基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)：征文、投稿，區(qū)別與書信，一般會(huì)給出特定的主題。如慶祝英文欄目創(chuàng)刊十周年，你最敬愛的人等等。不要在開頭和結(jié)尾生搬硬套如“I’writingto...”等書信格式。基本上寫一篇相關(guān)話題的小短文即可，小短文以記敘文或者議論文為主。話題基本上圍繞書信類，如推薦一個(gè)項(xiàng)目，那就和推薦信寫作思路一致。如最想感謝的人，那就和感謝信思路一致，不過在表達(dá)上可能人稱需要換一下?；旧蠈懸黄嚓P(guān)話題的小短文即可，小短文以記敘文或者議論文為主。學(xué)生需要掌握相關(guān)詞匯，句式用法等。文章框架結(jié)構(gòu)“引出話題-要點(diǎn)展開-總結(jié)全文”。主次分明，邏輯清晰。主題句要出現(xiàn)關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)，如現(xiàn)狀、原因、看法、影響、意義、措施、建議等。拓展句具體詳細(xì)，有意識(shí)使用邏輯銜接詞?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】段落要點(diǎn)首段總體闡述所述問題或現(xiàn)象。正文具體論述或描寫相關(guān)情況；或者介紹主題人或事物細(xì)節(jié)。尾段得出結(jié)論、體會(huì)或呼吁【必備詞匯和萬能句式】【必背詞語(yǔ)】同意，贊同subscribeto忠實(shí)的讀者faithfulreaders表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)voicetheiropinions不遺余力地做某事sparenoeffortstodo...共同努力做某事makejointefforttodo...對(duì)...…有害doharmto/beharmfulto...談到、提到Whenitcomesto...不可否認(rèn)......Thereisnodenyingthat...隨著新學(xué)期的臨近Withthenewtermapproaching面臨考試befacedwithchallengeexams人們普遍認(rèn)為....Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...很明顯，明顯地Itisobviousthat.../obliviously極為重要；強(qiáng)調(diào)...…的重要性...ofgreat/crucial/vitalsignificance/importance;強(qiáng)調(diào)…的重要性emphasizetheimportanceof...;highlightthesignificanceof...;attachimportanceto......…【必背開頭段】Anarticleinthenewspapercaughtmyattention.報(bào)紙上一篇文章引起了我的注意Whenitcomestoprotectingtheocean,itiswell-knownthatoceanplaysanimportantpartinourlife.說到保護(hù)海洋，眾所周知，海洋在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色。TherearemanypeoplewhoIrespect.Asforme,myfatheristheoneIrespect.ThereasonswhyIrespecthimareasfollows.近來，隨著智能手機(jī)和電腦的日益流行，越來越多的學(xué)生選擇用它們?cè)谡n外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。Nowadays,withtheimprovementofthestandardofliving,anincreasingnumberofteenagerssufferfromobesity,whicharousessocialconcerns.如今，隨著生活水平的提高，越來越多的青少年患有肥胖癥，這引起了社會(huì)的關(guān)注。InthelongspanoftheChinesehistory,theexistenceoftheoutstandingConfuciusislikeashiningpearl.在中國(guó)漫長(zhǎng)的歷史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一顆閃亮的珍珠。Sb.isconsideredtobeoneofthemostinfluentialfiguresinhistoryduetohis/heraccomplishments/achievements/impact].某人被認(rèn)為是歷史上最具影響力的人物之一，因?yàn)樗?她的[成就/影響力/貢獻(xiàn)]。ThelonghistoryofChinahaswitnessedtheflourishingofpoetryandthebrillianceofmanyexceptionalpoets,amongwhomIadmireDuFumost.中國(guó)悠久的歷史見證了詩(shī)歌的繁榮和許多杰出詩(shī)人的才華，其中我最欣賞杜甫?！颈乇持黝}段】Asahighschoolstudent,Inoticedthatmanystudentshadaseriesofhealthproblemsbecauseofirregulardiet.作為一名高中生，我注意到很多學(xué)生都因?yàn)轱嬍巢灰?guī)律而出現(xiàn)了一系列健康問題。Myfavouritesportsisropeskipping,becausenotonlycanIdoitathomeconvenientlybutalsoitcanhelptorefreshmeafterIgettiredfromdoinghomework.我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是跳繩，因?yàn)樘K不僅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以幫助我在做完作業(yè)累了之后提神。Additionally,ItakedelightinvariousactivitiesinthereadingclubeveryFriday,whereIgetimmersedintheseaofliterature,greatlyimprovingmyliterarycompetence.此外，我喜歡每周五在閱讀俱樂部的各種活動(dòng)，在那里我沉浸在文學(xué)的海洋里，大大提高了我的文學(xué)能力。Onlyifwetakeactiontoexercisecanwebehealthierandhealthierinthefuture.只有當(dāng)我們采取行動(dòng)去鍛煉時(shí)，我們才能在未來變得更健康。Foronething,notonlydoestheoceanoffersusvariousofseafoodtoeat,butalsoitishometomanykindsofanimals.首先，海洋不僅為我們提供了各種各樣的海鮮可以吃，而且它也是多種動(dòng)物的家園。Notonlydoesplayingbasketballbuildupmybodyandrelievestressfromstudy,butitalsopromotesfriendshipwithothers.打籃球球不僅增強(qiáng)了我的體質(zhì)，減輕了學(xué)習(xí)的壓力，而且增進(jìn)了與他人的友誼。Facedwiththechallengeofbeingdestroyed,missingorevenbeingstolen,traditionalChineserelicsareurgenttobeprotected.面對(duì)被銷毀、失蹤甚至被盜的挑戰(zhàn)，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文物迫切需要得到保護(hù)。【必背結(jié)尾段】Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能盡快回復(fù)，我將不勝感激。IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.我希望《青年》能出版更多的經(jīng)典作品，并有一個(gè)光明的未來。Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能盡快回復(fù)，我將不勝感激。Wehopethatwithallthesemeasurestaken,eyesightproblemscanbegreatlyreduced.我們希望這些有效的措施能大大減少視力問題。IsincerelyhopeYouthwillachievegreatersuccessandhaveapromisingfuture.我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受歡迎。IsincerelyhopethatthroughmoreunderstandingofConfuciusandhisConfucianism,wecanmaketheworldfilledwithmorelove,justiceandpeace.我真誠(chéng)地希望，通過對(duì)孔子及其儒家思想的進(jìn)一步理解，我們能讓世界充滿更多的愛、正義與和平。Personally,itishightimethatwesparednoefforttopreservetraditionalculturalrelics.就我個(gè)人而言，我們是時(shí)候不遺余力地保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文物了?！緦懽髂０濉縲henitcomesto___________________(當(dāng)談到...時(shí)）,itiswidelyacknowledgedthat________________________（眾所周知）.Foronething,_________________________（主題特色一）.Notonly_________________________butalso_________________________________(具體特點(diǎn))Foranther,thereisnodoubtthat________________________________(主題特色二)Idohopethat________________________.(表達(dá)期望).Allinall,itishightimethat....(sbdidsth)（2024年浙江卷1月）請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)；2.說明推薦理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答：StandUpandExercise,Everybody!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】StandUpandExercise,Everybody!Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It’saquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累厭倦：betiredof→befedupwith首先：first→aboveall減輕：combat→relieve提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ))[高分句型2]It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)【2023?全國(guó)甲卷】你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國(guó)故事”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以一位中國(guó)歷史人物為題寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡(jiǎn)介及事跡；2.意義或啟示。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,compassion,andsocialresponsibility.【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為學(xué)校正舉辦的主題為“用英文講中國(guó)故事”的征文活動(dòng)寫一篇短文投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累著名的：well-known→famous人物：figure→person強(qiáng)調(diào)：emphasize→stress基礎(chǔ)：foundation→basis2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.拓展句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,whichfosteredrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ))【高分句型2】Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)（2024·吉林長(zhǎng)春·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你校將舉辦一場(chǎng)面向留學(xué)生的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)美食節(jié)。請(qǐng)你向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿，介紹并宣傳此次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：（1）活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；（2）活動(dòng)意義；（3）邀請(qǐng)留學(xué)生參與。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ChineseTraditionalFoodFestival_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversion:ChineseTraditionalFoodFestivalOurschoolisthrilledtoannouncetheChineseTraditionalFoodFestival,aculturalactivitydesignedforinternationalstudents.ThiseventwillshowcaseadiversearrayoftraditionalChinesedishes,eachrepresentingauniqueculinarystyleandregion.FromspicySichuantodelicateCantonese,studentswillsetoffonafoodjourney,exploringtherichflavorsandhistoricalsignificanceofChinesefood.It’sanimmersiveexperiencethatwillbroadenculturalhorizonsandcreateunforgettablememories.Weinviteallinternationalstudentstojoinusforthisdeliciousadventure.Formoredetails,contacttheorganizingcommittee.Welookforwardtoyourparticipationinthisexcitingevent!【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿，介紹并宣傳面向留學(xué)生的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)美食節(jié)活動(dòng)，介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、說明活動(dòng)意義并邀請(qǐng)留學(xué)生參與。【詳解】1.詞匯積累興奮的：thrilled→excited展示：showcase→display,exhibit各種各樣的：adiversearrayof→awiderangeof,differentkindsof代表：represent→standfor難忘的：unforgettable→memorable2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：ThiseventwillshowcaseadiversearrayoftraditionalChinesedishes,eachrepresentingauniqueculinarystyleandregion.拓展句：ThiseventwillshowcaseadiversearrayoftraditionalChinesedishes,eachofwhichistorepresentauniqueculinarystyleandregion.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]OurschoolisthrilledtoannouncetheChineseTraditionalFoodFestival,aculturalactivitydesignedforinternationalstudents.(運(yùn)用了過去分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ))[高分句型2]It’sanimmersiveexperiencethatwillbroadenculturalhorizonsandcreateunforgettablememories.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句)（最新模擬試題演練）Writing1（2024·山東泰安·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你校正通過校英文報(bào)向同學(xué)們征集暑期社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的方案。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的方案;2.你的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearEditor,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,Tomakeoursummervacationfulfilling,Iwouldliketoproposeasocialpracticeactivitycalled“GetYourHandsDirtyinHiking”inwhichstudentsshouldcombinehikingwithcleaninguptrails.Inthiseco-friendlyhike,studentsareencouragedtobringrecycledbagstopickuptrashalongthehikingtrails,whichcannotonlypromotetheirphysicalhealthbutalsofostertheirsenseofsocialresponsibility.Byactivelyparticipatinginthecleanupprocess,studentsrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.Itisthroughthesehands-onexperiencesthatwestudentscanbeinspiredtomakeadifferenceinnatureandbeyond.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于暑期社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的方案投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累令人滿意：fulfilling→satisfying加強(qiáng)：strengthen→enhance參加：participatein→takepartin重要的：essential→crucial2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Byactivelyparticipatinginthecleanupprocess,studentsrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.拓展句：Ifstudentscanactivelyparticipateinthecleanupprocess,theywillrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Tomakeoursummervacationfulfilling,Iwouldliketoproposeasocialpracticeactivitycalled“GetYourHandsDirtyinHiking”inwhichstudentsshouldcombinehikingwithcleaninguptrails.(運(yùn)用了介詞+關(guān)系代詞結(jié)構(gòu)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Byactivelyparticipatinginthecleanupprocess,studentsrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ))Writing22．（2024·安徽·二模）某英文出版社正在以TheHarmonyBetweenHumanityandNature為主題征文，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.強(qiáng)調(diào)其重要性；2.你的相關(guān)個(gè)人經(jīng)歷；3.提出號(hào)召。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。TheHarmonyBetweenHumanityandNature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:TheHarmonyBetweenHumanityandNatureTheharmonybetweenhumanityandnatureiscrucialforoursurvival.Asourenvironmentworsens,it’shightimewerecognizedtheimportanceofcoexistingpeacefullywithnature.Ioncewitnessedthebeautyofthisharmonywhilehikinginthemountains.Thebreathtakinglandscape,thechirpingofbirds,andtherustlingoftreesinthebreezetaughtmethevalueofpreservingnature.However,thesightoftrashleftbypreviousvisitorsremindedmehowhumanactionscandestroythisbalance.Let’sstriveforharmonywithnaturebyadoptingeco-friendlypractices.Everysmallstepwetakecancontributetoahealthier,moresustainableworldforall.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以TheHarmonyBetweenHumanityandNature為主題給校英文報(bào)投稿。【詳解】1.詞匯積累重要性：importance→significance美不勝收的：breathtaking→beautiful然而：However→Nevertheless摧毀：destroy→crush2.句式拓展同義句替換原句：However,thesightoftrashleftbypreviousvisitorsremindedmehowhumanactionscandestroythisbalance.同義句：Theviewoflitterabandonedbyearliervisitorsservedasastarkreminderofthedetrimentalimpacthumanbehaviorcanhaveondisruptingthenaturalequilibrium.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Asourenvironmentworsens,it’shightimewerecognizedtheimportanceofcoexistingpeacefullywithnature.(運(yùn)用了As引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】However,thesightoftrashleftbypreviousvisitorsremindedmehowhumanactionscandestroythisbalance.(運(yùn)用了However引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)Writing33．（2024·四川成都·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）自1996年起，我國(guó)將每年的6月6日設(shè)為“全國(guó)愛眼日”。你校將以六月六日全國(guó)愛眼日為主題，舉辦英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)述當(dāng)下青少年的視力狀況；2.簡(jiǎn)析上述狀況背后的原因；3.介紹護(hù)眼小妙招。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。ProtectOurEyes____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ProtectOurEyesNowadays,itisbecomingincreasinglycommonthatmoreandmorestudentswearglassesduetoshortsightedness.Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,studentsareprovidedwithmoreelectronicdevices.Firstly,studentsspendmoretimethaneveronelectronicdevicesforentertainment,includingvideogamesandsocialmedia.Secondly,onlinecourseshavebecomemorepopularandmanystudentsspendmuchtimeinfrontofthescreen.Asaresult,therehasbeenasharpvisualimpairmentintheireyes.Soprotectingoureyesisveryimportant.Tobeginwith,weshouldnotuseeyesforalongtime.Secondly,weshouldkeepadistanceofonefootwhenreadingbooks.Thirdly,insistdoinghealthcareeyesveryday.Finally,Thesituationcouldbeimprovedifstudentsmanagetheirtimeontheelectronicdevicesandtakeregularbreakswhileusingthem.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校將以六月六日全國(guó)愛眼日為主題，舉辦英語(yǔ)征文比賽，要求考生按照要求寫一篇短文投稿。【詳解】1.詞匯積累由于：dueto→becauseof發(fā)展，進(jìn)步：development→advancement娛樂：entertainment→recreation急劇的：sharp→steep2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,studentsspendmoretimethaneveronelectronicdevicesforentertainment,includingvideogamesandsocialmedia.拓展句：Firstly,studentsspendmoretimethaneveronelectronicdevicesforentertainment,whichincludevideogamesandsocialmedia.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays,itisbecomingincreasinglycommonthatmoreandmorestudentswearglassesduetoshortsightedness.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)、that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Secondly,weshouldkeepadistanceofonefootwhenreadingbooks.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的省略）Writing44．（2024·湖南郴州·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）你校英文報(bào)SchoolLife專欄本期的主題為“Sleepandstudy”。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.睡眠與學(xué)習(xí)的關(guān)系；2.你的建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文SleepandstudySleepiscrucialforourphysicalandmentalhealth,enablingustofunctionbestbothacademicallyandsocially.Lackofsufficientsleepcanleadtodecreasedconcentration,memoryproblems,andevenimpactacademicperformance.Toimprovesleepquality,Isuggestestablishingaregularsleepschedule,avoidingcaffeinelateinthedayandscreensbeforebedtime,andengaginginrelaxingactivitiessuchasreadingorlisteningtomusic.Byprioritizingsleep,wecanenhanceouracademicperformanceandoverallwell-being.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文給英文報(bào)SchoolLife專欄投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累重要：crucial→vital導(dǎo)致：leadto→resultin影響：impact→affect加強(qiáng)：enhance→strengthen2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Sleepiscrucialforourphysicalandmentalhealth,enablingustofunctionbestbothacademicallyandsocially.拓展句：Sleepiscrucialforourphysicalandmentalhealthbecauseitenablesustofunctionbestbothacademicallyandsocially.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Sleepiscrucialforourphysicalandmentalhealth,enablingustofunctionbestbothacademicallyandsocially.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))[高分句型2]Byprioritizingsleep,wecanenhanceouracademicperformanceandoverallwell-being.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ))Writing55．（2024·陜西榆林·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假如你是李華，畢業(yè)在即，你校英文報(bào)正面向全體高三學(xué)生進(jìn)行征稿，題目為“ASpecialItemonMyDesk”。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.物品介紹；2.物品意義。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。ASpecialItemonMyDesk____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ASpecialItemonMyDeskMydeskhasaccompaniedmeformanyyears,andsomeoftheitemsonitdohavespecialmeaningsforme.Ofallthethingsonmydesk,theclockontheleftsideisthemostmeaningfulforme.Itisanobviousreminderofthesaying:Timeandtidewaitfornoman.WheneverIwanttobelazy,thesoundoftheclocktellsmetovaluetime.Besides,thebookshelfinthemiddleindicatesthepowerofknowledge.Thebooks,whethertextbooksorextracurricularones,satisfymycuriosity,offermeexcellentstoriesandenrichmylife.Ican’timaginehowboringmylifewouldbewithoutthem.Ihopemydeskwillalwaysbeapartofmylife,witnessmyprogressandleadmetoasuccessfullife.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校英文報(bào)正面向全體高三學(xué)生進(jìn)行征稿，題目為《我桌子上的一個(gè)特殊物品》，要求考生按照要求寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累陪伴某人：accompanysb.→keepsb.company物品：item→object重視：value→attachimportanceto滿足：satisfy→meet2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Mydeskhasaccompaniedmeformanyyears,andsomeoftheitemsonitdohavespecialmeaningsforme.拓展句：Mydeskhasaccompaniedmeformanyyears,onwhichsomeoftheitemsdohavespecialmeaningsforme.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】WheneverIwanttobelazy,thesoundoftheclocktellsmetovaluetime.（運(yùn)用了Whenever引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Ihopemydeskwillalwaysbeapartofmylife,witnessmyprogressandleadmetoasuccessfullife.（運(yùn)用了省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句）Writing66．（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李華。為豐富校園生活，你校在上周舉辦了一年一度的校園藝術(shù)節(jié)，請(qǐng)你向?qū)W校校報(bào)投稿，寫一篇短文介紹這次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容主要包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.活動(dòng)意義。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校等信息。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoenrichourschoollifeandbroadenthestudents’horizons,ourschoolheldtheannualSchoolArtFestivallastweek.Asscheduled,thefestivalstartedwithasingingcompetition,attractingdozensofstudentswhohadatalentformusic.Tencontestantsstoodoutandwontheprizesintheend.Thenfollowedtheschoolartshow,inwhichmanyworksfromboththestudentsandteacherswereonexhibition,rangingfromcalligraphytopaintings.Theartfestivalprovidedaplatformforusstudentstoshowcaseourtalentsandpassions,whetheritbethroughmusic,dance,drama,orvisualarts.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對(duì)于你校在上周舉辦了一年一度的校園藝術(shù)節(jié)這一情況，向?qū)W校校報(bào)投稿，寫一篇短文介紹這次活動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累開闊：broaden→widen吸引：attract→draw提供：provided→offered展示：showcase→demonstrate2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inordertoenrichourschoollifeandbroadenthestudents’horizons,ourschoolheldtheannualSchoolArtFestivallastweek.被動(dòng)句式：OurschoolheldtheannualSchoolArtFestivallastweek,whoseaimwastoenrichourschoollifeandbroadenthestudents’horizons.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Asscheduled,thefestivalstartedwithasingingcompetition,attractingdozensofstudentswhohadatalentformusic.（運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞中的現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)以及關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。）【高分句型2】Theartfestivalprovidedaplatformforusstudentstoshowcaseourtalentsandpassions,whetheritbethroughmusic,dance,drama,orvisualarts.（運(yùn)用了whether引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。）Writing77．（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)欄目“GrowingPains”正在面向全校學(xué)生征稿，請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)述一次成長(zhǎng)中遇到的煩惱和解決方法；2.提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Growingupisnotalwaysenjoyable,withpossibilitiesandchallengesinterwoven.IstillrememberaperiodinhighschoolwhenIwasontensetermswithmyparents.Argumentsemergedandagulfgrewbetweenus.Itwasonlywhenweputourselvesineachother’sshoesandhadathoroughtalkthatourrelationshipbegantochangeforthebetter.Frommyperspective,weshouldtakeapositiveattitudetowardsteenagechallenges.Thesepainsarepartoflearninghowtogetonwithotherpeopleandgainingasenseofidentity.Therefore,withgrowingpainscomegrowinggains.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生講述自己成長(zhǎng)中遇到的一次煩惱及解決辦法，并提出建議?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累交織：interwoven→intertwined緊張的：ontenseterms→inatensestate出現(xiàn)：emerged→occurred提出建議：giveadvice→proposesuggestions句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Argumentsemergedandagulfgrewbetweenus.拓展句：Discordsurfacedandachasmprogressivelywidenedinourrelationship.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IstillrememberaperiodinhighschoolwhenIwasontensetermswithmyparents.（使用了when引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句先行詞為aperiod）【高分句型2】Itwasonlywhenweputourselvesineachother’sshoesandhadathoroughtalkthatourrelationshipbegantochangeforthebetter.（使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）Writing88．（2024·江西·二模）近來，你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)攝影欄“美麗校園掠影”正在向全校師生征稿。請(qǐng)你挑選一張你所拍攝的照片并用電子郵件發(fā)送給欄目負(fù)責(zé)人Mike。內(nèi)容包括：1.照片簡(jiǎn)要描述；2.選擇的理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMike,I’msendingtoyouanextraordinaryphotoforGlimpsesofOurPrettySchoolcolumn.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards!Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMike,I’msendingtoyouanextraordinaryphotoforGlimpsesofOurPrettySchoolcolumn.Itookitbyaccidentaround22:30lastmonth.Onenight