2024屆高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)專題脫險(xiǎn)類讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目及脫離困境型敘事語(yǔ)言素材

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題呈現(xiàn)：①OnSunday,Nicholas,ateenager,wentskiingwithhisfatheratSugarloafMountaininMaine.TheyhadawonderfuldayanddecidedtodrivehometoMassachusettsafterafinalrun.Theytookachairlifttothetopofthemountain,wheretheysplituptogodownindifferenttrails.Whenthefatherfinishedhisrun,heheadedtotheparkinglottowaitforhisson.However,Nicholasnevershowedup.②ItturnedoutthatafiercesnowstormhadsweptintotheareaasNicholaswasonhiswaydown.Unabletoseefar,heaccidentallyturnedoff(拐出)thepathandventureddownthewestsideofthemountain.Beforeheknewit,Nicholaswaslostandallalone.Hiswaybacktotheskitrailswasblocked.What’sworse,hedidn’thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies.Thesunbegantosinkandhewasgettingcolderbytheminute.

③Nicholashadnoideawherehewas.Hetriednottopanic.HethoughtaboutBearGrylls’survivalshowManvs.WildthatheusedtowatchonTV.Intheshow,Gryllsisabandonedinawildareaandhastohelphimselfout.Itwastimetoputthetipshehadlearnedtouse.④Hedecidedtostopmovingaround.Heneededtheenergy,andthewindsweren’tasstronginthevalleywherehestoodastheywereuponthemountain.Plus,therewasabetterchanceofsomeonefindinghimifhestayedput.Thefirstthinghedidwastoseekshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.Usinghisskis,Nicholasbuiltasnowcave.Hegatheredahugemassofsnowanddugoutaholeinthemiddle.Thenhepiledbranchesontopofhimself,likeablanket,tostayaswarmashecould.⑤Wheneveningcame,Nicholaswasreallyhungry.Heatesomesnowanddranksomewaterfromanearbystreamsothathewouldn’tdehydrate(脫水).Thenhereturnedtohiscaveandslept.para.1:

WhenNicholasdidn’tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.para.2:

Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.Paragraph1:

WhenNicholasdidn'tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.

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Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.文本分析：本文講的是一個(gè)小男孩在暴風(fēng)雪中迷路，他不畏艱難，利用在電視中學(xué)到的野外生存知識(shí)逃脫困境的故事．故事山：開(kāi)端----Nicholasandhisfatherwentskiing發(fā)展----Nicholasandhisfathersplituptogodowndifferenttrails高潮----Nicholaswastrappedonhiswaydownthesnowymountainbecauseofafiercesnowstorm解決方法---Nicholasusedsurvivalskillstokeephimselfalive結(jié)局----？？？讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)參考范文1：WhenNicholasdidn’tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.

Thefathercontactedthepolice,andasearchteamwasgatheredtolookforthemissingteenager.Althoughtheweatherconditionswerepoorandthewindwasstillfierce,theydidn’tlosehopeoffindingNicholasalive.Theyknewtheclockwasticking,andNicholasstoodabetterchanceofsurvivaltheearliertheyfoundhim.Theteamsplitup.Oneofthesearcherswhoknewtheareabetterdecidedtosweepamountaintrailheusedtohikeup.Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.

Hewentoutandfollowedthesoundtofindhelp.Hehadwalkedforaboutamilewhenheheardsomeonecallinghisname.Hemovedtowardsthesound,andsureenough,afewminuteslater,hecamefacetofacewiththesearcher.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyingoodcondition,feelingreallyhappy.ItwasNicholas’calmnessandbraverythatsavedhim,enablinghimtoreunitewithhisfamily.參考范文2：Paragraph1:WhenNicholasdidn’tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.Whenthesunwassetting,thetemperaturewasbecominglower.Hesooncalmeddownandturnedtothepoliceforhelp.Afteranalyzingthemapofthevastandhighmountain,theyrodesnowmobilesimmediatelytothepossibleplacewhereNicholaswastrapped.Itwascompletelydarkandthesnowfell,soonblanketingthewholemountainagain,Allaroundwasthehowlingwind,FrightenedasNicholaswas,hebelievedhewouldsurvivefromthefreezingwindandsnow.Paragraph2:Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.Excited,heshoutedbackdesperately“Help!Help!”,Butthewindwasblowingsofiercelythathisvoicewasswallowed.Fortunately.theyfoundhim.Hisfatherhuggedhimtightlyandcried,Thefrozensnowundertheirfeetmeltedintheirwarmheart.ForNicholas,whatathrillingbutmemorableexperience!Forus,fromthisexperience,weshouldbecarefulandlearnsomesurvivalknowledgeinadvancetohelpourselvesoutinnature.脫離困境型敘事語(yǔ)言素材匯總環(huán)境描寫(xiě)（惡劣）——波濤洶涌：AsIfloatedon,ahugewave(一個(gè)巨浪)whistled(呼嘯而來(lái))andapproachedus.Thebigwindroaredthroughourears(在耳邊咆哮),andwewerepushedawayfromtheshorefartherandfarther.Allmysensestoldmethatabigwavewasabouttocome.(即將來(lái)臨)Apowerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wavewascomingtowardsus.

(靠近我們)——鯊魚(yú)的可怕：Itwasashark,amassivesharkthatwasswimmingaround,notfarawayfromher.Theshark’sjawsopenedwide,showingrowsofsharpteeth.

——陸地上的水：Splashingraindropshitthewindshieldfranticallyandtheskieswereoverhungwithablanketofgrey,.雨滴瘋狂地打在擋風(fēng)玻璃上，天空籠罩在一片灰色之中。Thewaterkeptrising,asifitwouldengulfmealive.水不停地漲，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Unfortunately,thewaterpouredinandcreptuponmywaist.

在水里行走（不可能rush,dash）——推薦句型：Thewindblows/whistles/howls/picksup/whipsthroughsth/sweepsacrosssth.風(fēng)刮/颼颼的刮/呼嘯而過(guò)/愈刮愈大/刮過(guò)……/掠過(guò)……Theyweregettingdrenchedbyicywater.他們被冰冷的水澆透了。Theheavyrainwasviolentlybeatingagainstthewindow.大雨瘋狂地?fù)舸虼皯?。Theraindrummedontheroofofthebuilding.雨不停地?fù)舸蛑款A(yù)。Thefuriousstormisgrumblingoutside.狂風(fēng)暴雨在室外呼嘯著。Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒風(fēng)開(kāi)始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉?！扑]句型：Aflashoflightninglitupthewholesky.一道閃電點(diǎn)亮了整個(gè)天空。Thesharpclapsofthunderpiercedthequietnight.聲聲清脆的雷聲劃破了寧?kù)o的夜晚。Theboltoflightningstabstheearth.一道閃電劃過(guò)天空。天空和海洋融為一體|theskyandtheoceanmeltintoeachother

情緒描寫(xiě)（絕望、恐懼+掙扎）——疲倦/寒冷Saltstinging(刺痛)myeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.Timepassingus,tirednessengulfed(包圍了)uswithmyfeetstiff/numb(僵硬/麻木)andshivering.Exhaustedaswewere(盡管很累),wedidn’tstop.Grittingourteeth,wekeptswimming.

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Ifeltextremelyfatigued(非常累)whileswimminghardtokeepmyselfafloat(漂浮著的).Hewashuddledintohiscoat,hisfacebluewithcold.他縮進(jìn)大衣里，冷得臉都發(fā)紫了。Fingersnumbedbythechillywater,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.Sheclaspedthebabytoherbosominthebiting/cutting/piercing/sharpwind.在刺骨的寒風(fēng)里，她把孩子緊緊地抱在胸前。Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife/needles.寒風(fēng)開(kāi)始咆哮，像鋒利的小刀/針一樣刺痛了我的臉。Herteethwerechatteringwithcold.她冷得牙齒直打顫?！ε翴tookadeepbreathandswallowedhard(害怕地咽了口吐沫).Achillfeelingcreptupherspine.Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmademequiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright(難以控制地發(fā)抖).Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody.(在身體涌動(dòng))Astimetickedby,fearcreptuponmyheart(爬上我心頭)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldploughon(前行).

Thethoughtofhopelessnesssentshiversdownmyspine(讓我后脊背發(fā)涼).

Iwasfloodedwithasenseofhorror(被恐懼感淹沒(méi)).Seeingthis,Ifeltmyfeargrowing/increasing(劇增)inside.Ifeltawaveofanxiety(一陣焦慮)sweptovermybody(襲來(lái)).Tearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”——描寫(xiě)掙扎努力Tomlookedthoughtful(若有所思)“Weneedtothinkoutaway!”Imuttered(喃喃自語(yǔ)),scratchingmyhead(絞盡腦汁)...,Weswamtoothandnail(全力以赴地).Wesparednoeffortto(不遺余力地)toswimtowardstheshore.Weexchangedadeterminedlook(互換了堅(jiān)定的神情),thenploughedon(繼續(xù)前行)atanincrediblespeed(難以置信的速度).轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)描寫(xiě)描寫(xiě)聲音傳來(lái)或看見(jiàn)了什么Adistantsoundreachedourears.(傳入耳朵)Justthen,mymindraced–whynotcall911andJoe?Thesoundoftheboatechoedinourears.(在我們耳內(nèi)回響)Atthatmoment,ashrillwhistle(汽笛聲)rippedtheair(劃破天空).Whenwewereatalossofwhattodo,therewererasping(刺耳的)shouts(喊叫聲)risingfromthedistance(從遠(yuǎn)處升起).Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!”Jasonshoutedout.Insheerdesperation(在絕望中),Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsusinthedistance.8.Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp.

情緒描寫(xiě)（希望+努力）——描寫(xiě)如釋重負(fù)Asifclutchingatstraws,Idialedthenumberagainandagain.Hearingthecomfortingnews,Icouldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.(情難自抑)HiswordsreignitedtheflameofhopeinmyheartOnhearingthegoodnews,TomandIsighedingreatrelief(如釋重負(fù)地嘆了口氣),grinningmerrilyateachother.Smilinginrelief(如釋重負(fù)地微笑),Ifeltarushofpride(感到一陣自豪).Overjoyed(狂喜)toseeaboatcomingtoourrescue,TomandIbreathedasighofrelief(如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣)Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.脫險(xiǎn)描寫(xiě)Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.船終于到達(dá)了我們身邊，把我們所有人都帶回了岸邊。Yellingatthetopofhislung,Joetriedtosoothemeandconvincemethatitwasthebestwaytoesc