Unit3-寫作課名師課件

Unit3AHealthyLife人教版選修六0Writing

建議信Trainstudents’writingskillsofwritinga

practicalletter.0(回復(fù)性)建議信回復(fù)性建議信是針對對方提出的問題或困惑，有針對性地提出自己的建議的一種書信文體。Discusshowtowriteit:

假設(shè)你是李華。你的英國筆友John寫信告訴你近日他由于沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到很大影響。他十分焦慮。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，給他寫一封回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣。體裁建議信時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時（某些句子可以用一般將來時）人稱第一、二人稱幾段三段一、審題謀篇二、每段內(nèi)容第一段，找到問題，表明可以提出意見/勸告；第二段，針對問題提出建議，并說明原因；第三段，提出期望，希望收信者積極行動，改進(jìn)現(xiàn)狀，并禮貌地結(jié)束全文。1．首段：引出問題。Iamsorryyouhavehadsomuchtroublein...Youhaveaskedformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．主體：提出建議。Inmyopinion，youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.Firstofall...Meanwhile，...Inaddition，...It’simportantforyouto...3．結(jié)尾：提出期望。Cheerup！Yourtroubleswillsoonbeover.Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.Don’tloseheart，whateverhappens.Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.三、每段常用句型假設(shè)你是李華。你的英國筆友John寫信告訴你近日他由于沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到很大影響。他十分焦慮。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，給他寫一封回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣。

四、現(xiàn)學(xué)現(xiàn)用—練習(xí)寫作要點：1.限制玩游戲的時間，把精力逐漸轉(zhuǎn)移到其他事情上；2．規(guī)定起床和睡覺的時間，形成良好的作息習(xí)慣；3．每天鍛煉半小時，增強體質(zhì)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[遣詞造句]Ⅰ.詞匯1．沉迷于 2．對……有不利影響 3．除去 4．參加 5．養(yǎng)成……的習(xí)慣 6．增強體質(zhì)

Ⅱ.句式1．I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergames.Theyhavehadabadeffectonyourhealth.(用定語從句合并句子)I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergames,

whichhavehadabadeffectonyourhealth.2．Youshouldgetupandgotobedataspecifictimeinordertogetintothehabitofgettingupandgoingtobedregularly.(改為復(fù)合句)Youshouldgetupandgotobedataspecifictimesothat/inorderthatyoucangetintothehabitofgettingupandgoingtobedregularly.【參考范文】

DearJohn，

I’msorrytohearthatyou’readdictedtocomputergames,

whichhavehadabadeffectonyourhealth.Iknowyouworryaboutitverymuch.Asafriend，I'mwillingtogiveyousomeadvicetohelpyougetridofcomputergames.

Firstly,

youhadbetterlimitthetimethatyouspendplayingcomputergamesandpaymoreattentiontootherthingssuchasjoininginvariousactivitiesafterschoolandmakingfriends.Secondly,

youtrygettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucangetintothehabitofgettingupandgoingtobedregularly.Lastbutnotleast,

itisagoodideatodosomeexerciseforabouthalfanhourtostrengthenyourhealtheveryday.

Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputergamestoliveahealthylife.Yourssincerely，LiHua提出個人的建議時，應(yīng)注意以下兩點：1．態(tài)度謙恭理智：不管對方提出的問題有無實際價值，態(tài)度是否中肯，都要認(rèn)真對待，理智分析，并對對方提出的問題給出合理的解釋以及實際有效的解決方法。2.簡明扼要，以理服人：針對問題提出解決方法時，態(tài)度明確，表達(dá)時語言應(yīng)委婉客氣,減少使用Youshoulddo...等表達(dá)方式。邏輯分明，重點突出，讓對方感到“納而有因，拒而有理”。五、高分技巧ReadthisletterandthenwritealettertogiveXiaoleisomehelpfuladvice.Dear…,Canyouhelpme,please?Ihavetriedtostopsmokingseveraltimes.IamOKfortwodaysandthenIfeelreallysickandirritableandIhavetostartsmokingagain.Iknowsmokingisabadhabit,butIjustcan’tseemtogiveitup.Doyouhaveanyusefultips?Yoursincerely,LiXiaolei六、WritingDearTom,I’mverysorrytohearthatyouhavegotintothehabitofsmoking.Nowyou’veaskedmeforadviceonquittingsmoking,andI’lltrytogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,Ithinksmokingisharmfultoyourhealth,whichhasabadeffectonyourlungsandcanevenleadtolungcancer.Secondly,italsoaffectspeoplearoundyou,includingyourfamilyandfriends.Finally,itwastesyourmoneyandtime.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldmakefulluseoftimetostudyhardinsteadofsmoking.Infact,ifyoudon’tsmoke,itisnormalthatyou’llfeelnervousandstressed,buttrytorememberthatitwillonlylastsomedaysandthenyouwillbegintofeelbetter.Moreover,toavoidsmoking,youcandosomerelaxationexercise.Idohopethosesuggestionswillbehelpful.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LIHua

七、總結(jié)“模板”Dear…，

Havinglearntthatyou……,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.

Inmyopinion，….Firstofall,

you’dbetter…...Secondly,itisagoodideathat……Finally,……Idohopethosesuggestionswillbehelpful./Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.