2024屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)2024年高一3月青桐鳴聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-別問(wèn)我魚(yú)在哪 講義素材

續(xù)寫(xiě)題目：別問(wèn)我魚(yú)在哪（自我成長(zhǎng)主題-誠(chéng)實(shí)和責(zé)任）【下面除提供續(xù)寫(xiě)題目外、還提供（一）方便教師讀題的情節(jié)梗概（二）檢測(cè)學(xué)生是否讀懂的「預(yù)設(shè)情節(jié)填空」，（三）在講范文前引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考續(xù)寫(xiě)方向的「問(wèn)題及答案」，（四）續(xù)寫(xiě)思路概述，（五）TCEE獨(dú)家范文】Jaydenwasheadingtotheplacehe’dcallhomeforthenextweek:CampMassomet.BeingawayfromhomeforthefirsttimewashardforJayden.Ontopofthat,JaydenwasaskedtojointhesamepatrolwithakidtheycalledBigQuinn,whoalwaysseemedtobeunhappy,especiallyinthemorning.Jaydentriedhardtoavoidupsettinghim.Onthefourthnight,someoftheolderguyscamebackfromthelake,laughingexcitedly.BigQuinnwasatthecenterofthepack,holdingsomethingabovehishead.Itwasafish,thebiggestJaydenhadeverseen.BigQuinnwassmilingfromeartoear,andJaydenrealizeditwasthefirsttimehe’dseenhimwearasmile.KidsinJayden’spatrolwasexcitedtotasteBigQuinn’sfish.Eveningcame.Jaydenbegantosetoutthepapercupsaroundthetable.Jaydendidn’tfeellikewalkingallthewayaroundthetabletosetoutthelastfewcups.Sohespreadouthisbodyacrossthetabletoputthecupsinplace.Butwhenhepulledhisarmback,heoverturnedtheplateholdingBigQuinn’sfish,whichwascutintothinpiecesandcoveredinfoil,knockingitoffthetable.Jaydenwatchedinfearasitfellontothedustyground.Frightened,withoutasecondthought,hekickedthefishunderthetableandcovereditupwithdirt.ThenJaydensettheplatebackonthetable,thefoilstillintheshapeofafishthatwasn’tthere.ThenBigQuinncameandpickeduptheplate.Henoticedsomethingunusual.Heopenedthefoil.“HEYY!”heshouted.“Where’smyFISH?”Hewasn’tsmilinganymore.Afterdinner,itrainedhard.Everythingonthegroundwaswashedawayintheheavyrain.Jayden’seyeswenttotheareaunderhispatrol’spicnictable.Thefishwasgone.BigQuinnwoundneverknowwhathedid.Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.前文情節(jié)梗概Jayden前往名為CampMassomet的營(yíng)地，準(zhǔn)備度過(guò)接下來(lái)的一周。第一次離家讓他感到不適，更糟糕的是，他還被迫與總是顯得不悅的BigQuinn同組。Jayden努力避免激怒他。在第四天晚上，BigQuinn捕到了一條Jayden從未見(jiàn)過(guò)的大魚(yú)，這讓他難得地露出了笑容，也讓同組的孩子們都期待著品嘗這條魚(yú)。然而，當(dāng)Jayden在擺放紙杯時(shí)不慎打翻了裝有魚(yú)片的盤(pán)子，他驚恐之下將魚(yú)踢到桌子下并用泥土掩蓋。雖然Jayden將盤(pán)子恢復(fù)原狀，但BigQuinn很快發(fā)現(xiàn)了異常，并憤怒地發(fā)現(xiàn)魚(yú)不見(jiàn)了。晚飯后，一場(chǎng)大雨將地面的一切沖刷干凈，Jayden看到桌子下的魚(yú)也不見(jiàn)了，這讓他松了一口氣，因?yàn)锽igQuinn永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)知道他做了什么。預(yù)設(shè)情節(jié)填空J(rèn)ayden,acamperatCampMassomet,struggledwithhomesicknessandabad-temperedpatrolmate,BigQuinn.Onthefourthnight,BigQuinncaughtahugefish,muchtoeveryone'sexcitement.However,Jaydenaccidentallyknockedovertheplateholdingthefishwhilesettingthetable,panicked,andhidtheevidence.BigQuinn'sangeratfindingthefishmissingwasshort-livedasaheavyrainwashedawayalltraces,leavingJaydenrelievedbutguilty.（紅色部分可挖空讓學(xué)生填寫(xiě)）（三）續(xù)寫(xiě)思路引導(dǎo)Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.銜接：Q:Whycouldn’tJaydenfallasleep?A:BecausehewasdeeplytroubledbywhathadhappenedwithBigQuinn’sfish.Hefeltamixofguiltandscare.銜接：Q:WhatdidJaydendecidetodotomakethingsright?A:JaydendecidedtoconfesstoBigQuinnwhathadhappenedtothefish.過(guò)渡：￡動(dòng)作￡心理￡語(yǔ)言￡感情過(guò)渡：￡動(dòng)作￡心理￡語(yǔ)言￡感情銜接：Q:WhydidJaydendecidetomakethingsrighteventually?A:Becauseheknewhehadtofacetheconsequencesofhisactionsandhewasoverwhelmedbyguilt.銜接：Q:WhatlessondidJaydenlearnfromthisexperience?A:Helearnedavaluablelessoninhonestyandresponsibility.（四）續(xù)寫(xiě)思路概述Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.銜接：R動(dòng)作￡心理￡語(yǔ)言￡感情(1)Jayden無(wú)法入睡的表現(xiàn)和原因。銜接：R動(dòng)作￡心理￡語(yǔ)言￡感情(1)Jayden道歉，。過(guò)渡：￡動(dòng)作R心理￡語(yǔ)言R感情(2)Jayden腦海中一直浮現(xiàn)事情細(xì)節(jié)。(3)Jayden知道錯(cuò)了，但是害怕Quinn。過(guò)渡：￡動(dòng)作￡心理R語(yǔ)言R感情(2)Quinn接受道歉，而且沒(méi)生氣，反而夸贊他。(3)Jayden如釋重負(fù)。銜接：￡動(dòng)作￡心理￡語(yǔ)言R感情(4)Jayden的內(nèi)疚戰(zhàn)勝了害怕。銜接：￡動(dòng)作R心理￡語(yǔ)言￡感情(4)Jayden學(xué)到重要一課，完成蛻變。

（五）TCEE獨(dú)家范文Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Hetossedandturnedrestlessly,thesheetstanglingaroundhislegsashismindrefusedtosettle.Guiltweighedheavyonhisconscience,andheknewhehadbetrayedhisownprinciples.TheimageofBigQuinn’sshockedfacewhenhediscoveredthemissingfishplayedonrepeatinJayden’smind./HismindreplayedtheincidentwithBigQuinn’sfishagainandagain.Heknewhehadtofaceuptohismistake,butthethoughtofBigQuinn’ssternexpressionfilledhimwithdread.However,hisguiltprovedstrongerthanhisfear,andhewasdeterminedtodowhateverittooktorighthiswrong.他不安地翻來(lái)覆去，床單纏在他的腿上，因?yàn)樗男牟豢习捕ㄏ聛?lái)。內(nèi)疚沉重地壓在他的良心上，他知道自己背叛了自己的原則。大奎因發(fā)現(xiàn)丟失的魚(yú)時(shí)震驚的表情在杰登的腦海中反復(fù)出現(xiàn)。/他的腦海里一遍又一遍地回放著大奎因的魚(yú)的事件。他知道他必須勇敢地面對(duì)自己的錯(cuò)誤，但一想到比格·奎因嚴(yán)厲的表情，他就充滿(mǎn)了恐懼。然而，他的罪惡感比他的恐懼更強(qiáng)烈，他決心不惜一切代價(jià)糾正自己的錯(cuò)誤。Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.Thenextmorning,hegatheredhiscourageandapproachedBigQuinn.Jaydentookadeepbreathandconfessedeverything,hisvoicetremblingslightlywithnervesandremorse.Tohissurprise,insteadofanger,BigQuinn’sexpressionsoftened.“Itwasanaccident,”BigQuinnsaid.“Andyou’rebraveenoughtoadmitit.”Jaydenfeltaweightliftoffhisshoulders,withawaveofreliefwashingoverhim.Hehadlearnedavaluablelessoninbraveryandresponsibility.Andashepackeduphi