高考英語建議信2

建議信2廖澤凱得分情況課外作業(yè)Lora來信說他想利用暑假打工，但父母不同意。假定你是李華，請給Lora寫一封回信。要點如下：1.Lora打算利用暑假打工。2.

Lora父母不同意的理由。3.你給Lora的具體建議。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。DearLora,Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadvice.

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Anyway,Iwouldbemorethanhappytowishyouapleasantsummer.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua第一人稱和第二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時1.Lora打算利用暑假打工。2.

Lora父母不同的理由。3.你給Lora的具體建議。第一段：你〔Lora〕打算暑假打工，你的父母不同意。第二段：父母不同意的理由。第三段：我給的建議第四段：我希望你過一個愉快的暑假。模板+單詞+短語+句型1.人稱和時態(tài)所有同學均使用了第一人稱指代LiHua；第二人稱指代Lora。所有同學均使用了一般現(xiàn)在時表述文章的主體局部。2.要點和結構使用了四段，且第二段講述了“你的父母不同意做兼職工作的原因”；第四段講述了“我的建議”的同學：黃圓圓；陳典；鄧一飛；張志文；柳昂然。3.表達：建議信模板DearJim，

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter______formyadvice___howto________(引出主題).

Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto______.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato______.Youcanalso_____.(此三句不同的句式提出建議).Asto___,Isuggest_____(有時根據(jù)需要,具體到某一反面).Inaddition,_____(其他建議).I'msure_____(預測可能的結果，給對方以行動的信心和決心).

I'mlookingforwardto_____(表達愿望).Sincerelyyours,XXaskingon說服某人做某事persuadesb.intodoingsth.同意某人agreewithsb.就...達成一致意見agreeon/aboutsth.同意某人做某事agreethatsb.coulddosth.做兼職工作doapart-timejob3.表達：單詞，短語，句型說服你的媽媽同意你做兼職工作persuadeyourmotherintoagreeingthatyoucoulddoaparttimejob認為學習是最重要的任務regardlearningasthemostimportanttask太小了不適應工作tooyoungtowork利用暑假來學習makeuseofthissummerholidaytostudy平安adj.safe平安n.safety做某事太危險itisdangerousforsb.todosth.單獨一人工作太危險itisdangerousforyoutoworkalone.和某人貼心交談haveaheart-to-hearttalkwithsb.為學習和工作制作一個詳細的方案makeadetailedplanforyourstudyandwork足夠大來處理好事情beoldenoughtomanagethingsproperly讓你的朋友和你一起工作askyourfriendstoworktogetherwithyou讓某人知曉〔你的情況〕keepsb.informed3.語篇評講Trytofindadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthesesentencesbyyourselves!Trytoimprovethosesentences〔大家來找“茬”〕第一段：孫思源Thewordcomesthatyourparentsdisagreewithyoudopart-timejobduringsummervacation.優(yōu)點：Thewordcomesthat據(jù)說缺乏：disagree用法錯誤提升方法：不同意某人做某事disagreethatsb.coulddosth.Thewordcomesthatyourparentsdisagreethatyoucoulddoapart-timejobduringsummervacation詞組，句型提升第一段：肖詩穎Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtomakeuseofsummerpart-timegiveyourparentsagreement.優(yōu)點：Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceon...缺乏：語法錯誤，句子太長！提升方法：用persuade和agree表達“說服你的父母同意你能在暑假做兼職”.詞組句型提升：Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtopersuade〔吳曉龍，柳昂然〕yourparentsintoagreeingthatyoucoulddoapart-timejobinsummervacation.詞組，句型提升Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtopersuadeyourparentsintoagreeingthatyoucoulddoapart-timejobinsummervacation.Whatiswrongwiththissentences？Itistoolong！劉燦Ihavejustreadyourletteraskingmyadviceonsummerpart-timejob.Youwanttodoapart-timejob.Butyourparentsdisagreed.Herearemyconstructive〔魏康〕suggestions.句號，連詞分割，分句表達第二段劉輝：Theydon'tagreeit,Maybetheyjustworryyoursafeoryourage.優(yōu)點：理由充分：考慮到平安和年齡。缺乏：1.agree表達不同意某人？maybe的詞性？safe的詞性？提高：他們不同意你，因為他們僅僅只是擔憂你的平安；并且他們認為你太小了，而不適合做兼職。Theydon'tagreewithyou,becausetheyjustworryaboutyoursafety〔姜民揚〕.Besides，theymaythinkyouaretooyoungtowork.連詞，過渡詞連接，分句表達！吳玉蘭：Ithinkyoushouldputyouselfinyourparents'sshoes.Maybeintheiropinions,theythinkyouaretooyoungtodoapart-timejob.優(yōu)點：putonselfinonesshoes：與某人換位思考缺乏：parents’諺語，名言提升作文！Whichsentencedoyoulikebest？第二段〔張澤士〕Butyourparentsdisagree.Theysaidthatwillinfluenceyourstudy.〔陶瓊〕Theythinkthestudyismoreimportantthanpart-timejob.〔范文〕Yourparentsmayregardlearningasthemostimportanttaskforyou.Perhapsthey'dlikeyoutomakeuseofthissummerholidaytostudy.第三段：陳雪梅Butyoualsoknowgetajobinthissummerholidayisbeneficialforyourability.Soclamyourselfdownandhaveacommunicationwithyourparentstheymustunderstandwithyoutoo!優(yōu)點：邏輯連貫，說理充分缺乏：語法錯誤提升Butyoualsoknowgettingajobinthissummerholidayisbeneficialforyourability.Soclamyourselfdownandhaveaheart-to-hearttalkwithyourparents〔羅七一〕.Ibelievetheycanunderstandyoutoo!動名詞做主語，句型，分割句子，單詞用法！黃圓圓However,ifyoureallyhaveaninteresttodothepartjob,itisvitalthatyoushouldtakesaftetyintoaccount.優(yōu)點：itisvitalthatshould+do原型takesth.intoaccount缺乏：搭配錯誤提升：However,ifyoureallyhaveaninterestindoingthepart-timejob,itisvitalthatyoushouldtakesafetyintoaccount.短語用法提升！黃子恒Butremember,don'tqurrelwithyourparents.Ifyoudothis,yourparentswillfeelsadandtheywillneveragreeyourplan.優(yōu)點：建議中提到了本卷須知。缺乏：語法錯誤，agreeonyourplan提升：吳玉蘭Ifyourparentsstilldisgreewithyou，youshouldfollowtheiradviceanddon'targuewiththem.程博Iftheystilldon'tagree,Iadviseyoutalkwithyourparentspatiently,(and)don'tbeangrywiththem.王婷：Inmyopinion,youcanfindajobinalibrarysothatyoucannotonlygetajob,butalsostudyingatthesametime.Itmaybeawin-winidea.優(yōu)點：圖書館工作，學習工作兩不誤notonly...butalso...不僅...而且...awin-winidea雙贏的方法；缺乏：studying改為study邱騫Theyareafraidyouindanger,too.SoIthinkyou