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以“禮物”為主題寫一篇作文。該文章必需包括以下內(nèi)容：

1、你送禮物的對象及所送的禮物。

2、該禮物對他（她）可能產(chǎn)生的影響或帶來的變化。

例文1

PresentsforGrandma

Mygrandmaisareallywonderfulwoman.Shehasbeenworkingveryhardallthroughherlifeforourfamily.AndIoweheralot.Sheisnowbecomingolderandolder,butstillleadsapoorlife.Ifeelsorryforher,soIwanttosendhersomepresents,hopingthattheycancomfortherlonelyheart.

I’llfirstsendherapairofspecialglasses.Hereyeshavealreadybecomeabarriertoherandmyglasseswillhelpherseetheworldclearly.Shemustfeelverydelightedtohavemyglasses.

I’llthensendherasuitofclothes.Shehasbeendressingherolddress,whichwasboughtabout40yearsago.Myclotheswillmakeherlookmorebeautiful.

I’lllastsendhersomemedicineswhichwillcureherache.Hardworkhasmadeherbodyacheterribly.Ireallyfeelsorry.Mymedicineswillcureherandgiveherahealthybody.

例文2

Presentsformybrother

Mybrotheristheonlyboywhohasgrownuptogetherwithme.Welivetogetherforreallyalongtime.ButsoonI’llleavehimtoattendcollege.He’llliveallbyhimself,lonelyandsad.SoIintendsomepresentsforhim,inhopethathe’llthinkofmewhenhefeelslonely.

I’llbuyhimsomebooksonEnglish.HeisalwayssopooratEnglishandgetsaverylowmark.ButGodknowsthatEnglishistooimportant.

I’llalsobuyhimapairofshoes.Hehasalwaysbeenwearingmyoldshoes,andheneverownsanewone.Ihopemynewpairofshoeswillgivehimpleasureandhe’llrealizemyloveformydearbrother.

I’llalsotakemywordsashispresents.He’lllivealoneandI’llgivehimsomeusefulwords,fromwhichhe’lllearnthatheneedworkhardandneversaydie!

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下表提供了你所心儀的南、北兩所高校的招生信息。通過比較作出挑選，并結(jié)合個(gè)人狀況說明理由。

例文1

Everybodyhasbigdreamsandregardsuniversitiesastheidealplaceformakingthosedreamscometrue.Choosinganidealuniversitycanbeoneofthemostimportantchoiceswemakeinlife.

Betweenthetwouniversities,NorthandSouth,IthinkthattheSouthernUniversityismoresuitabletome.AlthoughthecostintheSouthernUniversityismuchhigher,thenumberof

studentstobeadmittedfrommyareaisalsohigher.

IfIchoosetogototheSouthernUniversity,IwillbeabletoexperiencebeautifulscenerythatIhaveneverexperiencedbefore,eatfoodthatIhavenevereatenbefore,andlearnaboutculturesthatIhavenotlearnedaboutbefore.

Withallthisinmind,IthinkitistomybenefittochoosetheuniversityintheSouth.Mychancesofsuccesswillbemuchgreater,andIthinkitwillhelpmetosucceedinreachingmygoalsandseeingmydreamscometrue.

例文2

Atthistime,I’mfindingitverydifficulttomakeadecisionthatwhichuniversitytoapplyto.ShouldIapplytotheuniversityintheNorthortheSouth?

Inthecaseoftuition,theNorthernUniversityoffersamoreattractivedeal,buttheyonlyrecruit10studentsfromthisarea,whiletheSouthernUniversitycostsmore,butadmits20studentsfromthisarea.

IhavelivedallmylifeintheNorthern,andIfeelthatwithaneasierchancetogetintoauniversityintheSouth,andachancetoexperiencedifferentculturesandcustoms,IwillchoosetoapplytotheuniversityintheSouth.

IbelievethatintheSouth,Iwillbeabletoeatmoredeliciousfoods,seemorebeautifulsceneryandlearnmoreaboutlifethanIwillintheNorth,IfeellifewillbeexcitingandthechangeofpacewillbegreatifIchoosetoattenduniversityintheSouth.

IalsobelievethatthepreferentialpolicygivenbytheNorthernUniversitywillnothelpmeinmyentranceapplication.Giventheseconditions,andlookingatbothsidesofthecoin,IfeelthatitwouldbetomyadvantagetochoosetheuniversityintheSouth.

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古人云：“天生我材必實(shí)用?！保═heremustbeauseformytalent。）請你描述你生活中的一件事，說明人各有所長，無論才干大小，都能成為實(shí)用的人。

例文1

Thereisanoldsayingthattheremustbeauseformytalent.Ihaveregardeditasmymottoformanyyears.Frommypointofview,thereisnodifferencebetweenonepersonandanother.Withsomeusefultalent,youwillmakecontributionstothissociety.

WhenIwas10yearsold,therewasanoldmanlivingatthecornerofxxroad.Hedidn’thavetheopportunitytostudyinschool,buthelearnedhowtomakewoodfurniture.Everytimepeoplewenttoaskhimtosolvesomeproblemsoffurniture,hewaswillingtohelpthem.

Tomysurprise,inhissparetime,hewouldmakesomewoodtoyswithsmallpiecesofwood.Someofthemweresoldtotoystoresandtheothersweregiventous.ThemomentIsawthelovelytoysmadebythisoldman,Iwouldrememberthehappychildhood.

Fromthisoldman,wecanseethatwhateverkindoftalentyouhave,youcanfindyourownwaytodisplayyourtalent.Themostimportantfactorisyourconfidence.Ifyoubelievethattheremustbeauseforyourtalent,youwillsucceed.

例文2

Thesunwasshiningandthebirdsweresinginghappily,butitwasraininginmyheart,becauseIwasarrangedtodothecleaningatthecomingartparty.HowIwantedtobeoneofthe

heroes!ButsinceIhadnoanyspecialtalentssuchassinginganddancing,Ihadtodosuchwork.ThoughIfeltverysad,Istilltriedmybestattheparty,Ikepttheroomcleanduringthepartyandclearedawaytherubbishafterit.Seeinganyoneenjoyedthemselvesalot,Ithoughtmyworkwasworthwhileandmeaningful.Themomentsomeonetoldmethatwithoutme,theymighthavebeenalittlebin,Ideeplyunderstoodthesaying,“Theremustbeauseformytalent.”Andmytalentwasmyhardwork!

Mydearfriend,maybeyouhavenospecialtalentsjustlikeme.Butitdoesnotmatter.Ifonlyyoudoeverythingtothebestofyourability,youwillfindsomethingglitteringinacertaincornerinyourlife—itwascalledthegoldoflife.

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教師要求你負(fù)責(zé)班級墻報(bào)（wallnewspaper）工作并征求你的意見。在日記中表述你的打算并談?wù)効捶ā?/p>

例文1

Tuesday,June8th,2022FineToday,myhead-teacheraskedmetotakechargeofthewallnewspaper.Shealsowantedmetogivesomeadvice.Anawfullotofideascametomindaswellasexcitementwhensheaskedmethis.

Well,firstofall,wallnewspapershelpustobroadenourhorizonandgiveustipsforourstudy.Theyshouldcontainsomeworldaffairsaswellasstudymethods.

Sincenewspapersalwayskeepupwithcurrenttrendsandevents,theyshouldalsoefilledwithfestivalcelebrationarticles.Inthisway,itcancontributetotheincreasingsenseofnationalcustoms.

Otherthingssuchasjokescanalsobeaddedtothem.

Inaword,theyshouldbebothinterestinganduseful/

Astotheform,it’sbesttobecolorfulandclearsoastoappealtoasmanystudentsaspossible.

例文2

Thursday,October26th,2022CloudyIntheclassroom,thewallnewspaperisafeastforoureyes.Fromit,wecangetalotofusefulinformation,suchaslearningskills,currentaffairsandsoon.Thosewallnewspaperswithbeautifulpicturesandcalligraphywillapp