sat writing破題與例子展開(kāi)

啄木鳥(niǎo)教育戴林業(yè)SAT寫(xiě)作——破題與例子展開(kāi)3Happiness&Choices(2013-1)Shouldpeoplechangetheirbehaviordependingonwhatsituationtheyarein??2023/11/22ChoiceOptionHappinessControl

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Dosuccessandhappinessdependonthechoicespeoplemakeratherthanonfactorsbeyondtheircontrol?Ishappinesssomethingoverwhichpeoplehavenocontrol,orcanpeoplechoosetobehappy?Isourabilitytochangeourselvesunlimited,oraretherelimitsonourabilitytomakeimportantchangesinourlives?Isitbettertochangeone'sattitudethantochangeone'scircumstances?2023/11/22幸福是個(gè)人可以選擇的嗎？我們有能力改變自己的生活嗎？應(yīng)該改變自己的態(tài)度還是改變環(huán)境？2023/11/22Dosuccessandhappinessdependonthechoicespeoplemakeratherthanonfactorsbeyondtheircontrol?2023/11/221.TOPSENTENCE2.BACKGOUNDINFO主角存在的劣勢(shì)，不幸3.HOWDIDHEPURSUEHISHAPPINESS主角經(jīng)過(guò)個(gè)人努力取得的成就HowtoDeveloptheParagraph?FactorsBeyondControlRaceClassGenderHealthRaceBarackObamaMorganFreeman,WillSmith,OprahWinfrey,李昌鈺HenryChang-YuLee(李昌鈺)Chinese-born

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averytypicalonetoexplaintheimportanceofself-determinationtoone'shappiness.NickwasbornwithTetra-ameliasyndrome,araredisordercharacterizedbytheabsenceofallfourlimbs.Itwasinhisearlyyearsofschoolthatheencounteredfortabletimesoffeelingrejected,weirdandbulliedbecauseofhisphysicaldifference.2023/11/22However,withthesupportoffamily,Nickstartedtodevelopattitudesandvalueswhichhelpedhimethesechallengingtimes.Moreover,hefirmlyinsistedonencouragingandinspiringotherstolivetotheirfullestpotentialandnotletanythinggetinthewayofplishingtheirhopesanddreams.Hestartedhisownnon-profitorganizationLifeWithoutLimbsatageseventeen.Andcurrentlyheiswidelyknownasamotivationalspeaker,givingtalksworldwideonlifewithadisability,hope,andfindingmeaninginlife.Hedeliversthespeech"Noarms,nolegs,noworries"whichencouragesagreatnumberofyoungpeople.2023/11/22Nickalsoexhibitsthatdisability

bearsnorelationshiptohappiness,whichalldependssolelyuponwhatpeoplethink.2023/11/22Foronething,thestoryofNickVujicicisaverytypicalonetoexplaintheimportanceofself-determinationtoone'shappiness.NickwasbornwithTetra-ameliasyndrome,araredisordercharacterizedbytheabsenceofallfourlimbs.Itwasinhisearlyyearsofschoolthatheencounteredfortabletimesoffeelingrejected,weirdandbulliedbecauseofhisphysicaldifference.However,withthesupportoffamily,Nickstartedtodevelopattitudesandvalueswhichhelpedhimethesechallengingtimes.Moreover,hefirmlyinsistedonencouragingandinspiringotherstolivetotheirfullestpotentialandnotletanythinggetinthewayofplishingtheirhopesanddreams.Hestartedhisownnon-profitorganizationLifeWithoutLimbsatageseventeen.Andcurrentlyheiswidelyknownasamotivationalspeaker,givingtalksworldwideonlifewithadisability,hope,andfindingmeaninginlife.Hedeliversthespeech"Noarms,nolegs,noworries"whichencouragesagreatnumberofyoungpeople.Nickalsoexhibitsthatdisabilitybearsnorelationshiptohappiness,whichalldependssolelyuponwhatpeoplethink.2023/11/22Foronething,thestoryofNickVujicicisaverytypicalonetoexplaintheimportanceofself-determinationtoone'shappiness.NickwasbornwithTetra-ameliasyndrome,araredisordercharacterizedbytheabsenceofallfourlimbs.Itwasinhisearlyyearsofschoolthatheencounteredfortabletimesoffeelingrejected,weirdandbulliedbecauseofhisphysicaldifference.However,withthesupportoffamily,Nickstartedtodevelopattitudesandvalueswhichhelpedhimethesechallengingtimes.Moreover,hefirmlyinsistedonencouragingandinspiringotherstolivetotheirfullestpotentialandnotletanythinggetinthewayofplishingtheirhopesanddreams.Hestartedhisownnon-profitorganizationLifeWithoutLimbsatageseventeen.Andcurrentlyheiswidelyknownasamotivationalspeaker,givingtalksworldwideonlifewithadisability,hope,andfindingmeaninginlife.Hedeliversthespeech"Noarms,nolegs,noworries"whichencouragesagreatnumberofyoungpeople.Nickalsoexhibitsthatdisabilitybearsnorelationshiptohappiness,whichalldependssolelyuponwhatpeoplethink.2023/11/22Foronething,thestoryofNickVujicicisaverytypicalonetoexplaintheimportanceofself-determinationtoone'shappiness.NickwasbornwithTetra-ameliasyndrome,araredisordercharacterizedbytheabsenceofallfourlimbs.Itwasinhisearlyyearsofschoolthatheencounteredfortabletimesoffeelingrejected,weirdandbulliedbecauseofhisphysicaldifference.However,withthesupportoffamily,Nickstartedtodevelopattitudesandvalueswhichhelpedhimethesechallengingtimes.Moreover,hefirmlyinsistedonencouragingandinspiringotherstolivetotheirfullestpotentialandnotletanythinggetinthewayofplishingtheirhopesanddreams.Hestartedhisownnon-profitorganizationLifeWithoutLimbsatageseventeen.Andcurrentlyheiswidelyknownasamotivationalspeaker,givingtalksworldwideonlifewithadisability,hope,andfindingmeaninginlife.Hedeliversthespeech"Noarms,nolegs,noworries"whichencouragesagreatnumberofyoungpeople.Nickalsoexhibitsthatdisabilitybearsnorelationshiptohappiness,whichalldependssolelyuponwhatpeoplethink.2023/11/22Foronething,thestoryofNickVujicicisaverytypicalonetoexplaintheimportanceofself-determinationtoone'shappiness.NickwasbornwithTetra-ameliasyndrome,araredisordercharacterizedbytheabsenceofallfourlimbs.Itwasinhisearlyyearsofschoolthatheencounteredfortabletimesoffeelingrejected,weirdandbulliedbecauseofhisphysicaldifference.However,withthesupportoffamily,Nickstartedtodevelopattitudesandvalueswhichhelpedhimethesechallengingtimes.Moreover,hefirmlyinsistedonencouragingandinspiringotherstolivetotheirfullestpotentialandnotletanythinggetinthewayofplishingtheirhopesanddreams.Hestartedhisownnon-profitorganizationLifeWithoutLimbsatageseventeen.Andcurrentlyheiswidelyknownasamotivationalspeaker,givingtalksworldwideonlifewithadisability,hope,andfindingmeaninginlife.Hedeliversthespeech"Noarms,nolegs,noworries"whichencouragesagreatnumberofyoungpeople.Nickalsoexhibitsthatdisabilitybearsnorelationshiptohappiness,whichalldependssolelyuponwhatpeoplethink.2023/11/22Foronething,thestoryofNickVujicicisaverytypicalonetoexplaintheimportanceofself-determinationtoone'shappiness.NickwasbornwithTetra-ameliasyndrome,araredisordercharacterizedbytheabsenceofallfourlimbs.Itwasinhisearlyyearsofschoolthatheencounteredfortabletimesoffeelingrejected,weirdandbulliedbecauseofhisphysicaldifference.However,withthesupportoffamily,Nickstartedtodevelopattitudesandvalueswhichhelpedhimethesechallengingtimes.Moreover,hefirmlyinsistedonencouragingandinspiringotherstolivetotheirfullestpotentialandnotletanythinggetinthewayofplishingtheirhopesanddreams.Hestartedhisownnon-profitorganizationLifeWithoutLimbsatageseventeen.Andcurrentlyheiswidelyknownasamotivationalspeaker,givingtalksworldwideonlifewithadisability,hope,andfindingmeaninginlife.Hedeliversthespeech"Noarms,nolegs,noworries"whichencouragesagreatnumberofyoungpeople.Nickalsoexhibitsthatdisabilitybearsnorelationshiptohappiness,whichalldependssolelyuponwhatpeoplethink.內(nèi)因VS外因論點(diǎn)：成功和幸福是可以選擇的例子#1美國(guó)總統(tǒng)肯尼迪來(lái)自于顯赫的肯尼迪世家，爸爸是波士頓銀行總裁?？夏岬铣蔀槊绹?guó)歷史上最年輕最帥最有口才最受歡迎的總統(tǒng)。2023/11/22例子#2奧巴馬身世復(fù)雜，幼時(shí)父母離異，從此由母親撫養(yǎng)。他通過(guò)個(gè)人努力成為美國(guó)歷史上第一位非裔美國(guó)總統(tǒng)。2023/11/22OprahWinfrey2023/11/22OprahWinfreyborninapoorfamilyrapedbyhercousin,pregnantat14abusedbymotherOprahWinfreyShow:bighitBorninpovertyandraisedinabrokenfamily,OprahWinfreyexperiencedconsiderablehardshipduringherchildhood:shewasrapedbyhercousinatnineandbecamepregnantat14.Shealsosufferedfromabusebyherfrustratedmother.However,allthemisfortunedidn’tdevastateher.Uponenteringmedia,Shewasaskedtohostalow-ratedmorningtalkshow.WithinmonthsafterWinfreytookover,theshowwentfromthelasttothetopshowinChicago.Latertheshowbecamesopopularthatitwasrenamed“TheOprahWinfreyShow”.Theshowinspiredandmovepeoplefromallovertheworld.Winfreywasratedasoneofthe100MostInfluentialPeopleofthe20thCenturybyTimemagazine.Borninpovertyandraisedinabrokenfamily,OprahWinfreyexperiencedconsiderablehardshipduringherchildhood:shewasrapedbyhercousinatnineandbecamepregnantat14.Shealsosufferedfromabusebyherfrustratedmother.However,allthemisfortunedidn’tdevastateher.Uponenteringmedia,Shewasaskedtohostalow-ratedmorningtalkshow.WithinmonthsafterWinfreytookover,theshowwentfromthelasttothetopshowinChicago.Latertheshowbecamesopopularthatitwasrenamed“TheOprahWinfreyShow”.Theshowinspiredandmovepeoplefromallovertheworld.Winfreywasratedasoneofthe100MostInfluentialPeopleofthe20thCenturybyTimemagazine.Borninpovertyandraisedinabrokenfamily,OprahWinfreyexperiencedconsiderablehardshipduringherchildhood:shewasrapedbyhercousinatnineandbecamepregnantat14.Shealsosufferedfromabusebyherfrustratedmother.However,allthemisfortunedidn’tdevastateher.Uponenteringmedia,Shewasaskedtohostalow-ratedmorningtalkshow.WithinmonthsafterWinfreytookover,theshowwentfromthelasttothetopshowinChicago.Latertheshowbecamesopopularthatitwasrenamed“TheOprahWinfreyShow”.Theshowinspiredandmovepeoplefromallovertheworld.Winfreywasratedasoneofthe100MostInfluentialPeopleofthe20thCenturybyTimemagazine.

LIES&LOYAL

（2012.1）Isitwisetobesuspiciousofthemotivesorhonestyofotherpeople,eventhosewhoappeartobetrustworthy?2023/11/22

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TopSentenceBackground(why)TellthewhitelieEnding;summaryHowtoDeveloptheParagraph?2023/11/222023/11/221.A1997Italianfilm2.AcademyAwardforBestForeignLanguageFilm3.Guido;AJewishItalian4.NaziconcentrationcampLavitaèbella2023/11/22Giosué

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Dora2023/11/221.GuidoOrefice2.employhisfertileimaginationtohelphisfamilyduringtheirinternmentinaNaziconcentrationcamp.3.hidesJoshuafromtheNaziguardsandsneakshimfoodInanattempttokeepupJoshua'sspirits,GuidohidestheirtruesituationfromhissonbyconvincingJoshuathattheconcentrationcampisacomplicatedgameinwhichhemustperformthetasksGuidogiveshim,andwhoevergetstoonethousandpointsfirstwillwinatank.Hetellshimthatifhecries,complainsthathewantshismotherorcomplainsthatheishungry,hewilllosepoints,whilequietboyswhohidefromthecampguardsearn1,000points.Tofurtherprovethatthecampisagamehepretendstotranslatetheguard'sinstructionsunderLife-threateningsituation.2023/11/222023/11/222023/11/22Shieldhissonfromthehorrorsofinternment2023/11/22SetuptheconcentrationcampasagameforJoshua2023/11/222023/11/222023/11/22Bereunitedwithhismother.2023/11/22他的智慧讓他的兒子從嚴(yán)重危險(xiǎn)的處境最終獲救。Whilethesoldierisleadinghimtohisdeath,GuidopassesbyJoshuaonelasttime,stillincharacterandplayingthegame.LifeIsBeautifulisa1997ItalianfilmwhichtellsthestoryofaJewishItalian,GuidoOrefice,whomustemployhisfertileimaginationtohelphisfamilyduringtheirinternmentinaNaziconcentrationcamp.（故事背景）

GuidohidesJoshua'（hisson）fromtheNaziguardsandsneakshimfood.InanattempttokeepupJoshua'sspirits,Guidoconvinceshimthatthecampisjustagame,inwhichthefirstpersontoget1,000pointswinsatank.Hetellshimthatifhecries,complainsthathewantshismotherorcomplainsthatheishungry,hewilllosepoints,whilequietboyswhohidefromthecampguardsearn1,000points.Tofurtherprovethatthecampisagamehepretendstotranslatetheguard'sinstructions.(whitelies)

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managestosurvive,reunitewithhismother,andeventhinkshehaswonthegamewhenanAmericantankarrivestoliberatethecamp.Guido'sbraveryandoptimisminspireshisfamilyduringthetoughtimeandhiswhiteliesprotectsJoshua',offeringhimasecondchancetolive.(whitelie的結(jié)果)Homework:Wouldtheworldbeabetterplaceifeveryonealwaystoldthecompletetruth?Step1:Makeclearyourpoint參考句式：Thefirstthesisthatcomestomymindwhenthinkingabout____is_______.Despiteassortedeffusionstothecontrary,itisanindisputablefactthat________Tofurthermydiscussion,onepointmustbemadeclear,that_________,anideathatfindsitstruthintheavarietyofexamplesandfacts.2023/11/222023/11/22《Thelastleaf》2023/11/221.AshortstorybyO.Henrypublishedin19072.AyounggirlnamedJohnsy;AnelderlyartistnamedBehrman;3.Bediagnosedwithpneumonia;Closetodeath4.Shewilldiewhenthelastleaffallsoffthevineoutsideherwindow;losesthehopeofrecovery5.Stormynight;rainandwind;6.Thereisstilloneleafleft;7.Regainwilltolive;makeafullrecovery8.Behrmanpaintedthelastleaftherethenightwhenitfell歐·亨利（O.Henry）《愛(ài)的犧牲》(AServiceofLove)、《警察與贊美詩(shī)》(TheCopandtheAnthem)、《帶家具出租的房間》(TheFurnishedRoom)、《麥琪的禮物》(TheGiftoftheMagi)、《最后的常春藤葉》（TheLastLeaf）AladynamedJohnsyesillwithpneumoniaandlosinghopeofrecovering.Sheconvincesherselfthatwhenthelastleaffallsoffthevineoutsidethewindow,shewilldie.AnoldFrenchman,namedBehrman,isafrustratedartistwholivesnearby,claimingthathewillpaintamasterpiece,eventhoughhehasneverevenattemptedtostart.(故事背景)2023/11/22

AfterhearingabouttheillnessofJohnsy,Mr.Behrmantookaladder,climbedthewall,andpaintedapictureofthelastleafonthebrickwallinthenight.（whitelies）Inthemorning,Johnsywantstoseethevine,tobesurethatalltheleavesaregone,buttotheirsurprise,thereisstilloneleafleft.Sheconvincesherselfthatfatecausedtheleaftostayonthevinesothatshewouldnotdie.Sheregainsherwilltolive,andmakesafullrecoverythroughouttheday.Mr.Behrman'skind