讀后續(xù)寫情緒描寫講義-2023屆高三英語二輪復習寫作專項

讀后續(xù)寫情緒描寫無靈主語+時間狀語從句：情緒名詞+動詞+sb+as/whensbdidsth.Uncontrollably,nervousnessoverwhelmedPeterashesteppedontothestage.非謂語：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2,sbdidsth,doingsth.Nervousandslightlyscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.讓步狀語從句：情緒形容詞+assb+be動詞,sbdidsth.Nervousashewas,Davidpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.④獨立主格：身體部位+非謂語動詞，sbdidsth.Handstremblingslightly,peterstillmanagedtostepontothestage.我開心："Iamhappy.”（換主語）：“開心（的情緒）抓住了我”Delightseizedme.（加介短）：“一股開心（的情緒）抓住了我”Awaveofdelightseizedme.（加并列）：“開心與振奮（的情緒）抓住了我”Delightardexcitementseizedme.（加副詞）：“即刻地，一股開心（的情緒）抓住了我”Instantlyastrongsenseofdelightseizedme.（加時間狀從）：“聽到那好消息，一股開心（的情緒）即亥U抓住了我”Instantly,astrongsenseofdelightseizedmeasIheardthegoodnews.1）無靈主語：“情緒名詞+固定動詞+sb”+as/whensbdidsth當某人做某事時，一股xx情緒涌上心頭。彳列句：Uncontrollably,awaveofregretwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.聽到這個壞消息時，一股悔恨的情緒無法控制地涌上我心頭。情緒名詞固定動詞happiness/joy/delight情緒名詞固定動詞happiness/joy/delight開心anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow悲傷gratitude/appreciation感激admiration欽佩/贊賞guilt/remorse愧疚悔恨fear/terror/fright/panic害怕astonishment/shock/surprise震驚Relief/comfort練習［2022全國1卷］seize（抓住/控制）catch （caught過去式）strike （struck過去式）surround（圍繞）takeholdof （控制）wash/sweep（swept）over （沖刷）comeover（突然感到）envelop（籠罩）overwhelm使難以承受當意識到如果沒有恰當和及時的說服和鼓勵，大衛(wèi)的情 況可能會變得更糟，我感到擔憂和焦慮。WorryandanxietyseizedmeasIrealizedDavid'ssituationmightgetworsewithoutproperandpromptpersuasionandencouragement.當大衛(wèi)終于下定決心繼續(xù)賽跑時，我感到欣慰和開心。ReliefanddelightcameovermewhenDavidfinallybecamedeterminedtocontinuetherace..非謂語：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2,sbdidsth,doingsth.例句：Nervousandscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech. （感到）緊張和害怕，彼得勉力走上舞臺，開始發(fā)表演講。練習1：［2022全國1卷］感到堅定和受到鼓舞，David抬起頭，感激地看著我。Determinedandinspired（encouraged）,Davidraisedhishead,lookingatmewithgratitude.練習2：（感到）放松的和快樂的，大衛(wèi)在越過終點線后立刻向我揮手，表達他的快樂和感激。Relievedanddelighted,Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,conveyinghishappinessandgratitude..讓步狀語從句：情緒形容詞+assb+was,sb（still）didsth.盡管某人（感到）xx,某人仍做某事例句：Nervousashewas,Peterpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.盡管很緊張，彼得仍鼓起勇氣走上舞臺。練習1：[2022全國1卷]盡管還有一絲緊張，David決心完成賽跑。Slightlynervousashewas,Davidbecamedeterminedtofinishtherace.練習2：[2022廣州一模]盡管很著急和不情愿，我還是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。AnxiousandreluctantasIwas,IstilldidthedishesatDad'srequest..獨立主格：身體部位+動詞非謂語，sbdidsth.Tearswellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.Tearsstreamingdownhischeeks,Davidthankedmeforthetimelyencouragement.Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,sbdosth...（眼里滿含著…）Eyesglitteringwithrelief/joy,sbdosth... （眼里閃著???）Facegleamingwithdelight,Peterfailedtoutteraword.（臉上洋溢著喜悅）Heartbeatingwithhappiness,sb...（某人的心因…而怦怦直跳）其他部位：Arms/legs/musclesachingandkneesshaking/trembling,Ididsth...（胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛，膝蓋發(fā)抖/顫抖，我…）（劃橫線的情緒詞，可按需換掉）練習1：[2022全國1卷]大衛(wèi)自信而堅定，繼續(xù)奔跑，汗水順著他的臉流下來。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.練習2：讓我們欣喜若狂的是，大衛(wèi)順利越過終點線，臉上洋溢著滿足的喜悅。Toourecstasy,Davidcrossedthefinishlinesmoothly,hisfaceshiningwithsatisfieddelight.讀后續(xù)寫萬能句子萬能片段1:不知所措（茫然/緊張/害怕）基礎(chǔ)版:心在狂跳，她不知道該怎么辦。隨著數(shù)秒后，她的腦海里出現(xiàn)了一個想法。Heartbeatingwildly,shehadnoideawhattodo.Asafewsecondspassed,anideacameintohermind.升級版:（高分替換詞+比喻+名從+時間獨立主格句式）Heartbeatingwildlylikeabeast,shewasatalosswhattodonext.Acoupleofsecondsslippingaway,anideastruckherlike獨立主格句式：獨立主語1+非謂語動詞，句子主語2+謂語動詞。提升訓練練習L她的臉頰因?qū)擂味茻幔恢涝撛趺崔k。（前半句“五官”用：獨立主格）Cheeksburningwithembarrassment/shame,shewonderedwhattodo.練習2：頓時，她的大腦一片空白，不知道該怎么辦。（前半句“大腦”用：獨立主格）Allofasudden,hermindgoingblank,shehadnoidea/atalosswhattodo.練習3：被所發(fā)生的一切嚇壞了，他站原地不動，不知道接下來怎么辦（非謂語）。Terrifiedbywhathadhappened,hewasrootedtothespot,notknowingwhattodonext.萬能片段2：激動（開心/緊張/害怕）Overwhelmedbywildjoy,Irosetomyfeetandpunchedmyfistintheair,shoutingoutloud,“Imadeit!”.被狂野的喜悅所淹沒，我站起來，在空中揮拳，大喊道：“我做到了！”練習L驚慌失措，我跳了起來，盡可能大聲地尖叫：“救命！”。Overcomebyasenseofpanic,Isprangtomyfeet,screamingasloudasIcould,“Help!”.練習2：被一陣緊張所支配，我跳了起來，問自己說：“我該怎么辦？二Dominatedbyaflushofnervousness,Ijumpedtomyfeet,askingmyself,“WhatshouldIdo?”練習：[2021全國1卷Mother?sDaySurprise]“成功了！我們做到了！Jeff大喊大叫，她在空中揮舞著拳頭。一種溫暖的感覺充滿了她們的心，因為這對她們來說真的是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。不管怎樣，她們勝利完成了一個愉悅的驚喜?！癐twasasuccess!Wemadeit!”Jeffshoutedasshepunchedherfistintheair.Asenseofwarmthfilledtheirheartsinthatitwastrulyamemorableexperienceforthem.（inthat由于二because）Believeitornot,theypulledoffadelightfulsurprise.萬能片段3：緊張+成功Heartracingandpalmssweating,hedraggedhistremblinglegsforward.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,uEverythingwillbegreat.I,IImakeit!”...（成功后）Hearingtheinspiringnews,heleapedintotheairwithiov.［2022深圳二模GoGreen］心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖著顫抖的雙腿向前走。深吸一口氣，他堅定地喃喃自語道，“一切都會很好的。我能做到！、聽到這個鼓舞人心的消息，他高興地跳到了空中練習：［2022全國1卷Theforestrun］心跳加速，手心出汗，David拖著顫抖的雙腿走回跑道。（跑道course）他什么也感覺不到，只有手在顫抖，心臟砰砰直跳，喉嚨緊繃。（獨立主格）深吸了一口氣，他堅定地喃喃自語，“一切都會很好的。我能做到！工終于完成了比賽，David高興地跳到了空中。Heartracingandpalmssweating,Daviddraggedhistremblinglegsbacktothecourse.Hecouldfeelnothingbuthishandsshaking,heartpoundingandthroattightening.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,“Everythingwillbegreat.\"IImakeit!”...Havingfinishedtherun,Davidleapedintotheairwithjoy.萬能片段4：復雜心情（震驚/害怕/迷茫）Foramoment,withinmvheartwasa8mpiexfeeling,whichmademerootedtothespot.全部倒裝的主句 定語從句Ishouldnothavebehavedinthatway.虛擬語氣有一瞬間，我心中有一種復雜的感覺，令我釘在原地（倒裝+定從）我不應該那樣做（虛擬語氣）練習一［2016浙江卷］:在她內(nèi)心有一種復雜的感覺，簡維持一動也不動，疲憊和無法動彈。Withinherheartwasacomplexfeeling.Janeremainedrootedtothespot,exhaustedandunabletomove.練習二［2021八省聯(lián)考續(xù)寫］:在我內(nèi)心有巨大的驚訝和感激，我站著一動也不動，盯著那個即將從盒子里拿出午餐的女孩。Withinmyheartwereenormoussurpriseandgratitude.Istoodrootedtothespot,staringatthegirlwhowasabouttotakeouttheirlunchfromabox.練習三［2021全國1卷］:爸爸難以置信地釘在原地，當他看著可怕的廚房，想象雙胞胎做了啥Withinhisheartwasacomplexfeeling.Dadremainedrootedtothespotindisbelief,watchingtheterriblekitchenandimaginingwhattheyhaddone.萬能片段5：感激（感激+感悟）提煉：①Chokedwithoverwhelmingsbl...sb2,withoutwhosehelpsblcouldn'thavedonesth.②Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedsblofthevalueofsth,inspiringhimtodosth.練習：［2022全國1卷theforestrun］構(gòu)思結(jié)尾：David完成跑步，明白勇氣的重要（用以上模板）①David因巨大的興奮而哽咽，他緊緊地抱著我和他的教練，沒有（我們的）指導，他就無法完成跑步，他堅持這樣說。②正是這次獨特的經(jīng)歷讓大衛(wèi)想到了勇氣和信心的價值，激勵他從此勇敢地應對挑戰(zhàn)。Chokedwithoverwhelmingexcitement,Davidhuggedmeandhiscoachtightly,withoutwhoseguidancehecouldn'thavefinishedtherun,asheinsisted.ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethathadremindedDavidofthevalueofcourageandfaith,inspiringhimtoaddresschallengesbravelyeversince.萬能片段6：成功+結(jié)尾練習：［2016年浙江高考］空氣中彌漫著一陣熱烈的興奮，Jane最終獲救了。她非常激動，因為她成功地和丈夫團聚。她內(nèi)心想到，她再也不會犯同樣的錯誤了。流下了喜悅的淚水，夫婦兩人都興高采烈?。ň涫追侵^語sheddingtears）AbuzzofexcitementfilledtheairasJanewaseventuallyrescued.Shewassothrilledinthatshesucceededinreunitingwithherhusband.Shethoughttoherselfthatneverwouldshemakethesamemistake.Sheddingtearsofjoy,thecouplewereinhighspirits!讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓練之用動作細節(jié)描寫表達感情佳句觀摩?他很困。概括描寫：Heisverysleepy.細節(jié)描述：Hecoveredhismouthtohidehisyawn（捂住嘴不讓人看見他打哈欠）..我們很驚訝。概括描寫：Weareverysurprised.細節(jié)描述：Ourmouthsdroppedopeninsurprise（驚奇地張大嘴巴）..她非常生氣。概括描寫：Shewasveryangry.細節(jié)描述：Shefoldedherarmsandglaredathim（交叉雙臂，怒視著他）..她非常興奮。概括描寫：Shewasveryexcited.細節(jié)描述：Shejumpedtoherfeetwithjoy（高興地跳起來）atthenews.練習一.當主持人宣布她獲獎的時候，她興奮極啦！Thehostannouncedthathewontheprize,hisfacegleamingwithdelight./hiseyesglitteringwithjoy/hiseyestwinklingwithexcitement.Onhearingthegoodnewsthathewontheprize,hewaswildwithdelight.Atthesightof...Atthethoughtof....當媽媽親吻他時，小孩開心極了。Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheekjtseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld（非常開心）..他很激動（二他激動得心怦怦跳），心情久久不能平靜。Hisheartthumpingwithexcitementitwaslongbeforehecalmeddown..聽到你成功的消息我非常高興。細節(jié)描述：Onhearingthenewsofyoursuccess,Idancedwithjoyandsweetness（我歡欣雀躍）..謝爾登感到非常生氣。（沖出房間；狠狠摔門）.細節(jié)描述：Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhimSoangrydidhefeelthathe....盡管她什么也沒說，可是她眼里充滿了憤怒,幾乎控制不住怒火。細節(jié)描述：Thoughshesaidnothing,hereyeswerefullofangerandshecouldhardlycontainherrageNothingasshesaid,hereyesfilledwithrageandfury,shefailedtocontainhisrage.讓我很生氣（=使我充滿憤怒；說不出話）。鄉(xiāng)田節(jié)描述：Hisattitudemademefilledwithanger,unabletoutterasingleword.,deprivingmeofpowerofspeech..他看著凱瑟琳，充滿了憂傷。（悲傷到木然；不能開口說話）.鄉(xiāng)田節(jié)描述：HelookedatKatherine,numbwithgrief,havingtroublespeaking..這個小姑娘默默地站著；眼淚順著面頰流了下來.Thelittlegirlstoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhercheeks.一聽到那個壞消息、，她悲傷不已（心痛；眼淚直流）。Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks（.查理對這個消息感到傷心（=感覺好像自己漂浮在悲傷的海洋里）。Onhearingthenews,Charliefeltlikehewasfloatinginanoceanofsadness..看了這部恐怖片，她嚇壞了（她嚇壞了，根本睡不著）。Afterseeingthehorrorfilm,shewastooscaredtogotosleep.（嚇得心都提到嗓子眼了）細節(jié)描述：Iwasnervousandhadmyheartinmythroat.升級版：Heartinthroat,Iwasextremelynervousandfrighted..她害怕得動彈不得（嚇得她魂不附體,站在那兒一動不動）.細節(jié)描述：Shegotsofrightenedthatitscaredheroutofherwitsandstoodstillt