讀后續(xù)寫青少年成長類丟失的耳機(jī)學(xué)案-2023屆高三英語二輪專題

2023年的高考讀后續(xù)寫話題，可能是與青少年相關(guān)的主題，其中高考還沒有涉及到的話題有青少年的成長與轉(zhuǎn)變，表演與演講，冒險，動物與自然等話題。

下文就是一篇青少年轉(zhuǎn)變與成長話題的讀后續(xù)寫。Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother.Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeith,"Keith,thegirlleftherhandphonebehind."Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,"Youdon'tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone."Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,"Iwanttotakethehandphone."Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother."Youcan't!Whatiftheownerestolookforit?"Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then，hetookMary'shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetookoutthebeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappilyButMarytoldhim,"Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone."Keithsaidquickly,"Iwillsayafriendlentittome."Marysaid,"Nowyouarelyingtoo."Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone."Thisisthegirl'sphonenumber.Whydon'twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertoeandtakebackherhandphone."Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.____________Marywasveryhappytohearthat._____________________________【文本解析】Mary和她的弟弟Keith在餐館就餐時,看到了一個被忘在餐桌上的,此時機(jī)主已經(jīng)離開。Keith始終想要一部,便不聽Mary的勸告。將帶回了家,并預(yù)備撒謊說是伴侶借給他的。Mary看到了機(jī)主的聯(lián)系,想說服Keith和機(jī)主聯(lián)系......【名著語句】1.Wilburlaydownandclosedhiseyes.Hewastiredfromhis

wakeful

night

andfromtheexcitementofmeetingsomeoneforthefirsttime.

〔From

Charlotte’sWeb〕2.Thenightseemedlong.

Wilbur'sstomachwasemptyandhismindwas

full.Andwhenyourstomachisemptyandyourmindisfull,it'salwayshardtosleep.

〔From

Charlotte’sWeb〕3.ButTempletonworkedawayatthejob,andmanagedtocutthesacadriftandcarryittotheground,wherehedroppeditinfrontof

Wilbur.Wilbur

heavedagreatsighofrelief.

〔From

Charlotte’sWeb〕4.Thenextdaywasrainyanddark.Rain

fellon

theroofofthebarnand

drippedsteadilyfromtheeaves.

〔From

Charlotte’sWeb〕5."TherearealotofthingsWilburdoesn'tknowaboutlife,"shethought."He'sreally

averyinnocentlittlepig.

Hedoesn'tevenknowwhat'sgoingtohappentohimaroundChristmastime;

〔From

Charlotte’sWeb〕6.Thenhewouldbreathedeeply.Andwhenhisaudiencegrewbored,he

would

springinto

theairanddoabackflipwithahalftwist.Atthisthecrowdwouldyellandcheer.

〔From

Charlotte’sWeb〕7.AndJoeandBiddy,Iwanttothankyou

fromthebottomofmyheartforallyou'vedoneforme.

〔From

GreatExpectations〕【寫作指導(dǎo)】續(xù)寫思路:依據(jù)續(xù)寫第一段的首句"ThatnightKeithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime"可確定第一段的寫作思路弟弟

Keith

為何難以入睡?他想到了什么?對拿走機(jī)主的事,是否感到愧疚?最終他是否做出了歸還的打算?依據(jù)續(xù)寫其次段的首句"Marywasveryhappytohearthat"可確定其次段的寫作思路姐姐

Mary

為何快樂?他們聯(lián)系上機(jī)主了嗎?機(jī)主有何反響?他們是怎樣歸還的?通過這件事,他們有何感受?其實，這就是Keith思想斗爭的過程，就是青少年自我成長的過程?！鞠滤魑摹縏hatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

He

laywakefully,and

hisstomachwasemptybuthismindwasfull.

Keithwascrazyaboutthelatesthandphoneallthetime,evenindreams.

Heturnedonthelightandrosefromthebed,sittingfrozen.Afterawhile,

givingaheavysigh,hiseyes

fellon

atreasuredphoto,onwhichheandMaryall

worebright,innocentsmiles.Suddenly,whatMayhadsaid

sprangintohismind.Determinedtogivebackthehandphone,hefeltrelaxedandtriedtotellMaryinthefollowingdaymorning.Marywasveryhappytohearthat.

Andimmediatelytheytogethermadeacalltotheowner.Soontheyoungladycametovisittheirhousewithabunchofflowers.Sheexpressedhergreatgratitude

fromthebottomof

herheart.

ColorrushedKeith’sface,

halfshame,halfpride.

Whentheirparentsknewthewholestory,theyallpraisedthemhappilyanddecidedtorewardKeithwithhisfavouritehandphone.ItturnedouttoKeiththat

honestyisthebestpolicy.【參考答案】Paragraph1:Thatnight,Keithcouldn’tgotosleep,reflectinginbed.

Hehaddifficultysleeping.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewasfeelingsorryfortheowner.Theladylookedyoung.Shewouldbeverysadatthelossofherhandphone.Inthemorning,hedecidedtoreturnthehandphonetotheowner.Afterschool,hetoldMary,“I’mgoingtophonetheowner.〞Marywasgladtohearthat.Paragraph2:Backhomefromschool,theyphonedtheowner’shousephone.Agirlansweredthephone.Keithasked,

“Areyoutheownerofthehandphone?I’mKeith.Ihaveyourhandphone.Canyoueandg