2024屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)之讀后續(xù)寫：克服困難類：沒有雞蛋如何為全班同學(xué)做蛋糕

JJU?UZ7J=Cv1UJLJKvX-lUL-J高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)克服困難類：沒有雞蛋，如何為全班同學(xué)做蛋糕題目再題目再現(xiàn)題目分析范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向讀讀后續(xù)寫皿胰皿胰4Ialwaysbelieveinthesaying:Thingswilleventuallysortthemselvesout.Inthefaceofdifficultyandtrouble,Icanalwayspersuademyselftodomyworkfirstwithoutenoughconditions.Yesterday,wejustmovedintoanewhouseandspentallourmoney.Sowehadtogothroughtherestofthemonthuntilmyhusbandgotpaid.Today,mydaughter,Laurie,wenttoschool.Afterawhile,out-of-breathandtired,ourlittlegirlranbackablockbecauseshe'dforgottentotellmethatitwasherturntobringcupcakesfortheclassptoday!Iansweredherwithapromisetoreachherclassroomatnoonwiththecupcakes.Sherantoschoolagain,happy.Twominuteslater,imaginingLaurie'strustingsmilewhenIdeliveredonthepromise,Isearchedintheboxesforbakingtinsandthemixer.Iconfidentlysetthemonthecounterandthenopenedtherefrigerator,onlytodiscovertherewerenoeggs!HowwouldImakecupcakeswithouteggs?5續(xù)寫原文6段首句Para1:There,justunderthemailbox,weretwoboxesofeggs!Para2:ThephonecallwasfrommyfriendBonnie.PartPart2題目分析8點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)續(xù)寫第一段續(xù)寫第二段段首句2段首句29續(xù)寫思路分析＞本文以人物為線索展開，主要講述作者一家在搬入新家后，花光了所有的錢。所以在女兒提出那天輪到她給班里的同學(xué)們做紙杯蛋糕時，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)家里竟然連一個雞蛋都沒有了。但是作者想到了一句話“事情最終會自行解決的。",于是就打算做沒有雞蛋的蛋糕。續(xù)寫思路分析>Para1:There,justunderthemailbox,weretwoboxesofeggsI＞由第一段首句內(nèi)容"就在郵箱下面，有兩箱雞蛋！"可知，第一段可描寫作者立即用這些雞蛋做好了紙杯蛋糕并給女兒送到了學(xué)校的事情。續(xù)寫思路分析>Para2:ThephonecallwasfrommyfriendBonnie.＞由第二段首句內(nèi)容"電話是我朋友邦妮打來的。"可知，第二段可描寫這些雞蛋原來是朋友邦尼送來的。isA皆 VWm VWmwSAs續(xù)寫素材>可用詞匯：A行為類>①決定：decided/madeadecision>②沖:race/rush>③琢磨：wonder/thinkoverA情緒類>①表達(dá)感謝：expressmyheartfeltthanks/bethankfulto/begratefultod14續(xù)寫素材＞可用句型：therIhadfoundsomeeggsatmyfrontdoorwhether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)PartPart3范文呈現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)--------------<<?There,justunderthemailbox,weretwoboxesofeggs!Ilookedupanddownthestreetandsawnoone.Leavingtheeggmysteryforthemoment,Iracedintothehouseandgotthosecupcakesfinished,cooled,frosted,anddeliveredshortlybeforenoon.Lauriewavedandsmiledastheteacherclosedthedoor;andIwalkedbackhomewonderingaboutthemysteriouseggs.Ihadtwo-dozeneggsleft,soIdecidedtomakesomemorecupcakesandthenthephonerang.ThephonecallwasfrommyfriendBonnie.SheaskedwhetherIhadfoundsomeeggsatmyfrontdoor.About8:00orsothatmorningshemetmydaughterandlearnedIwouldmakesomecupcakes.Sheknewwehadjustmovedandthatmoneymightbetightformeatthatmoment.SosheboughtthemostexpensivematerialsothatIcouldkeepmypromisetomydaughter.Afterhearingthat,Iexpressedmyheartfeltthankstoherandtoldherwhathadhappened.Onehourlater,IappearedinfrontofBonnie'sdoor,carryingsomecupcakes.18范文譯文就在郵箱下面，有兩盒雞蛋！我在街上上上下下看了看，沒有看到任何人。暫時不談雞蛋的神秘面紗，我跑進(jìn)房子，把那些紙杯蛋糕做好，冷卻、結(jié)霜，并在中午前不久送到。老師關(guān)上門時，勞麗揮手微笑，我走回家，對那些神秘的雞蛋感到好奇。我還剩兩打雞蛋，所以我決定再做一些紙杯蛋糕，然后電話響了。19范文譯文電話是我朋友邦妮打來的。她問我是否在前門發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些雞蛋。那天早上8點(diǎn)左右，她見到了我的女兒，并得知我會做一些紙杯蛋糕。她知道我們剛剛搬家，那一刻我的錢可能很緊。所以她買了最貴的材料，這樣我就可以信守對女兒的承諾。聽到后，我向她表示了衷心的感謝，并告訴了她發(fā)生的事情。一個小時后，我出現(xiàn)在邦妮的門前，手里拿著一些紙杯蛋糕。PartPart4努力方向高級結(jié)構(gòu)高級結(jié)構(gòu)三連動名詞性從句虛擬語氣形容詞做狀語無靈主語定語從句狀語從句(包含倒裝句)強(qiáng)調(diào)句副詞做狀語非謂語(包括獨(dú)立主格)PHILOSOPHYIANTHROPOLOGYgPHILOSOPHYIANTHROPOLOGYgarchaeologyIHISTORYILINGUISTICSIlanguagesIliterature1performingarts■VISUALARTS.SOCIALSCIENCES.economics