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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為
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左右。SaraSavickremembersonespecialEasterwhenshewasnineyearsold.Herparentsgaveherababyducklinginayellowbasket.“Momsaidlaterthatsheboughtthelittleduckbecauseshefeltsorryforit,”recalledSara.ThepeopleatthepetstorecoloredthefeatherspinkforEaster.SaranamedtheduckPinky.Sara’smotherreallydidn’tthinkthebabyduckwouldsurviveverylong.Buttohersurprise,Pinkygrewandgotstrongerandstronger.Soon,thelittleducklingwasahealthy,hungryduckwithwhitefeathers.“WefedPinkyoatmeal,cookedanduncooked,andsmallpiecesofvegetables,”saidSara.PinkylivedinsidethehousewithSaraandherfamily.ShespeciallyfanciedtakingbathswithSara.EveryonetreatedPinkyasafamilymember.Butjustwheneverythingappearedtobeperfect,thenightofthe“talk”came.Sara’sMomandDadsatherdown,explainingthatthebestthingforPinkywastoliveanormalducklife,withotherducks.Itwasnotnaturalforduckstoliveindoorswithafamily,herfathertoldher.HeaddedPinkyneededtoswiminpondsanddoallthesamethingsthatducksinthewilddo.Sarastartedtocry,knowingwhatwasgoingtohappen.Sara’sparentsdecidedtotakePinkytoapark,whichwastwomilesaway.Therewasapondwithalotofotherducks.PinkywouldhavethechancetoliveanaturallifeandSaracouldstillvisither.
Thebigdaycame,SaraandherparentsputPinkyinaboxanddrovetothepark.SarasaidthatPinkydidnotlookhappy;maybePinkywasconvincedthatshewasahuman,notaduck.注意:所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為
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左右;續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好;Paragraph1EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSara’sfather.Paragraph2Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn’tbelievehereyes!Writinganalysis1.Maincharacters:①Sara②Herparents2.Theme:ManandNature——OnthespecialEasterdaywhenSarawasnineyearsold,hermotherboughtapinkducklingfromapetstoreandnameditPinkDuck.Atthattime,IthoughtPinkywouldn'tlivelong,butlittledidIknowthattheducklinggrewupveryhealthyunderthecareofhisfamilyandbecameamemberofthefamily.However,oneday,myfatherandmotherdiscussedthatweshouldlettheduckreturntohernormallife.Despitenumerousreluctance,theydecidedtosendPinkytoaparktwomilesawayfromhome,tobewiththeduckslivinginthewild.Theimportantdayhasfinallyarrived3.Continuingplotarrangement:Thefirstparagraph:EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkatthepond,evenSara'sfather①I(mǎi)t'sdifficulttosaygoodbye,butwehavetoseparate.②WhatSaradidforPinkyandwhatshesaw.③AlthoughIfeelthatPinkywillsoonintegrateintoit,Istillcan'tletgooftheburdenThenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldnotbelievehereyes!Agroupofducksarewalkingtowardshome.②Saragoesouttowelcomeandwarmlyentertaintheducks.Allspiritsandallthingsshouldhavetheirrightfulwayoflife.【故事大意】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。SaraSavick九歲時(shí)的復(fù)活節(jié),父母送給她一只小鴨子Pinky,在他們的精心照顧下Pinky漸漸長(zhǎng)大,有一天父母告訴Sara,Pinky必須回到野外和其他鴨子過(guò)一樣的生活,他們決定把Pinky帶到附近公園的一個(gè)池塘,那一天到來(lái)了?!纠m(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)發(fā)展】續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段,第一段開(kāi)頭是:當(dāng)他們把Pinky放到池塘離開(kāi)時(shí),每個(gè)人都很難過(guò)……所以應(yīng)該寫(xiě)Pinky第一天到池塘發(fā)生的事情,即他們依依不舍里離開(kāi)池塘,其他鴨子看到Pinky后的反應(yīng)及Sara對(duì)Pinky的擔(dān)心等內(nèi)容。第二段開(kāi)頭是:第二天早上,當(dāng)向廚房窗戶(hù)外面看時(shí),Sara不敢相信自己的眼睛……本段應(yīng)該寫(xiě)Sara看到的情況,即Pinky回到了家里,Sara不知道它是怎么做到的,父母看到后把Pinky放回池塘,但是Pinky再次回到家里,Sara激動(dòng)得緊緊抱著Pinky?!敬鸢浮縀veryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSara’sfather.ButhetriedtoconvinceSarathatPinkywasfine.Walkingtowardsthecar,SaralookedoverhershoulderandsawPinkystandingalone.Theotherduckswereswimmingaroundincircles,lookingatPinky.ToSara,itseemedthattheyweretryingtoidentifythestrangeanimal.Theydidn’trecognizePinkyasaduck.WorriedaboutPinky,SaradreamedofPinkybeingbulliedbyotherducksthewholenight.Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn’tbelievehereyes!TherewasPinky,happilywalkingaroundonthegrass.Thrilledatwhatshesaw,shekeptaskingherself,”Howdidshemakeit?”Afterall,itwastwomilesawayandhemanagedtowalkbackthroughthecitystreet.Incredible!ButherparentsdrovePinkybacktothepondagainregardlessofherrequest.Thefollowingmorning,therewasPinkyagainonthegrass!SeeingPinky
again,herfather,wavinghisarmsaboutwildly,movedhislipswithoutsayinganything.Meanwhile,Sarah,overjoyed,huggedPinkytightly,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.下水文:EveryonewassadwhentheyleftPinkyatthepond,evenSara’sfather.ButhetriedhisbesttocomfortSara,don'tbetoosad,Pinkywillbeokay.Reluctantlywalkingtowardsthecar,SarakeptlookingbackandsawPinkystandingalone.Theotherducksareswimmingincircles.Theyseemtobetryingtorecognizetheunwelcomeguest.Veryuneasy,Pinkycreakedanxiously,flappingherwingsasifbeggingthemnottoseparatefromthemandleaveherbehind.Onthewayhome,Saradidn'tsayawordandloweredherheadinsilence.Thatnight,Sara'smindflashedwithcountlessscenesofPinkybringingherhappiness.Shetossedandturned,unabletosleepallnight.
Thenextmorning,whenlookingoutofthekitchenwindow,Saracouldn’tbelievehereyes!
Infrontofherwasherfavoriteduck,Pinky,whowaspacingbackandforthintheyard.Howdidshefindherself?Afterall,itistwomilesawayfromthepark.Sarascreamedexcitedly,openedherarmsandrushedtowardsPinky,affectionatelycaressingherneck,buti
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