2016走向高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作進(jìn)行時(shí)7看圖類作文課件外研版領(lǐng)

路漫漫其修遠(yuǎn)兮吾將上下而求索走向高考·英語外研版·高考總復(fù)習(xí)寫作素能培養(yǎng)第三部分寫作進(jìn)行時(shí)(七)看圖類作文第三部分技巧點(diǎn)撥習(xí)作點(diǎn)評露一小手231技巧點(diǎn)撥習(xí)作點(diǎn)評21一、圖表作文一、圖表作文二、圖畫作文二、圖畫作文技巧點(diǎn)撥Ⅰ.寫作要點(diǎn)縱觀近幾年的高考書面表達(dá)試題，圖表類作文是當(dāng)今高考英語書面表達(dá)的常考題型之一，此類題型要求考生根據(jù)數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行分析與討論，得出令人信服的結(jié)論，或者對這一結(jié)論進(jìn)行評價(jià)。A．柱狀圖作為直觀形象展示數(shù)據(jù)變化的手段之一，常常在高考英語書面表達(dá)試題中出現(xiàn)。而柱狀類議論文要求考生要具備一定的數(shù)據(jù)分析能力，要能夠通過對寬度相等的柱形的高度的比較來判斷事物的動態(tài)發(fā)展趨勢。B．英語曲線圖作文實(shí)際是一篇“解說詞”，即通過曲線圖提供的信息，分析圖中數(shù)據(jù)，綜合推斷出文章的主題。C．解答此類試題時(shí)，要認(rèn)真觀察坐標(biāo)系信息，抓住變化趨勢，結(jié)合提供的時(shí)間和數(shù)據(jù)參照尋求切入點(diǎn)。然后根據(jù)變化過程，盡可能利用所給的文字信息進(jìn)行分類、比較、總結(jié)。另外，寫作過程中不必要將圖中全部數(shù)據(jù)信息加以描述，只需將典型內(nèi)容加以分析。Ⅱ.寫作模板Asisshownbythefigure/percentageinthetable/picture，________hasbeenonrise/decrease,significantly/dramaticallyrising/decreasingfrom______________in______________to____________in__________.Fromthesharprise/declineinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat________.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor______.On(the)onehand，________.Ontheotherhand，________isduetothefactthat________.Inaddition，________isresponsiblefor________.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow________.Butitisgenerallybelievedthatthereasonsmentionedabovearecommonlyconvincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat________.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.習(xí)作點(diǎn)評TheaveragefamilyeinourKangmingCityincreasedfrom10,000yuanperyearin2001to23,000yuanin2013.Inthemeantime,thestructureoftheaveragefamilyexpenseshasbeenchanged,too.【此處應(yīng)該使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的主動形式haschanged?！縏hesegraphsshowthechangeclearly.Thebiggestpartoftheaveragefamilyexpensesishousing.In2001,theaveragefamilyspent25percentofitseonhousing.In2013,expensesonhousingroseto42percent.【在該句前應(yīng)該使用While表示前后兩種情況的對比?！考记牲c(diǎn)撥Ⅰ.寫作要點(diǎn)圖畫作文一般可以分三段來描述。第一段用來描述圖畫并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句話來概括就可以)，第二段分析原因，最后一段發(fā)表評論或提出建議，其中第二、三段應(yīng)該是寫作的重點(diǎn)。具體來說，應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1．看清圖畫的標(biāo)題。2．仔細(xì)觀察圖畫，弄清畫面的含義，抓住畫面的主題。3．仔細(xì)品味圖畫的語言文字，認(rèn)真思考其中所隱含的觀點(diǎn)。4．根據(jù)畫面內(nèi)容，進(jìn)行合理想象。5．認(rèn)真安排內(nèi)容，布局謀篇。Ⅱ.常用句式1．開頭Lookatthepicture/Thepictureshowsthat.../Fromthepicture,wecansee.../Asisshowninthepicture.../Asisseeninthepicture.../Asisdescribedinthepicture.../Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowusthat.../Thepictureindicates/conveysthemeaningthat...2．銜接句Asweallknow，.../Asisknowntoall.../Inmyopinion，.../AsfarasIamconcerned，.../Thissightremindsmeofsomethinginmydailylife.3．結(jié)尾句Inconclusion，.../Inbrief，.../Onthewhole，.../Inshort，.../Inaword，.../Generallyspeaking，.../Ashasbeenstated，...習(xí)作點(diǎn)評Inthecartoon,wecanseeamanmakeaphonecallisdrivinghiscarcrazilypasttwopeople.【makeaphonecall作aman的定語，應(yīng)用making?！緼tthesightofthescene,oneofthemsaidhedidthesamethingasthedriverbefore.【此處應(yīng)該使用過去完成時(shí)haddone。】Obviously,thebadlyinjuredmanfeltverysorrow

and

regretaboutwhathehaddone.【此處應(yīng)該分別使用形容詞形式“sorrowfulandregretful”。】Whatthecartoonimpliesisthatweshouldneverneglectthetrafficsafetyrules，andwewouldregretallthelife.【此處要用or表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。】Onseeingthecartoon，Ican'thelpremindpeopletoobservethetrafficrulesstrictly.【此處要用can'thelpdoing這一短語結(jié)構(gòu)表示“情不自禁”?！縁oronething,itconcernsthesafetyandhappinessofallthepeople,

eitheryouareadriverorapedestrian.【此處要用whether...or...連接狀語從句。】F