03 勞動教育 中考英語滿分作文賞析

03勞動教育NO.1（2022·黑龍江·中考真題）話題作文：近期，教育部調整課程體系，把勞動教育從綜合實踐中單列出來，納入中小學課程。請以“Howtodeveloplaborhabits”為題，按照提出的問題談談你的看法。1.Whathouseworkdoyouusuallydoathome?2.Whatkindofactivitiesaboutlaboreducationdoyoutakepartinatschool?3.Youradvicetostudentsabouthowtodeveloplaborhabits.提示詞：laboreducation(勞動教育)注意：文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtoDevelopLaborHabitsAguidelineonlaboreducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestodeveloplaborhabits.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】HowtoDevelopLaborHabitsAguidelineonlaboreducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestodeveloplaborhabits.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Iwelcomeitwarmly.Iusuallydohouseworkathome,suchaswashingclothes,sweepingthefloorandcookingmealsandsoon.Ithinktheycanhelpmelearnlifeskills.Atschool,Itakepartintheactivitieslikeplantingtrees,collectinglitterorcleaningthecitypark.Theyaregoodforbothourhealthandtheenvironment.Inmyopinion,weshouldhavelaborclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschoolonceortwiceaweek.

Allinall,weshouldtrytodevelopgoodlaborhabitsandvaluetheimportanceoflaborthroughourlaborexperiences.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)問題提示內容，以“Howtodeveloplaborhabits”為題，談談自己的看法。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；人稱以第一人稱為主；文章可分為三段，第一段已給出，點明主題：歡迎勞動教育指導方針；第二段對照三個問題展開敘述；第三段再次點明主題。寫作時確保語句通順，無單詞拼寫及語法錯誤。NO.2（2022·海南·中考真題）為創(chuàng)造美好的生活，青少年在成長的過程中應不斷學習新的生活技能（如烹飪、種植、救護方法……)。請結合下列提示和自身的需求，以“LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelp”為題寫一篇短文，在英語課堂上分享。提示：1.Whatlifeskilldoyouwanttolearn?2.Whydoyouwanttolearnthisskill?3.Howdoyoulearnthisskill?要求：1.內容須涵蓋所有要點；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名；4.80詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelpLifeskillsarenecessaryforusteenagers.Tolivemorehealthilyandhappily,wearesupposedtolearnmorenewskills...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelpLifeskillsarenecessaryforusteenagers.Tolivemorehealthilyandhappily,wearesupposedtolearnmorenewskills.Asforme,Iwouldliketochoosecooking,whichisabasicskillinourdailylife.It’swonderfultocreatemyowndishes.Besides,learningtolookaftermyfamilyisalsomywish.Inordertodevelopmycookingskill,Iwillfirstaskmymotherforhelp.Ithinkthedishesshecooksarethemostdeliciousintheworld.Andit’salsoagoodideatolearnfromthecookingvideosonline.Littlelifeskillsareabighelp.Let’stakeactionnow.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“LittleLifeSkillsAreaBigHelp”為題，并結合題干中的三個問題，描述自己想要學習的生活技能，可適當增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段介紹自己想要學習什么樣的生活技能以及為什么要學習這項技能；第二段描述如何學習這個技能；最后一段進行總結。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。NO.3（2022·湖南懷化·中考真題）國家提出將“勞動教育（laboreducation）”納入中小學國家課程方案，請結合自身的勞動經歷，談談你對勞動教育的看法。內容包括：1.你對勞動教育的看法begoodforhealth;relaxfromthehardstudy…2.你自身的勞動經歷及感受athome:dothedishes;sweepthefloor…atschool:cleantheclassroom;waterflowers…3.你對勞動教育課程的建議offerdifferentkindsoflaborclasses;holdcompetitionsaboutlaborskills…要求:1.文中請勿使用真實人名、校名和地名；2.包含以上表格內所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；文章開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。It’sreportedthatlaboreducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithink___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】It’sreportedthatlaboreducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithinkit’snecessary.Becauseitisgoodforourhealth.Wecanrelaxfromthehardstudybydoinglabor.Iusuallydolaborathomesuchasdoingthedishes,sweepingthefloorandtakingouttherubbish.AtschoolIoftencleantheclassroomandwaterflowers.Icannotonlykeephealthy,butalsodevelopgoodhabitsfromit.Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool.Ihavesomeideas.Theschoolcanofferdifferentkindsoflaborclassestoteachushowtodothecleaningandgrowplants.What’smore,theschoolcanalsoholdcompetitionsaboutthelaborskillstoseewhoisthebest.Suchactivitiesmakeourschoollifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Iamlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.IbelieveIwilldowellinit.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“勞動教育”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段介紹勞動對我們的好處；第二段介紹自己在家里和在學校的勞動經歷；最后一段提出對勞動教育課程的建議。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。NO.4（2022·浙江寧波·中考真題）為弘揚中華民族“勞動最光榮”的傳統(tǒng)美德，這學期你校組織了一系列勞動實踐活動(aseriesoflabouractivities)，假如你是李華，請根據(jù)表格中的信息并結合自身經歷，寫一篇英語短文向學校英語報投稿。注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中的所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)80-100；標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。TimeThingsIlearnedMyfeelingsMarchgrowvegetablesandplanttrees…Aprilrepairthingslikeelectricfans…May…Let’sEnjoyWorking________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】Let’senjoyworking!Thisterm,Itookpartinaseriesoflaboractivitiesinourschool.IwashappythatIlearnedalot.InMarch,Ilearnedtogrowvegetablesandplanttreesonourschoolfarm.InApril,Ilearnedtorepairthingslikeelectricfansandbicycleswiththehelpofourteachers.InMay,Ilearnedtodomuchhousework,suchasmakingthebed,sweepingthefloorandfoldingclothes.Ithinkthelabouractivitiesarenotonlyeducationalbutalsouseful.I’msurethemorelifeskillsIhave,themoreindependentIwillbe.【解析】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，介紹自己參加的學校組織的一系列勞動實踐活動的情況，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應該用第一人稱來介紹內容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內容時，力求語言準確，內容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。NO.5（2022·貴州畢節(jié)·中考真題）勞動課即將走進我們的課程中，你作為一名即將完成義務教育階段學習任務的學生，請你為在校同學寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿，談談你對新課程方案的看法和建議。詞數(shù)80左右。內容包括：1.初中學生的學習任務應該有哪些?（寫2點）2.課程方案規(guī)定，初中學生能設計一日三餐食譜，獨立制作午餐或晚餐中3—4道菜等。對此你有何想法?（2點）3.你對在校同學的倡議（2點）作文要求：1.文章的開頭已經給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；2.語句連貫，書寫工整；不得出現(xiàn)單位或個人真實名稱。參考詞匯：課程方案：curriculumplan；設計食譜designrecipes；AnewsubjectwillbecarriedoutinschoolThenewchangeaboutthelaborclassinschoolhashadaheateddiscussiononline._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】AnewsubjectwillbecarriedoutinschoolThenewchangeaboutthelaborclassinschoolhashadaheateddiscussiononline.Accordingtothenewcurriculumplan,studentsshouldlearnthebasicsubjectswell,suchasChinese,Math,Englishandsoon.Besidesthat,studentsshouldalsohavelaborclassessothatstudentscankeephealthy.Thenewcurriculumplanalsosaysthatstudentscandesignrecipesforthreemealsadayandmake3-4dishesforlunchordinnerindependently.Ithinkitnotonlyhelpstodevelopstudents’independence,butalsoitcanmakestudentsbetterunderstandtheirparents.Asstudents,weshouldtakeanactivepartinlaborclassesandlearnsomeusefullifeskills.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“Anewsubjectwillbecarriedoutinschool”為題，并根據(jù)題干中的提示寫一篇文章，可適當增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。第一段已給出；第二段主要談論初中學生的學習任務有哪些；第三段談論對中學生設計食譜以及做飯的看法；第四段講述對學生的倡議。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。NO.6（2022·貴州貴陽·中考真題）勞動教育是青少年全面發(fā)展的重要組成部分。因此，青少年應該主動參加各類勞動，如社區(qū)服務、學校勞動和日常家務等。近期，育才中學圍繞“勞動讓我成長”這一主題開展了問卷調查。請你參考問卷內容或結合自身經歷，以“Let’sTakePartinLaborActivities”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。要求如下：1.請列舉2~3項你經常參加的勞動；2.重點談談你參加勞動的收獲并提出建議；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實個人信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________