Unit5寫作課件滬教牛津版（2024）七年級(jí)英語上冊(cè)

Unit5WritingWhatwouldatriptotheMoonbelike?Haveyoueverdreamedofatripto

space?審題01列大綱02檢查04遣詞造句03dcba開頭引入主題，介紹太空旅行的背景或原因中間詳細(xì)描述太空旅行的過程，包括出發(fā)、在太空中的經(jīng)歷看到的景色、進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)結(jié)尾總結(jié)太空旅行的感受和收獲對(duì)未來太空探索的展望你可能用得上的單詞spaceship

（宇宙飛船）

astronaut

（宇航員）spacestation

（空間站）

zerogravity

（零重力）launch

（發(fā)射）orbit

（軌道）galaxy

（星系）asteroid

（小行星）翻譯：這是我夢(mèng)想中的旅行基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)句式升級(jí)Thisismydreamtrip.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.looklike看起來像...，與...相似翻譯：我們要在睡袋里睡覺基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)句式升級(jí)Wewillsleepinthesleepingbag.Thereismuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewallwhenwesleep..擴(kuò)句小技巧：加原因＋時(shí)間翻譯：我將欣賞一下外面的景色基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)句式升級(jí)Iwillenjoytheviewoutside.Whenwearriveatthespacestation,IwillfirstlookoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.擴(kuò)句小技巧：加時(shí)間+詳細(xì)的動(dòng)作翻譯：我希望將來有朝一日能在太空旅游基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)句式升級(jí)Ihopetotravelintospacesomeday.Ireallylookforwardtotravellingintospacesomeday-itwillbeanamazingexperience.擴(kuò)句小技巧：短語升級(jí)+總結(jié)Ihopelcantravelintospacewithmyfamilyoneday.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.First,myfamilyandIwillflyoutintospaceonaspaceship.Whenweintoorbit,wewillvisitaspacestation.

Itwilltakeusaboutsixhourstogetthere.Thingsareverydifferentinspace.Thereismuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewallwhenwesleep.Wewillalsohavetowashourhandsandbrushourteethinadifferentway.Whenwearriveatthespacestation,IwillfirstlookoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.Afterthat,Iwouldliketodosomeexperiments.

Ireallywanttostudyhowplantsgrowinspace.Next,I'mgoingtoputonaspacesuitandgoonaspacewalk.Ireallylookforwardtotravellingintospacesomeday-itwillbeanamazingexperience!與話題相關(guān)的范文

Inthefuture,spacetourismwillbecomeapopularchoiceformanypeople.IbelievethatonedayIwillalsohavetheopportunitytotakeaspacetrip.

Iwillboardahigh-techspaceshipandwearaspecialspacesuit.Whenthespaceshiptakesoff,Iwillfeelthepowerfulpush.Onceinspace,Iwillfloatfreelyandlookatthebeautifulearthandthevastuniverse.

Iwillexplorethemysteriesofspaceandexperiencetheamazingzero-gravityenvironment.Thistripwillbeanunforgettableadventureforme.高分亮點(diǎn)句型積累記重點(diǎn)啦！becomeapopularchoice變得受歡迎h(huán)avetheopportunitytodosth有計(jì)劃做某事explorethemysteriesofspace探索太空奧秘experiencetheamazingzero-gravityenvironment.

體驗(yàn)神奇的零重力環(huán)境anunforgettableadventure一場(chǎng)難忘的探險(xiǎn)之旅Let’swrite!假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所學(xué)的知識(shí)，寫一篇關(guān)于月球之旅的短文，提出一些好的旅行建議。要求：1.80個(gè)詞左右;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

ThereissomeadviceforustotraveltotheMoon.

Firstly,wemusttakeoxygentankswithus.BecausethereisnoairontheMoon.Secondly,wemustprepareaspacesuitandapairofsunglassestoprotectourskin.Thirdly,weneedtobringSpaceFoodsothatwecaneatmoreeasily.BecausethegravityoftheMoonisnotasstrongastheEarth's,thefoodwillfloataway.Finally,we'dbetterpreparearopetotieustothespaceship.ItcanstopusflyingofftheMoon'ssurfaceandintospace.

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove,wewillhaveawonderfultriptotheMoon

inthefuture.參考范文

高分亮點(diǎn)句型積累記重點(diǎn)啦！ThereissomeadviceforustotraveltotheMoon我們有一些去月球旅游的建議asstrongas和...一樣強(qiáng)We’dbetterdosth.我們最好做某事floataway飄走

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove,wewillhaveawonderfultriptotheMoon

inthefuture如果我們采納上面的建議，我們將會(huì)有一次美妙的月球之旅。與話題相關(guān)的范文Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Iaminterestedinspace.Mydreamistotravelintospace.IamsogladbecauseIwilltravelintospacebyspaceshipnextweek.

Firstofall,Iwillsetuptogointospaceat8:30nextMondaymorning,andIwillhavetowearaheavyspacesuit.WhenIgettothespace,IwilltakeawalkontheMoonandtakeasmanyphotosasIcan.What’smore,IwillwatchafilmaboutspaceintheSpaceCinema.Intheend,IwillcomebacktotheEarthat5:00p.m.nextFriday.Ithinkitwillbeanexcitingexperience.高分亮點(diǎn)句型積累記重點(diǎn)啦！aminterestedin對(duì)...感興趣，可以替換likeMydreamistodosth我的夢(mèng)想是做...firstofall首先=tobeginwith/firstandforemostwhat’smore其次=inaddition/additionally/besidesintheend最后=atlast/finally/lastbutnotleast高難度范文！

Haveyoueverdreamedoftravelingtospace?Well,IhadtheopportunitytotakeatriptospacelastmonthanditwasanexperienceIwillneverforget.

Whenthedayofthetriparrived,Iwasbothexcitedandnervous.Iputonmyspacesuitandboardedthespaceship.Theforceofthetakeoffpushedmebackintomyseatandsoon,wewereleavingtheearth'satmosphere.Onceinspace,Ilookedoutofthewindowandwasstunnedbythebeautyofitall.Theearthwasamagnificentsightfromspace.Itwasablueandwhitespherewith

cloudsandthecontinentsandoceansclearlyvisible.Icouldalsoseethemoon,whichlookedsoclosethatIfeltlikeIcouldreachoutandtouchit.Wespentseveraldaysinspace,conductingexperimentsandobservingtheuniverse.Wesawasteroidspassingbyanddistantgalaxiesshininginthedistance.Thetriptospacewasnotonlyanadventurebutalsoalearningexperience.Whenitwastimetoreturntoearth,Ifeltabitsadtoleavethismagicalplace.ButIknowthatthistriphasinspiredmetoworkharderandstrivetomakemorecontributionstospaceexplorationinthefuture.高分亮點(diǎn)句型積累記重點(diǎn)啦！itwasanexperienceIwillneverforget.這是我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記的體驗(yàn)Iwasstunnedbythebeautyofitall.

我被這一切的美所震撼了amagnificentsight壯麗的景色Thetriptospacewasnotonlyanadventurebutalsoalearningexperience.太空之旅不僅是一次冒險(xiǎn)，也是一次學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷makemorecontributionsto...對(duì)...做更多貢獻(xiàn).高難度范文！

Lastsummervacation,Ihadanamazingtriptospace.Earlyinthemorning,Igotonthespaceshipwithotherastronauts.Asthespaceshipliftedoff,Ifeltastrongforcepushingmebackintomyseat.Theviewoutsidethewindowwasbreathtaking.Theearthlookedlikeablueandgreenmarble,andthethinlayerofatmospheresurroundeditlikeaveil.Aswemovedfurtherintospace,Isawcountlessstarsshiningbrightlyinthedarkness.Theywerelikediamonds.Wepassedbythemoon.Duringthetrip,weconduc