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第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（滿分15分）

假定你是李華。下學(xué)期你將作為交換生（exchangestudent）去加拿大一所高中學(xué)習(xí)，住在Lynn家里。請(qǐng)給Lynn寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹自己；

2.告知到達(dá)時(shí)間；

3.詢問應(yīng)做何準(zhǔn)備。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。自我介紹李華，交換生，來(lái)自中國(guó)闡述背景去加拿大一所高中學(xué)習(xí)，住在Lynn家寫信目的告知Lynn到達(dá)時(shí)間，并詢問去加拿大之前應(yīng)做何準(zhǔn)備結(jié)束語(yǔ)如：Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply./Hopetohearfromyousoon./Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!/Bestwishes!個(gè)人發(fā)揮適當(dāng)增加相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容介紹與詢問，寫作要點(diǎn)提示較多，是學(xué)生熟悉的學(xué)校生活話題，相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單。文體書信體，但未給出開頭和結(jié)尾，學(xué)生易因此馬虎失分DearLynn,

I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.

I’mhappytoknow

thatI’llbestayingwithyourfamilyinthenextfewmonthswhileI’mstudyingatthelocalhighschool.Thankyouforhavingme!

IwillarriveinTorontoonAugust20th

andgettoyourplacelatethatafternoon.IwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadvicesothatIcangetmyselfbetterpreparedformystayinCanada.

Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes,LiHua第二節(jié)

讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事?！纛}型解讀和以往的高考英語(yǔ)命題作文不同，讀后續(xù)寫要求考生首先要讀懂已有信息，不僅能讀懂字面含義，還要理清文章的脈絡(luò)和關(guān)系。續(xù)寫這篇短文時(shí)，考生需要明白故事的發(fā)展進(jìn)程、前因后果、地理位置變化、人物特征和情感等。在此基礎(chǔ)上，考生順著文章的思路，根據(jù)線索，發(fā)揮想象，對(duì)其后的情節(jié)進(jìn)行合理預(yù)測(cè)，并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。同時(shí)，在組織語(yǔ)言時(shí)，切記使用5個(gè)以上給出的提示詞?！艄适轮骶€已知線索：吵架——出走——迷路——失聯(lián)——自救——思念——尋路——直升機(jī)——飛離……拂曉……可續(xù)寫線索：失望？堅(jiān)信？曲折？直升機(jī)？Tom？自救？獲救？◆續(xù)寫詞匯已給提示詞匯：Jane,Tom,lake,walk,climb,atadistance,tohergreatjoy,helicopter,yellowblouse話題激活詞匯：環(huán)境：forest,stream,rock,berry,valley,steep,cave,lake,waterfall(人口、環(huán)境與自然)困難：hunger,starve,thirsty,injure,broken,blood,panic,shelter,survive(survival),suffer,

cold,severe(天氣與自然災(zāi)害)活動(dòng):walk,climb,fall,crawl,taste,attempt,struggletoone’sfeet,makeone’swayto,pick

up

(人體與動(dòng)作)情緒：toone’sgreatjoy,breakdown救援：rescueteam,doctor,searchfor,spot

(天氣與自然災(zāi)害)意志品質(zhì)：calm,courage,will(性格與行為特征)評(píng)價(jià)：amazing,makeit

But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

getting

dark

again.

Feeling

sacred

and

hopeless,

Jane

sat

beside

a

tree

and

held

her

shoulders

in

her

arms

to

make

herself

warmer.

Slowly,

the

sun

hid

himself

behind

the

mountains,

and

it

was

hard

to

see

anything.

Looking

through

the

thick

darkness,

Jane

seemed

to

see

Tom's

smiling

face.

She

said

to

herself

for

thousands

times

that

she

would

not

leave

Tom

again.

With

a

mind

to

find

him,

Jane

started

to

look

for

the

lake

in

darkness.

An

hour

later,

she

was

too

tired,

so

she

lay

down

on

a

rock.

Paragraph1:It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

It

was

a

foggy

day,

Jane

climbed

down

the

rock.

She

heard

the

sound

of

the

stream,

so

she

walked

through

towards

the

water.

She

suddenly

heard

someone's

voice.

To

her

great

joy,

it

was

Tom.

He

rushed

to

her

and

hugger

his

wife

firmly.

Their

cry

which

was

fullof

happiness

broke

the

silence

in

the

forest.

After

several

minutes,

when

the

fog

was

swept

by

the

wind

Jane

figured

out

everything.

Last

night

She

walked

here

accidentally.

Tom

recoganized

her

by

yellow

blouse

in

the

morning.

Most

amazing,

it

was

their

car

that

Jane

slept

on,

rather

than

a

rock.Paragraph2:Possibleversions:

Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Jane

hadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Althoughshefeltalittlesad,shedidn’tgetfearful.ShethoughtaboutTom.“Hemusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybehewasinoneofthemandwillcomebackagain!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”ShefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.

Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Fortunately,shesawahugeflatrockinanopenareaatadistance.Sherushedtotherock,climbedontoitandwaited.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themoresheflaggedtheyellowblouse.Luckily,thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrantowardsJane.Shebrokedownandburstintotears.

(續(xù)寫詞數(shù)：154)2.Paragraph1:

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janetriedtofindshelterfromthenightcold.Butunfortunately,sheslippedoverandbrokeherleg.Withtheextremepain,Janemanagedtomakeherwaytoarockforshelter.Undertherock,Janestayedwideawake,knowingshemightnotbeabletogettothelakewithabrokenleg.“Don’tbeafraid.Tommustbesearchingforme.Andthehelicopterwillcomebacktomorrow,”shethoughttoherself.Afterquiteawhile,Janefellasleep.

Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Shestruggledtoherfeetandheadedforthestream.Afterhavingsomeberriesandstreamwater,Janewalkedslowlytoanopenareatowaitforherrescue.Tohergreatjoy,shesoonheard