初中九年級英語課件Task A guide to living on Mars 名師獲獎

Task:AguidetolivingonMarsWatchaShortVideoStephenHawkingPre-writingexplodein200yearsDearNo.89757TheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.It’snecessaryforustomoveawayfromtheEarth.SoI’mwritingtoyoutolearnaboutthelifeonMars.HowcanwegettoMars?WhatshouldwewearonMars?Arethereanydifferentkindsofentertainment?EarthisourhomeandIreallydon’twanttomoveawayfromit,canyougivemesomesuggestions?

Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou.SandyGreetingBodySignaturePre-writingEndingYourssincerelyFormatBeginningMainbodyConclusionBeginning:Expressfeelings:happygladexciteddelightedamazedafraidcrazyunbelievableWhile-writing(Beginning)surprisedShowthepurpose:I’mreallygladtohearfromyou/receiveyourletter.Thankyouforyourletter.…I’mwritingtoyoutolearnaboutthelifeonMars.Iwanttoknow……scaredI’mwritingtoyouto…While-writing(Summary)OutlineBeginningI’mwritingtoyouto…Thankyouforyourletter.…I’mgladtohearfromyou.Q1:HowcanwegettoMars?WecangettoMarsbyspacecraft.Theycantravelatthespeedoflight.TopicsentenceSupportingsentenceWhile-writing(Body)WritingTip1:UsetopicsentencetoexpressideasUsesupportingsentencestoshowreasons anddetailsQ2:WhatshouldwewearonMars?Youshouldwearaspacehelmet,apairofspecialbootsandcarryanairtank.TopicsentenceBecausethegravityislow,andtheaironMarsismuchthinnerthanthatontheEarth.SupportingsentenceWhile-writing(Body)entertainmentLow-gravitybasketballgamesOnlinegamesTravellinginspaceOnlinetheatersQ3:ArethereanydifferentkindsofentertainmentonMars?Whatarethey?Sure,ofcourse.TherearelotsofthingstodoonMars.TopicsentenceWhile-writing(Body)SupportingsentencesLifeonMarsisalsovery________________.ColorfulQ4:IfIdon’twanttomoveawayfromtheEarth,canyougivemesomesuggestions?You’dbetterprotecttheenvironment.While-writing(Body)WaterpollutionAirpollutionLightpollutionNoisepollutionSoilpollutionAsweknow,theEarthisbecomingmoreandmorepollutedandcrowded.You’dbettertakeactionstocontroltherapidincreaseofpopulation.While-writing(Exercise)You’dbetterprotecttheenvironment.WhynotWhydon’tyouHow/Whatabout=_______________youshouldprotecttheenvironment.=_______________protecttheenvironment?=_______________protecttheenvironment?=_______________protectingtheenvironment?=_______________toprotecttheenvironment.=____________________toprotecttheenvironment.PerhapsIt’sbetterforyouIt’sagoodideaforyouWritingTip2:Usedifferentsentencestoshowthesame meaningWhile-writing(Summary)MainbodyQ1:YoucangettoMarsbyspacecraft.Theycantravelatthespeedoflight.Q2:Youneedtowearaspacehelmet,apairofbootsandcarryanairtank,because…Q3:TherearealotofthingsyoucandoonMars.Youcan…Q4:AsweknowtheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.You’dbetter…First,Then,Next,Finally,WritingTip3:UseconnectingwordsConnectingWordsorderFirst…Second…Then…Finally…Reason&ResultAsaresultsoBecause(of)contrastHoweverbutAdditionAlso/TooBesidesWhat’smoreMoreoverNotonly…butalso…ExamplesForexampleSuchas…ConclusionIngeneralInawordWhile-writing(Exercise)LifeonMarsis___________colorful__________challenging.Youcandoalotofthings.______,youcanplaylow-gravitybasketballgame._________,youcan______playonlinegames.___________,lifeonMarsisfullofchallenges._____________,youmayfloatoffintospace_______________thelowgravity.__________________,IhopeyoucanenjoythelifeonMars.While-writing(Summary)OutlineBeginningMainBodyTopicsentence1supportingsentences1,2Topicsentence2supportingsentences1,2……I’mwritingtoyouto…Thankyouforyourletter.I’mgladtohearfromyou.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouonMarssoon.Ihopemyadviceisworthtaking.Conclusion:While-writing(Conclusion)Expressfeelingsandhopes:Ihopemyadviceisvaluabletoyou.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.While-writing(Summary)OutlineBeginningMainBodyConclusionTopicsentence1supportingsentences1,2Topicsentence2supportingsentences1,2……I’mwritingtoyouto…Thankyouforyourletter.I’mlookingforwardto…Ihopemyadviceisworthtaking.……While-writing(Checking)

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While-writing(Practice)DearNo.89757TheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.It’snecessaryforustomoveawayfromtheEarth.SoI’mwritingtoyoutolearnaboutthelifeonMars.HowcanwegettoMars?WhatshouldwewearonMars?Arethereanydifferentkindsofentertainment?EarthisourhomeandIreallydon’twanttomoveawayfromit,canyougivemesomesuggestions?Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou.YourssincerelySandy

WriteareplytothisletterWhile-writing(Practice)DearSandy_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyNO.89757ShowtimeWhile-writing(Evaluation)DearSandy_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyNO.89757ShowtimeAfter-writing(Practice)DearSandyI’mreallygladtohearfromyou.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutlifeonMars.

First,youcangettoMarsbyspacecraft.Theycantravelatthespeedoflight,soitwillonlytakeyouashorttime.

Then,youneedtowearaspacehelmet,apairofbootsandcarryanairtank,becausethegravityislowandtheairismuchthinner.

Next,therearealotofthingsyoucandoonMars.Itwillbeapityifyoumissthelow-gravitybasketballgame,becauseit’sveryamazing.

Finally,asweknowtheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.It’sbetterforyoutoprotecttheenvironmentandcontroltherapidincreaseofpopulation.IamlookingforwardtoseeingyouonMarssoon!

YoursNO.89757SampleDoyouchoosetoliveontheEarthoronMars?