中考英語作文指導(dǎo)-環(huán)境保護(hù)課件

環(huán)境保護(hù)環(huán)境保護(hù)1【話題解讀】環(huán)保是當(dāng)今社會(huì)的一個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題，和我們每個(gè)人息息相關(guān)。它能考查學(xué)生對現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的關(guān)心程度、對事物的觀察能力，而且能夠培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的環(huán)保意識(shí)?？疾樾问酵ǔＪ且罂忌榻B一些保護(hù)環(huán)境的做法，或針對一些環(huán)境現(xiàn)象或環(huán)保措施發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，也會(huì)要求考生寫環(huán)保倡議書?；A(chǔ)篇【話題解讀】基礎(chǔ)篇2【真題回放】為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家衛(wèi)生城市的號召，某校開展了“綠色港城，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。請你以“TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文?！菊骖}回放】3主題綠色港城，健康生活做法騎車出行，減少空氣污染；垃圾入箱，保持城市整潔；多種樹木，保護(hù)自然環(huán)境。觀點(diǎn)……(至少2條)主題綠色港城，健康生活做法騎車出行，減少空氣污染；垃圾觀點(diǎn)…4注意：1)詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2)不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife

AsacitizenofLianyungang,it'sourdutyto_______________________________________________________________(2016江蘇連云港)注意：5【真題分析】這是一篇命題作文，題目為“TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife”，寫作時(shí)要緊緊圍繞這個(gè)話題展開。根據(jù)文字提示，可分兩段來寫：第一段介紹一些環(huán)保的做法；第二段發(fā)表自己對這一主題的觀點(diǎn)。在介紹環(huán)保的做法時(shí)要注意語言的條理性；在發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)時(shí)可以從自己對環(huán)保的認(rèn)識(shí)、環(huán)保對健康的影響等方面來闡述?！菊骖}分析】6【標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】TheGreenCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLianyungang,it'sourdutytohelpbuildagreencitysothatwecanliveahealthylife.Whatcanwedo?Wecanreduceairpollutionbytravelingaroundbybike.It'salsogoodforourhealth.It'snecessaryforustoputrubbishintotherubbishbin.【標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】7Inthisway,wecankeepourcityclean.Andwe'dbetterplantmoretreestoprotectthenaturalenvironment.AsacitizenofLianyungang,I'lltrymybesttomakeourcitycleanerandmorebeautiful.Inmyopinion,everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference.Inthisway,wecankeepourc8【高分突破】TheGreenCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLianyungang,it'sourdutytohelpprotectourcity'senvironmentandmakeitagreenerplacetolive.Herearesomesmallthingsweallcandoandshoulddo:提高篇【高分突破】提高篇9Firstofall,wecanridebicyclestoandfromschoolasmuchaspossibletoreduceairpollution.Secondly,whereverwego,weshouldthrowrubbishintorubbishbinstokeepourcitycleanandtidy.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldplantasmanytreesaspossibletoprotectourcity'snaturalenvironment.Firstofall,wecanridebicy10Inmyopinion,agreencityisthekeytoahealthylife.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontobuildingagreencity,Lianyungangwillbecomeabetterplacetolive.Let'stakeactionnow!Inmyopinion,agreencit11【高分揭秘】1.習(xí)作內(nèi)容緊扣主題，段落層次清晰，語言準(zhǔn)確地道；2.在介紹一些環(huán)保的做法時(shí)作者用了firstofall,secondly和lastbutnotleast，使得習(xí)作富有條理性；【高分揭秘】123.在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)作者用了兩個(gè)短語thekeyto和makeacontributionto，提升了習(xí)作的語言檔次。4.在結(jié)尾部分作者用了一個(gè)Let's開頭的祈使句來號召大家一起行動(dòng)，為創(chuàng)建綠色家園而努力，語言簡潔、生動(dòng)、有力。3.在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)作者用了兩個(gè)短語thekeyto和ma13【素材積累】1.詞匯觀點(diǎn)：inmyopinion,frommypointofview,asforme其他：climatechange,globalwarming,green,recycle,reusable【素材積累】142.句子Ifwegoonpollutingtheearth,itwon'tbefitforustolivein.That'saproblemweChinesemustpayspecialattentionto.Thedevelopmentofprivatecarshasbroughtaboutaseriesofproblems.Ibelievewecanmakeourearthabetterplacetolive.Let'stakeactionandbeagreenperson!2.句子15【寫作任務(wù)】榮光學(xué)校九年級(2)班就“環(huán)境問題”召開了一次班會(huì)，并且以“OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?”為題進(jìn)行了一次討論。許多同學(xué)對未來表示樂觀，但也有些同學(xué)對未來有些擔(dān)心。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英文寫一篇短文?！緦懽魅蝿?wù)】16樂觀者的觀點(diǎn)1.越來越多的人將成為環(huán)保主義者。2.政府將采取更多的措施改善環(huán)境。擔(dān)心者的觀點(diǎn)1.大量的樹木仍將被砍伐。2.私家車將越來越多。你的觀點(diǎn)及打算學(xué)生自擬(至少兩點(diǎn))樂觀者的觀點(diǎn)1.越來越多的人將成為環(huán)保主義者。擔(dān)心者的觀點(diǎn)17提示：1.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。2.短文中應(yīng)包含至少4個(gè)要點(diǎn)。3.書寫工整、語句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80。注意：文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：optimisticadj.樂觀的governmentn.政府takemeasuresto采取措施privateadj.私有的提示：18OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?Manystudentsareoptimisticaboutourenvironmentintenyears._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2016湖南衡陽)OurEnvironmentinTenYears:19OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?Manystudentsareoptimisticaboutourenvironmentintenyears.Infact,theythinkthattheworldwillbeabetterplacethanitisnow.Moreandmorepeoplearebecomingvolunteerstoprotecttheenvironment.Also,thegovernmentwilltakemoremeasurestoimprovetheenvironment.OurEnvironmentinTenYears:20However,otherstudentsareworriedaboutthefuture.Theythinkthatmoretreeswillbecutdownandtherewillbemoreprivatecarsontheroads.Theysaytheenvironmentwillbecomeworse.Inmyopinion,our