高三英語讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類+A+run+to+remember一場出乎意料的賽馬比賽 講義

閱讀下而材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ARuntoRememberThirteencanbeachallengingage.

NotonlydidIhavetoadapttomychangingbody,

I

alsohadtodealwithmyparents'

bitterdivorce,

anewfamilyandtheupsettingmovefrom

mycountryhome

toacrowdedsuburb.Whenwemoved,

mybelovedcompanion,

asmallbrownpony

(小馬),hadtobesold.

Feelinghelplessandalone.

Icouldn'teatorsleep,

andIcriedallofthetime.

Imissedmy

family,

myhomeandmypony.

Finally,

myfather,

realizinghowmuchImissedmypony,

purchasedanoldredhorseformeatalocalmarket.

Myhorse,

Cowboy,

waswithoutadoubttheugliesthorseintheworld.

He

waspigeon-toedandknock-kneed.

ButIdidn'tcareabouthisfaults.

Ilovedhimbeyondallreasons.IjoinedaridingclubandfacedrudecommentsandmeansnickersaboutCowboy's

looks.

IneverletonhowIfelt,

butdeepdowninside,

myheartwasbreaking.

Theother

membersrodebeautifulregisteredhorses.WhenCowboyandIenteredthe

eventswherethehorseisjudgedonappearance,

we

werequicklyoutofthegame.

Ifinallyrealizedthatmyonlychancetocompetewouldbein

thetimed-speedevents.

Ichosebarrelracing

(繞桶賽),aneventinwhichahorseandits

riderattempttocompleteatriangularpatternaroundthreebarrelsinthefastesttime.OnegirlnamedBeckyrodeabigbrownhorseintherace

events,

Shealwayswonthe

blueribbons．Needlesstosay,

shedidn'tfeelthreatenedwhenIcompetedagainstheratthe

nextshow.

Shedidn'tneedto.

Icameinnexttolast.

ThebittermemoryofBecky'ssmirks

(得意的笑)

mademedeterminedtobeather.

For

thewholenextmonth,

Iwokeup

early

everydayandrodeCowboyfivemilestothearena

(運動場地).WepracticedforhoursinthehotsunandthenIwouldwalkCowboyhome.

OnthewayhomeIwouldbesotired:

thosefivemilesseemedtwiceaslong.Allofourhardworkdidn'tmakemefeelconfidentbythetimetheshowcame.

Isatat

thegate

andsweateditoutwhileIwatchedBeckyandherhorsechargethroughthepattern

ofbarrels,

finishingthecoursewithcase.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Myturnfinallycame．NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow．故事大意：Thisarticlemainlytellsthestoryoftheauthorwho,attheageof13,sufferedfromfamilyupheaval,movedawayfromhishometowntoacongestedandunfamiliartown,andfeltlonelywithoutthecompanyofhispetfoal.Later,theunattractiveCowboyparticipatedinhorseracingandbecameadarkhorse.Theauthorrealizedthroughthiscompetitionthataslongastheyworkhardenough,theycancontroltheirowndestiny.續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：第一段：Myturnfinallycame.

S1我緊緊抓住韁繩，因為我的老朋友似乎對他們的假笑感到惱火。S2撫摸著牛仔紅色的大脖子，走進(jìn)了競技場。S3比賽開始，一切進(jìn)展順利，我們繞過一個又一個障礙。S4我們繞過最后一個彎道，沖向終點線。S5wecompletedtheracesuccessfully.第二段：NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.

S1我們的跑步結(jié)束時，大家出奇地沉默。S2但幾秒鐘后，首席裁判宣布：“冠軍歸牛仔”，打破了全場的沉默。S3牛仔和我打敗了貝基和她那匹引以為豪的木馬！S4那天我收獲的遠(yuǎn)不止一條藍(lán)絲帶。S5我意識到，如果我非常想要一些東西來實現(xiàn)它，我總是會成為贏家，我可以成為自己命運的主人。

高分范文1：Myturnfinallycame.

TheinstantIturneduponthearena,IheardBeckyscreamingandshoutingruderemarks,followedbylaughterfromthosesurroundingher.Icouldfeelmyfaceburning.Tryinghardtocomposemyself,IinstructedCowboytochargethroughthepatternofbarrels.WewereabouttocompleteatriangularpatternwhensomehowCowboygotasuddenfright,almostknockingoverthethirdbarrel.Ireactedpromptly,pattingCowboygentlyandencouraginghimtomoveon.Ultimately,wemadeit!(81W)NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.

AsIwasleavingthearena,Iheardmynameannounced.Muchtomysurprise,IcompletedthecoursewithlesstimethanBecky,whichmeantthatIbeatherandrankedfirst!Allofasudden,thunderousapplausearosefromthecrowd.WhatwasincrediblewasthatBeckycametocongratulatemeonmysuccessandapologizedforbeingrudetome.NotonlydidIgetthefirstprizeandfriendship,butIregainedself-confidenceaswell.Whatalife-changingruntoremember!85W高分范文2

Myturnfinallycame.Mypalmssweatingandlegsshaking,Iclimbedontothehorseback.Gigglesandcatcallsrockedthearena.Angryandashamed,Iloweredmyhat,tightenedmyreinandspurredthebuttofthehorse.“Comeon,Cowboy.Wecanbeatthemall!”Iyelled.Understandingly,Cowboynoddedandshotforwardlikeabullet,asiftoproveitwasthebestrunnerinthisgame.Left!Right!Left!Right!BeforeIcametomysenses,theshowwasover.(84words)

NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.Butsecondslaterthetotalsilencewasbrokenbythechiefjudge'sannouncement:"ThechampiongoestoCowboy".Thunderouscheersandcongratulationsrangoutintheopenfield.WalkingoffthepodiumwhereIreceivedtheblueribbon,Iwalkedbacktomy`hero'andcarefullyputtheribbonarounditsneckandrodearound.Onceagainwhistlesand

everywhere!InoticedBeckyhadturnedherprideintojealousy.Butatthisverymoment,Ididn'twanttocomfortanybody.Itonceagainprovedthetruthoftwooldsayings:"Don'tjudgeabookbyitscover.""Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart."(115words)

高分范文3Myturnfinallycame.

Iheldfasttothereinformyoldbuddyseemedirritatedattheirsmirksandwantedtocarryofftheblueribbontoprovehewastheveryking.Atthegunshotofthesignalpistol,hespedlikeahare.Sofamiliartothebarrelracingwashethathealmostfinisheditinaflash.Suddenlyasoccerrolledoverinfrontofhim,whichwasfollowedbyakid.Cowboywasstartledbythesurprise,lettingoutawarningneigh.TheboywassafeandsoundbutIalmostlostmybalance