高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作表達(dá)微技能（全國）08求助信

08求助信(2018年11月，浙江卷）假定你是李華，乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫教后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失。請給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.On1stNovember,2018Iflewbusinessclassonyourflight753fromChinatoLondon.IclearlyrememberitwaswithmeimmediatelyIboardedtheplane.However,onarrivalinLondonHeathrowAirport,Ifounditgone.Iguessitmusthaveslippedoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Itisablackleatheronewitharound200dollars,myIDcard,and2creditcardsinit.Alongwiththeitemsmentionedabove,thewalletcontainsafamilyphoto,mypreciousmemory.Asyoucanimagine,thesematteralottome.Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Pleaseemailmeatxxx@Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本篇考查的寫作類型是求助信第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李華乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫教后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失，要求給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.boardedtheplane,onarrival…,Ifounditgone.itmusthave……Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，一般過去時為輔。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！靖叻志湫?】What’sworse,mycash,IDcard,and2creditcardswereinit.更糟的是，里面有我的現(xiàn)金，身份證和兩張信用卡。What’sworse意為“更糟糕的是”，連接并列兩個壞的東西，且后面一個更嚴(yán)重?！靖叻志湫?】I’dappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmetogetitback.如果你能幫我把它拿回來，我會很感激的。I’dappreciateitif…如果……我會很感激的。首段：請求幫助1.NowIamwritingtoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor/lendmeahand.現(xiàn)在我寫信請你幫我一個忙。2.Iamwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.我希望你能幫我一個忙。3.Iwonderif

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模板①Dear______,Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto______（請求的內(nèi)容）.Thereasonfor_____________isthat_____________（給出原因）.I___________,soI_____________（給出細(xì)節(jié)）.Iwouldalsoliketorequest___________（提出進(jìn)一步的要求）.IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactmeat__________（電話號碼）.Ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板②Dear________,Mynameis_______________(自我介紹).I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavemetdifficultyin_______________(求助內(nèi)容).First,Ifind___________(困難1).Besides,________(困難2).What’smore,__________(困難3).Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketo____________(委婉提出請求)？Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyouto(請求內(nèi)容)sothat___________(請求目的).Also,Iwouldlikeyouto(請求內(nèi)容).I’msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressin_____________(表達(dá)期待).Yours,LiHua1．假定你是李華，為了向外國朋友介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。你拍攝了一段展示家鄉(xiāng)風(fēng)景和文化的視頻。給你的外教Mr.Smith寫一封郵件，請他幫助修改你已寫好的英文解說詞。內(nèi)容包括：1.請求幫助；2.修改要求；3.表達(dá)感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.郵件的首句已經(jīng)為你寫好。參考詞匯：解說詞—narrationDearMr.Smith,I’mplanningtomakeavideotointroducemyhometowntomyforeignfriends.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假如你是李華，最近你在學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了問題，你無法解決，你給你校的外籍心理醫(yī)生Kate寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)如下：1.描述事件的起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果；2.希望得到Kate的幫助。要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。DearKate,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假定你是李華。最近你校英語俱樂部將舉辦主題為“魅力中國”的演講比賽，請給你的外教John寫一封電子郵件，請他幫助潤色你的演講稿并給予你有關(guān)演講技巧的指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信原因；2.你的困惑；3.請求幫助。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.請?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。提示詞匯CharmingChina(魅力中國)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李華，下周一你校將組織以“夢想”為主題的“英文詩歌創(chuàng)作”比賽。請你給外教老師Jim寫一封求助信，請求批改相關(guān)語法和詩歌規(guī)則的內(nèi)容。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua5．假定你是李華，你市下個月將舉辦中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，主題為“共創(chuàng)未來”（Togetherforasharedfuture）。你打算參加該比賽，但在準(zhǔn)備過程中遇到一些問題，請給外教Chris寫一封郵件尋求幫助，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.求助內(nèi)容；3.期待回復(fù)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李華。最近你校英語俱樂部將舉辦主題為“魅力中國”的演講比賽，請給你的外教Cheslie寫一封電子郵件，請她幫助潤色你的演講稿并給予你有關(guān)演講技巧的指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信原因；2.你的困惑；3.請求幫助。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearCheslie,I’mLiHua.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua7．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友David準(zhǔn)備組織一個“了解中國傳統(tǒng)美食（IntoChinesetraditionalcuisine）”的活動，寫信向你求助。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦某一種中國傳統(tǒng)美食（比如：餃子、粽子或南京鹽水鴨等）；2.推薦理由；3.建議活動形式。參考詞匯：餃子Dumplings

粽子Zongzi

南京鹽水鴨Nanjingsaltedduck注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearDavid,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike剛進(jìn)高中，最近遇到了一些困惑和煩惱。他寫信向你傾訴，尋求幫助?，F(xiàn)用英文給他寫一封回信給予幫助，提供一些建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMike,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．假如你是李華，最近收到了你的英國筆友Jack的來信。他在信中說，由于剛進(jìn)入高中，不知道如何去交朋友，因而感到孤獨(dú)、情緒低落。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信。要點(diǎn)包括：1.表示問候和慰問；2.提出以下建議：①放學(xué)后邀請同學(xué)一起參加活動；②你的同學(xué)遇到麻煩時，你主動幫助他們；③你遇到困難時向同學(xué)求助。3.表達(dá)祝愿注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。提示：交朋友makefriends；參加活動takepartinactivities；遇到麻煩beintrouble；向某人求助asksb.forhelp。DearJack,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．假定你是校英語報TalkingTeens欄目的編輯李華，近日收到Terry的一封求助信。他在信中訴說學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難并感到很焦慮。請你回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假如你是李華，你的朋友國際交換生John報名參加了學(xué)?？萍甲x書節(jié)的中文演講比賽，比賽主題是“低碳生活，綠色家園”。他很重視這個活動，但不知如何準(zhǔn)備，故寫信向你求助。請你給他回信提一些建議，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示支持；2.具體建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.考詞匯：科技讀書節(jié)ScienceTechnologyandReadingFestival低碳生活，綠色家園LowcarbonLife,GreenHome________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語但遇到了一些困難，他寫信向你求助，現(xiàn)在請你寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.提出建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．假設(shè)你叫李華，你的朋友John沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)而不能自拔且遭遇了個人信息泄露等問題，因此寫信向你尋求幫助，請你給他寫一封建議信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和關(guān)心；2.提出具體建議（如何合理、負(fù)責(zé)任地謹(jǐn)慎使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,sincerelyLiHua14．假如你是李華。你的美國網(wǎng)友Mike最近因?qū)W習(xí)壓力太大患上了輕度焦慮癥（anxietydisorders），他寫信向你求助。請你用英文給他回信，就如何處理壓力提出一些建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua15．假如你是李華，你的朋友小東給你寫了一封郵件，說他進(jìn)入高中以來，感覺學(xué)習(xí)壓很大，不適應(yīng)新的生活和學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境。請你給他會封郵件，給他提一些建議。要點(diǎn)：1.向你的老師和同學(xué)求助；2.多做運(yùn)動，放松大腦，釋放壓力；3.保持自信，堅(jiān)持探索。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友David作為交換生到中國學(xué)習(xí)。目前，他感到有點(diǎn)難以適應(yīng)新的學(xué)習(xí)生活，發(fā)郵件向你求助。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的建議；2.表達(dá)你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearDavid,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

LiHua參考答案1．DearMr.Smith,I’mplanningtomakeavideotointroducemyhometowntomyforeignfriends.IhaveshotacuisinevideowhereIrecordedthewholeprocessofcookingmyfavoritedish.MyfamilyarecontentwiththevideoandIhopetowinthematch.However,thereisonethingthatupsetsme.I’mhavingdifficultywritinganEnglishintroductiontothevideo.Tillnow,Ihaven’tgotaclueaboutit.Wouldyoudomeafavour?Iwillbegratefultoyouifyou’resokindastotellmehowtogetstarted.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的求助信。要求考生給外教Mr.Smith寫一封郵件，請他幫助修改你為一段展示家鄉(xiāng)風(fēng)景和文化的視頻而寫的英文解說詞【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累滿意的：content→satisfied做某事有困難：havedifficulty(in)doingsth.→havetrouble(in)doingsth.到目前為止：tillnow→uptonow/todate感激的：grateful→thankful2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：However,thereisonethingthatupsetsme.I’mhavingdifficultywritinganEnglishintroductiontothevideo.拓展句：However,thereisonethingupsettingmethatI’mhavingdifficultywritinganEnglishintroductiontothevideo.【典型句式】【高分句型1】IhaveshotacuisinevideowhereIrecordedthewholeprocessofcookingmyfavoritedish.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語從句）【高分句型2】Iwillbegratefultoyouifyou’resokindastotellmehowtogetstarted.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）2．Onepossibleversion:DearKate,I’mverynervousthesedays,andIfounditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.SoI’mwritingtoturntoyouforhelp.Asthemid-termexaminationiscoming,I’malwaysundergreatpressurewiththehighexpectationfrommyparentsandtheteachers,whichmakesitdifficultformetofallasleepalmosteverynight.Asaresult,Ican’tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclassandbecomeworrieddaybyday.I’manxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheproblem?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生就學(xué)習(xí)上無法解決的問題給校外籍心理醫(yī)生Kate寫一封求助信尋求幫助，需描述事件的起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果，并表達(dá)希望得到Kate的幫助?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累困難的：hard→difficult,tough,demanding專心于：concentrateon→focuson,payattentionto臨近：come→approach,near因此，結(jié)果：asaresult→asaconsequence,consequently渴望：beanxiousto→beeagerto,longto建議：advice→suggestion2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheproblem?拓展句：CouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowIcansolvetheproblem?【典型句式】[高分句型1]Asthemid-termexaminationiscoming,I’malwaysundergreatpressurewiththehighexpectationfrommyparentsandtheteachers,whichmakesitdifficultformetofallasleepalmosteverynight.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句、which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Asaresult,Ican’tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclassandbecomeworrieddaybyday.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作介詞on的賓語)3．DearJohn,

I’mLiHua.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwiththetitle“CharmingChina”.I’vefinishedmyspeechdraft,butIfinditfarfromsatisfactory.

Firstly,I’mnotsureofsomeproperexpressionsinEnglishandnotawareofthemistakesingrammarandsentencestructures.Wouldyoupleasegothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft?Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech,soI’dlikeyoutooffermesomepresentationskills,whichcanimprovemyperformance.

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeyourguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華。最近你校英語俱樂部將舉辦主題為“魅力中國”的演講比賽，請給你的外教John寫一封電子郵件，請他幫助潤色你的演講稿并給予你有關(guān)演講技巧的指導(dǎo)?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累參加：participatein→takepartin滿意的：satisfactory→content首先：firstly→tobeginwith感激：appreciate→begrateful2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wouldyoupleasegothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft?拓展句：Iwouldbegratefulifyougothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft.【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeyourguidance.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)[高分句型2]Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech,soI’dlikeyoutooffermesomepresentationskills,whichcanimprovemyperformance.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)4．DearJim,Ourschoolwillorganizean“EnglishPoetryCreation”competitionwiththethemeof“Dream”forourstudentsnextMonday.Beingtheorganizerofthiscompetition,Ihavedifficultyinformulatingtherulesandevaluatingentries.Ihopeyoucanhelpmeoutofyourbusyschedule.Becauseofyourprofessionalism,youcannotonlytakeresponsibilityformodifyingthegrammarandpoetryrulesofentries,butalsogivemesomesuggestions.Ibelievewithyourhelp,thiscompetitionwillbeacompletesuccess.IwouldgreatlyappreciateitifIcouldgetyourhelp.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為了你校下周一組織的以“夢想”為主題的“英文詩歌創(chuàng)作”比賽給外教老師吉姆寫一封求助信，請求他批改相關(guān)語法和詩歌規(guī)則的內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累困難：difficulty→trouble負(fù)責(zé)：takeresponsibilityfor→beresponsiblefor比賽：competition→match真誠地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展主動語態(tài)變被動語態(tài)原句：Ourschoolwillorganizean“EnglishPoetryCreation”competitionwiththethemeof“Dream”forourstudentsnextMonday.拓展句：An“EnglishPoetryCreation”competitionwiththethemeof“Dream”willbeorganizedbyourschoolforourstudentsnextMonday.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Ibelievewithyourhelp,thiscompetitionwillbeacompletesuccess.（運(yùn)用了省略從屬連詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作動詞believe的賓語）【高分句型2】Beingtheorganizerofthiscompetition,Ihavedifficultyinformulatingtherulesandevaluatingentries.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和動名詞作賓語）5．DearChris,AnEnglishspeechcontestthemed“Togetherforasharedfuture”willbeheldinmycitynextmonth.Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.ItisthefirsttimethatIhavetakenpartintheEnglishspeechcontest,andIdon’thavemuchexperience.Sinceyouareanexpertinlanguage,Iwouldliketoturntoyouforhelp.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomesuggestionsonhowtomakemyspeechpowerful?IwillbegratefulifyoucancheckmydraftwhenIfinishit.Iamsureyourexpertisewillbeofgreathelptome.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就在準(zhǔn)備中學(xué)生英語演講比賽的過程中遇到的一些問題給外教Chris寫一封郵件尋求幫助。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累比賽：contest→competition參加：takepartin→joinin建議：suggestion→advice有幫助：beofgreathelp→beveryhelpful2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wouldyoupleasegivemesomesuggestionsonhowtomakemyspeechpowerful?拓展句：WouldyoupleasegivemesomesuggestionsonhowIcanmakemyspeechpowerful?【典型句式】【高分句型1】Sinceyouareanexpertinlanguage,Iwouldliketoturntoyouforhelp.（運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）【高分句型2】IwillbegratefulifyoucancheckmydraftwhenIfinishit.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句和when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）6．DearCheslie,I’mLiHua.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwiththetitle“CharmingChina”.I’vefinishedmyspeechdraft,butIfinditfarfromsatisfactory.Firstly,I’mnotsureofsomeproperexpressionsinEnglishandnotawareofthemistakesingrammarandsentencestructures.Wouldyoupleasegothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft?Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech,soI’dlikeyoutooffermesomepresentationskills,whichcanimprovemyperformance.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeyourguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Cheslie寫一封電子郵件，請她幫助潤色主題為“魅力中國”的演講比賽的演講稿并給予有關(guān)演講技巧的指導(dǎo)?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累參加：participatein→takepartin比賽：contest→competition首先：firstly→firstofall此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwiththetitle“CharmingChina”.拓展句：I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwhosetitleis“CharmingChina”.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech,soI’dlikeyoutooffermesomepresentationskills,whichcanimprovemyperformance.（由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeyourguidance.（運(yùn)用了固定句型I’dappreciateitif...）7．DearDavid,HearingyoumeetsomedifficultywhenplanningtoholdanactivitycalledIntoChinesetraditionalcuisine,I’mwritingtorecommendZongzitoyou.Zongzienjoysgreatpopularityforitsspecialflavorofreedleaves.Besides,itsdiversefillings,suchasmeat,peanut,eggyolk,catertopeople’sdifferentneeds.Toholdtheactivitysuccessfully,itisadvisabletoengageallyourclassmatesinmakingit.Ibelieveeveryoneofyouwillenjoytheprocess!Hopemysuggestionwillbehelpfulandwishyoueverysuccessinyouractivity.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的推薦信。要求考生向美國筆友David寫信，向其推薦一種中國傳統(tǒng)美食，以幫助他進(jìn)行一個“了解中國傳統(tǒng)美食”的活動。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累計(jì)劃：plan→intend此外：besides→what’smore各種各樣的：diverse→various/avarietyof有幫助的：behelpful→beofhelp2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Toholdtheactivitysuccessfully,itisadvisabletoengageallyourclassmatesinmakingit.拓展句：Ifyouwanttoholdtheactivitysuccessfully,itisadvisabletoengageallyourclassmatesinmakingit.【典型句式】【高分句型1】HearingyoumeetsomedifficultywhenplanningtoholdanactivitycalledIntoChinesetraditionalcuisine,I’mwritingtorecommendZongzitoyou.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，過去分詞作定語和省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句)【高分句型2】Ibelieveeveryoneofyouwillenjoytheprocess!(運(yùn)用了省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句)8．DearMike,Youwrotethatyourparentswon’tlistenwhenyoutellthemthings.Iunderstandthatquitewellthatyouarepuzzledoralittledissatisfied.Youthinkthatyourparentscan’tunderstandyoubecausetheyareadults.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourparentsaboutyouranxiety.ItisbetterIbelievetobestraightforwardandhonestthantorepressyourfeelingsandkeeptheminside.Mostparentsdon’tlistentotheirkidsbecausetheyfailtoseethattheirchildisgrowingupandisbecomingmorematureasthedayspassby.Probablythebestwaytotacklethisisbykeepingyourcool.Rememberthatnomatterhowangrytheycanget,theystillloveyou.Stayingcalmhelpsyoumaintainyourunderstandingandtryingtoconvincetheminacalmstateofmindgoesalongwayinhelpingyouproveyourpoint.Itwillalsomakeyousoundfarmoresuperiortothemwhenyouareincalmmooddespitethetensesituation.Iamsurethatyouwilldevelopbetterrelationshipwithyourparents.Allthebest.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike剛進(jìn)高中，最近遇到了一些困惑和煩惱。他寫信向你傾訴，尋求幫助?，F(xiàn)用英文給他寫一封回信給予幫助，提供一些建議?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累建議：recommend→advise無法：failto→beunableto困惑的：puzzled→confused培養(yǎng)：develop→foster2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Probablythebestwaytotacklethisisbykeepingyourcool.拓展句：Itisthebestwayforyoutokeepyourcooltotacklethis.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourparentsaboutyouranxiety.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Mostparentsdon’tlistentotheirkidsbecausetheyfailtoseethattheirchildisgrowingupandisbecomingmorematureasthedayspassby.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)9．DearJack,I’mreallysorrytohearthatyouhavetroublemakingfriendswithothersafterenteringthehighschool.I’dliketotalkaboutitwithyou.Ihopethatmyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Infact,thereisalsosomethingthatyoucandotochangethissituation.First,itwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbettertoinviteyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiesafterschool.Then,trytohelpyourclassmateswhentheyareintroubleandaskthemtohelpyouwhenyouhavedifficulty.Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的建議信。要求考生向英國筆友Jack寫信，就如何交朋友給出一些建議?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累做某事有困難：havetroubledoingsth.→havedifficul