2022屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫精讀精煉二十七含答案解析

2022屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫精讀精煉（二十七）目錄內(nèi)容PartA讀后續(xù)寫?？冀?jīng)典原文PartB讀后續(xù)寫思路引導(dǎo)PartC寫作優(yōu)秀句式翻譯PartD篇章寫作潤色PartE課后練筆鞏固提升GaryMessina,aninvestmentbankinganalyst,now38,wasonhismorningrunalongNewYorkCity'sEastRiver.Suddenlysomethingcaughthiseye-alarge60-year-oldmanbalancingonthefour-foot-highrailing(欄桿)thatguardedthepathfromthewater.Ashegotclosertothescene,themantookastepforwardandjumpedintothedark,roughriverbelow.Messinarushedtotherailingtofindthatthemanwasstrugglinginthewater,clearlyunabletoswim.Ifhehadintendedtokillhimselfthatmorning,hehadnowchangedhismind.Thejumperscreamedcrazilyforhelpastherapidspulledhimawayfromtheseawall（防波堤）.Otherjoggersalsoheardtheman'scalling.JohnGreen,now31,immediatelydroppedhisphoneandkeysonland,alongwithhissneakers,andjumpedinthecoldriver."Peoplehadcalledthepolice,butitwasunclearwhenthey'dgetthere,"saysGreen,acommercialinsurancebroker."Ijustreacted."Soonafterthat,Messinajoinedhimintheriver.Theflowwasrapidwhilethetemperaturewasfreezing.Reachingtothejumperseemedtobeanearlyimpossibletaskforthetworescuers.Luckily,justasthejumperwaslosingstrength,Greengrabbedholdofhim.Thepairwereabout30yardsfromtheseawallwhenMessinacaughtupwiththem.Theystabilizedtheman,withMessinasupportinghisbackandGreenholdinghimupfromeitherside.Hewasunresponsivebutnotunconscious.Asthemenmadetheirwaytowardtheconcreteseawallthatstretchedforblocksineachdirection,Greenhadanawfulrealization:Withthewaterflowingagoodeightfeetbelowthelipofthewailandnoladderordock（碼頭）insight,therewasnowayoutoftheriver.What'sworse,thejumper,whowassixfoottwoandweighedaround260pounds,wasdeadweightinhisrescuers'arms,whichmeanttheycoulduseonlytheirlegstosupportthemselvesinthewater.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Arescueboatisonitsway,"someoneshoutedtothem._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:However,theyencounteredanewthreat:Theflowcreatedbytherapidswassuckingthemundertheboat._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PartB 讀后續(xù)寫思路引導(dǎo)本文以人物為線索展開，講述了GaryMessina和JohnGreen勇敢救落水老人，但在過程中不斷遇到險境的故事。1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“‘救援船已經(jīng)在路上了，’有人對他們喊道?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫在救援船來之前三個人遇到的危險情況。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“然而，他們遇到了一個新的威脅：急流產(chǎn)生的水流把他們吞沒在船下。”可知，第二段可描寫經(jīng)過艱難險阻后最終獲救的過程。2.續(xù)寫線索：踩水困難——到河邊——救援船出現(xiàn)——新威脅的出現(xiàn)——回到陸地——回到工作3.詞匯激活行為類①隨著時間推移：astimegoesby/withthepassageoftime/thenAsTimePassed②變得困難：becomedifficult/becometough③到達(dá)：arrive/getto/reach④出現(xiàn)：turnup/comeout⑤設(shè)法抓?。篶atchat/reachoutfor/graspat情緒類①幸運的是：beluckytodo/

fortunatelyfortheweek②毫無疑問：beyondallquestion/beyonddoubt/withoutdoubt③精疲力盡：deadbeat

/beusedupPartC 寫作優(yōu)秀句式翻譯“一艘救援船正在途中，”有人對他們喊道。隨著時間的推移，踩著的水變得越來越困難了。十分鐘后，他們設(shè)法到達(dá)了河邊。格林試圖用一只手和一只英尺咬進(jìn)墻上的一個小裂縫里，結(jié)果在這個過程中割傷了自己。與水流搏斗，把那個人抱在水面上，很快就變得筋疲力盡，于是他們一邊盡可能靠近墻，一邊漂流。幸運的是，救援船終于出現(xiàn)了。然而，他們遇到了一個新的威脅：急流造成的水流把他們吸到船上。墨西拿記得就在救援人員被打倒時，救援人員抓住了這名男子，讓他放手?！拔乙呀?jīng)完全沒有活力了，”他說。不知怎么的，他抓住了一根固定在甲板上的桿子，毫無疑問地把他帶到了安全的地方。十分鐘后，這群人就回到了陸地上。他們救下來的那個人被送往醫(yī)院接受評估。至于救援人員，他們倆在上午10點半都在上班了。“我有點晚了，”格林微笑著承認(rèn)?！暗矣幸粋€很好的借口。”參考答案："Arescueboatisonitsway,"someoneyelledtothem.Treadingwaterwasgettingtougherastimewentby.Aftertenminutes,theymanagedtogettotheriver'sedge.Greentriedwedgingahandandafootintoatinycrackinthewall,resultingincuttinghimselfintheprocess.Fightingthecurrentandholdingthemanabovethewaterquicklybecameexhausting,sotheygaveintodriftingwhilestayingasclosetothewallastheycould.Fortunately,therescueboatfinallycameinsight.However,theyencounteredanewthreat:Theflowcreatedbytherapidswassuckingthemundertheboat.Messinaremembersbeingpulleddownjustastherescuersgrabbedontothemanallowinghimtoletgo."Iwascompletelyoutofenergy,"hesays.Somehow,hegraspedapoleattachedtotheboatdeck,whichundisputedlybroughthimtosafety.Withintenminutes,thegroupwasbackonland.Themantheyhadsavedwastakentothehospitalforevaluation.Asfortherescuers,bothofthemwasatworkby10:30a.m."Iwasabitlate,"admitsGreen,smiling."ButIhadagoodexcuse."PartD 篇章寫作潤色"Arescueboatisonitsway,"someoneyelledtothem.Treadingwaterwasgettingtougherastimewentby.Aftertenminutes,theymanagedtogettotheriver'sedge.Greentriedwedgingahandandafootintoatinycrackinthewall,resultingincuttinghimselfintheprocess.Fightingthecurrentandholdingthemanabovethewaterquicklybecameexhausting,sotheygaveintodriftingwhilestayingasclosetothewallastheycould.Fortunately,therescueboatfinallycameinsight.However,theyencounteredanewthreat:Theflowcreatedbytherapidswassuckingthemundertheboat.Messinaremembersbeingpulleddownjustastherescuersgrabbedontothemanallowinghimtoletgo."Iwascompletelyoutofenergy,"hesays.Somehow,hegraspedapoleattachedtotheboatdeck,whichundisputedlybroughthimtosafety.Withintenminutes,thegroupwasbackonland.Themantheyhadsavedwastakentothehospitalforevaluation.Asfortherescuers,bothofthemwasatworkby10:30a.m."Iwasabitlate,"admitsGreen,smiling."ButIhadagoodexcuse."PartE 課后練筆鞏固提升.WhentragedystruckhislittlegirlduringtheDepression(大蕭條),thisfatherdidtheonlythinghecould.Thetragedyhappenedintheyear1933.Iwasonly6yearsoldwhenIwasrushedtothehospitalwithtwocrushedfeet.MyparentsweretoldImightneverwalkagain.TheaccidenthappenedwhenIwassittinginfrontofourhouseinLowell,Massachusetts.Iwasplayinginapuddle(水坑)afterarainstormandsuddenlyfeltahugeweightonmyfeet.WhenIlookedup,therewasacartireonthem.Icriedout,butthemotorwasrunningandnoonecouldhearmeovertheengine.Thedriverhadrunacrossthestreetforanewspaper.Whenhegotbacktohiscar,hedroveaway—neverknowinghehadparkedonmyfeet.Justaboutthen,ourneighbor’ssoncamehomeandsawmebentovermyfeetinpain.Heimmediatelycarriedmehome,andIrememberthinkinghowtallandstronghewas.Anambulancecame,andIremainedinthehospitalfor3weekswhilemyfeetwere“repaired”.WhenIreturnedhome,Icouldhardlywalk.Isatinourbaywindowandwatchedthechildrenplayonthestreetandlongedtojointhem…butIcouldn’t.Ifeltsoleftoutdespitemyparents’company.MyparentsweretoldthatifIwasevertowalkagain,I’dneedtreatment,whichinthosedaysmeantridingatricycle(三輪車)tostrengthenthemuscleandeventuallygetmyfeetbackintoconditionforwalking.Ourfamilycouldn’taffordsuchanextravagance(奢侈品).TimesweretoughduringtheDepression,andtherewerefivemouthstofeed,besidesbuyingcoalandwoodforthestove.Dadcouldn’taffordthebusfareandoncoldwinterdayshewalked7mileseverydayinhisonlywintercoattogettowork.No,therewasnomoneyforatricycle.Iwouldbeacripple(瘸子)allmylife.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；Paragraph1：Thenonday,whilesittingatmyusualplaceinthewindow,Isawmyfatherwalkingupthestreetcarryingatricycleonhisshoulder._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ItwasmanyyearslaterbeforeIlearnedwhereandhowDadhadgotthetricycle._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________