高一下學(xué)期期末 【備課精講精研】 讀后續(xù)寫(修復(fù)友誼)課件

高一期末考試讀后續(xù)寫

修復(fù)友誼中陽(yáng)一中

李小艷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Sittingontheedgeofmybed,Isortthrougholdphotos,thinsmilesslidingacrossmyface.Iholdeachmemorybrieflyinmyhandsbeforedroppingthemontothepileinmylapandsearchingforthenexthappymomenttoremember.Eachpicturebringsupfeelingsdeepwithinme.AsI

relivethememories,Ican'thelpbutnoticeonephotoinparticular,hiddendeepinthebox.Thepictureatfirstglance(一瞥)islovely.ThesunwasshiningandIwassittingwithmyarmaroundahappy-lookinggirl,herarmrestedcasuallyonmyshoulders.AsIfocusonthehappygirl,thesmilethatcoversmyfacebecomesafrown(皺眉).ItisAmySoule,Mynowex-bestfriend.

Aterriblepang(一陣劇痛)ofregret

comesintomymindandIfeeltightnessinmythroat.Thechangeinourrelationshipbeganwithdifferentinterests.Shewantedtogotothemallandshop,whileIpreferredtowatcholdmoviesinmysparetime.SoontheonlytimeIsawherwaswhenweexchangedahurriedhellointhebusyschoolhallsbetweentheclasses.Nomorenoteswerepassedbehindtheteacher'sback.Shefoundanewgroupoffriends,andsodidI.BeforeIhadachancetorepairthefriendship,shemovedaway,causinganuncrossablegap.

Imadeexcusesforit.ButdeepdownIknewthatwasnotthetruth.I

wasjust

toonervoustopickupthephoneandcall.Eventuallythegapgrewtoolargetobridge.Istandupandpullmyselfbackintothenow.Glancingupatmycalendar.IrememberAmy'sbirthdayisaroundthecorner.Infact,wewereborninthesameroom,twodaysapart.Westartedsocloseandendedupsofar.Thisbittersweetmemorycausesmetosmiledespitemyfeelingsofregret.注意：1.續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。SuddenlyIhaveanidea.

Istick(粘,貼)

thenoteundertheedgeofthephotoframe(相框)andsearchforAmy'saddress.審題步驟：1.閱讀原材料，把握主要情節(jié)及材料主題

(抓關(guān)鍵詞，尤其動(dòng)詞,形容詞和名詞)2.觀察給出的首句進(jìn)行邏輯推理(Para.1結(jié)尾處一定要參考Para.2首句內(nèi)容)3.一定注意原材料時(shí)態(tài)4.詞數(shù)150左右要求：·

故事情節(jié)要完整，連貫；·

表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，句式豐富·

文章結(jié)束時(shí)要點(diǎn)明主題，升華情感Para.1SuddenlyIhaveanidea.Para.2IstickthenoteundertheedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforAmy'saddress.enjoythehappymoment

→noticeonephoto(ex-bestfriend)

→

regret

(toolargetobridge)→

smile

despitemyfeelingsofregret·anidea:我給Amy送個(gè)禮物。thephotoframe：（結(jié)合上文的照片）我找到一個(gè)相框。thenote：我寫了一個(gè)便條。IcangiveAmyagift.Ifindaphotoframe.I

writeanote.

1.IcangiveAmyagift

to____________________.↓↓↓↓↓2.Ifindaphotoframe

in

___________to____________.3.I

writeanote_____says"HappyBirthday,Amy!"(定語(yǔ)從句)

Para.1將故事情節(jié)補(bǔ)充完整(結(jié)合Para.1結(jié)尾和Para.2首句)

Suddenly,Ihaveanidea.IcangiveAmyagifttorestartourfriendship.SoIfindaphotoframeinmydrawers

toputthephotoin.ThenIwriteanotewhichsays"HappyBirthday,Amy!"Para.1升級(jí):添加合適的副詞

Suddenly,Ihaveanidea.IcangiveAmyagifttorestartourfriendship.SoIfindaphotoframeinmydrawerstoputthephotoin.ThenI

writeanotewhichsays"HappyBirthday,Amy!"quickly

carefully/sincerely

IstickthenoteunderanedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforAmy'saddress.FinallyIfindit.Mygiftisnotmuch,butitisagoodchancetorepairour

friendship,whichisveryimportantinourlifeandworthourefforts.收尾：我終于找到了地址。感悟/升華主題：這是修復(fù)我們友誼的好機(jī)會(huì)。友誼在我們生活中很重要，值得我們付出努力。Finally

Ifindit.Itisagoodchancetorepairour

friendship.Friendshipisveryimportantinourlifeandworthourefforts.Para.2故事收尾+感悟/升華主題↓↓↓↓↓Para.2

升級(jí):根據(jù)需要添加或替換原有詞匯FinallyImakeit.Mygiftisnotmuch,butitisagoldenchancetorepairour

friendship,whichisoneofthemostpreciousthingsinourlifeand

worthourefforts.

IstickthenoteunderanedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforAmy'saddress.

Finally

I

find

it.Mygiftisnotmuch,butitisa

goodchancetorepairour

friendship,whichisveryimportant

inourlifeandworthourefforts.↓↓↓↓↓

Suddenly,Ihaveanidea.IcangiveAmyagifttorestartourfriendship.SoIquickly

findaphotoframeinmydrawers

toputthephotoin.ThenIcarefully/sincerely

writeanotewhichsays"HappyBirthday,Amy!"

Istickthenoteunderanedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforamy'saddress.FinallyImakeit.Mygiftisnotmuch,butitisagoldenchancetorepairourfriendship,whichisoneofthemostpreciousthingsinourlifeand

worthourefforts.成文一：

Suddenly,Ihaveanidea.我可以送艾米禮物重啟我們的友誼。于是我趕緊在抽屜里找了個(gè)相框把照片放進(jìn)去。然后我認(rèn)真地寫了一張紙條，上面寫著：生日快樂，艾米！

Istickthenoteunderanedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforamy'saddress.

我終于找到了。雖然我的禮物不多，但卻是修復(fù)我們友誼的絕好機(jī)會(huì)。友誼是我們生活中最寶貴的東西之一，值得我們付出努力。小試牛刀：

文一再升級(jí):心理描寫動(dòng)作描寫分詞短語(yǔ)介詞短語(yǔ)

Suddenly,Ihaveanidea.〖Whynotrepairourfriendshipthroughabirthdaygift?Andisn'tthepicturethebestpresentforher?〗

(心理描寫)SoIquicklygothrough

mydrawers(動(dòng)作描寫)andfindapictureframetoputthephotoin,

hopingthiswillremindherofourpreciousfriendshipandhappymomentwespenttogether.(分詞短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充)

ThenIsincerelywriteasimplenotesaying"HappyBirthday,Amy！"(分詞短語(yǔ)更簡(jiǎn)潔，更緊湊)

Istickthenoteunderanedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforamy'saddress.

Tomyjoy,(介詞短語(yǔ)增強(qiáng)連貫性)IfinallymakeitasIwished.AgainIholdtheframetightlyinmyarms.

(動(dòng)作描寫)Tobesure,thisgiftisnotmuch,butreallyagoldenchancetorepairour

friendship,

whichis

oneofthemostpreciousthingsinourlifeand

worthourefforts.

Suddenly,Ihaveanidea.Whynotrepairourfriendshipthroughabirthdaygift?Andisn'tthepicturethebestpresentforher?SoIquicklygothrough

mydrawers

andfindapictureframetoputthephotoin,

hopingthiswillremindherofourpreciousfriendshipandhappymomentwespenttogether.

ThenIsincerelywriteasimplenotesaying"HappyBirthday,Amy！"

Istickthenoteunderanedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforamy'saddress.

Tomyjoy,

IfinallymakeitasIwished.AgainIholdtheframetightlyinmyarms.

Tobesure,thisgiftisnotmuch,butreallyagoldenchancetorepairour

friendship,

whichis

oneofthemostpreciousthingsinourlifeand

worthourefforts.成文二：小試牛刀：文二

Suddenly,Ihaveanidea.為什么不通過生日禮物來修復(fù)我們的友誼呢？而照片不就是給她最好的禮物嗎？于是我迅速翻遍我的抽屜，找一個(gè)相框把照片放進(jìn)去，希望這能讓她想起我們珍貴的友誼和我們一起度過的快樂時(shí)光。然后我真誠(chéng)地寫一張簡(jiǎn)單的便條說:生日快樂，艾米！

Istickthenoteunderanedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforamy'saddress.令我高興的是，我終于如愿以償找到了。我再一次把畫框緊緊地抱在懷里，誠(chéng)然，這份禮物不算多，但卻是修復(fù)我們友誼的絕好機(jī)會(huì)。友誼是我們生活中最寶貴的東西之一，值得我們付出努力。升級(jí):添加合適的副詞或形容詞根據(jù)需要添加或替換原有詞匯再升級(jí):心理描寫動(dòng)作描寫分詞短語(yǔ)介詞短語(yǔ)

SuddenlyIhaveanidea.Ihurriedlygodownonmykneesandbegin