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英語寫作-----Howtowriteanargumentation（議論文）第1頁/共23頁第一頁，共24頁。書面表達(滿分25分)暑假即將來臨，你班同學討論了假期計劃，提出了不同看法，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇關于討論的英語短文，并談談你的看法。(2006年陜西卷）優(yōu)點缺點待在家中花費少，舒適方便不能親身了解外界外出旅游增長知識，開闊眼（horizon/view）花費多，旅途不便注意：1.詞數(shù)100-1202.短文必須包括表中所列要點。

3.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.第2頁/共23頁第二頁，共24頁。

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diamond第3頁/共23頁第三頁，共24頁。convenientandcomfortablecostless/savemoneylosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld2.increaseone’sknowledgeandwidenone’shorizons/views1.(待在家中)花費少，舒適方便不能親身了解外界2.(外出旅游)增長知識，開闊眼界花費多，旅途不便spendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroubleonthewaybeginninghavedifferentviewsonsth/reacttosthindifferentways.differintheirattitudestowardssth.conclusionmyopinion(待在家中)(外出旅游)Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.someothers第4頁/共23頁第四頁，共24頁。

Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.

Somethinkthattheyprefertostayathome.Intheirviewsthereare2reasonsasfollows:inthefirstplace,theysayit’sbothconvenientandcomfortable.What’smore,theycansetasidemoneyforotherpurposes.

Furthermore,inthesecondplace,theywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld.

第5頁/共23頁第五頁，共24頁。Whileothers

prefertogoouttraveling.Intheirpointofview,foronething,itcanenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirviews.Foranotherthing,theywillspendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroublewhiletraveling.

Inaword,bothideashavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifitisnecessary,wecandecidewhethertogooutdependingonourpreference.第6頁/共23頁第六頁，共24頁。

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Thereisdiscussionabouttheissuethat（作文題目）Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.

Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_觀點一_.Intheirviewsthereare2reasonscontributingtothismatterasfollows:inthefirstplace,原因一.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,原因二.第9頁/共23頁第九頁，共24頁。People,

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isnotonlybecause____,butalsobecause____.……第10頁/共23頁第十頁，共24頁。介紹討論的主題(開頭句)：我們舉行了一場討論，討論內(nèi)容是……

WehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood第11頁/共23頁第十一頁，共24頁。過渡句

Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.主要有兩種不同意見。然而，在這件事上不同的人有不同的看法。第12頁/共23頁第十二頁，共24頁。介紹正方觀點：Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea.

Somebelievethat…第13頁/共23頁第十三頁，共24頁。進一步介紹正方觀點What’smore,wecan…aswellas…Besides,it’s…,which…第14頁/共23頁第十四頁，共24頁。介紹反方觀點Ontheotherhand,…ofthestudentsthink…However,othershavedifferentopinions.第15頁/共23頁第十五頁，共24頁。進一步介紹反方觀點What’sworse…What’smore…Inaddition,…Besides,…First,…Second,…Third,…第16頁/共23頁第十六頁，共24頁?？偨Y句(未達成一致)Inshort,noagreementhasbeenreachedyet.第17頁/共23頁第十七頁，共24頁。本人觀點：AsfarasIamconcerned,…….(Inmyopinion,…….;It’smyopinionthat……)Foronereason,……….Foranotherreason………Inaword,…….第18頁/共23頁第十八頁，共24頁。詞匯,句型,語法多樣化

1.覆蓋了所有的要點

2.應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯

3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊要點全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？第19頁/共23頁第十九頁，共24頁。假定你是李華。下面是你班班會上以“中學生是否能佩帶手機”為題進行討論的情況。請你寫一封信給21stCentury報的編輯說明該情況，并表明你自己的觀點。比例40%學生贊同60%學生不贊同贊同的理由：1.便于同親友聯(lián)系；2.可以上網(wǎng)查資料；3.儲存有用信息。不贊同的理由：1.手機輻射對人健康有害；2.響鈴影響自己和他人學習；3.容易引起相互攀比。注意：1.要包含所有的要點，但不要逐條翻譯；2.字數(shù)約100字。參考詞匯：輻射radiation第20頁/共23頁第二十頁，共24頁。DearEditor,

Thereisaheateddiscussionwe’vehadonwhethermobilephonesshouldbebroughttoschool.Wehavetwodifferentopinionsonthequestion.Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkstudentscanbringamobilephonetoschool.Intheirviewstherearethreereasonscontributingtothismatterasfollows:inthefirstplace,itisconvenientforastudentwhocarriesamobilephonetogetintouchwithhis/herparentsandfriends.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,hecanalsosearchforsomeimportantinformationontheInternetbythephone.Besides,it’sfashionabletohaveamobilephone.第21頁/共23頁第二十一頁，共24頁。

However,40percentofthestudentsareagainsttheview.Intheirpointofview,foronething,withmobilephones,somestudentsmayhaveachatontheInternetandspendmuchtimeplayinggames,whichhasabadeffectontheirstudyandhealth.What’smore,onemobilephonemaycostmuchmoneyandit’slikelytobelostintheschool.AsfarasI’mconcerned,studentsshouldplacetheirstudy