2019 高考英語寫作指導(dǎo)

如何提高學(xué)生英語寫作能力

2021/5/91一.審題到位二.語言豐富各類從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、分詞…2021/5/922017年1月高考作文題：假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假將赴英國(guó)參加為期兩個(gè)月的海外交流活動(dòng)。如果選擇主辦方安排的住宿，他需要額外支付較高的費(fèi)用。但他也可以通過為當(dāng)?shù)厣鐓^(qū)養(yǎng)老院提供每月三十小時(shí)的義工服務(wù)，獲得在養(yǎng)老院免費(fèi)住宿的機(jī)會(huì)。李宏通過郵件向你征求意見，寫一封回信，內(nèi)容須包括：1.你對(duì)此事的明確態(tài)度；2.你的理由。2021/5/93I'mgladtohearthatyouhaveaccesstoparticipateinanoverseascommunicationactivityinBritainwhichwilllasttwomonths.Isuggestthatyoushouldchooseworkingasavolunteerthirtyhourseverymonthforthelocalcommunityaginghospitaltogainachancetostayinitforfree.Myreasonsareasfollows.

Notonlycanyouenhanceyoursocialexperiences,butalsoyoucanreduceyourcosts.Contrarytotheaccommodationarrangedbythehost,youcansavealotofmoney.Undoubtedly,thecostmusthavebeenhighifyouchooseit.Stayingintheaginghospital,thecontrastcouldn'tbegreater.Ononehand,onlybyworkingasavolunteercanyougainafreestay.Itsoundsgreat!Yourarrivalwilladdcolorstotheatmospherethere.Ontheotherhand,duringoursparetimewewillalsospendtimehelpingothersinoursocietyteachesustobeawarm-heartedperson.Yourarrivalwillalsoreducetheburdensthere.Asanoldsayinggoes,“wecangainboththingsatthesametime”,sowhynotchooseit?Ihopethatyouwilltakemyadvice,bestwishesthatyouwillhaveagoodtimethere,itisagoldenchancethatyouwillgaininsummervacation.Inshort,enjoyyourself.(18分)2021/5/94*審題假如你是啟明中學(xué)的王磊，你的學(xué)校最近準(zhǔn)備引進(jìn)一個(gè)機(jī)器人充當(dāng)食堂服務(wù)員或者圖書管理員的工作，并在學(xué)校的貼吧上向同學(xué)們征求意見。你在貼吧上回復(fù)向?qū)W校提出意見。1.明確提出你的觀點(diǎn)；2.通過比較，說明你這樣選擇的理由。

（可從工作效率和服務(wù)范圍等作比較）（2018年1月高考）通過比較2021/5/95*審題（2018年1月靜安一模）你是王華，臨近寒假，你的好朋友劉偉寫信向你咨詢他的寒假計(jì)劃。目前有三個(gè)備選方案，一.去美國(guó)某高中參加冬令營(yíng);二.應(yīng)征某歷史博物館臨時(shí)講解員；三.提前學(xué)習(xí)下學(xué)期的高中課程。請(qǐng)給劉偉寫回信，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。信中必須包括?.你建議的方案；2.你如此建議的理由；3.你對(duì)于執(zhí)行此方案的建議。2021/5/96*用好插入語Therearepeople,Iamsure,whowillsaythatthewateristoocold.Hiswords,tosomeextent,areright.Thequestion,frommypointofview,deservesthinkingover.4.Whathedidyesterdaywasdissatisfactory.1.Therearepeoplewhowillsaythatthewateristoocold.2.Hiswordsareright.3.Thequestiondeservesthinkingover.Whathedidyesterday,bynomeans,wassatisfactory.Thereislittle,ifany,hopeofwinning.5.Thereislittlehopeofwinning.2021/5/97*用好副詞Obviously,comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.Tourism,frankly,maypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.2.Comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.1.Tourismmaypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.Mostresearchersbelievethat,intheory,heoryabsolutely3.Technologicalchangeswillleadtounemploy-ment.Technologicalchangeswillinevitablyleadtounemployment.2021/5/98*用好否定1.Themayorisverysatisfiedinherwork.2.WhenIhearofthebird’ssong,Ialwaysthinkofthespringtime.Themayorisneverdissatisfiedinherwork.Ineverhearofthebird’ssongwithoutthinkingofthespringtime.3.Itispossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortperiodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.Itisnotimpossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortperiodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.2021/5/99*用好排比1.Frommyobservation,manypeopletodayspendtheirtimereceiving

moreandmore

education,working

moreandmorehours,andmaking

moreandmoremoney.2.Aleaderwhohasrespectforotherpeopleatalllevelsofanorganization,fortheworktheydo,andfortheirabilities,desiresandneeds,willfindthatrespectisreturned.2021/5/9103.Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.Ithinkwomenshouldespeciallyhavetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms．Theyshouldgetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob.Theyshouldalsohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.

Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen,especiallytherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob,andtherighttohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.

2021/5/911一.審題到位二.語言豐富三.示范有效2021/5/912目前，某某學(xué)校正在開展推選“校園形象大使”(imageambassadoroncampus)活動(dòng)。假定你是該校的一名學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以書信的形式向校長(zhǎng)推薦一位同學(xué)或者進(jìn)行自薦，并結(jié)合具體事例闡明推薦的理由。2021/5/913

開頭段：1.Frommyperspective,themostsuitablepersonismyroommate,Sophia,whohasreallytaughtmewhattheword“excellence”means

.2.Hearingtheactivityofselectinganimageambassadoroncampus,I’dliketorecommendmyclassmate,Sophia,whoisourspiritualleader.3.Frommyperspective,Jackissignificantlybetterthananyothercandidateinourschool.4.MyrecommendationisatopstudentinmyclassnamedJack,whoenjoysagoodreputationamongallthestudentsofourschool.2021/5/914中間段：1.Hehassomanyadmirablepersonalqualitiesthat

thereisnobettersuitablepersonforthisgreat

honorinmyheart.2.Asisknowntoall,theimageambassadoroncampusisthesymbolofthewholeschoolstudents.3.Therefore,it’snecessaryforhimorhertogetgoodmarksinbothstudyingandsports.

4.Anotherreason,whichisalsoveryimportant,isthathehascharmingappearanceandelegantbehavior.2021/5/915具體事例：1.Moreover,itwasherwarmheartthathadleftmeadeepimpression.Therewasonceaclassmateofherswhohadtroubleingettingalongwithothers.Hewassofrustratedthatnearlytriedtocommitsuicide.Fortunately,thankstoSophia’scompanyandpatience,hewasinspiredtowalkoutofthedarkness.Hetoldmethatsheseemedtobeanangeltohimwhodelightedhiswholeworld.2.MyconfidenceisbasedonhispreviousexperienceofparticipatinginModelUnitedNations.RepresentingChina,Lingonceservedasanambassadortodiscussinternationalaffairs.“Ifirmlybelieve…”,withgestur