Unit5Goodmanners第4課時Writing（教師版）八年級英語下冊講義（牛津譯林版）

Unit5Goodmanners第4課時writing八年級英語下冊同步精品講義（牛津譯林版）知識精講本單元主題是學會餐桌禮儀。目的是教會學生就餐禮儀。知識精講主要內(nèi)容包括:大家到齊了才能開始;就餐時不要吵鬧;不要張大嘴巴吃飯;不要含著食物講話;不要夠別人盤子里的東西;離開之前要等別人吃完。

能力拓展能力拓展假如你是李晨,你的美國筆友Linda打算來中國度假。請你根據(jù)下面所給的要點提示給她寫一封不少于80詞的電子郵件,簡單介紹一下中國的風俗與餐桌禮儀。

要點提示:

1.赴宴要準時,見面要微笑、握手。

2.每次不要吃太多。

3.當你吃飽了,對主人的勸菜應(yīng)禮貌回絕。

4.告辭時,要對主人表示感謝。

思路點撥

本單元主要向別人介紹餐桌禮儀,要從以下三個方面人手:

A)赴宴要準時,見面要微笑、握手。

B)不要吃得太多,吃飽了對主人的勸菜應(yīng)禮貌回絕。

C)告辭時,要對主人表示感謝。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

DearLinda,

I’mgladtohearthatyouwilletomycountryforvacation.Differentcountrieshavedifferentcustomsandtablemanners.InChina,ifyou’reinvitedtodinner,youresupposedtobeontimeandshakehandswiththehostwithasmile.Whileeating,youshouldnoteattoomuchatatime.It’sgoodmannerstochewwithyourmouthclosedanduseanapkintowipeyourmouthsometimes.Whenyouarefullbutthehoststillasksyoutohelpyourselftosomemorefood,youshouldsay“Thankyou.

It’sdelicious,butI’mfull.”It’spolitetosaythankswhileleaving.Haveagoodtrip!

Yours,

LiChen

分層提分分層提分A今年是我市創(chuàng)建全國文明城市的關(guān)鍵一年。作為中學生，我們應(yīng)積極參與。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。l.尊敬老師，對人禮貌；2.幫助他人，友善待人；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，過馬路走斑馬線，不闖紅燈；4.保護環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾，不踩草地等；5.個人觀點。參考詞匯：尊敬

respect；對……禮貌bepoliteto；斑馬線

zebracrossingOurcityisnowmakingitsefforttobeeanationalcivilizedcity.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ourcityisnowmakingitsefforttobeeanationalcivilizedcity.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?Weshouldrespectourteachersandbepolitetoothers.Weshouldalsohelpthoseinneedandbefriendlytopeoplearoundus.Besides,wemustobeytrafficrules.Whencrossingthestreet,weshouldwalkonthezebracrossing.Andwemustn'tgoacrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightsarered.What'smore,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Forexample,Wemustn'tsteponthegrassandclimbtrees.Wemustn'tthrowlitter'everywhere.Let'stryourbesttomakeourhometownacivilizedcity.【詳解】試題分析：本文是提綱類作文。首先認真審題和閱讀提示。根據(jù)提示（作為中學生，我們應(yīng)積極參與創(chuàng)建全國文明城市。）可知此文時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，要使用建議型句型（weshould/must/aresupposedto…），動筆前要認真閱讀提示：（l.尊敬老師，對人禮貌；2.幫助他人，友善待人；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，過馬路走斑馬線，不闖紅燈；4.保護環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾，不踩草地等；5.個人觀點。），內(nèi)容要包括所提供的信息及要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯。不要寫得太少，字數(shù)在80詞以上。要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。（一）根據(jù)要點列提綱：l.尊敬老師，對人禮貌：respectourteachersandbepolitetoothers.；2.幫助他人，友善待人：helpthoseinneedandbefriendlytopeoplearoundus.；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，過馬路走斑馬線，不闖紅燈：obeytrafficrules，Whencrossingthestreet,weshouldwalkonthezebracrossing，mustn'tgoacrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightsarered.；4.保護環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾，不踩草地等：weshouldprotectourenvironment.，Wemustn'tsteponthegrassandclimbtrees.Wemustn'tthrowlittereverywhere.；5個人觀點：Let'stryourbesttomakeourhometownacivilizedcity.（二）連詞成句，連句成篇，注意使用連詞；（三）寫完以后再閱讀一遍，檢查是否有語法、單詞拼寫等錯誤，或不合適的地方。點睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達要符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順。（1）學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時態(tài)），學生運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達的順序。（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。B目前，你所在的學校正在積極創(chuàng)建全市文明校園，請你以校學生會的名義就“創(chuàng)建文明校園”這一主題，根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一封80詞左右的倡議書。要點提示如下：1.保持教室的整潔，不亂扔垃圾；

2.不在公共場所大聲喧嘩，圖書館保持安靜；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，總是排隊；

4.舉止有禮，互幫互助；

5.……Dearschoolmates,Ourschoolistryingtobeabetterplaceforallofus.Weknowgoodmannersarereallyimportant.Andwecandosomethingforit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sstartfromourselves!TheStudents’UnionJune13th,2018【答案】Dearschoolmates,Ourschoolistryingtobeabetterplaceforallofus.Weknowgoodmannersarereallyimportant.Andwecandosomethingforit.Inordertomakeourschoolmorebeautiful,weshouldkeepourclassroomscleaneveryday.Remembernottodroplittereverywhere.Andweshouldremembernottolaughortalkloudlyafterclassinpublicplaces.Whenweareinthelibrary,wemustkeepquiet.It’salsoimportanttofollowtrafficruleseverywhereandqueueforeverything.Weshouldalwaysbehavepolitelyandhelpeachotheranytime.Goodmannersmakeourschoolbetter,aswellasus.

Let’sstartfromourselves!TheStudents’UnionJune13th,2018【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以校學生會的名義就“創(chuàng)建文明校園”這一主題，寫一封倡議書?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫一封“創(chuàng)建文明校園”的倡議書。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：weshould……，Whenweare……，It’salsoimportantto……，Goodmannersmake……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了讓學校成為一個更好的地方，我們有一些事要做，接下來介紹我們應(yīng)該做的事，最后提倡要從我們自己開始。此處inorderto,remembernottodosth,keepquiet,eachother,aswellas等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。C假如你是李華,你的美國筆友Tom打算來安徽度假。請你根據(jù)下面所給的提示內(nèi)容給他寫一封電子郵件,簡單介紹一下我們中國的風俗與餐桌禮儀。要點如下：1.會面親戚朋友時要微笑,握手；2.每次赴宴要準時,同時不宜吃得太多；3.當你吃飽了,對主人的勸菜應(yīng)禮貌回絕；4.離別時,要對主人表示謝意。注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱；4.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearTom,I'mgladtohearthatyouwilletoAnhuiforwintervacation.Differentcountrieshavedifferentcustomsandtablemanners.InChina,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.LiHua【答案】DearTom,I'mgladtohearthatyouwilletoAnhuiforwintervacation.Differentcountrieshavedifferentcustomsandtablemanners.InChina,youshouldsmileandshakehandswithyourfriendsorrelatives.Ifyou'reinvitedtodinner,youmustbeontime.Whileeating,youshouldnoteattoomuchatatime.It'sgoodmannerstosay“thanks”tothehostwhenheasksyoutohelpyourselftosomefood.Whenyouarefull,butthehoststillasksyoutohelpyourselftomorefood,youshouldsay,“Thankyou.It'sdelicious,butI'mfull.”It'spolitetosaythankswhileleaving.Haveagoodtrip!Bestwishes.LiHua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題屬于書信作文。題目要求以LiHua的身份向即將來安徽的美國筆友Tom寫一封介紹中國風俗及餐桌禮儀的書信。2.寫作指導：首先開篇已給出，中間要寫明在中國具體的風俗和餐桌禮儀，最后表示對Tom的歡迎與祝福。人稱主要采用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。在描述中國風俗和餐桌禮儀時要把具體細節(jié)表達清楚，前后要貫通連貫。D學生會將要邀請MrBlack做一個關(guān)于禮儀的演講，請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，寫一個不少于70詞的通知，不包括所給的開頭和結(jié)尾。Nameofthetalk:GoodtelephonemannersTime:2p.m.,13MayPlace:TheschoolhallContent:Someimportantrules,forexample:answeraphoneassoonaspossible,saysorryfordelays(延誤),keepyourvoicedown,beyourselfandspeaknaturally,saygoodbyebeforehangingupHello,everyone,MayIhaveyourattention,please?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________