應(yīng)用文：推 薦信

推薦信【試題探究】假定你是李華,你的美國網(wǎng)友David看完電影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜歡,寫信想請你再推薦一部中國電影。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信:1.表示高興;2.推薦一部電影;3.推薦的理由(至少兩條)。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Step1:審題布局人稱第一人稱(I)為主時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),一般將來時(shí)要點(diǎn)1.說明寫信目的2.推薦的電影和推薦的理由3.表達(dá)希望Step2:巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1:我很高興知道你對(duì)中國電影《哪吒之魔童降世》感興趣。一般表達(dá):Iamgladtoknowyou’reinterestedintheChinesefilm,NeZha.句式升級(jí)(高級(jí)詞匯,被動(dòng)語態(tài)):I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.要點(diǎn)2:這部動(dòng)畫電影也是以中國經(jīng)典神話故事為基礎(chǔ),和《哪吒之魔童降世》有許多相似之處。一般表達(dá):ThisanimatedfilmisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,andhasmuchincommonwithNeZha.句式升級(jí)(定語從句):Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha.Step3:銜接成篇DearDavid,I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.AndI’mperfectlywillingtorecommendanotherimpressiveChinesemovieatyourrequest.SinceIknowanimatedfilmsareyourfavorites,youcan’tmissMonkeyKing:HeroIsBack.Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha,soIthinkit’llappealtoyou.Additionally,MonkeyKingandNeZhaarebothregardedasheroesbyChinesepeople.Throughthesetwomovies,youwillgetabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Ihopeyou’llfindthemoviewellworthseeing.Yours,LiHua【句式儲(chǔ)備】1.篇頭——開篇表意,說明目的①Ourschool’sapproaching100thbirthdaywillbecelebratedthisJuly.CouldyoupleaserecommendastudenttoaddressattheopeningceremonyinEnglish?我們學(xué)校將在今年七月慶祝即將到來的百年校慶。你能推薦一位學(xué)生在開幕式上用英語發(fā)言嗎?②Hearing/LearningthatyouarecomingtovisitChina,Iwouldliketorecommendseveralplacesofinteresttoyou.聽說你要來中國,我想向你推薦幾個(gè)名勝古跡。2.篇中——緊扣要點(diǎn),推薦理由①Heisanall-roundstudentwithexcellentgradesinallsubjects.Asaboywithgreatpotential,heisgood/skillfulatsolvingdifficultproblems.他是一個(gè)全面的學(xué)生,各科成績優(yōu)異。作為一個(gè)很有潛力的男孩,他善于解決難題。②Inaddition,whatmakeshimamodelstudentishispositiveattitudetowardslife.此外,使他成為模范學(xué)生的是他積極的生活態(tài)度。3.結(jié)尾——表達(dá)希望,盼回復(fù)①Yourtakingmyrecommendationintoconsiderationwillbehighlyexpected.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.希望您能考慮我的建議。熱切期待您的及時(shí)答復(fù)。②Idohopethatyoucanfindmyrecommendationbeneficial.Lookingforwardtoyourearly/promptreply.我希望我的推薦對(duì)你有幫助。期待你的早日/及時(shí)回復(fù)。【拓展儲(chǔ)備】假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter打算這個(gè)寒假來中國旅游,讓你推薦一個(gè)城市,你想推薦杭州作為他旅游行程的首選。請用英語給他寫封信,內(nèi)容包括:1.推薦城市;2.推薦理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearPeter,I’mdelightedtoknowyou’recomingtoChinaforyourwinterholiday.Personally,I’dliketorecommendthecityofHangzhoutoyou.WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeenascenicspotforhundredsofyears.Besides,therearemanytouristattractionsinandaroundthecity,suchasTiger-runningSpring,theLingyinMonasteryandSpringDawnatSuCauseway.Mostimportantly,Hangzhouishometodeliciousfood,suchasDongpoPorkandLongjingShrimp.Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.Yours,LiHua【要點(diǎn)精練】1．假定你是李華，你的交換生朋友William對(duì)學(xué)校開展的研學(xué)旅游活動(dòng)很感興趣。他來信希望你能給他推薦一個(gè)研學(xué)城市。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦研學(xué)的城市；2.推薦理由；3.表示祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearWilliam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假定你是某國際學(xué)校學(xué)生李華，你校將組織開展“走進(jìn)文化遺產(chǎn)”主題活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)向全校學(xué)生征求活動(dòng)建議。請你給組織者寫信，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦活動(dòng);2.說明理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearOrganizers,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假定你是李華，英國交換生Frank寫信給你，希望你推薦一個(gè)中國成語，作為鼓勵(lì)他學(xué)習(xí)中文的座右銘。請你回封信，推薦成語“愚公移山”，內(nèi)容包括；1.簡介成語故事和寓意；2.推薦理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。生詞：成語idiom;座右銘motto;愚公移山Y(jié)uGongYiShan___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津，你校最近在舉行“校園之星”優(yōu)秀學(xué)生評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請你用英語推薦你的同學(xué)王華，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物和事跡簡介；2.你從他/她身上學(xué)到了什么。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.短文題目已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Arolemodelaroundme____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，你校的英國交換生Jim在郵件中提到他想報(bào)名參加主題為“了不起的中國人”(AmazingChinesePeople)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻大賽，向你征求創(chuàng)意。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括:1．推薦拍攝人物；2．說明推薦理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右;2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李華，你的外國朋友Peter對(duì)中文歌曲很感興趣，要求你推薦一款學(xué)習(xí)中文歌曲的app，請你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹一款app；2.分享使用體驗(yàn)。參考詞匯:歌詞:lyrics

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QQ音樂:QQMusic注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearPeter,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．假定你是李華，你所在的社區(qū)正在進(jìn)行年度美麗樓道服務(wù)之星(ServiceStaroftheYear)評(píng)選活動(dòng)。請給社區(qū)負(fù)責(zé)人Owen寫信推薦員工張杰，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.推薦理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearOwen,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua8．假定你是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友David計(jì)劃在他畢業(yè)旅行時(shí)到中國來親身體驗(yàn)和感受中國文化，請你用英文寫信向他推薦你眼中最具代表性的城市。1.城市概況；2.推薦原因。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearDavid,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Sam最近在準(zhǔn)備有關(guān)中國飲食文化的課堂展示，寫郵件請你推薦一種中國特色美食，請給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.美食簡介;2.推薦理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearSam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua10．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。在世界地球日即將到來之際，你校與英國友好校將在線舉辦“綠動(dòng)校園，青春飛揚(yáng)”的主題攝影展，以此來記錄校園環(huán)?；顒?dòng)中的精彩瞬間?，F(xiàn)組委會(huì)向同學(xué)們征集照片，你打算參加此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請按照以下提示用英語給組委會(huì)寫一封信來推薦你的照片：（1）描述照片的內(nèi)容；（2）說明選擇該照片的理由；（3）表達(dá)對(duì)該照片入選的愿望。參考詞匯：綠動(dòng)校園，青春飛揚(yáng)GreenCampus,FlyingYouth注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin參考答案1．DearWilliam,Learningthatyouareinterestedinthestudytourbutatalossaboutwhichcitytovisit,I’dliketorecommendGuangzhoutoyou.Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdong,isaperfectcombinationofoldandnew.Foronething,itisanancientcitywithrichhistoricalsites,suchasChenClanAcademy,XiguanandShameen,whereyoucanimmerseyourselfinitsprofoundhistoryandsplendidLingnanculture.Foranother,Guangzhouenjoysahighreputationformoderncomplexes,amongwhichtheiconicCantonToweriswhatyoucan’tmiss.EquallyimpressiveistheCantonesecuisine,whichwillgiveyouafeastforyourappetite.I’msurethatyouwillfindGuangzhouaworthwhilecitytoexplore.Wishyouameaningfulandunforgettablestudytour!

Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。交換生朋友William對(duì)學(xué)校開展的研學(xué)旅游活動(dòng)很感興趣，要求考生寫信給他推薦一個(gè)研學(xué)城市。【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累完美的：perfect→ideal豐富的：rich→abundant確信的：sure→certain難以忘懷的：unforgettable→memorable2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdong,isaperfectcombinationofoldandnew.拓展句：Guangzhou,whichisthecapitalcityofGuangdong,isaperfectcombinationofoldandnew.[高分句型1]Learningthatyouareinterestedinthestudytourbutatalossaboutwhichcitytovisit,I’dliketorecommendGuangzhoutoyou.(運(yùn)用了連詞that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]EquallyimpressiveistheCantonesecuisine,whichwillgiveyouafeastforyourappetite.(運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句)2．DearOrganizers,I’mwritingtosharesomeideasfortheupcoming“ExploringCulturalHeritage”event.Firstly,Iproposeorganizingvisitstolocalculturalheritagesitesforstudentstoexploreandlearn.Thiswoulddeepenourunderstandingofourcountry’srichhistoryandculture,fosteringasenseofnationalprideandculturalidentity.Secondly,hostingthemedlecturesorworkshopsbyexpertswouldofferinsightsintothevalueandsignificanceofculturalheritage,enhancingouracademicknowledgeandoveralldevelopment.Lastly,hands-onactivitiessuchastraditionalcraftmakingorfolkperformanceswouldallowustoexperiencethecharmofourtraditionalculturefirsthandandacquirepracticalskillsandknowledge.Insummary,byincorporatingdiverseactivities,wecaneffectivelyshowcasetheallureandimportanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritanceofourtraditions.Thankyouforconsideringthesesuggestions.Lookingforwardtoasuccessfulevent!Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。考生所在學(xué)校將組織開展“走進(jìn)文化遺產(chǎn)”主題活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)向全校學(xué)生征求活動(dòng)建議。請你給組織者寫信?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累培養(yǎng)：foster→develop獲得：acquire→obtain提供：offer→provide舉行：host→hold2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Insummary,byincorporatingdiverseactivities,wecaneffectivelyshowcasetheallureandimportanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritanceofourtraditions.拓展句：Insummary,Itisbyincorporatingdiverseactivitiesthatwecaneffectivelyshowcasetheallureandimportanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritanceofourtraditions.【高分句型1】Insummary,byincorporatingdiverseactivities,wecaneffectivelyshowcasetheallureandimportanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritanceofourtraditions.（運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句的省略）【高分句型2】Thiswoulddeepenourunderstandingofourcountry’srichhistoryandculture,fosteringasenseofnationalprideandculturalidentity.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）3．DearFrank,InresponsetoyourletterinquiringaboutaChinesemotto,IstronglyrecommendtoyoutheidiomYuGongYiShan,whichcandefinitelykeepyourwillinghearttolearningChinese!Thisidiomactuallyoriginatesfromatouchinglegend,whichliterallytellsushowOldManYuledhisfamilytoremovethetwomountainsblockingthedoorwayoftheirhouse,accomplishingthismissionimpossiblewiththehelpofGod.Ibelievetheidiomisanidealmottoforyoubecauseithighlightsthemoralthatifwekeeptryingandnevergiveup,wewilleventuallyachieveouraim,howeverharditis,whichisauniversalvalueapplicabletolanguagelearning.Moreover,byembracingthislegend,learnerscanimmersethemselvesinChinesecultureandgaininsightsintothebeliefsandhistoricalnarrativesthatshapeChinesesociety.I’mfullyawarehowchallengingitisforaforeignertolearnChineseandI’mdeeplyconvincedthattheunderstandingofthisidiomwillfuelyourenthusiasmforChinese.Attachedtotheletterismyhumblecalligraphyofthefourcharacters“YuGongYiShan”,which,Iguess,canfigureasareminder.Hopeyouenjoyit!【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國交換生Frank寫信，向他推薦一個(gè)中國成語，作為鼓勵(lì)他學(xué)習(xí)中文的座右銘?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累推薦：recommend→putforward完成：accomplish→achieve并且：morever→furthermore激發(fā)：fuel→simulate2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句： Hopeyouenjoyit!拓展句：Ihopeyoucanbefondofitandlookforwardtosharingwithyouthefeelingsafterlearningit.【高分句型1】InresponsetoyourletterinquiringaboutaChinesemotto,IstronglyrecommendtoyoutheidiomYuGongYiShan,whichcandefinitelykeepyourwillinghearttolearningChinese!（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語從句）【高分句型2】Thisidiomactuallyoriginatesfromatouchinglegend,whichliterallytellsushowOldManYuledhisfamilytoremovethetwomountainsblockingthedoorwayoftheirhouse,accomplishingthismissionimpossiblewiththehelpofGod.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語從句，how引導(dǎo)賓語從句，現(xiàn)在分詞作定語和狀語）4．范文ArolemodelaroundmeWhenitcomestotherolemodelaroundme,it’snobodybutWangHua.LiuWeiismyclassmate,whoisstrongandindependent.Hecomesfromapoorfamily.WhatmakesmatterworseisthathesufferedfromadiseaseinSeniorTwo.Becauseoftheillness,heevenaskedathree-monthsleavefromschool.Duringthattime,henotonlyfoughtagainstthediseasebutkeptonstudying.Wheneverfacingthedifficulty,henevergivesup.LifeisnoteasyforLiuWei,buthestillloveslife.Heisalwaysanexampleforeveryonetofollow.AsastudentofChenguangMiddleSchool,IwantnominatemyclassmateWangHuaasthe“CampusStar”.WangHuaisaremarkableindividualwhoconsistentlyexhibitsexceptionalqualitiesinbothacademicandpersonalaspects.WangHuaexcelsinallsubjects,especiallyinmathematicsandscience.Heisalwaysreadytohelpotherswiththeirstudies,patientlyexplainingdifficultconceptsandencouraginghispeerstostriveforexcellence.However,hisachievementsarenotlimitedtoacademics.Heisalsoactivelyinvolvedinvariousvolunteeractivities,suchasassistingtheelderlyandparticipatinginenvironmentalprotectionprojects.WhatIhavelearnedfromWangHuaishisdedicationtolearningandhiscommitmenttoservingothers.Heisarolemodelwhoinspiresmetoworkharderandbemorecompassionate.HispositiveattitudeandunwaveringspiritarequalitiesthatIadmireandaspiretoemulate.Therefore,IstronglyrecommendWangHuaasthe“CampusStar”.Hisdedication,kindness,andleadershipqualitiesmakehimadeservingcandidateforthishonor.Ibelievethathisexamplewillinspireotherstofollowinhisfootstepsandstriveforexcellenceinallaspectsoftheirlives.【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語推薦你的同學(xué)王華，參加“校園之星”優(yōu)秀學(xué)生評(píng)選活動(dòng)?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累熱愛：love→haveapassionfor面對(duì)：face→inthefaceof非凡的：remarkable→outstanding相信：believe→holdtheviewthat2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：LifeisnoteasyforLiuWei,buthestillloveslife.拓展句：AlthoughlifeisnoteasyforLiuWei,hestillloveslife.[高分句型1]WhatmakesmatterworseisthathesufferedfromadiseaseinSeniorTwo.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主要從句)[高分句型2]Ibelievethathisexamplewillinspireotherstofollowinhisfootstepsandstriveforexcellenceinallaspectsoftheirlives.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)5．DearJim,I’mthrilledtohearyourintentiontoparticipateinthe“AmazingChinesePeople”onlineshortvideocompetition.Foryourinspiration,I’dliketorecommendafigurewhotrulydeservestobefeatured.MysuggestionistofocusonDr.ZhongNanshan,arenownedrespiratoryexpertandaherointhefightagainstCOVID-19.Hisdedicationtoscience,courageinspeakingthetruth,andrelentlesseffortstoprotectpublichealthhaveearnedhimwidespreadrespectandadmiration.ByshowcasingDr.Zhong’sachievementsandstruggles,youwillnotonlypresentanamazingChinesepersonbutalsoconveythespiritofperseveranceandresponsibilitythatdefinesmanygreatChineseindividuals.Lookingforwardtoseeingyourcreation!Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給Jim回信，推薦短視頻采訪的人。【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→advice奉獻(xiàn)：dedication→devotion參加：participatein→takepartin關(guān)注：focuson→concentrateon2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：MysuggestionistofocusonDr.ZhongNanshan,arenownedrespiratoryexpertandaherointhefightagainstCOVID-19.拓展句：MysuggestionistofocusonDr.ZhongNanshan,whoisarenownedrespiratoryexpertandaherointhefightagainstCOVID-19.[高分句型1]Foryourinspiration,I’dliketorecommendafigurewhotrulydeservestobefeatured.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)定語從句)[高分句型2]ByshowcasingDr.Zhong’sachievementsandstruggles,youwillnotonlypresentanamazingChinesepersonbutalsoconveythespiritofperseveranceandresponsibilitythatdefinesmanygreatChineseindividuals.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語和that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)6．DearPeter,I’mthrilledtoknowaboutyourinterestinChinesesongs.I’dliketorecommendanappcalledNetEaseMusic.ThisapphasavastlibraryofChinesesongs,andeachsongisaccompaniedbylyrics,whichcanbeveryhelpfulforlearningChinese.IfrequentlyuseNetEaseMusicmyself.Iappreciateitsuser-friendlyinterfaceandstraightforwardoperation.Moreover,itslyricsfeatureisoutstanding,withlyricsscrollinginsyncwiththemusic,helpingmeunderstandthemeaningofthesongsbetter.Ibelieveyou’llenjoythisappaswell.Lookingforwardtohearingyourfeedback.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外國朋友Peter回復(fù)一封郵件，推薦一款學(xué)習(xí)中文歌曲的app，包含app簡介和使用體驗(yàn)兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)。【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累激動(dòng)的：thrilled→excited巨大的：vast→huge帶有：beaccompaniedby→possess簡單的：straightforward→uncomplicated2.句式拓展原句子句：IfrequentlyuseNetEaseMusicmyself.Iappreciateitsuser-friendlyinterfaceandstraightforwardoperation.拓展句：IfrequentlyuseNetEaseMusicmyselfbecauseIappreciateitsuser-friendlyinterfaceandstraightforwardoperation.【高分句型1】ThisapphasavastlibraryofChinesesongs,andeachsongisaccompaniedbylyrics,whichcanbeveryhelpfulforlearningChinese.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Moreover,itslyricsfeatureisoutstanding,withlyricsscrollinginsyncwiththemusic,helpingmeunderstandthemeaningofthesongsbetter.（運(yùn)用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)以及現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）7．IamwritingtorecommendZhangJieastheServiceStaroftheYearofthebeautifulcorridor.Ichoosehimforthefollowingreasons.Firstofall,ZhangJie,whoseworkrangesfromcleaningthehallwaystohelpinghisneighbors,ishard-workingandheworksfrommorningtillnight.Theworkofcleaningisdirtyandtiring.However,henevercomplainsaboutit.Besides,heisfullofresponsibility.Notonlydoeshimdotheworkthatbelongstohim,butalsohedevotestosomeextrawork,liketakingcareofneighbors’children.Third,heiswillingtobuildaharmoniouscommunity.Hetrieshisbesttoguardthesecurityofthecommunity.Ihopethathecangettheaward.【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給社區(qū)負(fù)責(zé)人Owen寫信推薦員工張杰為樓道服務(wù)之星?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累選擇：choose→select此外：besides→inaddition照顧：takecareof→tend充滿：befullof→befilledwith2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Theworkofcleaningisdirtyandtiring.However,henevercomplainsaboutit.拓展句：Thoughtheworkofcleaningisdirtyandtiring,henevercomplainsaboutit.【高分句型1】Firstofall,ZhangJie,whoseworkrangesfromcleaningthehallwaystohelpinghisneighbors,ishard-workingandheworksfrommorningtillnight.（運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Notonlydoeshimdotheworkthatbelongstohim,butalsohedevotestosomeextrawork,liketakingcareofneighbors’children.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝和that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句，notonly…butalso…連接的并列句）8．DearDavid,I’mthrilledtohearaboutyourplanstovisitChinaforyourgraduationtrip!Amongthecountlesscities,IhighlyrecommendBeijing,thecapitalofChina.Beijing,acitywitharichhistoricalandculturalheritage,offersauniqueblendofancientandmodern.Here,youcanwitnessthemajestyoftheForbiddenCityandthetranquilityoftheSummerPalace.Moreover,thelivelyHutongareasprovideaglimpseintotraditionalBeijinglife.I’msureBeijingwillleavealastingimpressiononyourChinajourney.Lookforwardtohearingaboutyouradventures!Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英文寫信向David推薦自己眼中最具代表性的中國城市?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累激動(dòng)的：thrilled→excited無數(shù)的：countless→numerous強(qiáng)烈：highly→strongly此外：moreover→besides2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Beijing,acitywitharichhistoricalandculturalheritage,offersauniqueblendofancientandmodern.拓展句：Beijing,whichisacitywitharichhistoricalandculturalheritage,offersauniqueblendofancientandmodern.[高分句型1]I’msureBeijingwillleavealastingimpressiononyourChinajourney.(運(yùn)用了省略that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Lookforwardtohearingaboutyouradventures!(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞短語作賓語)9．DearSam,Thankyouforyourtrust.Asforme,IwilldefinitelyrecommendSichuanhotpottoyou.HotpotenjoysthegreatestpopularityinChina.Familiesandfriendsoftengatheraroundabighotpot,eatingandchattingcheerfully.Thesteamingpotisusuallyfilledwithchilipepperswithbrightredoilonthetop.Becauseeveryoneisfreetochoosetheirfavoritefood,hotpothasbecomearepresentativeof