讀后續(xù)寫：母親節(jié)的禮物講義-2024屆高三英語一輪復習

PAGE1讀后續(xù)寫：母親節(jié)的禮物?范文+情節(jié)分析+語料積累--2024屆高三英語一輪復習閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。A12-year-oldboysawsomethinginashopwindowthat

sethisheartracing.Itwasajewelbox.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wasfarbeyondReubenEarle’s

means.However,heopenedthedoorandwentinside.Standingproudandstraight,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,

adding,“ButIdon’thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”“I’lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled.“Iwill

raise

thefivedollarsandnottellanybody,”Reubensaidtohimself.Hearingthesoundof

hammering

fromasidestreet,Reubenhadanidea.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnails

purchased

insacks(麻布袋)fromalocalfactory.Sometimesthesackswere

abandoned,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhefoundtwosacksandsoldtotheman

inchargeof

packingnails.Theboy’shand

tightly

heldthefive-centpiecesasheranhome.Nearhishousestoodtheancientbarn(谷倉).Reubenfoundasodatinanddroppedhiscoinsinside.Thenheclimbedintothetopofthebarnandhidthetin.Allsummerlong,

despite

houseworkathomeReubenkepttohissecrettask.Oftenhewascold,tiredandhungry,butthethoughtoftheobjectintheshopwindowsustained（維持、支撐）

him.Mother’sDayhadcome!He

uncovered

thetincan,

poured

thecoins

out

andbegantocount.Heneeded20centsmore.Hehadtofindfourmoresacksandsellthembeforethedayended.TowardseveningReubenarrivedatthefactory.Thesackbuyerwasaboutto

lockup.“Mister!Pleasedon’tcloseupyet.”ThemanturnedandsawReuben,dirtyandsweatstained.“Comebacktomorrow,boy.”“Please,Mister.Ihavetosellthesacksnow—please.”

注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1:ThemanheardaslightshakeinReuben’svoiceandcouldtellhewasclosetotears.

Paragraph2:Thentheshopkeeperplacedtheparcel(包裹)inReuben’shands.

詞匯積累sethisheartracing-

使他心跳加速beyondmeans-

超出負擔能力adding-

添加raisethefivedollars-

籌集五美元saidtohimself-

自言自語地說hammering-

錘擊fromasidestreet-

從一條小巷purchased-

購買abandon-

放棄inchargeof-

負責tightly-

緊緊地despite-

盡管sustain-

維持uncovered-

揭開pouredthecoinsout-

倒出硬幣wasaboutto-

正要lockup-

鎖上stained-

弄臟

參考范文ThemanheardaslightshakeinReuben’svoiceandcouldtellhewasclosetotears.

“Whydoyouneedthismoneysobadly?”“It’sasecret.”Themantookthesacks,reachedintohispocketandputfourcoinsinReuben’shand.Reubenmurmuredathankyouandranhome.Then,holdingthetincaninhishand,heheadedfortheshop.“Ihavethemoney.”hetoldtheownerproudly.ThemanwenttothewindowandfetchedReuben’streasure.Hewipedthedustoffandgentlywrappeditinbrownpaper.Thentheshopkeeperplacedtheparcel(包裹)inReuben’shands.

Racinghome,Reubenburstthroughthefrontdoor.“Here,Mum!Here!”Reubenexclaimedasherantoherexcitedly.Thenheplacedasmallboxinherworkroughenedhand.Mumunwrappeditcarefully.Ablue-velvetjewelboxappeared.Mumgentlyliftedthelid,withtearswellingupinhereyes.Shehadneverreceivedsuchapreciousgift.Asmileflashingacrossherface,sheheldReubentightlyinherarms.

主旨大意Thisarticletellsthestoryofa12-year-oldboywhomakeseffortstoraisemoneytobuyaspecialMother’sDaygiftforhismother.Despitenothavingenoughmoney,hesellsbagsofnailstoearnmoneyandeventuallymanagestopurchaseajewelrybox.Thestoryemphasizestheboy’sloveforhismotherandhisdeterminationandperseveranceinachievinghisgoal.這篇文章講述了一個12歲男孩為了給他的母親買一份特殊的母親節(jié)禮物而努力籌集錢的故事。盡管他沒有足夠的錢買禮物，但他通過賣釘子袋來賺錢，最終成功購買了珠寶盒。這個故事強調了魯本對母親的愛和他為了實現(xiàn)自己的目標而付出的努力和堅持。

情節(jié)分析1、開端：開端是為了引起讀者的興趣并介紹故事的背景和主要角色。它通常會設定故事發(fā)生的時間、地點和相關的情境。2、發(fā)展：發(fā)展階段，主要角色面臨各種問題、挑戰(zhàn)和沖突。他們通過行動和決策來推動故事的發(fā)展。這個階段通常會涉及到角色之間的相互作用和關系的變化。3、高潮：高潮是故事中最緊張和關鍵的時刻。在這個階段，故事的沖突達到了頂峰，主要角色面臨著最大的挑戰(zhàn)或決策。高潮通常會引發(fā)故事的轉折點或者關鍵事件的發(fā)生。4、下降：在高潮之后，故事開始進入下降階段。在這個階段，故事的緊張氛圍逐漸緩解，主要角色開始解決問題或者處理后果。這個階段通常會包括一系列的行動和事件，為故事的解決和結局做準備。5、結局：結局是故事的最后部分，它給出了故事的結果和結論。在結局中，主要角色的命運被揭示，故事的目標得到實現(xiàn)或者得到解決。結局還可能包含對故事中發(fā)生的事件的總結、角色的成長以及故事的主題或道德的反思。1、開端：故事的開端是一個12歲的男孩魯本在商店櫥窗里看到了一樣讓他心跳加速的珠寶盒，但價格超出了他的能力范圍。他決定籌集資金來購買這個珠寶盒。Beginning:Thestorybeginswitha12-year-oldboynamedRubenseeingajewelryboxinashopwindowthatmakeshisheartrace,butthepriceisbeyondhismeans.Hedecidestoraisefundstobuythejewelrybox.2、發(fā)展：為了籌集資金，魯本撿袋子賣給了負責打包釘子的人，并將錢放進了一個蘇打罐中藏起來。整個夏天，魯本堅持著他的秘密任務，不斷努力賺取更多的錢。Development:Inordertoraisefunds,Rubenfindstwobagsandsellsthemtoamanresponsibleforpackagingnails,puttingthemoneyinasodacantohideit.Throughoutthesummer,Rubenstickstohissecretmissionandworkshardtoearnmoremoney.3、高潮：母親節(jié)到了，魯本打開罐子，開始數(shù)錢，發(fā)現(xiàn)還需要20美分才能買到禮物。他來到工廠，希望能賣掉剩下的四個袋子，但被告知明天再來。魯本的情緒達到高潮，他哀求買家，店家最終同意當天收購袋子。Climax:Mother’sDayarrives,andRubenopensthecantocountthemoney,onlytofindthathestillneeds20centstobuythegift.Hegoestothefactoryhopingtoselltheremainingfourbags,butistoldtocomebacktomorrow.Ruben’semotionsreachaclimaxashepleadswiththebuyerandeventuallysucceedsinsellingthebags.4、下降：魯本拿到了錢并趕往商店為母親買禮物，店主把包裹交給了他。這標志著高潮部分的結束，情節(jié)開始下降。Fallingaction:Rubenreceivesthemoneyandrushestothestoretobuythegiftforhismother.Theshopkeeperhandshimthepackage.Thismarkstheendoftheclimaxandtheplotbeginstodescend.5、結局：魯本急忙回家把禮物交給了母親，母親感到驚訝和感動，認為這是最好的母親節(jié)禮物。Resolution:Rubenhurriedlyreturnshomeandpresentsthegifttohismother,whoissurprisedandtouched,consideringitthebestMother’sDaygift.

續(xù)寫內容：第一段續(xù)寫工廠主回收了魯本的麻袋，魯本拿著錢到商店購買珠寶盒的情景。第二段續(xù)寫魯本拿著珠寶盒回到家里送給媽媽的情景。

第一段續(xù)寫語料：1.Theman’sheartsankfurtherasheheardthetremorinRuben’svoiceandnoticedthesignsofimpendingtears.當他聽到魯本聲音中的顫抖，注意到即將流淚的跡象時，那個男人的心沉了下去。2.Heinstinctivelyreachedouthishand,gentlyplacingitonRuben’sshoulder,andaskedhimwhatwaswrong.他本能地伸出手，輕輕地放在魯本的肩膀上，問他發(fā)生了什么事。3.RubenthenexplainedthattodaywasMother’sDay,andhewantedtobuytheperfectgiftforhismom,buthewasstillshortof20cents.魯本解釋說今天是母親節(jié)，他想給他媽媽買一份完美的禮物，但他還差20美分。4.Thefactoryowner’seyeswidenedinsurpriseashelearnedthattodaywasMother’sDayandRubenintendedtousethemoneyfromsellingbagstobuyagiftforhismom.工廠主聽說今天是母親節(jié)，魯本打算用賣袋子的錢給媽媽買禮物時，他的眼睛驚訝地睜大了。5.Sensingtheurgencyintheyoungboy’swords,thebuyerdecidedtogivehimachanceandunlockedthedoor.感受到年輕男孩話語中的緊迫感，買家決定給他一個機會，并打開了門。6.HeknewhowimportantitwasforRubentoshowhisloveandappreciationforhismotheronthisspecialday.他知道對魯本來說，在這個特殊的日子里向他的母親表達愛意和感激有多么重要。7.Withouthesitation,hereachedintohispocketandpulledoutafewcoins,includingthemissing20cents.毫不猶豫地，他伸手進口袋，拿出幾枚硬幣，其中包括缺少的20美分。8.Withawarmsmile,themanhandedthecoinstoRubenandsaid,“Hereyougo,Ruben.Ihopethishelpsyoubuythegiftyourmomdeserves.男人微笑著把硬幣遞給魯本，說：“給你，魯本。希望這能幫你買到你媽媽值得擁有的禮物。9.Shemustbeahappywomantohaveasonlikeyou.”Ruben’seyeswelledupwithgratitudeashethankedthemanprofusely.有你這樣的兒子，她一定是個幸福的媽媽。”魯本感激地眼含熱淚，向男人連連道謝。

10.Withasympatheticsmile,thebuyersaid,“Alright,Reuben.I’llgiveyouachance.帶著同情的微笑，買家說道：“好吧，魯本。我給你一個機會。11.Withasenseofrelief,Reubenthankedthebuyerandleftthefactory,gratefulforthe

opportunityhehadbeengiven.松了口氣，魯本感謝買家并離開了工廠，對他所獲得的機會心懷感激。12.Carryingthemoneyhehadearned,Reubenhastilyleftthefactoryandsprintedtowardsthestore.帶著他掙來的錢，魯本匆忙離開工廠，向商店狂奔。13.Hisheartwasfilledwithexcitementashehurriedtobuythejewelryboxthatthestoreownerhadsetasideforhim.他的心充滿了激動，急著去買店主為他預留的珠寶盒。14.Reubenknewhowmuchhismotherlovedjewelry,andhewantedtosurpriseherwithsomethingspecial.魯本知道他的媽媽非常喜歡珠寶，他想用一份特別的禮物給她一個驚喜。15.Asheenteredthestore,Reubencouldn’thelpbutfeelasenseofanticipation.當他進入店鋪時，魯本忍不住感到一種期待。16.Hequicklylocatedthejewelrysectionandfoundthebeautifulboxondisplay.他迅速找到了珠寶區(qū)，并找到了那個陳列的美麗珠寶盒。17.Itwasevenmoreexquisitethanhehadimagined.它比他想象的還要精致。18.Thestoreowner,recognizingReuben,greetedhimwarmlyandcongratulatedhimonhishardworkanddedication.店主認出了魯本，熱情地問候他，并祝賀他的努力和奉獻。19.Reubenhandedoverthemoneyhehadearned,feelingamixofprideandnervousness.魯本交出了自己掙來的錢，心中充滿了自豪和緊張。20.Thestoreownercountedthebillscarefullyandsmiled,recognizingReuben’sdeterminationandresponsibility.店主仔細數(shù)了數(shù)鈔票，微笑著，認識到魯本的決心和責任心。21.Hewrappedthejewelryboxinadelicatepaper,makingitlooklikeapreciousgift.他用精美的紙把珠寶盒包裝起來，使它看起來像一份珍貴的禮物。第二段續(xù)寫語料1.Withthejewelryboxinhand,Reubencouldn’twaittoseehismother’sreaction.手里握著珠寶盒，魯本迫不及待地想看到媽媽的反應。2.Hethankedthestoreownerwholeheartedlyandrushedhome,hisheartpoundingwithexcitement.他由衷地感謝店主，急忙回家，心怦怦地跳動著。3.Rubenrushedbackhome,hisheartpoundingwithexcitement,clutchingthejewelryboxtightlyinhishand.魯本興奮地趕回家，心臟怦怦直跳，緊緊抓著手中的珠寶盒。4.Holdingthejewelryboxinhishand,Rubencouldn’twaittoseehismother’sreaction.手里握著珠寶盒，魯本迫不及待地想看到媽媽的反應。5.Asheenteredthehouse,hecouldn’tcontainhisanticipationandhurriedlysearchedforhismom.當他進入房子時，他無控制自己的期待，急忙尋找他的媽媽。6.Finally,hefoundherinthelivingroom,sittingonthecouch,engrossedinabook.最后，他在客廳找到了她，她正坐在沙發(fā)上專心看書。7.“Mom!”Rubencalledout,breathless.“媽媽！”魯本喘著氣喊道。8.Hismomlookedup,surprisedtoseehimholdingaparcelinhishand.他媽媽抬起頭，看見他手里拿著一個精美的包裹，很驚訝。9.Ruben’seyessparkledwithjoyashepresentedthejewelryboxtohismom.魯本的眼睛因為喜悅而閃爍，他滿懷期待地把珠寶盒遞給他媽媽。10.“HappyMother’sDay!Thisisforyou,”heexclaimed,hisvoicefilledwitheagerness.

“母親節(jié)快樂！這是給您的，”他興奮地說道。11.Hismom’seyeswidenedinsurpriseasshetookthejewelryboxfromRuben’soutstretchedhands.他媽媽驚訝地張大了眼睛，從魯本伸出的手中接過珠寶盒。12.HereyeswelledupwithtearsofjoyasshelookedatRuben,overwhelmedwithemotions.她的眼睛充滿了喜悅的淚水，看著魯本，充滿了感激的情緒。13.“OhRuben,thisisthebestMother’sDaygiftIhaveeverreceived,”hismomwhispered,hervoicetremblingwithgratitude.“哦，魯本，這是我收到的最好的母親節(jié)禮物，”她低聲說道，聲音顫抖著充滿了感激之情。14.Shepulledhimintoatightembrace,expressingherloveandappreciationforhisthoughtfulgesture.她緊緊擁抱著他，表達著她的愛和對他體貼舉動的贊賞。15.Momentslikethesearepriceless,andRubenknewthathehadmadehismomfeeltrulylovedandcherished.像這樣的時刻是無價的，魯本知道他讓他媽媽感到真正被愛和珍視。16.AsReubenarrivedhome,hecarefullyplacedthejewelryboxonthe