四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練課件

2015年6Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledOnExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinebelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.1.目前許多商品存在過度包裝的現(xiàn)象2.出現(xiàn)這一現(xiàn)象的原因3.我對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法和建議四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練大綱要求：寫作(writing)部分是測(cè)試學(xué)生用英語進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能力，所占分值比例為15%，考試時(shí)間為30分鐘。要求：三段式，字?jǐn)?shù)120，時(shí)間30分鐘四級(jí)考試題型為六大類：現(xiàn)象解釋型，問題解決型，觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型，諺語論證，以及應(yīng)用文和圖表作文。描述現(xiàn)象、分析原因、個(gè)人看法仍是四級(jí)考試寫作部分主要考查的重點(diǎn)四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練提高寫作的五條原則

practice：從現(xiàn)在開始到考試，本學(xué)期至少寫五篇作文；選其中三篇最好作文，作為成績。input：要有必要的輸入。要多看范文，背范文。在理解的基礎(chǔ)上，把范文的精彩句子、詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)默寫。同時(shí)熟記不同類型論文的句子框架。outline：動(dòng)手寫作文前要根據(jù)題目或者中文提綱，把英語關(guān)鍵詞寫下，以確保作文不離題。vary：作文的句子要多變。要在練習(xí)中敢于嘗試使用新的句型和詞匯表達(dá)。revise：作文最后定稿前，至少改三遍。第一遍自己改，第二遍請(qǐng)班上兩名同學(xué)幫改，第三遍重新檢查，抄正后再交給老師。

四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練LearningObjective

＊Evaluatetwopointsofviewandchoosewhichoneyouagreewith.＊

Practicewritinganintroduction,bodyparagraphandaconclusion.＊Writingpractice四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練要求從正反兩方面對(duì)某一事物加以論述。這類議論文有其固定的模式，如就某一事物或現(xiàn)象給出兩種完全對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)，然后再擺出自己的看法；或是先說明某一事物的重要性，積極因素，然后再說明該事物的危害性、消極因素等。觀點(diǎn)1+觀點(diǎn)2+個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)描述現(xiàn)象+觀點(diǎn)1、2（積極性、消極性）+個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型(正反兩點(diǎn)論式)議論文四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練歷年四級(jí)作文20015年12月ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?1.名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)（描寫現(xiàn)象）2.校園是否應(yīng)對(duì)游客開放，人們看法不同（觀點(diǎn)1+觀點(diǎn)2）3.我認(rèn)為……（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練歷年四級(jí)作文20014年12月OntheSpringFestivalGala1、許多人喜歡看cctv春節(jié)晚會(huì)（現(xiàn)象+觀點(diǎn)1）2、但有的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該取消（觀點(diǎn)2）

3、你的看法（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練歷年四級(jí)作文20013年6月RecreationalActivities1.娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣（描寫現(xiàn)象）2.娛樂可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性（積極性+消極性）3.作為大學(xué)生，我的看法（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練例題一：MyViewOnJob-hopping有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因?yàn)椤行┤讼矚g經(jīng)常更換工作，因?yàn)椤业目捶▽?duì)比選擇型(正反兩點(diǎn)論式)作文分析

1四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練Paragraph1:introductionMyViewonJob-hoppingEveryone‘sattitudetowardjob-hoppingisdifferent.Somepeoplethinktheywilldoonejobuntilretirement.

Theyoftensaysomethinglikethis:Takeuponething,likeitandbegoodatit.

（引用法）Thesepeoplethinkthatonlywhentheyareabsorbedinonejobcantheydoitwell.（半倒裝句型）第一段：第一句首先概括主題現(xiàn)象。本段第二句為主題句，第三、四句通過引用某類人的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)主題句進(jìn)行解釋或者說明。四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練

Bycontrast,

otherpeopleliketochangejobsfromtimetotime.Intheiropinion,theaimofdoingajobisonlytogetmoremoney.Sowhentheyhaveachancetogetabetter-paidjobcertainlytheyoughttoseizethechance.第二段：段首句為主題句，中心思想是“l(fā)iketochangejobsfromtimetotime”；第二、三句為發(fā)展句。在對(duì)第一、二段進(jìn)行銜接時(shí)，文章使用了信號(hào)詞“Bycontrast”。Paragraph2:body四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練Paragraph3:conclusion

Myviewonjob-hoppingfallsbetweenthetwoviewpointsexpressedabove.IthinkifIhaveajobthatreallysuitsme,I'lldoitallmylife.Nootherjobcanattractmenomatterwhatthebenefitsmaybe.ButifIdon'tgetasuitablejob,I'llchangeituntilIfindsomethingsatisfactory.Inaword,Iwanttofindajobthatsuitsme;moneyandotherthingsarenotunderconsideration.

第三段：談?wù)摗拔业目捶ā睍r(shí)，作者并沒有單純傾向于哪一種觀點(diǎn)。段首句中作者首先解釋：我的觀點(diǎn)介于兩者之間；之后，又在發(fā)展句中對(duì)其態(tài)度作了進(jìn)一步說明。四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練point1point2YourviewFurtherexplanation(reason)Summary(restate)Furtherexplanation(reason)Furtherexplanation(reason)四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練例題二：

PrivateCars：GoodOrEvil1.有人認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)積極推廣私人汽車

2.有人認(rèn)為我們不應(yīng)推廣私人汽車

3.你的看法四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練PrivateCars:GoodorEvil

Withtheimprovementofpeople‘slivingstandard,somepeoplehaveboughtcarsoftheirown,andothersareplanningtobuycars.（用一到兩個(gè)句子描寫現(xiàn)象，不要過度描寫）。Thereisageneraldiscussionnowadaysaboutthegoodorevileffectsprivatecarsmaybringus.Tothisproblem,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.

開頭段：段落第一句為概述，通過具體的現(xiàn)象引起讀者的共鳴。第三句為論點(diǎn)，論點(diǎn)的主題：“differentviews”。Paragraph1:introduction四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練

Thosewhofavorprivatecarsmaintainthat

privatecarsarehighlydesirableforobviousreasons.

（主題句）InthebigcitiesofChina,busesareoftencrowdedandslow,especiallyduringrushhours.Iftherearemoreprivatecars,peoplecangetaroundeasily.Besides,bydrivingcars,theymightbewellprotectedfromthebadweather,andcoverlongdistancesrapidlyandpleasantly.（分論點(diǎn)；舉例）主體段：主題句為第一句。中心思想是“obviousreasons”；發(fā)展句中，作者運(yùn)用了公共汽車擁擠和小汽車的種種便利這兩個(gè)事實(shí)，對(duì)中心思想進(jìn)行說明。Paragraph2:bodypart四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練

However,therearethreechiefreasonsforthosepeoplewhoareagainstcars.

（主題句）First,carsarethemaincauseoftrafficaccident.（分論點(diǎn)）

Thousandsuponthousandsofpeoplehavebeenkilledorinjuredbycaraccidentsallovertheworld.（舉例）Second,carownershavetopayvastsumsforroadtaxandotherfeeseveryyear.Thisisabigdrainontheirresources.Finally,privatecarownersinChinamayhaveallkindsoftrouble,suchasgettingadrivinglicenseandfindingaparkinglot.（舉例）Paragraph2:bodypart四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練

Astome,thelatteropinionismoreacceptable.Althoughcarshavesomanyobviousbenefits,theyaretooluxuriousfortheoverwhelmingmajorityofChinesepeopletoownthem.Therefore,wemaysaythatitisstillearlyatpresentforthepopularizationofprivateearsinourcountry.結(jié)尾段：本段中，作者先在第二句話介紹了原因，第三句話闡述了作者的具體觀點(diǎn)——普及轎車為時(shí)尚早。Paragraph3:conclusion四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練point1point2YourviewGeneralstatement(describethephenomenon)Furtherexplanation(example+reason)SummaryFurtherexplanation(example)Furtherexplanation(reason)四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練小結(jié)一篇好的作文首先要有好的結(jié)構(gòu)（寫提綱，不離題）句子、段落之間合理使用連接詞句子主題句明顯說理之后要舉例豐富恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂锰厥獾木涫剑◤?qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、條件狀語從句）爭(zhēng)取在文章中要有一到三個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。（詞匯、詞組、句型）四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練在寫作正反兩點(diǎn)論式文章時(shí)，我們可以借助以下句型：1.Whenaskedabout...,quiteafew/many/most/thevastmajorityofpeoplethink/believethat...Butotherpeopleregard/see/view/thinkof...as...Ithinkquite/abitdifferently.2.Whenitcomesto...,somepeoplethink/believethat...Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments/statements,butIthink...四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練在寫作正反兩點(diǎn)論式文章時(shí)，我們可以借助以下句型：3.Thereisapublicdebate/discussion/controversytoday/nowadayson

/about/overtheproblem/issueof...Thosewhocriticize/oppose/objectto...contend/arguethat….Theybelievethat...Butpeoplewhoadvocate/favor...,ontheotherhand,maintain/assertthat...4.Nowalotof/many/themajorityof/mostpeoplebelieve/think/feelthat...Admittedly,…,thereisno/littleevidencethat四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練結(jié)尾段常用引出“我”的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的句型：AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewith…就我而言，我支持…Astome,theformer/latteropinionismoreacceptable.對(duì)我來說，前/后一種觀點(diǎn)更可以接受。Formypart,Iamonthesideof…對(duì)我來說，我站在…那邊。AsIseeit,…就我看來…Frommyperspective,I…就我而言，我…四級(jí)作文之觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比選擇型議論文寫作訓(xùn)練兩者都對(duì)Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright,weshouldtake