讀后續(xù)寫主題寫作之心理活動公開課 公開課比賽一等獎

備戰(zhàn)2020高考英語讀后續(xù)寫微技能指導人物心理活動描寫：精準性和豐富性

南漳一中趙金玉Step一Leadin1.Withsomanyteacherssittingintheclassroom,Iamsonervousthatmyvoice__________.2.HearingthatCharliehadpassedaway,Kathywastotallyoverwhelmedby______.istremblinggriefStep二Appreciate一、Keywords（一）Hesitate(猶豫)

Thensheasked,hesitating,filledwithanxiousdoubt.（二）Nervous/Frightened（緊張、害怕）Isaidnervously,myvoicetremblingabit.Iwasseizedbyasuddenimpulse（沖動）torun.Feartookholdofme./Panicseizedus.Ireplied,feelingalump(塊狀物)riseinmythroat.Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled\frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.（三）Ashamed（羞愧）Mythroatwasdryandmyfacewasburningup.SoashamedwasIthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning/thebloodrushtomyface.Idroppedmyeyes(垂下眼睛).（四）Sad/depressed(悲傷、抑郁)Griefcomesinwaves.悲傷如潮水一般涌來。Arippleofsadnesswelledupinsidehim涌起陣陣悲傷Thegloom（憂郁）deepenedastheresultcamein.更加難過Myheartseemedtobetorn.(心都要撕碎了)Hereyesarefloodedwithtears.（淚如涌泉）Tearsarerollingdownfromhereyes.IfeltsosadthatIfoundmyselfcryingunconsciously,unabletoholdbackmytears.（無意識的哭泣，無法抑制淚水）Anairofsorrowanddepressionsettledoverthecrowd（一種悲傷和沮喪的氛圍籠罩著人群）（五）Angry生氣beredwithanger/rage(憤怒);boilwithrage;befilledwithfury（憤怒）Sheshookherfistathim.她向他揮動拳頭.Thereplyofthemanagainfueledthefoolishofficer’sanger(火上澆油、更加憤怒).Hisfriend,whosepatiencehadwornthin(耐心被消磨光了),phonedtocomplain.Myteacher’seyeswereshiningwithanger.（怒火直冒）Shecouldfeeltheangergrowing,bubblingupinsideher.如起泡一般變大Runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒氣沖沖fueln.&v.1.給……加燃料2.增加、刺激bubblen.&v.1.起泡，冒泡2.洋溢著，充溢（六）Lonely（孤單）Ifeelabandonedbytheworld被全世界拋棄。Iendedupfeelingcompletelylostandabandoned.Weallhavemomentsofdesperation.我們都有沮喪的時候。EversinceIlosthim,Ihavebeenfacedwithadeepsenseofloss(失落感)--afeelingwhichisdifficultformetodescribeinwords(難以用語言描述).（七）happy/ecstatic/radiant/warm開心、溫暖Bathedinsunshine,weallcheeredandjumpedwithjoy.(歡跳著)

TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan’scheeks.(幸福的淚水淌下)Hiseyestwinklewithpleasureeverytimeherememberslastwinter.每當他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。Smilesaredancinginhiseyes./Hereyesdancedwithjoyandhappiness.(眼笑眉飛)Ilaughedoutloud/laughedheartily(哈哈大笑)whenIsawthatfunnyvideo.當我在看有趣的錄像的時候我大聲笑了。Eyeslightup.精神振奮、高興Hersmilehitthedeepestofmyheart.她的微笑觸動了我內(nèi)心深處。Hearingthis,everybodywaswildwithjoy(欣喜若狂)（八）Shocked/startled/stunned/surprised震驚Hearingthebadnews,Maryfrozewithshock,asifrootedontheground.(僵住了，像扎根在地上一樣)Thecarwasgoneinseconds,leavingAliceshakingherheadindisbelief.難以置信地搖頭Isensedaflashofsurpriseinhiseyes.我感覺到他眼里的一絲驚訝。（九）Disappointed/frustrated沮喪Overcomewith/bymybitterdisappointment(極度失望),Irefusedtobecomforted.WhenIsawthepileofdirtydishes,myheartsank.我看到那一堆骯臟的餐具時,感到很掃興.inlowspirits\inanunpleasantmood情緒低落；沮喪（十）Jealous嫉妒Thissensegivesmeaheadacheandmakesmejumpfromenvytoseverehate(從嫉妒發(fā)展到極度憎恨).（十一）Regret/遺憾Drivenbyasenseofregret(受到遺憾的驅(qū)使)hedecidedto...（十二）curious/好奇Burningwithcuriosity,sheranacrossthefieldafterit.二. usefulexpressions（一）表示人物喜樂1、既興奮又開心amixtureofexcitementandhappiness2、心情愉快incheerfulspirits3、振作精神keepupone’sspirits4、滿意的表情asatisfiedlook5、高興地跳起來dance/jumpforjoy6、流下幸福的淚水tearsofhappinessflowingdown7、感到鼓舞的feelinspired/encouraged8、精神高漲beinhighspirit（二）表示悲憂消沉1、強烈的失落感astrongsenseofloss2、陷入絕望fallintodespair3、悲痛欲絕cryone’sheartout4、懷著沉重的心情withaheavyheart5、沮喪的withasinkingheart6、情緒低落bedowninspirits7、垂頭喪氣loseone’sspirits8、意志消沉abrokenspirit（三）表示怨怒1、不斷地抱怨complainconstantly2、氣得滿臉通紅flamewithanger3、愁眉苦臉haveaworriedlook4、氣沖沖地跑出房間runoutoftheroominaburstofanger5、感到尷尬的feelembarrassed6、感到困惑的feelpuzzled/confused7、感到沮喪的feelfrustrated/depressed8、感到惱怒的feelannoyed9、感到泄氣的feeldiscouraged（四）表示其他情緒1、aforgivingspirit寬容的精神2、withakindandgood-humoredspirit以和藹可親的態(tài)度3、underthedominationoftheseemotions在這些情緒的控制下4.flyoffthehandle勃然大怒5.loseone’stemper發(fā)脾氣6.dropopeninsurprise驚奇地張大了嘴（五）與heart搭配的短語1.withaheavy/sinking/brokenheart懷著沉重的/沉的/破碎的心2.withalightheart心情輕松地3.touchone’sheart打動了某人的心4.pierceone’sheart刺痛某人的心5.followone’sheart跟隨某人的心6.pouroutone’shearttosb.向某人傾訴自己的心聲7.filledone’sheart充滿某人的內(nèi)心8.one’sheartisbreaking某人的心正在碎9.one’sheartmelted心被融化了10.one’sheartisbeatingfast跳得很快11.one’sheartispoundingwithexcitement激動得直跳(poundvi.心臟狂跳，怦怦地跳)12.one’sheartisthumpingwithfear因恐懼而砰砰作響（thumpv.撞擊，怦怦地跳）13.heartbeinone’smouth緊張得心都到了喉嚨眼(六)與tear搭配的短語1.beintears含淚2.havetearsinone’seyes眼里含著淚水3.burstintotears放聲大哭4.fightbacktears抑制住淚水5.beclosetotears/onthevergeoftears快要哭了step三practise寫作練習

（一）根據(jù)提示填空：1.Thehorrorofmyexperience____________________(numb)(已使我感覺遲鈍).2._______________________(blank)(她兩眼發(fā)直),notknowingwhattosaynext.3.________________________________(confirm)(他顫抖的雙手和茫然的眼神進一步證實了)herearlierperceptionthathewasextremelyillatease.hasnumbedmysensesShestaredblanklyintospaceHistremblinghandsandblankstareconfirmednumbadj.麻木的，遲鈍的，呆滯的v.使麻木，使遲鈍blankadj.空白的，茫然的4.Therewas________________(distant)(她眼中時時流露出心不在焉的神情),herthoughtselsewhere.5.Heisareckless(不顧后果的，粗心大意的)driverandoftendrives_____________(absent)(漫不經(jīng)心).inanabsentwayadistantlookinhereyesdistantadj.遙遠的；疏遠的；冷淡的；恍惚的；出神的adistantrelativeabsentadj.缺席的；心不在焉的；出神的absent-minded（二）將下列句子翻譯成英文：1.聽到這個消息，他給了我一個呆滯的笑容______________________________________2.從電話里聽起來帕特非常冷淡和疏遠。______________________________________3.她懷著沉重的/沉的/破碎的心，看著他走了。_______________________________________

Hearingthenews,heshowedmeawoodensmile.Patsoundedverycoldanddistantonthephone.Withaheavy/sinking/brokenheart,shewatchedhimgo.

4.他的悲慘故事打動了她的心.____________________________________

5.當我想起他們的悲傷時，我的心很痛。__________________________________