中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作講評(píng)一

中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作講評(píng)一第1頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)第2頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)Isshe?第3頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)暈輪效應(yīng)又稱“光環(huán)效應(yīng)”，屬于心理學(xué)范疇，是指當(dāng)認(rèn)知者對(duì)一個(gè)人的某種特征形成好或壞的印象后，他還傾向于據(jù)此推論該人其他方面的特征。本質(zhì)上是一種以偏概全的認(rèn)知上的偏誤。第4頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)cleandirtymessyneatovermoderate第5頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)123書(shū)寫(xiě)handwriting字?jǐn)?shù)numberofwords格式formatstandardandcleanneatandclearnottoomanyortoofew第6頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)1書(shū)寫(xiě)handwriting第7頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)字母書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范字母大小合適卷面布白均勻留白傾斜度一致第8頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)第9頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)2格式format第10頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)第11頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)第12頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)第13頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)就讀于某寄宿制中學(xué)。你的室友王明經(jīng)常違反寢室（dormitory）規(guī)定，如不整理床鋪，休息時(shí)間大聲撥打電話，未經(jīng)許可（permission）動(dòng)用他人物品，離開(kāi)寢室不關(guān)燈等。為了提醒他改正不良習(xí)慣，做個(gè)文明室友，你決定寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給他。要求：（1）包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；（2）字?jǐn)?shù)：60-80詞（信得開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不介入總詞數(shù)）；（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名，學(xué)校名和地名。參考詞匯：respecteachother互相尊重therefore因此obeytherules遵守規(guī)定withoutpermission未經(jīng)允許3字?jǐn)?shù)numberofwords第14頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)DearWangMing,

I’mwritingtokindlyremindyouofthedormitoryrules.Asweliveinthesameroom,wearelikefamiliesthusweshouldloveeachotherandrespecteachother.What’smore,weshouldmakeourroomcleanandtidy.Therefore,Ihopeyoucanreadthefollowingrulesandobeythem.RuleNo.1Whenyougetupinthemorning,remembertomakethebed.RuleNo.2Don’tmakephonecallswhenwearesleeping.RuleNo.3Don’tuseothers’thingswithoutpermission.RuleNo.4Turnoffthelightsbeforeyouleavetheroom.Ihopeallofuscanobeytheserulesandmakeourroommoreandmorecomfortable.Bestwishes,LiHua第15頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)第16頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)85第17頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)113第18頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)第19頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)

I’mwritingtokindlyremindyouofthedormitoryrules.Asweliveinthesameroom,wearelikefamiliesthusweshouldloveeachotherandrespecteachother.What’smore,weshouldmakeourroomcleanandtidy.Therefore,Ihopeyoucanreadthefollowingrulesandobeythem.RuleNo.1Whenyougetupinthemorning,remembertomakethebed.RuleNo.2Don’tmakephonecallswhenwearesleeping.RuleNo.3Don’tuseothers’thingswithoutpermission.RuleNo.4Turnoffthelightsbeforeyouleavetheroom.Ihopeallofuscanobeytheserulesandmakeourroommoreandmorecomfortable.10行每行10個(gè)字；8行每行12個(gè)字第20頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)123書(shū)寫(xiě)handwriting字?jǐn)?shù)numberofwords格式format書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范大小合適布白均勻不宜太多不宜太少10*10/8*12結(jié)構(gòu)清楚三段式總分總第21頁(yè)/共24頁(yè)“Outerbeauty”comesfirst!Ifanotheropportunityisgiven,oneofm