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2018高考全國卷寫作閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一頁第二頁，共29頁。給出的要點信息量少過多的使用簡單句AddproperinformationUsevariedexpressions第二頁第三頁，共29頁。LearningaimsTobeclearaboutthestepsofwritingacompositionTomasterthewaysofaddinginformation(importantpoint)Tobeabletousethevariedexpressions(difficultpoint)第三頁第四頁，共29頁。PapercuttingPapercuttingisoneofChina’smostpopulartraditionalfolkarts(民間藝術(shù)).Chinesepapercuttinghasahistoryofmorethan1,500years.DuringtheSpringFestivalandWeddings,peopleoftendecorate

(裝飾)theirhomeswithpapercuttinginordertoenhancethejoyousatmosphere.exhibitionn.展覽beonshow第四頁第五頁，共29頁。2017，全國II假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙藝術(shù)展。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽的時間、地點；2.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫第五頁第六頁，共29頁。Followthesixsteps:1.認(rèn)真審題，把握主題2.抓準(zhǔn)要點，勾勒題綱3.緊扣要點，擴寫成句5.添加過渡，確保連貫4.修飾文章，提升層次6.查錯補漏，工整抄寫第六頁第七頁，共29頁。假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙藝術(shù)展。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽的時間、地點；2.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫1.認(rèn)真審題，把握主題邀請信體裁：人稱：時態(tài)：第一、二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時第七頁第八頁，共29頁。Structure文章結(jié)構(gòu)Ending（結(jié)尾）Beginning(開頭)Body（文章主體）問候、自我介紹、寫信目的告知展覽的時間、地點和內(nèi)容期盼回信2.抓準(zhǔn)要點，勾勒題綱第八頁第九頁，共29頁。Structure文章結(jié)構(gòu)Ending（結(jié)尾）Beginning(開頭)Body（文章主體）問候、自我介紹、寫信目的告知展覽的時間、地點和內(nèi)容期盼回信How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.I’mastudentfromyourclass.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory.Place：CitymuseumTime：atweekendsContent：Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.

Whoseworks?What?Benefits?Location！fromJune16thandlastformorethanaweekfrom8a.m.to5p.m.everyweekendinJulyIfyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Somearemadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Wecanenjoythefolkartandlearnalot.3.緊扣要點，擴寫成句Howtoaddproperinformationtothekeypoints?Tip2：時間地點寫詳細(xì)Tip3:加上原因、條件、結(jié)果Tip1：進一步解釋名詞第九頁第十頁，共29頁。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mastudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum.Itislocatedinthenorthofourcity.ItwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.Someofthemaremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Whenwevisitthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,Lihua165.修飾文章，提升層次第十頁第十一頁，共29頁。1)借助名詞短語做同位語李立，男，19歲，1999年生；籍貫：廣東。

LiLi,a19-year-oldboy,wasborninGuangdongin1999.---G3Shortandclear！HomeworkevaluationNothingisimpossibletoawillingheart!第十一頁第十二頁，共29頁。2)借助介詞做定語李飛，男，10歲，棕色短發(fā)，身穿白色茄克。LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhairandawhitejacket.---G1Shortandclear！第十二頁第十三頁，共29頁。有了Tom的幫助，我們很快就找到了他們的村子。

WiththehelpofTom,wesoonfoundtheirvillage.----G73)借助介詞短語做狀語第十三頁第十四頁，共29頁。4)借助非謂語動詞短語做定語或狀語他們站在大樹下，等待著總統(tǒng)的到來。

Standingunderthebigtree,theyarewaitingforthepresident.---G4第十四頁第十五頁，共29頁。中國，地處亞洲東部；特點：地大物博、人口眾多。China,whichliesintheeastofAsia,isagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulationaswellasrichnaturalresources.5)用好定語從句China,locatedintheeastofAsia,hasavastareaandrichnaturalresourcesaswellas

alargepopulation.----G6第十五頁第十六頁，共29頁。

①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.③Shespeaksadialect.④Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.Kate,anewstudent

fromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.--G9用一句話表達第十六頁第十七頁，共29頁。①

NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.②

ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.③

ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.合并句子 NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish,but

childrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime,whichwillaffecttheirChinesestudy.----G6

方法1：Linkingwordsmakesthesentencelogical邏輯連詞第十七頁第十八頁，共29頁。同位語介詞和介詞短語定語從句非謂語動詞邏輯連詞Q:Whatvariedexpressionscanbeusedtoimproveyoursentence?第十八頁第十九頁，共29頁。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mastudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum.Itislocatedinthenorthofourcity.ItwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.Someofthemaremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Whenwevisitthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,LihuaGroupwork!Twoheadsarebetterthanone！第十九頁第二十頁，共29頁。requirements:(1~10’)1.variedexpressionsareused1’each2.logicalandcoherent1’3.goodhandwriting1’Presentation!第二十頁第二十一頁，共29頁。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mastudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum.Itislocatedinthenorthofourcity.ItwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.Someofthemaremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Whenwevisitthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,LihuaTwoheadsarebetterthanone.Groupwork!I’mLihua,astudentfromyourclass.whichisaChinesefolkartwithalonghistory.,located,someofwhichvisitingtheexhibition5.添加過渡，確保連貫①②①Besides,②Itissaidthat同位語限制性定語從句非謂語動詞非限制性定語從句非謂語動詞介詞第二十一頁第二十二頁，共29頁。DearHenry,

How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua,astudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cuttingwhichisaChinesefolkartwithalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum,locatedinthenorthofourcity.Besides,itwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Itissaidthatalargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow,someofwhicharemadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Visitingthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,Lihua第二十二頁第二十三頁，共29頁。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua,________________________(你班上的一名學(xué)生).

I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting,___________________________________(擁有悠久歷史的中國民俗藝術(shù)).

astudentfromyourclasswhichisaChinesefolkartwithalonghistory第二十三頁第二十四頁，共29頁。 TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCityMuseum,

_______________________(位于我們城市的北邊).Besides,itwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.(據(jù)說)___________alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow,____________(其中一些)aremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.______________________(當(dāng)我們參觀展覽的時候),wewillnotonlyenjoythefolkartbutalsolearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition. Lo