高中英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)-附答案

Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitorandoneoftheexcellentstudentinourclass.Althoughsheisclever,butsheworksveryhard.Wehavealotoncommonandhavealottotalkabout.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.ShewasdoingherhomeworksoneSundaymorningwhenshesmeltsomethingburning.ShestoppedlookoutoftheindowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbourshouseShecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremeameandputoutfire.Herneighbourwasverythankfulforherhelp.gothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplaceinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmeanythingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,Istillfeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpractisemyspokenEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldhavebeenabletohelphim.DearRalph,toexpressmyfeeling.Hewroteback.Inhisletterhesaid,"Wearestudents.Ourtaskisstudyhard.Letustowaitandseewhetherwehavesomechanceaftergraduation."SoaftergraduationItelephonedtohim,askhiboutgoingout.Buthesaidhedidn'twantto.HejustwantedtosleepandwatchedTV.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddoDoyouthinkIshouldcontinuetolovehimandgiveupDearBob,Hello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher,MissFang.I’dliketoyourpenfriend,andgettoknowmoreaboutyourcountry.First,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.IgotoHongqiMiddleSchool.Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasmaths,Chinese,Englishandphysics.IusetoplayyanyballgamesWhatyourfavoritesportIlookforwardtohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHuaTwomonthsago,Iwenttoabroadforfurtherstudy.BeforeIleft,Iwasgivenalotpresent.Amongthem，thereweretwopresentswhichwerereallyinterestedaboutcustomsofdifferentcountryinthem.Mybrothergavemeanotewhichread,“Mypresenthasputinyourbedroom.”WhenIhurriedintomybedroom,Ifoundatoreceivethesetwopresents.DearLiMing,gwellwithmyresearchworksinthelab.But,tomysurprising,yousayyouwillndyouhavelostinteresting.I’mafraidIcan’tagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,andEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtodayanditwillthereisaway.lovethemverymuch.AreyougoingonwellwithyourparentsYouandyourparentswillbeveryhappyifyoucanbefriend.Herearesomewaytohaveagoodtalkwithklifewhentheyareyoung.Theylovetotalkaboutourpast!Meetthemfacetofaceandlistentothemcarefully.Behonesty,andyourparentswilltrustyoumore.OneafternoonJackiswalkingdownariveralong.Itwasverycolddayandontheriverfewboatscouldbeseen．Whenhestoppedonabridgeandlookdown,hesawaterriblescene.Aboyfellofacanoe(獨(dú)木舟)andwasstrugglinginthewasabouttodrag(拖)theboytotheriverbankthenhesawsomepeoplestandinaremakingafilmandyou’vespoiledawholeafternoon’swork!”8.去掉had改為at改為herowatch改為or7.use改為used。據(jù)下文butnow可知，此處應(yīng)用usedtodo表示“過(guò)去常常做某doingsth.為固定短語(yǔ)。to短語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤。goabroad“出國(guó)”。77．present→presents名詞的數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。present“禮物”，是可數(shù)名詞。78．去掉第二個(gè)were動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤。interest在此是及物動(dòng)詞用法，意為“使……感興趣”。beinterestedin“對(duì)……感興趣”。79．buys→bought時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由全文可知，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。81．them→it代詞錯(cuò)誤。在這本書里有關(guān)于肢體語(yǔ)言的圖片和不同國(guó)家的語(yǔ)言習(xí)俗。態(tài)。83．that→which定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系詞錯(cuò)誤。介詞后用which，不用that。84．but→and連接邏輯錯(cuò)誤。前后是并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。改錯(cuò)五去掉后的you改為me→work→learning→recently→改錯(cuò)六41.about→with/to根據(jù)句意，可知此處是表達(dá)“和父母交談”，而不是“談?wù)摳?2.as→evenif意為“好像”，