新教材外研版高中英語(yǔ)必修第三冊(cè)全冊(cè)各單元寫(xiě)作匯總

外研版必修第三冊(cè)全冊(cè)各單元寫(xiě)作匯總Unit1Knowingme，knowingyou 1Unit2Makingadifference 4Unit3Theworldofscience 8Unit4Amazingart 12Unit5Whatanadventure! 15Unit6Disasterandhope 19Unit1Knowingme，knowingyou如何寫(xiě)論說(shuō)文本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目屬于論說(shuō)文。準(zhǔn)確把握論說(shuō)文的三要素：論點(diǎn)，論據(jù)和論證。闡述作者的論點(diǎn)，提出事實(shí)論據(jù)和理論論據(jù)，并且論證論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)之間的邏輯關(guān)系，也就是用充分有力的論據(jù)來(lái)證明論點(diǎn)的過(guò)程和方法。提出論點(diǎn)要開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山；論證論點(diǎn)要擺事實(shí)，列事例；重申論點(diǎn)要首尾呼應(yīng)。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——引言，寫(xiě)出文章的寫(xiě)作目的和文章的論點(diǎn)；2．主體(body)——論據(jù)和論證；詳細(xì)探討和闡述論點(diǎn)；3．結(jié)尾(ending)——總結(jié)歸納主體部分，回扣文章論點(diǎn)。[常用詞塊]1．bedeeplyimpressedwiththestory對(duì)故事印象很深刻2．havethesameexperiencewithhim和他有同樣的經(jīng)歷3．understandthetruthbehindit明白其中的道理4．sayforexamplethat舉例說(shuō)明5．putitintopractice把它付諸實(shí)踐[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開(kāi)頭1．Recently，theproblemofenvironmentalprotectionhasbeenbroughtintofocus.最近，關(guān)于環(huán)保的問(wèn)題成為焦點(diǎn)。2．Itisacommonbeliefthatwestudentsshouldnotspendtoomuchmoneyonclothes.大家普遍認(rèn)為我們學(xué)生不應(yīng)該在衣服上花太多錢(qián)。3．Moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemaboutfoodsafetyinourschool.越來(lái)越多的人擔(dān)心學(xué)校的食品安全問(wèn)題?！镎募丫?．Thisproblemwilldoharmtoourstudyanddistractourconcentration.這個(gè)問(wèn)題將會(huì)對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)不利，分散我們的注意力。2．Ihaveneverexperiencedsuchanevent.我從未經(jīng)歷過(guò)這樣的事。3．Noonecanprovetous，towhatextent，wecanbelieveit.沒(méi)人能向我們證實(shí)可以在多大程度上相信它?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Inconclusion，itcanbehardforstudentstogetridoftheirfavoriteclothes.總之，讓學(xué)生放棄自己最?lèi)?ài)的衣服肯定很難。2．Afterreadingit，Ifindeverysecondinlifeisveryprecious.讀完后，我覺(jué)得人生的每分每秒都是寶貴的。3．Weshouldsparenoefforttostudyhardandovercomethedifficultiesbeforeus.我們應(yīng)該不遺余力地努力學(xué)習(xí)，克服我們面前的困難。最近你校進(jìn)行了“學(xué)生參加社區(qū)服務(wù)”的討論，學(xué)生們對(duì)此觀點(diǎn)不一，有的支持，有的反對(duì)，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：1．你的觀點(diǎn)；2.你的理由；3.你的結(jié)論。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：社區(qū)服務(wù)communityservice；責(zé)任responsibility【學(xué)生習(xí)作】Recentlyourschoolaskthestudentstotakepartincommunityservice.Wehaveopinionsaboutit.Ithinkitisgoodforthestudents.First，theprojectwillhelpstudentsunderstandthecommunityservicebetter.Second，wegrowupandshoulddosomethingforoursociety.Finally，theactivityhelpsstudentstoperformthesocialresponsibilitybyhelpingothers.Basedontheabove,Ihopemoreandmorestudentswillactivelyparticipateinthesemeaningfulactivities.[點(diǎn)評(píng)]1.提出的觀點(diǎn)不夠明晰。2.對(duì)觀點(diǎn)的論證缺乏有力的證據(jù)。【升格作文】Recentlyourschoolleadercalledonthestudentstotakepartincommunityservice.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Ithinkitishelpfulforthegrowthofthestudents.Inthefirstplace,ithelpsstudentsunderstandwhattheneedsofthecountryare.Inthesecondplace,itoffersstudentstheopportunitytoplaytheirownrolesinsociety.Finally，itenablesstudentstounderstandwhatsocialresponsibilityisbypayingcloseattentiontootherpeople,oursocietyandstate.Basedontheabove,Ihopemoreandmorestudentswillactivelyparticipateinthesemeaningfulactivities.請(qǐng)以“旅行是最好的老師”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1.越來(lái)越多的人出門(mén)旅行；2．旅行的好處；3．你的觀點(diǎn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縏ravelisthebestteacherNowadaysmoreandmorepeoplegoouttravellingathomeandabroad.Theycanbenefitfromtravelalot.Herearesomeoftheadvantages.Firstly,itcanenrichourknowledge.Travellinginanotherplace,weexposeourselvestoanewlearningenvironment,wherewecangainnewknowledge.Wemaylearntospeaknewlanguages，andexperiencesomeuniquecultures.Secondly,ithelpsusrelievethepressureofwork.Soit'sagoodideatohavesometimetogotravellingforrelaxation.Inaword,themoreoftenwetravel,themorewelearnabouttheworld.Unit2Makingadifference人物傳記人物傳記類(lèi)文章屬于記敘文的寫(xiě)作范疇。作者根據(jù)各種書(shū)面的資料、口述的記憶、調(diào)查等相關(guān)材料，有選擇性地編排、描寫(xiě)與說(shuō)明。傳記可分為自傳和他傳兩種。此類(lèi)文章以人物為中心組織材料，圍繞對(duì)被寫(xiě)的人的基本情況(如年齡、出生地、家庭背景、所受教育等)作簡(jiǎn)單的概述，然后在敘述其事跡或者在某個(gè)領(lǐng)域中所做出的貢獻(xiàn)，最后再對(duì)其進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，一般不虛構(gòu)，紀(jì)實(shí)性是傳記的基本要求。要做到主題鮮明，內(nèi)容清晰，并注意結(jié)構(gòu)的完整性。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——簡(jiǎn)要介紹某個(gè)人物及其成就；2．主體(body)——按照時(shí)間或者成就順序描寫(xiě)該人物；3．結(jié)尾(ending)——你對(duì)該人物及其成就的評(píng)價(jià)。[常用詞塊]1．beborninacommonfamily出生在一個(gè)普通家庭2．inhistwenties在他二十幾歲的時(shí)候3．graduatefromcollege從大學(xué)畢業(yè)4．sparenoeffortinfindingoutthetruth不遺余力地找出真相5．makeagreatachievementinsports在運(yùn)動(dòng)方面取得很大成就[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開(kāi)頭1．Broughtupbyhisgrandparents，Jackshowedastronginterestinplantsandinsects.杰克由祖父母養(yǎng)大，從小就對(duì)植物和昆蟲(chóng)產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣。2．Wheneveryouturnonalight，listentotheCD，orwatchTVyouareenjoyingoneofthediscoveriesofThomasAlvaEdison.無(wú)論何時(shí)，你打開(kāi)燈、聽(tīng)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)或者看電視，你正在享受托馬斯·阿爾瓦·愛(ài)迪生的其中一項(xiàng)發(fā)明。3．LiYan，anengineer，wasborninFebruary，1965inBeijing，China.李巖是一名工程師，1965年2月出生于中國(guó)北京?！镎募丫?．Asalittlegirl，shebegantoshowagiftinplayingthepiano.小時(shí)候，她就開(kāi)始展現(xiàn)演奏鋼琴方面的天賦。2．InordertodeveloptradeandfriendshipbetweenChinaandothercountries，hespent28yearsontheoceanjourneysandwenttomorethanthirtycountries.為了發(fā)展中國(guó)和其他國(guó)家的貿(mào)易和友誼，他花了28年的時(shí)間在海上航行，去過(guò)三十多個(gè)國(guó)家。3．QiBaishi'sinterestchangedlatertosimplethingsfromeverydaylife，suchasvegetables，flowers，birdsandinsects.齊白石的興趣后來(lái)轉(zhuǎn)向日常生活中的簡(jiǎn)單的東西，如蔬菜、花鳥(niǎo)和昆蟲(chóng)?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Hesetagoodexampleforustofollowinachievingourambition.在實(shí)現(xiàn)抱負(fù)上他為我們樹(shù)立了很好的榜樣。2．SheishonoredasoneofthegreatestwritersinChineseliterature.她被譽(yù)為中國(guó)文學(xué)界最偉大的作家之一。3．HisachievementsinspaceexplorationarespokenhighlyofinChinaeventhewholeworld.他在太空探索方面的成就在中國(guó)乃至全世界都受到高度評(píng)價(jià)。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)為你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇人物傳記，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)如下：姓名：AllanStewart國(guó)籍：澳大利亞出生日期：1915年3月7日世界紀(jì)錄：2006年以最高齡獲得碩士學(xué)位學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度：挑戰(zhàn)自我，永遠(yuǎn)為時(shí)不晚。第一個(gè)學(xué)位：1936年獲得第二個(gè)學(xué)位：醫(yī)學(xué)博士第三個(gè)學(xué)位：80多歲時(shí)決定學(xué)習(xí)法律，2006年獲得碩士學(xué)位。第四個(gè)學(xué)位：2012年通過(guò)網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)獲得【學(xué)生習(xí)作】AllanStewartisanAustralianandwasbornonMarch7th,1915.Hesettherecordthathegotadoctor'sdegreeathiseighties.Hegothisfirstdegreein1936,andthenhisseconddegree—DoctorofMedicine.Hisattitudetowardsstudyischallengeourselvesanditisnevertoolatetolearn.Inhiseighties，hestudiedlaw,andin2006hesetaworldrecordforbecomingtheoldestpersontogetadoctor'sdegree.In2012hemanagedtogethisfourthdegreebyonlinelearning.Asweallknow,it'snevertoolatetolearn.Heisagoodexampletoallofus.[點(diǎn)評(píng)]1.個(gè)人經(jīng)歷像是記流水賬。2.形象樹(shù)立以及寫(xiě)作目的不夠明顯。【升格作文】AllanStewart,ofAustraliannationality,wasbornonMarch7th,1915.Heishardworkingandagoodexampleforustofollow.Hegothisfirstdegreein1936,andthenhisseconddegree—DoctorofMedicine.Hebelievesthatoneisnevertoooldtochallengehimself.Therefore,inhiseighties,hedecidedtostudylaw,andin2006hesetaworldrecordforbecomingtheoldestpersontogetadoctor'sdegree.Becausehewasgoodatarranginghisstudytime,hegotpraisefromhisteacher,andin2012hemanagedtogethisfourthdegreebyonlinelearning.Justasthesayinggoes,it'snevertoolatetolearn.Hesetsagoodexampletoallofusandinspirespeopletogoonstudying.假設(shè)你是高中生李華。你們學(xué)校的校報(bào)英文版正在舉行以“我最喜愛(ài)的作家”為主題的征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你最喜歡的小說(shuō)家簡(jiǎn)·奧斯汀(JaneAusten)并向校報(bào)投稿。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容如下：姓名簡(jiǎn)·奧斯汀(JaneAusten)出生于十八世紀(jì)末國(guó)籍英國(guó)受教育于父親、兄長(zhǎng)以及書(shū)籍閱讀代表作《傲慢與偏見(jiàn)》(PrideandPrejudice)作品中女性的特點(diǎn)獨(dú)立、聰明、勇敢注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緼mongthewritersathomeandabroad，JaneAustenremainsthemostbelovedwriterofmine.Borninthelate18thcentury，JaneAustenwasawell-knownEnglishnovelistwhoseworksearnedheraplaceasoneofthemostwidelyreadwritersinEnglishliterature.Shewaseducatedprimarilybyherfatherandolderbrothersaswellasthroughherownreading.Theheroinesinherbooksareallfearless，intelligentandindependent.Nomatterhowdifficultitisfortheirdreamstocometrue，theyalwaysactwithcourageanddetermination.ThesearethecharacteristicsthatIreallyadmire，whichiswhyAusten'sbooksaresoappealingtome.Amongallherpublishedbooks，IlikePrideandPrejudicebest.IaimtobeawomanlikeElizabethBennet.Unit3Theworldofscience如何寫(xiě)實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告屬于說(shuō)明文，主要用來(lái)說(shuō)明實(shí)驗(yàn)的目的、過(guò)程以及實(shí)驗(yàn)的結(jié)果。全文可以分為三個(gè)部分，首先說(shuō)明實(shí)驗(yàn)的目的和實(shí)驗(yàn)所需要的實(shí)驗(yàn)器材；然后說(shuō)明實(shí)驗(yàn)所采用的方法，實(shí)驗(yàn)具體過(guò)程以及實(shí)驗(yàn)所得到的結(jié)果；最后根據(jù)實(shí)驗(yàn)的情況得出相應(yīng)的結(jié)論。句式要多用祈使句，時(shí)態(tài)多為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——交代實(shí)驗(yàn)的目的和所需器材2．主體(body)——介紹實(shí)驗(yàn)方法、過(guò)程及結(jié)果3．結(jié)尾(ending)——寫(xiě)出實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)論[常用詞塊]1．makegoodpreparationsfortheexperiment為實(shí)驗(yàn)做好充分準(zhǔn)備2．dotheexperimentasfollows按照如下做實(shí)驗(yàn)3．findabetterwayofdoingit找到一個(gè)更好的方式來(lái)做它4．beunderobservation正在觀察中5．makeagoodstudy做好充分研究[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開(kāi)頭1．Wecarryouttheexperimenttofindoutwhyitrusts.我們做實(shí)驗(yàn)是為了查明它為什么會(huì)生銹。2．Theaimoftheexperimentistofindthecauseofgivingawaythegas.實(shí)驗(yàn)的目的是找到氣體泄露的原因。3．Withthepurposeofdiscoveringhowitreactswithacid，wecarryouttheexperiment.為了發(fā)現(xiàn)它是怎么和酸發(fā)生反應(yīng)的，我們進(jìn)行了這次實(shí)驗(yàn)?！镎募丫?．Beforewestarted，wepreparedacandle，aglass，abasinandsomewater.開(kāi)始之前，我們準(zhǔn)備了一支蠟燭，一個(gè)玻璃杯，一個(gè)盆子還有一些水。2．Theglassmustbealittlehigherthanthecandlesothatwecanseetheresultmoreeasily.玻璃杯必須比蠟燭稍高一點(diǎn)兒，以便于我們能夠更容易看清結(jié)果。3．Wewereastonishedtoseethatthewaterlevelintheglasswashigherthanthatinthebasin.我們很吃驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)玻璃杯里的水位高于盆子中的水位?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Wehadaninterestingexperimentlesson.我們上了一堂非常有意義的實(shí)驗(yàn)課。2．Weweregreatlyimpressedwiththeprocessofburning.我們對(duì)燃燒的過(guò)程印象非常深刻。3．Theexperimentintroducedustoausefulwayofexploringtheunknownfield.這次實(shí)驗(yàn)為我們介紹了一種探索未知領(lǐng)域的有用的方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告。實(shí)驗(yàn)?zāi)康模簻y(cè)量鎂在空氣中加熱后重量是否有變化實(shí)驗(yàn)用品：鎂(magnesium)，本生燈(Bunsenburner)，天平(balance)，坩堝(crucible)實(shí)驗(yàn)步驟：1.把鎂放進(jìn)坩堝內(nèi)；2.把坩堝放在天平上稱(chēng)重；3.點(diǎn)燃本生燈，加熱坩堝；再把坩堝放在天平上稱(chēng)重；5.比較兩次稱(chēng)重的結(jié)果。試驗(yàn)結(jié)果：第二次稱(chēng)重?cái)?shù)據(jù)大于第一次稱(chēng)重的數(shù)據(jù)實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)論：鎂在空氣中加熱后重量有變化【學(xué)生習(xí)作】Aim：findoutifthere'sachangeinweightaftermagnesiumisheatedinair.Thingstouse：magnesium,aBunsenburner,abalanceandacrucible.Process：First，putthemagnesiuminthecrucible.Andweighthem.Next，lighttheBunsenburnerandplacethecrucibleoverittoheatthemagnesium.Finally,weighthemagain,andcomparethetwoweights.Result：alittleheavierthanbefore.Conclusion：Thereisachangeinweightaftermagnesiumisheatedinair.[點(diǎn)評(píng)]1.要點(diǎn)不夠齊全，不符合實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)性原則。2.實(shí)驗(yàn)?zāi)康?、?shí)驗(yàn)用品和實(shí)驗(yàn)步驟單列條目，未能形成報(bào)告的形式。【升格作文】Theaimoftheexperimentistofindoutifthere'sachangeinweightaftermagnesiumisheatedinair.Tocarryouttheexperiment,youneedthefollowingthings:magnesium,aBunsenburner,abalanceandacrucible.Whenalltheseareready,youcanbegintheexperiment.First,putthemagnesiuminthecrucible.Thenputthecrucibleonthebalanceandweighthem.Next,lighttheBunsenburnerandplacethecrucibleoverittoheatthemagnesium.Finally,weighthemagain,andcomparethetwoweights.Youcanseethemagnesiumweighsalittleheavierthanbefore.That'sbecausethereisachangeinweightaftermagnesiumisheatedinair.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇短文，說(shuō)明整個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)的內(nèi)容。實(shí)驗(yàn)?zāi)康模翰淮驙€雞蛋取走蛋殼。實(shí)驗(yàn)器材：一個(gè)玻璃杯，一個(gè)小鍋，水，一個(gè)雞蛋，醋(vinegar)約250毫升實(shí)驗(yàn)步驟：1．把雞蛋放在鍋中煮十五分鐘左右；2．把煮熟的雞蛋放到玻璃杯中；3．往玻璃杯中倒醋，醋要漫過(guò)雞蛋；4．讓雞蛋在醋中浸泡24小時(shí)。實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果：24小時(shí)后，雞蛋殼完全消失。實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)論：醋中的酸性物質(zhì)(acid)與蛋殼中的碳酸鈣(calciumcarbonate)反應(yīng)生成二氧化碳(carbondioxide)蛋殼(shell)消失?！緟⒖挤段摹縏heaimoftheexperimentistomovetheshellfromaneggwithoutbreakingtheegg.Tocarryouttheexperiment,youneedthefollowingthings:aglass，asmallpot/boiler,somewater,aneggandabout250mlvinegar.Whenallthesethingsareready,youcanbegintheexperiment.First,boiltheeggforabout15minutesinapotfilledwithwater.Next,placetheeggintheglassandcoveritwithvinegar.Afterthat，leavetheegginvinegarfor24hours.24hourslater,youcanseetheshelldisappearcompletely.Theeggshelldisappearsbecauseitismadeupofcalciumcarbonatewhilethevinegarisanacid.Thetwosubstancesreacttoformthegas,carbondioxide.Unit4Amazingart描寫(xiě)一件藝術(shù)品本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目是描寫(xiě)一件藝術(shù)品，屬于說(shuō)明文的范疇。藝術(shù)品是具有藝術(shù)價(jià)值的創(chuàng)意物品，它包括：繪畫(huà)類(lèi)、書(shū)法類(lèi)、攝影類(lèi)、文藝類(lèi)(音樂(lè)、舞蹈、戲劇等)、雕塑類(lèi)、陶瓷類(lèi)、傳統(tǒng)工藝品以及民間工藝品等等。描述藝術(shù)品需要對(duì)該藝術(shù)品的作者以及創(chuàng)作背景、材質(zhì)、形狀、構(gòu)造、特點(diǎn)等作客觀而準(zhǔn)確的說(shuō)明。用語(yǔ)言文字把該物品形象逼真地呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前，同時(shí)表達(dá)自己對(duì)它的喜愛(ài)之情。因此寫(xiě)作時(shí)要抓住它的特點(diǎn)，以及從中獲得的樂(lè)趣、啟迪或者幫助。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——作品簡(jiǎn)介，交代該藝術(shù)品的基本信息2．主體(body)——具體描述，介紹該藝術(shù)品的詳細(xì)信息3．結(jié)尾(ending)——評(píng)價(jià)并寫(xiě)出自己關(guān)于該藝術(shù)品的評(píng)論[常用詞塊]1．canhardlytearmyselfawayfromit愛(ài)不釋手2．feelthehardshipsoftheworkingpeople感受到了勞動(dòng)人民的艱辛3．myfavoriteartwork我喜歡的藝術(shù)品4．bringingpeoplejoyandenjoyment給人們帶來(lái)歡樂(lè)，帶來(lái)享受5．symbolizejoyandhappiness象征快樂(lè)和幸福[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開(kāi)頭1．ThecraftyachtonmydeskisuniqueinshapeandinthenationalstyleofVenice，Italy.在我的書(shū)桌上放著的工藝品游艇造型別致且具有意大利威尼斯的民族風(fēng)格。2．Theworkof“ClayFigurineZhang”isahandicraftoffolkcolouredsculpture.“泥人張”的作品是民間彩塑的工藝品。3．MyfavoritepaintingistheEightHorsespainting.我最喜歡《八駿圖》這幅畫(huà)了。★正文佳句1．Thewholematchingofcoloursisveryharmonious.整個(gè)色彩的搭配非常協(xié)調(diào)。2．Eachofthefourclayfigureslooksdifferentandlifelike.四個(gè)泥人個(gè)個(gè)神態(tài)各異，栩栩如生。3．Thereseemedtobesomethingthatsurprisedhim.好像有什么東西讓他大吃一驚，不知所措?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Whenweseethesandpassingby，it'slikeseeingthetwobrothersofhourhandandminutehandracing.每當(dāng)我們看到沙子的流逝，就好像看到時(shí)針和分針兩兄弟在賽跑。2．Thishorsegivespeopleconfidence.WheneverIloseconfidenceandseeit，itimmediatelygivesmeconfidence.這匹馬讓人有了信心。每當(dāng)我失去了信心，看到它，立即信心十足。3．Itwillencouragemetogoforwardbravelyinmystudyandlife.它將鼓勵(lì)著我在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中勇往直前?！丢?dú)釣》(AnglingAlone)是中國(guó)近代著名藝術(shù)作品之一，由中國(guó)著名畫(huà)家齊白石所作。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹這一作品?！緦W(xué)生習(xí)作】AnglingAloneisdrawnbyQiBaishi.QiBaishiisafamouspainterinChina.Inthispicture,wecanseemountainsinthedistance,ariverandsometrees.Ontheriverthereisasmallboat,andafishermanissittingonit,fishingononeendoftheboat.Wecanseetheweatheriscold,butthefishermanisstillfishing,hopingtocatchsomefishtofeedhisfamilies.Thepainterdescribedsuchvividimagethatwecanfeeltheatmosphereofcoldnessandloneliness.[點(diǎn)評(píng)]1.作品介紹過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，要點(diǎn)不全，重點(diǎn)不突出。2.不能形象生動(dòng)地展現(xiàn)作品內(nèi)容，讓讀者見(jiàn)文后心中有圖?！旧褡魑摹緼nglingAlone,drawnbythewell-knownpainterQiBaishi,isoneofthefamouscontemporarypaintingsinChina.Inthispicture,wecanseehugeblackmountainsinthedistance,awideriveratthefootandsomebaretreesbytheriverside.Therearen'tanyleavesonthebranches,revealingthatitislateinwinter.Ontheriverfloatsasmallboat,afishermanseatedsilentlyononeendoftheboat.Thoughitissocold,thefishermanisstillfishingwithgreatattention,hopingtocatchsomefishtofeedhisfamilies.Thepainterdescribedsuchvividimagethatwecanfeeltheatmosphereofcoldnessandloneliness.請(qǐng)描述一件你喜愛(ài)的藝術(shù)品，可以是繪畫(huà)類(lèi)、書(shū)法類(lèi)、攝影類(lèi)、文藝類(lèi)(音樂(lè)、舞蹈、戲劇等)、雕塑類(lèi)、陶瓷類(lèi)、傳統(tǒng)工藝品以及民間工藝品等。并且寫(xiě)出你喜愛(ài)它的原因。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．行文連貫，內(nèi)容積極向上?！緟⒖挤段摹縊nthetablebesidemyTV，thereisasmallandbeautifulhourglass.Itisnotasbigasotherworksofartbutverydelicate.Itismadeofglasswiththreeparts:thetwobottlesconnectedwitheachotheronbothsidesandthesupportingblackpoles.Inthemiddleisaverynarrowtunnel，throughwhichthesandinonebottleslowlyflowstotheother.Thewholehourglassisnotcolourful，butonlyinblackandwhite，butIthinkthesetwocoloursareenough.Ithinkthatonlyblackandwhitecoloursarematchedtogiveawonderfulfeeling.Thepassingsandtellsusthattimeisalsopassing.Weshouldcherisheveryminuteandsecond，andnotletthetimepassinvain.Weshouldstudyhardandbeusefultothesociety.Unit5Whatanadventure!如何寫(xiě)探險(xiǎn)類(lèi)記敘文本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目是描述一次探險(xiǎn)或者冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷，屬于記敘文文體。記敘文有六大要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果。探險(xiǎn)類(lèi)文章需要注意重點(diǎn)要放在“探險(xiǎn)”上；主人公是有意識(shí)地去做的，而不是偶然或者意外發(fā)生的事情。另外需要體現(xiàn)探險(xiǎn)的意義所在，讀過(guò)之后能讓讀者有所啟發(fā)。通常用過(guò)去相關(guān)的時(shí)態(tài)。在文章里要寫(xiě)出自己做了什么，自己看見(jiàn)了什么，以及自己的感受。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——交代探險(xiǎn)發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及內(nèi)容；2．主體(body)——詳細(xì)說(shuō)明探險(xiǎn)的經(jīng)過(guò)或過(guò)程；3．結(jié)尾(ending)——寫(xiě)出對(duì)探險(xiǎn)的評(píng)價(jià)以及自己的感受。[常用詞塊]1．savetheearth拯救地球2．takethetimemachine乘坐時(shí)光機(jī)3．flypastthestars飛過(guò)星球4．betransformedintoaninsect變成了昆蟲(chóng)5．beeatenbyamonster被怪物吃掉[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開(kāi)頭1．Whenitcomestotheadventurestory，theMagicSchoolBuscameintomymindfirst.一說(shuō)到冒險(xiǎn)故事，我首先想到的就是《神奇校車(chē)》。2．Speakingoftheadventure，Iexperiencedoncethreeyearsago.說(shuō)起冒險(xiǎn)，我三年前經(jīng)歷了一次。3．Ifyouwanttoexperiencethetravelinspace,let'sreadthefollowingstorytogether.如果你想感受太空旅行，我們一起來(lái)讀讀下面的故事吧?！镎募丫?．Weflewthroughthetunnelandgotintothetimemachine.我們飛躍隧道，進(jìn)入了時(shí)光機(jī)器。2．Iwasswimmingintheseawhenabigsharkappearedseveralmetersawayfromme.我正在海里游泳，突然一條大鯊魚(yú)出現(xiàn)在離我?guī)酌走h(yuǎn)的地方。3．Theyjumpedintothetreeholeandthenshrankintoalittlemanofthesamesizeasamouse.他們跳入樹(shù)洞，然后縮成了像一只老鼠大小的小人?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Thelittlegirlcametoherselfandfoundshewasstillsleepingunderthetree.小姑娘蘇醒過(guò)來(lái)，發(fā)現(xiàn)自己依然睡在樹(shù)底下。2．TillnowIstillfeelfrightenedatthethoughtofthatadventure.直到現(xiàn)在，一想起那次冒險(xiǎn)我依然感到恐懼。3．Theherointhemoviesavedthepeopleintroubleandtaughtmetobekindandhelpfultopeoplearoundme.電影中的男主角拯救了苦難中的人們，教會(huì)我要對(duì)周?chē)娜松屏?，要?lè)于幫助他們。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇記敘文，描述你的一次探險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。注意：詞數(shù)80左右?！緦W(xué)生習(xí)作】WhenIwasachild,Ihadanadventure.Istillrememberitverywell.Beingnaughty,Iandtwoboysmadeanadventureintothecaveatthebackofourvillage.Wewereveryexcitedtofindsomestrangestonesneverseenbefore.Wewentintothecave.Soonitbecamecompletelydark.Wecouldn'tseeanythingandcouldn'tfindourwayback.Wewereafraidandcried.Fortunately,myfatherandsomevillagerscametofindus.Weweresafe.IamsodeeplyimpressedthatIshallneverforgetit.[點(diǎn)評(píng)]1.對(duì)探險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷描述比較淺顯，重點(diǎn)在于“探險(xiǎn)”的過(guò)程。2.情節(jié)的描述不夠生動(dòng)，不能讓人讀后難忘?！旧褡魑摹緼sachild,IexperiencedanadventurewhenIwasalittlechild.Asanaughtyboy,I,togetherwithanothertwoboys,wasdeterminedtomakeanadventureintothecaveatthebackofourvillage.Wewereveryexcitedtofindsomestrangestonesneverseenbeforeandwentfurtherintothecave.However,thedeeper,thedarker.Soonitbecamecompletelydarkbeforewerealizedit,andwecouldn'tseeanythingandcouldn'tfindourwayback.Wefeltfrightenedandburstintotears.Fortunately,myfatherandsomevillagerscametofindus.Weweresafe.IamsodeeplyimpressedthatIshallneverforgetit.你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，今年暑假和父母去了夏威夷。期間經(jīng)歷了人生第一次潛水探險(xiǎn)。請(qǐng)以日記的形式描述自己的這一次冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷，并寫(xiě)出從中自己的所思所想所獲。1．潛水地點(diǎn)是普普克阿海灘公園(PupukeaBeachPark)；2．我剛開(kāi)始聽(tīng)說(shuō)這里有時(shí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)鯊魚(yú)，有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心，但因?yàn)樗鼈円话悴粫?huì)主動(dòng)攻擊人類(lèi)，我嘗試下水；3．這里是一個(gè)海洋生物保護(hù)區(qū)，海里的魚(yú)類(lèi)非常豐富，還有海龜；4．因?yàn)楹＠锶墙甘枰⒁獍踩?．建議想要去的朋友最好選擇每年的夏季，海面平靜且海浪很小的最佳浮潛季節(jié)。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．內(nèi)容積極向上，可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)以使行文流暢?！緟⒖挤段摹縏odaytheadventurestoryismyfirstdivingexperience.IntheearlymorningmyparentsandIwenttoPupukeaHearingthebasicdosanddon'tsincludingtheinformationofsharks，Idarenottojumpintothesea.Afterthecoach'sexplanationIjumpedinwiththeguide.AtfirstIdidn'tseeanyfishbutsomecoralsandseaweeds.SoonIfoundgroupsoffishesofallkindsandtheturtles.WhatshockedmemostwasthatIshouldseesomesharksrunningafterthefishgroupswithmyowneyes.Divingexperienceisimpressiveandunforgettable.Weshouldbekindtotheseacreaturesandliveinharmonywiththem.Unit6Disasterandhope安全指南類(lèi)說(shuō)明文的寫(xiě)作本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目是寫(xiě)安全指南類(lèi)的書(shū)面表達(dá)，屬于說(shuō)明文的范疇。這類(lèi)表達(dá)要求根據(jù)可能遇到的危險(xiǎn)的內(nèi)容有針對(duì)性地寫(xiě)出遇險(xiǎn)時(shí)的安全指導(dǎo)。注意寫(xiě)作的主題時(shí)態(tài)通常以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；語(yǔ)言要精煉，思路要清晰，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用祈使句。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——寫(xiě)作的背景及目的，分析遇到的危險(xiǎn)2．主體1(body1)——介紹危險(xiǎn)來(lái)臨前的各種準(zhǔn)備3．主體2(body2)——危險(xiǎn)中的各種應(yīng)對(duì)措施4．主體3(body3)——寫(xiě)出危險(xiǎn)中不應(yīng)該做的[常用詞塊]1．Organizepersonnelprotection組織人員防護(hù)2．Movetoasafeplace轉(zhuǎn)移到安全地帶3．Avoidwalkingonbanksandbridges避免在岸邊和橋上行走4．Payattentionwhenwalkinginwater.在積水中行走要注意觀察。5．Getoffthehighhill從高山上下來(lái)6．don'tclimbthetreeswhenthereislightning閃電時(shí)不要爬樹(shù)7．Coveryourmouthandnosewithwetclothesortowel用濕的衣物或毛巾捂住口鼻8．Holdyourheadquickly迅速抱住頭部9．Sendthepoisonedorburnedpersontohospital將中毒或燒傷人員送醫(yī)院救治[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開(kāi)頭1．Ifyouaretrappedinthefloodwhatwillyoudotohelpyourself?如果你被困在洪水中，你該怎么做來(lái)自救？2．Ifyoufindsomewherearoundyouisonfire，howwillyouescapesafely?如果你發(fā)現(xiàn)周?chē)哪硞€(gè)地方著火了，你怎么安全逃生？3．Whenthereisanearthquake，youmustobeythefollowingrulestokeepyourselfsafe.如果發(fā)生地震，你必須遵循以下規(guī)則來(lái)保證自己的安全?！镎募丫?．Attentionshouldbepaidtopreventsmokepoisoning，preventsuffocation.要注意防止煙霧中毒，預(yù)防窒息。2．Whenopeningaroomdoor，touchthedoorwiththebackofyourhandfirst，seewhetheritishot.開(kāi)房間門(mén)時(shí)，先用手背接觸房門(mén)，看是否發(fā)熱。3．Whenyoucan'tescape，don'thideintheatticorcloset.當(dāng)無(wú)路可逃時(shí)，不要藏在頂樓或者壁櫥等地方。4．Learnmoreself-rescuecommonsenseinadvance.提前學(xué)會(huì)更多的自救常識(shí)?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Helpingthosewhoareinneedismakingagreatdifference.幫助需要幫助的人讓這個(gè)世界大不同。2．Keepinmindthatyoushouldkeepcalmanddon'tpanic.要記住保持冷靜不要慌亂。地震是常見(jiàn)的自然災(zāi)害。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇安全指南