高中英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)課課件

WritingClass——Vivi2021/5/91Warmingup考考反應(yīng)力：隨著音樂(lè)拍手跺腳，老師說(shuō)turnleft,同學(xué)就turnright；老師說(shuō)turnright,同學(xué)就turnleft；老師說(shuō)turnround,同學(xué)就juststand；老師說(shuō)raiseyourighthand,同學(xué)就raiselefthand;老師說(shuō)raiseyourlefthand,同學(xué)就raiserighthand;。2021/5/92老師閱卷看什么？一看字體（字體工整）二看語(yǔ)言（語(yǔ)言高級(jí)）三看內(nèi)容（要點(diǎn)齊全）四看結(jié)構(gòu)（三段式結(jié)構(gòu)）2021/5/93一看字體2021/5/94二看語(yǔ)言（語(yǔ)言高級(jí)）2021/5/951.高級(jí)詞匯短語(yǔ)基本原則詞組優(yōu)先原則避免重復(fù)原則后高長(zhǎng)原則——后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯2021/5/961.詞組優(yōu)先原則【原文】Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.[修正]Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2021/5/972.避免重復(fù)原則[原文]Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.【修正】Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision2021/5/983.后高長(zhǎng)原則

——后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯

原詞：HardVeryPayattentiontoHappyMoreandmore替換詞：DiligentlyRather,extremelyAttachimportancetoDelightedenjoyableTheincreasingnumberof2021/5/99電腦在我們的生活中是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.Computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.2021/5/910為了學(xué)習(xí)音樂(lè)，她去了美國(guó)ShewenttoAmericainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAmericaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.我突然想到了個(gè)好主意SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.2021/5/9112.句式多樣，文章增“靚”各種從句非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞倒裝句強(qiáng)調(diào)句被動(dòng)句With的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)…….2021/5/912他昨天下午來(lái)的。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.(倒裝句）Itwasyesterdayafternoon

thathecamehere.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）2021/5/913Game:連詞滾雪球每人拿一張寫(xiě)有連詞的紙條，向后一個(gè)同學(xué)傳達(dá)自己的連詞，后一個(gè)同學(xué)給后面的同學(xué)傳達(dá)時(shí)需要先講前面同學(xué)的連詞再講自己的連詞。最后一個(gè)同學(xué)，把自己一組所有的連詞講出來(lái)，對(duì)一個(gè)加小組加一分，漏了不扣分。2021/5/914第一組：Atfirst(首先）;firstly（首先）;beside(此外）;secondly(第二）；Afterall(畢竟）；fortunately(幸運(yùn)地）；Asaresult(結(jié)果）；finally（最后);第二組：Firstofall(首先）；now（現(xiàn)在）Infact(事實(shí)上）；forexample（例如）Luckily（幸運(yùn)地）；inspiteof（盡管）Atlast(最后）；inaword(總之）2021/5/915第三組：Lately(最近）；tostartwith(首先）Inorderto(為了）；then(然后）Anyway（無(wú)論如何）；however(然而）Allinall(總之);finally（最后）第四組：Asaresult(結(jié)果）therefore（最后）Infact(事實(shí)上）；unfortunately(不幸福地）Beside(除此）；forexample(例如）Firstly(首先）；recently(最近）2021/5/9163.連詞一）表示“起”的詞/詞組：用于開(kāi)篇引出擴(kuò)展句。atfirst最初

；firstly第一；inthebeginning起初

firstofall首先；onetheonehand…ontheotherhand

一方面….另一方面

………2021/5/917（二）有關(guān)“承”的常用詞語(yǔ)：用來(lái)承接上文。Besides/what’s

more

而且；此外

in

other

words

換句話說(shuō)in

fact

事實(shí)上

……..（三）有關(guān)“轉(zhuǎn)”的常用詞語(yǔ)：用來(lái)表示不同或相反的意見(jiàn)luckily

幸運(yùn)地however

然而；無(wú)論如何though/although

盡管……..

2021/5/918（四）有關(guān)“合”的常用詞語(yǔ)：用于小結(jié)上文或結(jié)束本段落的內(nèi)容。eventually

最后

in

conclusion

總之，最后in

a

word

總之

……….

2021/5/919名人名言、諺語(yǔ)Thereisanoldsayingthat…….(常言道，）Game:將打亂的單詞組成一句完整的名言或諺語(yǔ)。搶答，哪個(gè)小組對(duì)了加一分，錯(cuò)了不扣分。2021/5/9201.mothersuccessofisthefailure

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失敗是成功之母。willaistheretherewhere,wayais

Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。2021/5/9213.RomeroadstoleadallAll

roads

lead

to

Rome.

條條大路通羅馬。4.louderspeakthanwordsactionAction

speak

louder

than

words

事實(shí)勝于雄辯impossibletoamindiswillingnothingNothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人2021/5/9226.ishalfwelldonebegunhalfWell

begun

is

half

done

好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半7.thandonesaideasierEasier

said

than

done

說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難2021/5/923

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失敗是成功之母。Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。All

roads

lead

to

Rome.

條條大路通羅馬。Action

speak

louder

than

words

事實(shí)勝于雄辯2021/5/924Nothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人W