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2021/5/91目錄考研英語寫作介紹議論文反面信息圖議論文正面信息圖議論文爭議信息圖應(yīng)用文考研英語寫作遣詞用句常見錯誤考研英語寫作遣詞用句升級練習(xí)2021/5/92考研英語寫作介紹小作文形式:應(yīng)用文內(nèi)容:信件為主分值:10分字?jǐn)?shù)要求:100詞左右時間要求:大約20分鐘大作文形式:議論文內(nèi)容:看圖說話分值:20分字?jǐn)?shù)要求:160-200詞時間要求:大約40分鐘2021/5/93應(yīng)試寫作的三個層次寫得出寫得對寫得好2021/5/94考研英語寫作難點大腦一片空白基本無話可說表達(dá)漏洞百出可讀性相當(dāng)差中式英語泛濫考官哭笑不得表達(dá)捉襟見肘詞句鮮有亮點口語痕跡明顯好似娓娓道來2021/5/95考研英語寫作要求謀篇:觀點突出結(jié)構(gòu)合理謀段:論證充分言之有物謀句:正確多變關(guān)聯(lián)謀詞:準(zhǔn)確多變2021/5/96課程安排

總體介紹考研英語寫作講解議論文反面信息圖寫作講解議論文正面信息圖寫作講解議論文爭議信息圖寫作講解應(yīng)用文寫作考研英語寫作遣詞用句常見錯誤考研英語寫作遣詞用句升級練習(xí)學(xué)生例文講解2021/5/972009年小作文：aletter大作文：看圖作文-互聯(lián)網(wǎng)2008年小作文：aletter大作文：看圖作文-合作2007年小作文：aletter大作文：看圖作文-心態(tài)2006年小作文：aletter大作文：看圖作文-追星2005年看圖作文:養(yǎng)老2004年看圖作文:終點又是新起點2003年看圖作文:溫室花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨2002年看圖作文:Culture--NationalandInternational2001年看圖作文：LoveIsaLamp2000年看圖作文:ABriefHistoryofWorldCommercialFishing1999年TheUpsandDownsofPopulationGrowth1998年MyViewonSo-calledPromise1997年看圖作文2021/5/98議論文題目分類反面信息圖:199820002003200520062007正面信息圖:2001200220042008爭議信息圖:2009圖表數(shù)據(jù)題:199719992021/5/992021/5/9102021/5/9112021/5/9122021/5/913第五檔（A9~10/B17~20）很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。包含所有內(nèi)容要點；使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語言自然流暢，語法錯誤極少；有效地采用多種銜接手法，文字連貫，層次清晰；格式與語域恰當(dāng)貼切。對目標(biāo)讀者（即語言接受對象）完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果2021/5/914第四檔（A7~8/B13~16）較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。包含所有內(nèi)容要點，允許漏掉一兩個次重點；使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語言基本準(zhǔn)確，只有在試圖使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較難詞匯時才有個別錯誤；采用了適當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?，層次清晰，組織較嚴(yán)密；格式與語域恰當(dāng)貼切。對目標(biāo)讀者（即語言接受對象）產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果2021/5/915第三檔（A5~6/B9~12）基本地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。遺漏一些內(nèi)容，但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點；應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的需求；有一些語法及詞匯錯誤，但不影響理解；采用了簡單的銜接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，層次清晰；格式與語域基本合理。對目標(biāo)讀者（即語言接受對象）基本產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果2021/5/916第二檔（A3~4/B5~8）未能按照要求完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。遺漏或未能有效闡述一些內(nèi)容要點，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容；語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯有限；有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解；未采用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?，?nèi)容缺少連貫性；格式與語域不恰當(dāng)。未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息給讀者。2021/5/917LoveIsaLampLoveisalampindarkness,andthemorethevoyageis,thestrongerthelightis.Likethelampvividlyportrayedinthepicture,lovemayseeminsignificantinatimeofpeaceandabundance,butitslightcomesintofocusinatimeofturbulenceandpoverty.Thesaying“afriendinneedisafriendindeed”exactlyshowshowmanifestlovecanbeinurgentneedofhelp.2021/5/91819’Toillustratethispointofview,IwilltakeTaoXingzhi,oneofthegreatesteducatorsinChina,forexample.Hewasonlytoowillingtoimpartlovetowhoeverneededitmost.Toimprovethesituationofmanypoorchildren,Mr.Taocommittedhimselftoestablishingaschoolespeciallycateringtothem.EvenafterMr.Tao’sdeath,thesechildrenstillboreinmindhiskindness,hisgenerosityandaboveall,hisunselfishness.2021/5/91919’Loveisneededeverywhere,nomatterbigorsmall.Itisthegoldenthreadthattiestheheartsallovertheworld.Aslongaswereserveaplaceforloveinourheart,itwillgrowandblossom,andyieldfruitsthatcanmaketheworldmorebeautiful.Let’sdosomething,anythingtogiveahandtoothers---thelightofloveseemstomeanlittletoyou,butmeansalottotheoneswrigglingindarkness.(223ws)2021/5/920LoveIsaLampLoveisconsideredtobeaffectionofmankind,butwhatistruelove?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Lookatthepictureabove:thereanoillampgivingofflightallthetime,withenergybeinguseduplittlebylittle.Suchislikelove,akindoflastingdevotioninsomeway.Theoillampwouldrathersacrificeitselftohelpotherswhoareinrealneed.2021/5/92116’Ioncecameacrossanessaytellingofagraduatedevotedherselftotheeducationcause.Aftergraduatingfromuniversity,shecouldhavefoundagoodjobandgotahandsomesalary.Insteadofdoingso,shewentbacktoherhometowninamountainareaandbecameateacherthere.Withoutmuchmoneyorcomfortablelivingconditions,she,however,gainedrespectfromsociety.Sheturnedoutquiteafewexcellentstudents,

moreimportantofall,shesetagoodexampleofhowtobecomeausefulpersonforherstudents.2021/5/92216’Asweallknow,loveisakindofdevotionandcommitment.Toshowloveinvolvessacrificeoneselftobenefitothers.Thegreatertheneedsare,themoreworthwhiletheloveappearstobe,justastheoillampinthepicture.Trytohelpothersgenerouslyandshowyourlove,thentheworldwillbefulloflove.(219ws)2021/5/923LoveIsaLampMyunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicurebelowisthatgivingyourhelptothosepeoplewhoareinthebiggesttroubleisthemostusefulforthemthananytime.Whenpeoplehavesomedifficultywhichtheycan’tdealwith,thethingtheymostwantisyourhelpandyourlove.yourhelpcanmakethemovercomeanythingandyourlovecanrenderthemmuchencouragement.Itisalightinglampindarkthatthehelpandloveyougivethem.2021/5/92412’Severalyearsago,someareassufferdisasterformtyhoon.Thegovernmenthelpthemrebuildtheirfamilies.In1999,asouthernprovincealsosuffersdisasterfromtheearthquake.Manypeopledotheirbesttohelpthembydonatingmoney,clothesandfood.2021/5/92512’Itisnecessarytotakesomemeasurestospreadlove.Foronething,weshouldencouragepeoplewhohaveloveandarehappytohelpothers.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethatloveisbenefitforsociety.What’smore,Ithinkthatonlyinthiswaywillwehaveabrightfuture.(200ws)2021/5/926LoveIsaLampInthedarkness,therealwaysaflame,evenitisshiningorwavinginthewildwind,itgivesoflightwhichleadsyoutoreachingthesunshine.Andheatthatwarmsyourheartwhenyouaregoingthroughmostdifficultiesmomentsinyourlife.Asweknow,loveisthemostpreciousfeeling.2021/5/9278’Lovehasamagicstrength.Itconquerevils.Createsplendidfuture,andchangetheworld.Sowelove,weneedanyonecontributetheirloves.Becauseweneedsunshine,andalsowantthewholeworldfullofthelove.Justtakeeverythingeasy.Showyoursmiletoguywhojustfailedtheexam,andyouwillbebetterthenexttime;bequietwhenyourroommatesaresleepingandyouwentbacklate.Thisisabsolutelytrue,accordingtooneofmyfriends:afterrecoveringfromaheavyill,herecalledlaterthathefeltgreatcomfortwhenmanyofhisclassmatescometoaskafterhim.2021/5/9288’Loveisineveryday.Ifyouarecarefulenoughandthinkingmoreaboutothers,youareshowingyourlove.Thehelpgivingtoafriendintroubleisthebestyoucanoffer(whatyouneedmost).That’sreallypreciousandnobleamongothers.(321ws)2021/5/929LoveIsaLampLoveisalamp.Thedarkeritis,moreshinethelightis.Thesayingisgreat.Inmodernsociety,loveplaysamoreandmoreimportantrole.Inspecialcountries,loveworkinaspecialway.2021/5/9304’Inourcountry,foodusedtolayanessentialroleinourlives.Withthedevelopmentofeconomic,thetimepassed.Wedon’tthinkaboutourhunger.Someonegivesyousomethingtoeat.Sometimes,youwillthinkthatthefoodissobad.Theloveissocheap.However,alittlefoodbecomessopreciousinotherpoorcountry.Thepeoplehavetolookforfoodeverywhereforhis/hernextdinner.There,thefoodsuppliedfreelybecomessoimportantthatmaybeinwillbringsomeup.2021/5/9314’However,whatisthewaytoshowourlove?Ithinkwhenweshowourlovewemustbehumanity.Weshouldgivelovetopersonwhoneedmost.Thenlovebecomesprecious.(158ws)2021/5/932高分秘訣要點全詞/句式多變錯誤極少行文流暢(邏輯承接詞)格式正確2021/5/933考研英語寫作的步驟審題正面？反面？爭議？圖表？構(gòu)思頭腦風(fēng)暴行文三思而落筆檢查

ThefirstdraftofanythingisSHIT.----ByHemmingway2021/5/934反面信息圖的寫法描述圖畫加以評論(現(xiàn)象原因后果)得出結(jié)論(態(tài)度對策總結(jié))2021/5/935描述圖畫Thepictureshowsthat…Alternativesof‘show’同義替換demonstrate/display/depict/reveal/present/illustrate/indicateAlternativesof‘picture’同義替換photo/cartoon/drawing修飾副詞:vividly/clearly2021/5/936描述圖畫Aswecanseefromthecartoon…Ascanbeclearlyseenfromtheabovepicture…Asisdisplayedinthedrawing…Asitisdisplayedinthedrawing…Thecartoonvividlydepicts…2021/5/937加以評論(現(xiàn)象原因后果)Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesacommonphenomenoninoursocietytoday:Bydrawingthepicture,thepainterintendstoinformusthat…Apparently,thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage:2021/5/938加以評論(現(xiàn)象原因后果)Thekeymessageconveyedinthepictureisthat…Thiskindofsituationcanbeseenin…Thecartoonconveysasignal:Thepicturedeliversamessage:Thedrawingisasymbolthat…2021/5/939加以評論(現(xiàn)象原因后果)Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommon/newphenomenoninChina/inourdailylife/intheyoungergeneration.Thispicture/cartoonconveysaclearmessage.2021/5/940加以評論(現(xiàn)象

原因后果)Thereareatleast…reasonsforthisphenomenon.Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon?2021/5/941加以評論(現(xiàn)象

原因后果)Manyfactorscontributeto/leadto/bringaboutthisproblem.Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthissocialphenomenon.Thecausesfortheproblemarecomplicated.2021/5/942首先其次再次Tobeginwith/Firstly/FirstandforemostSecondly/Inaddition/WhatismoreInthethirdplace/Furthermore/Lastbutnotleast2021/5/943加以評論(現(xiàn)象

原因

后果)Theeffectscouldbeadverse/serious/negative.Itwillhaveanegative/undesirableimpacton…Thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences.Thenegativeconsequencescanbeexpected.2021/5/944得出結(jié)論(態(tài)度對策總結(jié))Asforme…AsfarasIamconcerned…Frommyview…Fromapersonalpointofview…Ifirmlybelievethat…2021/5/945得出結(jié)論(態(tài)度

對策總結(jié))Mysuggestionastothebestwaytocopewiththeproblemisasfollows.Toeradicatetheproblem,afewsolutionsshouldbeprovided.NowIwouldliketopresentsomecountermeasurestodealwiththeproblem.2021/5/946得出結(jié)論(態(tài)度

對策總結(jié))Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem.Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures.Tosolvetheproblem,acombinedeffortisreallynecessary.2021/5/947得出結(jié)論(態(tài)度

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總結(jié))Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue.Onlyinthiswaycouldsuchathornyissuebesolved.Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture.Abrighterfuturecanbeexpectedifthesesolutionscouldbetaken.2021/5/948

20062021/5/949Aswecanseefromthetwophotosclearly,BeckhamhascrazyfansinChina.OneboywritesthenameofBeckhamonhisface,andtheotherdoesthehairstyleofBeckhaminthebarber’satthecostofRMB300.2021/5/950Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonintheyoungergeneration.Teenagersexcessivelyadmirestars.Manyfactorscontributetothisproblem.

2021/5/951Tobeginwith,theunder-agedarecurious,immatureandna?ve,andcanneitherresistthetemptationaroundnormakeasoundjudgment.Inaddition,familyandschoolfocusonacademicperformance,butignoremoralandvalueeducation.Lastbutnotleast,mediamisleadyoungstersbyalwayscoveringsomestaraffairs.2021/5/952Asaconsequence,theeffectscouldbeadverse.Theattentionoftheadolescentcouldbedistractedawayfromstudy,whichistheirsoletask,andsomeofthemmaygoastray2021/5/953Asforme,theyoungshouldnotworshipthestarsinsuchablindandcrazyway.NowIwouldliketopresentsomecountermeasurestodealwiththeproblem.2021/5/954Firstly,thejuvenileshouldlearnthevirtuesfromstar,suchashardworking.Whatismore,family,schoolandthemediashouldguidethemproperly,andinformthatstudydeservesmoretimeandenergythanstars.Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue.2021/5/955

20052021/5/956Thecartoonvividlydemonstratesafamilyfootballmatch,whichistotallydifferentfromaregularone.Withoutstrikers,only4goalkeepers,whoaresonsanddaughteroftheoldfather,areguarding4goalsrespectively.Besides,theoldfatheractsasaballtoreplacetherealone.2021/5/957Itisclearthatthepictureimpliesacommonphenomenoninoursocietytoday:theyoungergenerationtaketheirparentsasaburdenandrefusetotakecareofthem.Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon?Thechildrenoftheoldparentsmayburythemselvesincareerormakingafortune,andtheylosethebasicmoralandconscience.2021/5/958Soitwillhaveanundesirableimpactonbothindividualandsociety.Firstly,theoldmayendtheirlifeinpainandsorrow.Inaddition,thetraditionalvirtuesinsocietymaybelost.2021/5/959Frommyview,suchabehaviorshouldbecriticizedandcondemned.Tosolvetheproblem,acombinedeffortisreallynecessary.

Firstofall,theyoungergenerationshouldshouldertheresponsibilitytotakecaretheelderly.2021/5/960Secondly,thegovernmentshouldsetupasoundelderly-caresystemandcovermorepensionandmedicalcareexpenses.Onlyinthiswaycouldtheelderlyhaveahappylife.2021/5/961

20002021/5/962Thedrawingvividlydepictstheshockingdifferenceinfishingbetween1900and1995.In1900,asinglefishingboatandnumerousfishcouldbeseenintheocean.Totallyoppositely,in1995,theoceanaccommodatedcrowdedfishingboats,butonlyonefishwasinit.2021/5/963Bydrawingthepicture,thepainterintendstoinformusthathumanactivitieshaveadisastrousimpactonthenatureandleadtospeciesextinction.Anumberoffactorsareresponsibleforthissocialphenomenon.2021/5/964Firstandforemost,profit-orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycost.Besides,thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandecosystem.2021/5/965Thusthenegativeconsequencescanbeexpected.Resourcesareonthedecline,whichleadstoecosystemimbalanceandevenbreakdownfinally.Asaresult,humanbeingscannotsurviveonthisplanet.

2021/5/966AsfarasIamconcerned,environmentandnaturalresourceprotectionshouldbeintoppriority.Mysuggestionastothebestwaytocopewiththeproblemisasfollows.2021/5/967Tobeginwith,ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly,andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded.Secondly,thegovernmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulations,suchasthebanonfishingduringsomeperiodsoftheyear.Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture.2021/5/968

20072021/5/969Aswecanseefromthecartoon,inafield,akickerisreadytoshoot,whileakeeperisguardingthegoal.Meanwhile,thekeepersupposeshimselftobeadwarf,andthekickerconsidershimasagiant,whocoversthewholegoal.2021/5/970Thepicturedeliversamessage:somemayunderestimatetheirowncapabilitywhileoverestimatethedifficultyorchallenge.Inaword,theylackconfidence,whichusuallyleadstofailureandexamplesabound.2021/5/971Inthelong-distancerunning,someplayersmayconsiderthedestinationunreachableandstopinthehalfway.Besides,inthepreparationofNationalEntranceTestForMA/MSCandidates,somestudentswouldtakeitaslongandtoughexperienceandquitinthemidway

astheathletesdo.2021/5/972Fromapersonalpointofview,confidenceisofvitalimportance.Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasurestoimproveconfidence.2021/5/973Firstly,itisadvisabletosetupanachievablegoal.Asitisknown,theconfidencewouldcomebackifthetaskisnotsodemanding,suchasmemorizing50wordsadayinsteadof500.Inaddition,itisofnecessitytocheerfortinysuccess.Once50wordsarememorizedeachday,weshouldremindourselves:‘Icandoit.’Onlyinthisway

couldtheconfidencebeimproved.2021/5/974

20032021/5/975Asisdisplayedinthedrawing,aflowerblossomswellinagreenhouse,whichcanresiststorm.Incomparison,oncethegreenhouseisremoved,theflowercannotwithstandanymoreandwitherssoon.2021/5/976Apparently,thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage:aflowerwhichisusedtothegreenhousecannotsurviveinthedifficulty,andsimilarexamplesabound.2021/5/977Achildover-protectedbyparentscannotsurviveinthecut-throatcompetition.Likewise,anindustrysurroundedbynationalpreferentialpolicycannotcompetewithforeignrivalsworldwide.2021/5/978AsfarasIamconcerned,inordertogrow,almosteverythinghastobeputinthetoughenvironment.Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem.2021/5/979Accordingly,childrenshouldbeindependenttobereadyforthefuturecompetition,anddowhattheyareabletodo,suchascookingandhousework.Asforthegovernment,itshouldencourageenterprisestoexpand,goglobalandparticipateinbusinessworldwide.Onlyinthiswaycouldtheimmaturesurviveandsucceedwhentheyfaceplight.2021/5/980

19982021/5/981Asisdemonstratedinthecartoon,ahenismakinghercommitmentandclaimingtohaveroundandcompleteeggs,whicharewithoutedgesandcornersandcontainallessentialparts.2021/5/982Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenoninourdailylife.Itisridiculoustohavepromiseinallwalksoflife,andexamplesabound.2021/5/983Asitisfrequentlyseen,businessmenimpressthecustomerbyexaggeratingtheresponsibilitytheyshouldtake,suchasrefundablesystem.Similarly,banksemphasizesmileserviceandgovernmentauthoritiesclaimtoexamineandapproveapplicationwithinseveraldays.2021/5/984Therefore,thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences.Itistheresponsibilityofstores,banksandgovernmentauthoritiestoprovidedecentservice.Thesecommitmentsseemtoexceedwhattheyshouldoffer,andcustomersandcitizensmaybehonoredandflattered.However,infact,theirstatusdeclines.

2021/5/985Ifirmlybelievethatwedonotneedthesesuperficialwordsbuttheimprovementinallaspectstomeetthedemandofus.

Toeradicatetheproblem,afewsolutionsshouldbeprovided.2021/5/986Firstofall,consumersshouldnottaketheseridiculouscommitmentsasthebonusfrombusinessmenandgovernmentauthorities.Besides,thegovernmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstopreventthesepromisesandbehaviors.Onlybycooperationcouldaharmonioussocietybeestablished.2021/5/9872021/5/988Aswecanseefromthecartoon,ahen,issellinghereggsandclaimingtheyarebigandharmless.Inherhand,acertificateprovesthatnocontaminatedingredientisinhereggs.2021/5/989Bydrawingthepicture,thepainterintendstoinformus

thatfoodsafetyhasbecomeaveryseriousissuenationwide.Whatmayaccountforthissocialphenomenon?Tobeginwith,producers,forthesakeofeconomicprofit,pursuetheirsoleaimatanycostbyaddingcontaminatedingredienttothefood.2021/5/990Whatismore,thegovernmenthasloosesupervisiononthequalityoffood,whichmakescontaminatedmilkpowderandeggseasilyavailableinthemarket.2021/5/991Thus,itwillhaveanundesirableimpactonthehealthofcitizens.Contaminatedfoodmayleadtosomeincurablediseasesandevendeath.2021/5/992Asforme,foodsafetyshouldbeintoppriority.Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestodealwiththeproblem.Firstandforemost,manufacturers

shouldberequiredtotaketheresponsibilityofthequalityofproductsandensuretheyareharmless.2021/5/993Inaddition,governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstocombatcontaminatedfood.Onlyinthiswaycouldwesolvesuchathornyissue.2021/5/9942021/5/995Asisdisplayedinthedrawing,onawastelandwheretreeshavebeencutdown,littlemonkeyscanonlyplayandjumponthelongarmoftheirparents,insteadoftheforest.2021/5/996Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonworldwide.Humanactivitieshaveadisastrousimpactonthenatureandtotallydestroythehabitatsofanimals.2021/5/997Thecausesforitarecomplicated.Firstly,profit-orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycostbydepletingnaturalresources.Inaddition,thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandecosystem,ignoringorevenencouragingdeforestation.2021/5/998So,thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences.Agrowingnumberofspeciesareonthedangerlist,whichposesathreattothesurvivalofhumanbeings.2021/5/999Fromapersonalpointofview,environmentandnaturalresourceprotectionshouldbegivendueattention.Itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures.Tobeginwith,ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly,andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded.2021/5/9100Secondly,governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstoconserveourhome.Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture.2021/5/91012021/5/9102Thedrawingvividlydepictsthepuzzleoftheearth.Inawhiteplasticbagcarriedbyawoman,theearthisstrugglingtohaveabreath.2021/5/9103Whatthepicturereflectsmaybeacommonphenomenonworldwide.Pollutionhasadisastrousimpactonthenature.Thecausesforitarecomplicated.Firstly,forthesakeofconvenience,disposableandnon-degradableplasticbagsarewidelyused.2021/5/9104Inaddition,profit-orientedcommercialbehaviorspursuethesoleaimatanycostbypollutingenvironment.Furthermore,thegovernmenthasloosesupervisionontheenvironmentandpollution.2021/5/9105So,thiswillbringsomeseriousconsequences.Increasingpollution,whichmeanscleanwaterandfreshairarenolongeravailable,leadstoecosystemimbalanceandevenbreakdownfinally.Asaresult,humanbeingscannotsurviveonthisplanet.2021/5/9106Fromapersonalpointofview,environmentpollutioncontrolshouldbegivendueattention.Itisimperativeforustotakesomecountermeasures.Tobeginwith,ourbehaviorsshouldbemoreenvironmentallyfriendly,andsuchanawarenessshouldbepopularizedandupgraded.2021/5/9107Secondly,governmentshouldenactandenforcemorerigidlawsandregulationstoconserveourhome,suchasthebanonfreesupplyofplasticbagsindepartmentstoresandsupermarkets.Onlybycooperationcouldwehaveabrighterfuture.2021/5/91082021/5/91092021/5/91102021/5/9111Thecartoonvividlydepictsaninterestingphenomenon.Atnight,aboyislyingontheroofofhishouse.Withapapermarked59,heisscaredofgoingintotheroom,wherehisparentsarequarrellingbitterly.2021/5/9112Apparently,thepurposeofthispictureistoconveyamessage:nowadaysschoolchildrenareundertoomuchpressure.Manyfactorsbringaboutthisproblem.Firstofall,parentspayexcessivelycloseattentiontotheacademicperformanceoftheirchildrenandimposegreatpressureonthem.2021/5/9113Inthesecondplace,itistheimpropereducationsystemwhichjudgesthestudentsbyoneexaminationonlythatshouldtaketheresponsibility.2021/5/9114Asaresult,theeffectscouldbeadverse.Gradually,childrenwouldhavesomementalproblems,beingdepressedandisolated.Itisalsopossiblethattheymaygoastrayandevencommitcrime.2021/5/9115Frommyview,childrenshouldberelievedfromtheseverestress.Tosolvetheproblem,acombinedeffortisreallynecessary.Familyandschoolshouldconcentrateontheall-arounddevelopmentinsteadofthegradesofexaminations.Onlyinthiswaycouldchildrenhavehappyandfreetime.2021/5/91162021/5/9117Thecartoonvividlydemonstratesafamilybasketballmatch,whichistotallydifferentfromaregularone.Twochildrenareplaying,buttheparents,sweating,areholdingthebasinshighfortheballtobethrownin.2021/5/9118Thekeymessageconveyedinthepictureisthat,duetotheone-childpolicy,Chineseparentssacrificesomuchandspoiltheirchildren.Therefore,itwillbringsomeseriousconsequences.

2021/5/9119Childrenover-protectedbyparentsmayhaveacarefreelife,andcanobtainwhatevertheydemandwithouteffort,suchaspocketmoney,toysanddigitalproducts.However,theyrelyontheirparentstoomuch,andcannotfacethecutthroatcompetitioninthesocietywhentheygrowup.2021/5/9120Ifirmlybelievethatparentsshouldnotlovetheirchildreninsuchablindandcrazyway.Therefore,Iwouldliketopresentsomecountermeasurestodealwiththeproblem.

Asforparents,theyshouldbeencouragedtoaltertheirattitude,andhaveamorecomprehensiveandprofoundviewoneducation.2021/5/9121Whencomingtochildren,theyshouldbeindependenttobereadyforthefuturecompetition,anddowhattheyareabletodo,suchascookingandhousework.Onlyinthiswaycouldchildrensurviveandsucceedwhentheycometoadulthood.2021/5/91222021/5/91232021/5/91242021/5/91252021/5/9126Aswecanseefromthecartoonclearly,anoldman,withlongwhitebeardandawalkingstickinhishand,issittingontheearth,whichissweatingandnolongerroundduetohisheavypressure.2021/5/9127Thedrawingintendstoshowusthatagingproblemisaseriousissueworldwide,whichresultsfromthefollowingreasons.Withtheimprovementofhealthandlivingconditions,lifespanextendsquickly.Besides,birthratedeclinesgradually.2021/5/9128Asthenumberofseniorcitizensrises,thegovernmentandfamilyhavetobearthegreatexpensessuchasmedicalcareandpension.Alsolaborforceisrunningdownandtheyoungandmiddle-agedareundergreatburdenofwork.2021/5/9129Frommyview,toeradicatetheproblem,afewsolutionsshouldbeprovided.

Intermsofthegovernment,thepolicyofretirementdelaytotheageof65shouldbeconsidered.2021/5/9130Whatismore,asoundelderly-caresystemestablishedbythegovernmentisofnecessityaswell.Onlyinthiswaycouldhumanbeings

haveabrighterfuture.2021/5/91312021/5/9132Thisdrawingdemonstratesaninterestingandamazingphenomenon.Inaflatwithoutparkingspace,amanisliftinghiscarwithachainwhichisbindingit.2021/5/9133Thiskindofsituationcanbeseeninmanycities.Theamountofcarskeeps