專題09高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題講解課件6月浙江卷

讀后續(xù)寫真題2018浙江卷:度假騎馬迷路1試題再現(xiàn)2試題分析3寫作思路4范文賞析目錄CONTENTS2021試題再現(xiàn)歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析01Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse.

Paragraph2：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。2021試題分析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析02 Itwassummer,andmy

dad

wantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.原文分析我和父親開始一場從未有過的旅行。 HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe

farmhouse

listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdownthe

river

nearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina

feed

thechickens,

whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe

sheep

outtograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.原文分析我在叔叔家愉快的度假生活。 Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbe

late

forsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothe

track

sothatyoudon’t

getlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof

sight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelate

afternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.原文分析我和父親騎馬上山，注意環(huán)境描寫2021寫作思路歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析03回答下面幾個問題，檢測一下你是否讀懂了原材料。Q2:Whatdidthewriterwanttodothenextafternoon?Why?Q1:WheredidthewriterandhisfatherstayinAlbuquerque?Q3:Didthewriterridebyhimself?Q4:WhatdidUnclePaulremindthembeforetheysetout?Q5:Howdidthewriterfeelonthehorseback?Verypleased/satisfied.OnUnclePaul’sfarm.Totakeahorseride.Becausehewantedtobecoolaswell.No,hedidn’t.Hisfatherwentwithhim.Keepingtothetracktoavoidgettinglostandreturningontimeforsupper.(Para3)MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.

(Para4)So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.研讀以下句子，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Therewasarivernearby.Thewriterandhisfatherwereondifferenthorses.閱讀完材料，試著完成下面的故事山吧！WhatdidIdo?1.

OpeningMydadtookmetoUnclePaul’sfarmtoexperiencethefarmlife.SeeingDadandUncleridinghorses,Iwantedtotryhorseridingmyself.Alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse…Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

Ending研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse..Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.AccordingtoPara.2,thewriterandhisfathermusthavegotlost;ifthiswasthecase,howdidtheygetlost?Wheredidthehorsescarrythem?Howdidtheyfeelaboutanddealwiththesituation?Didtheyeventuallymakeitbacktothefarmhouse?How?Paragraph1：

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

_______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

_______________________________________________________________________原文分析路上遇到一只兔子表明上一段我們應該是追兔子然后迷路了。本段應該續(xù)寫如何找到回去的路。根據(jù)括號中的提示，補出范文缺失的部分，并關注哪些語言回答了“首句精研”的問題。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._________________________

_____________________________________（我的馬受到驚嚇跑了起來，速度之快超出了我的想象。so…that…倒裝句型）IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot._______________

_____________________________________（我爸爸說太陽要落山了，我們得離開了，因為他不想我們迷路。并列賓語從句，注意時態(tài)）Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome._________________________________________________（我腦中充滿了懷疑的想法，希望不會遇見餓狼。介詞短語作狀語）Werodealongthedirt.____________________（我們騎得像風一樣。like做介詞）Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Theyweresocute,sowehorsedafterit.

Therabbitrunquickly.WelostourwayTherabbitrunaway.Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

WecalleduncleforhelpButcannotgetthrough,wetriedtoseekasolutionwefoundtherightdirectionmemorabledeedsofrabbithunting.句子潤色1.它毛茸茸的，有一身漂亮的棕色頭發(fā)。Itwasfurryandithadbrownhair.Itwasfurrywithacoatofgorgeousbrownhair.furryWith結(jié)構(gòu)替換句子潤色2.它用它的一對紅眼睛看著我，然后開始在前面疾馳。It

looked

atmewithitsredeyes,andtherunquickly.Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbegantoscurry

ahead.句式詞匯升級句子潤色3.“為什么不把它抓回來交給保羅叔叔呢？他們一定很高興?！毕氲竭@一點，我拼命地騎著馬去尋找它?！癢hynotcatchitandbringitbacktoUnclePaul?Theymustbeveryhappy.”WhenIthoughtthis,Irodehardtohuntforit.“Whynotcatchitandbringitbackto

UnclePaul?Theymustbeveryhappy.”Withthisthought,Irodehardtohuntforit.

rodehardtohuntforWith結(jié)構(gòu)替換句子潤色4.爸爸看到了，只好跟著我。兔子非常敏捷，很快就進入了一片山林。Dad

sawitandhadtofollowme.Therabbitwasveryagile,soonenteringamountainforest.wasveryagileamountainforest句子潤色5.我們不得不下馬，繼續(xù)追趕，完全忘記了后面的賽道。Wehadtogetdownthehorses,continuedtochaseandtotallyforgettingthetrackback.Wehadtogetdownthehorses,continuingthechaseandtotallyforgettingthe

track

back.getdownthehorsesthetrackback非謂語動詞替換句子潤色6.盡管我們拼命嘗試，但兔子最終還是看不見了。Eventhoughwetrieddesperately,therabbitwasoutof

sight

intheend.trieddesperatelywasoutofsight句子潤色7.然后我們意識到我們在森林深處。Thenwerealizedwewereinthedeeppartofaforest.inthedeeppartofaforest句子潤色8.烏云似乎在天空聚集。Anddarkcloudsseemedtobegatheringinthesky.

gatherinthesky句子潤色9.拿出手機，我們很快就發(fā)現(xiàn)出了問題：沒有信號。沒有指南針。Takingoutthecellphone,wesoonfoundsomethingwaswrong:nosignal.Andnocompass.nosignal句子潤色10.我嚇壞了，盯著爸爸，試圖從他那里尋求解決問題的辦法。Iamscared,andIstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.asolutionforthetrouble長短句的使用dadUnclePaulfarmhouseriverfeedsheeplatetrackgotlostsightWho

WhenWhereWhat

10keywords

dad;UnclePaul;sheepfeed;gotlost;sightfarmhouse;river;tracklatePredictthedevelopment第五檔

(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。

內(nèi)容豐富，應用了5個以上短文中標出的關鍵詞語。

所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準確，可能有些錯誤，但完全不影響意義表達。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。keywords

logicalplotrich,accurate,coherent(連貫的)languageRequirementsforwriting

Para.1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.What:feed;gotlost;sightWhere:farmhouse;river;track10keywordsWhen:lateFinishthestoryWho:dad;UnclePaul;sheep≥5keywordsLogicalplot3.Appropriatetransitionalwords4.Richandaccuratelanguage5.Neathandwriting.RequirementsThelanguageofthegiventextis

A.plainandsimpleB.complicatedC.beautifulD.detailed2018范文賞析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析04Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Werodealongthedirt.Werodelikethewind.Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.閱讀以下參考范文，學習范文的精彩表達和亮點表述。SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.

Para1:

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Werodealongthedirt.Werodelikethewind.Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.2018年6月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫——邏輯連貫重復、指代等Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

So

startledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwith

me.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Weset