Unit 4 談?wù)搯?wèn)題,提出建議話題作文寫作指導(dǎo)課件 2022-2023學(xué)年人教版八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)

Unit4Whydon'tyoutalktoyourparents?單元話題滿分范文必背

單元寫作指導(dǎo)【話題解析】

本單元以“談?wù)搯?wèn)題,提出建議”為話題,該話題常見的書面表達(dá)形式是訴說(shuō)煩惱"和給出建議"。根據(jù)提示寫自已的問(wèn)題和煩惱及征求建議.人際溝通與情感交流既有家庭方面的，也有社會(huì)層面的：人際溝通方面存在的問(wèn)題。在家庭，父母與子女之間的溝通；在社會(huì)，朋友或同事之間的交流等。對(duì)人際溝通存在的問(wèn)題給出一些建議。寫作此類話題作文的常用常用短語(yǔ)有：bestrictwithsb.對(duì)某人要求嚴(yán)格becomefat變胖allowsb.todosth.允許某人做某事dealwith處理

laughat嘲笑copyone'shomework抄某人的作業(yè)

getbadgrades成績(jī)不理想

havenofriends沒(méi)有朋友

underalotofpressure壓力很大toomuchhomework太多家庭作業(yè)domoreexercise多鍛煉asksb.forhelp向某人求助makeaproperplan制定恰當(dāng)?shù)挠?jì)劃haveagoodcommunicationwithsb.和某人好好溝通getintoagoodhighschool/university進(jìn)入一所好的高中/大學(xué)feelnervousbeforeexams考前緊張haveafightwithsb.和某人吵架getalongwithsb.與某人和諧相處寫作此類話題作文的常用表達(dá)有：1.Ihavesomuchhomework(todo)thatIdon'thaveanyfreetimetodothingsIlike.我有太多的作業(yè)要做以致于沒(méi)有空閑時(shí)間做自己喜歡的事2.Parentsarealwayssobusythattheydon'thaveanyfreetimetoplaywiththeirchildren.父母總是非常的忙碌，以致于沒(méi)有時(shí)間陪伴他們的孩子3.Myparentsdon'tallowmetohangoutwithmyfriends.我的父母不允許我和朋友出去逛街。4.lt'snoteasybeingyourage,andit'snormaltohavethesefeelings.像你這個(gè)年齡，這對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)不容易，有這種感覺也是正常的。5.Istudieduntilmidnightlastnight,soIdidn'tgetenoughsleep.

我昨晚一直學(xué)習(xí)到半夜，所以我沒(méi)有睡好6.Myparentsgivemealotofpressureaboutschool.

我的父母給了我很大的關(guān)于學(xué)校的壓力。寫作此類話題作文的常用表達(dá)有：7.Asastudent,lifeshouldn'tjustbeaboutgrades.After-schoolactivitieslikesportsandhangingoutwithfriendsareimportant,too.對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，生活不應(yīng)該僅僅關(guān)于成績(jī)。課外活動(dòng)如運(yùn)動(dòng)和與朋友逛一逛也是非常重要的。8.Thesedays,Chinesechildrenaresometimesbusieronweekendsthanweekdaysbecausetheyhavetotakesomanyafter-schoolclasses.如今，中國(guó)的孩子有時(shí)候周末比上學(xué)的時(shí)候更忙碌，因?yàn)樗麄儽仨毶显S多補(bǔ)習(xí)班。9.Insomefamilies,competitionstartsveryyoungandcontinuesuntilthekidsgetolder.在一些家庭中，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)在孩子很小的時(shí)候就開始了，然后一直持續(xù)到孩子長(zhǎng)大。10.Whynottalkabouttheseideaswithyourteachers為什么不和你的老師談?wù)勥@些想法呢？11Iwillneverforgettheday.我永遠(yuǎn)忘不了這天。Itwasreallytheworstdayofmylife.這真是我人生中最糟糕的一天.寫作要點(diǎn)∶

1.與父母和諧相處很重要;2.與父母和諧相處的做去或建議;（1）理解與尊重父母;

（2）多與父母交流。（3）與父母和諧相處的感受第一段—第一段開門見山，表明自己的觀點(diǎn)It'sveryimportantforustogetonwellwithourparents.Buthowcanwegetalongwellwithourparents?Hereissomeofmyadvice.第二段—介紹與父母和諧相處的具體建議Weshouldunderstandandrespectourparents.Parentstalkmuchbecausetheycareaboutus.Wearesupposedtolistentothem.Whenwewanttotellthemouropinions,we'dbetterbeinapoliteway.Weshouldalsotalkwiththemaboutourhappinessandtellthemaboutourproblems.Whenwearefee,we'dbetterhelpthemdosomethings第三段—接著介紹自己與父母和諧相處的感受;最后總結(jié)全文。

Igetonwellwithmyparents.Ienjoysharingeverythingwithmyparents.Myparentsarelikemybestfriends.TheyareproudwhenIdosomethingwellandtheytrytheirbesttohelpmewhenIhavetrouble.Weloveeachother.Let'sgetonwellwithourparentsbecausetheyareourparents作文范例1：

假設(shè)你是張偉，你的英國(guó)筆友Frank來(lái)信告訴你，他因長(zhǎng)時(shí)間打游戲與父母發(fā)生了爭(zhēng)吵，很難過(guò)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)及要求，用英語(yǔ)寫封回信。要點(diǎn)：1.長(zhǎng)時(shí)間打游戲是錯(cuò)的，父母是對(duì)的；2．打游戲浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，傷害眼睛，不利于學(xué)習(xí)；3．向父母道歉，與他們溝通；4．不打游戲，努力學(xué)習(xí)，幫父母做家務(wù)。要求：1.必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．詞數(shù)90左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；3．不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名?！緦懽魉悸贰炕匦艃?nèi)容1.表達(dá)關(guān)切之情；2．表明立場(chǎng)；3．分析對(duì)錯(cuò)；4．提出解決問(wèn)題的辦法；5．表達(dá)美好祝愿

DearFrank，

【范文展示】I'vereceivedyourletterandIknowyouarguedwithyourparents.Ireallyworryaboutyou.Ithinkit'swrongforyoutoplaygamesforalongtime.Yourparentsarerightbecauseplayinggameswastesalotoftimeandit'sbadforyoureyesandstudy.Youshouldunderstandandrespectyourparentsandgetonwellwiththem.Inthisway，youcanbehappyandimproveyourselfquickly.Ialsothinkthatyoushouldmakeanapologytoyourparents，foryouhavemadethemverysadandangry.Whenyoumeetsometrouble，you'dbettercommunicatewiththem.Don'tplaygamesanymore，studyhardandnevergiveup.Ifyou'refree，youcanhelpthemwithhousework.Pleasebehappyandeverythingwillbebetter.Yours，ZhangWei作文范例2：中學(xué)生在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。你的煩?/p>

你的做法個(gè)頭不高，相貌平常

不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少

學(xué)會(huì)溝通，友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動(dòng)少

……(自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn))要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。思路構(gòu)建構(gòu)思列綱提出問(wèn)題①I'mnottallandI'mnotgood--looking.②Myparentscan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.③Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudy.Ihavefewafter-schoolactivities.提出建議①Idon'tcareaboutthese,andIbelieveinmyself.②IcommunicatewiththemandI'mfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.③Irelaxmyself:Idosportsorlistentomusic.Igoshoppingwithmyparentsorfriends.Helloeveryone，IamLiHua.I'dliketotalkaboutmyproblemsandhowIdealwiththem.I'mnottallandI'mnotgood-looking.ButIdon'tcareaboutthese.Ialwaysbelieveinmyself.Myparentssometimescan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.SoIoftencommunicatewiththemandI'malwaysfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudytooandoftenhavefewafter-schoolactivities.SoIoftenrelaxmyself.WhenIhavefreetime,Ioftendosportsorlistentomusic.SometimesIgoshoppingwithmyparentsorfriends.Inthisway,wecangetbettergradesandenjoythecolorfullife.That’sall.Thankyou!單元話題滿分范文必背：

你將代表學(xué)校參加市中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽，演講的題目是Learningtogetalongwithourparents。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇演講稿內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：現(xiàn)象：經(jīng)常跟父母發(fā)火，甚至幾天不說(shuō)話。原因：父母過(guò)分關(guān)注分?jǐn)?shù)；我們…措施(不少于三點(diǎn))：

我們應(yīng)該和父母溝通；我們…；我們…要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2．必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80-100(劃線部分為已給開頭與結(jié)尾，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考范文

LearningtogetalongwithourparentsGoodmorning，ladiesandgentlemen!Todaymyspeech(演講)topic(主題)isLearningtogetalongwithourparents.Thesedays,mostofusfeelithardtogetalongwithoutparents.Weoftengetangrywithourparentsandevendon’ttalktothemforseveraldays.(開篇點(diǎn)題。引出觀點(diǎn)：存在相處困難的現(xiàn)象)Herearesomeofthereasons.First,ourparentsonlycareaboutourmarks(分?jǐn)?shù))anditmakesusstressed.Second,wedon’twanttocommunicatewiththem.(展開表述。闡述第二條內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：列舉產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因)It’stimeforustochange.First,wecancommunicatewithourparentsbysharingoutjoysandworrieswiththem.Thenwecanhelpdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Finally,weshouldspendenoughtimeonourschoolworksothattheywon’tfeelworriedaboutus.(結(jié)尾綜述。闡述第三條內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：改變這種現(xiàn)象的措施)That’sallformyspeech(演講).Thankyou!訓(xùn)練題目1：

★請(qǐng)你給雜志社寫一封信，來(lái)表述你對(duì):家長(zhǎng)們把孩子送到各種各樣的課外輔導(dǎo)班這件事的看法?！痉段恼故尽浚篒don’treallyagreewiththeideaofsendingkidstoafter-schoolclasses.Becausealltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforchildren.Ifthere’stoomuchpressure,itwillbebadforachild’sdevelopment.Inmyopinion,kidsshouldhavetimetorelaxandthinkforthemselves,too.Ibelieveit’sbetterthatparentsshouldn’tcomparetheirchildrenwithotherchildren.It’scrazyandnotfair.Perhapsparentsshouldlettheirkidsbekids.Althoughit’snormaltowantsuccessfulchildren,it’sevenmoreimportanttohavehappychildren

訓(xùn)練題目2：

面對(duì)現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園,今年春季教育部發(fā)布了一項(xiàng)通知,表示了禁止中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)同學(xué)們的不同觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇文章，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。參考詞匯：beconvenient,connectwith,information,bebadfor,cheatintheexams...主要觀點(diǎn)贊成1.便于和父母聯(lián)系2.能用手機(jī)查詢信息3.適當(dāng)放松，能聽音樂(lè)……反對(duì)1.玩手機(jī)不利于學(xué)習(xí)2.使用手機(jī)對(duì)眼睛不好。3.考試用手機(jī)作弊……你的觀點(diǎn)及建議……Nowadays,smartphonesarepopularamongstudents.Shouldwebeallowedtousesmartphonesatschoolornot?Ourstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentsthinktheycanusesmartphonesatschool.First,it’sconvenientforthemtocalltheirparents,teachersorfriendswhentheyhaveproblems.Second,theycansearchforwhattheyneedonsmartphones.Forexample,theycanlookupnewwordsandlookthroughnews.Third,theycanlistentomusictorelaxthemselvesonsmartphones.However,somestudentsdisagree.Theythinkusingsmartphonesatschoolisawasteoftime.Also,manystudentsspendtoomuchtimeongames,whichisbadfortheireyes.What'sworse,somestudentsmaycheatinexamswiththesmartphones.Inmyopinion.studentscan’tusesmartphonesatschool.Studentsshouldspendmoretimedoingsportsorhavingfunwithfriends.Theyshouldalsopaymoreattentiontotheirstudy.Iftheydothese,they’llbehappierandhealthier.

寫作實(shí)踐1

升入九年級(jí)之后，你有沒(méi)有經(jīng)常和父母爭(zhēng)執(zhí)周末是否可以外出活動(dòng)？請(qǐng)以“Areteenagersallowedtogooutonweekends?”為題，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。寫作提示：1.What’syourparents’opinion?2.What’syouropinion?寫作要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，書寫工整；2.100詞左右，題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

【參考范文】金典范文Areteenagersallowedtogooutonweekends?IoftenarguewithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutonweekendsafterIaminGrade9.Myparentsthinkthatteenagersshouldstayathometogoovertheirlessons.Teenagersshouldalsohaveenoughtimetohaveagoodrestonweekends.Also,teenagersaresupposedtohelptheirparentsdosomehousework.Inmyopinion,weteenagersneedtogooutwithourfriendsforfunsothatwecanrelaxourselvesafterabusyweek.Andwecanshareideaswitheachother.What'smore,wecanalsotakesomeexerc