初二上冊(cè)比較級(jí)寫作課定稿

知識(shí)目標(biāo)：能力目標(biāo)：教學(xué)目標(biāo)情感目標(biāo)：LearnthreeWritingStrategies.學(xué)3種寫作策略-問答式、閱讀積累式、結(jié)構(gòu)提綱式Publicizeyourpersonalityandlearnfromothers.張揚(yáng)個(gè)性，取長(zhǎng)補(bǔ)短。Graspthewordsandexpressions&Comparatives.掌握字、詞、句及比較級(jí)用法fantasticseriousnecessary形容詞outgoinghard-workingsimilar形容詞quietlyloudlytruly副詞短語(yǔ)makefriendswithbringoutgetgoodgradesbedifferentfrommakemelaughtrulycareabout讀一讀極好的嚴(yán)肅的必要的形容詞外向的勤奮的相似的形容詞安靜地大聲地真正，確實(shí)副詞短語(yǔ)與…交朋友使表現(xiàn)出取得好成績(jī)與…不同使我大笑真正關(guān)心我讀一讀

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me(真正關(guān)心我).That’sthemostimportant.madefriendswithoutgoingtalentedInfactdifferentfromastallasgetbettergradesnecessarybringoutmakemelaughtrulycaresaboutmorehard-working練一練1.Whoisyourbestfriend?2.WhatisMarylike?3.WhatdoesMarylike?5.What’rethedifferencesbetweenMaryandyou?7.WhydoyoulikeMary?4.IsMarysimilartoyou?6.What’sthesayingaboutfriends?在文中快速用數(shù)字序號(hào)標(biāo)出問題答案。回答問題。Whoisyourbestfriend?WhatisMarylike?WhatdoesMarylike?What’rethedifferences?Whydoyoulikeher?IsMarysimilartoyou?What’ssayingaboutfriends?MybestfriendisMary.Sheisoutgoingandtalented.Sheisgoodat/enjoysplayingbasketball.I’mquitedifferentfromher.I’mnotastallasher.Idon’tlikesports.I’mmorehard-working.Ialwaysgetbettergrades.It’snotnecessarytobethesame.IlikeMarybecauseshebringsoutthebestinme.Shecanmakemelaugh.Shetrulycaresaboutme.第一段第二段第三段常用比較級(jí)句子來(lái)描述不同點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)用完整的句子描述答語(yǔ)?；卮饐栴}策略一：?jiǎn)柎鹗綄懽鞣?/p>

問答式寫作法，是指寫作前，圍繞主題提出一系列問題，問題的答案即可組成文章的框架。MybestfriendisMary.Sheisoutgoingandtalented.Sheisgoodat/enjoysplayingbasketball.I’mquitedifferentfromher.I’mnotastallasher.Idon’tlikesports.I’mmorehard-working.Ialwaysgetbettergrades.It’snotnecessarytobethesame.IlikeMarybecauseshebringsoutthebestinme.Shecanmakemelaugh.Shetrulycaresaboutme.第一段第二段第三段回答問題Myfavoritesayingis,“FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.”Itmakesmethinkofmybestfriend,Linda.Insomeways,welooksimilar,andinsomeways,welookdifferent.Bothofushaveblackeyesandlongblackhair,butI’mlesstallthanher.I’mquietandserious,soit’snoteasyformetomakefriends.However,Lindaisnotsoquietasme.Sheismuchmoreoutgoing.Sheissotalentedintellingstoriesthatshealwaysmakesmelaugh.Althoughbothofusarehard-working,Lindaalwaysgetsbettergradesthanme.Shealsohelpstobringoutthebestinme.Weenjoystudyingtogether.Infact,IthinkIamagoodlistenerandI’malwaystheretolisten.Lindaisatruefriendwhoreachesformyhandandtouchesmyheart.練一練VS佳篇品讀任務(wù)一：（個(gè)人思考）1.圈出文中表述朋友觀的句子。2.橫線劃出總述Linda和I異同點(diǎn)的句子。3.用數(shù)字序號(hào)標(biāo)出含有比較的句子。Myfavoritesayingis,“FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.”Itmakesmethinkofmybestfriend,Linda.Insomeways,welooksimilar,andinsomeways,welookdifferent.Bothofushaveblackeyesandlongblackhair,butI’mlesstallthanher.I’mquietandserious,soit’snoteasyformetomakefriends.However,Lindaisnotsoquietasme.Sheismuchmoreoutgoing.Sheissotalentedintellingstoriesthatshealwaysmakesmelaugh.Althoughbothofusarehard-working,Lindaalwaysgetsbettergradesthanme.Shealsohelpstobringoutthebestinme.Weenjoystudyingtogether.Infact,IthinkIamagoodlistenerandI’malwaystheretolisten.Lindaisatruefriendwhoreachesformyhandandtouchesmyheart.練一練朋友是上帝對(duì)我們的恩賜。①②③④appearance外貌Character性格Hobbies特長(zhǎng)愛好VS佳篇品讀任務(wù)二：（個(gè)人展示）

What’syourfavoritesayingaboutfriends?.AgoodfriendislikeamirrorFriendsarelikebooks---youdon’tneedalotofthemaslongasthey’regoodMybestfriendhelpstobringoutthebestinme.Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.朋友失去容易，得來(lái)難！張揚(yáng)個(gè)性，取長(zhǎng)補(bǔ)短，珍惜友誼！策略二：閱讀積累式寫作法

閱讀積累式寫作法，就是從每個(gè)單元的閱讀材料中找出好詞、好句運(yùn)用到自己的作文中。正如世界上沒有兩片完全相同的葉子，每個(gè)人都是獨(dú)一無(wú)二的。有的人性格外向，活潑開朗；有的人性格內(nèi)向，文靜害羞；有的人友好善良；有的人嚴(yán)肅認(rèn)真。同學(xué)們，你發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的與眾不同之處了嗎？我們一起來(lái)分享一下吧！寫一寫以“mybestfriend”為題寫一篇短文。介紹一下你和你最好的朋友之間的相同點(diǎn)和不同點(diǎn)。要求：1.內(nèi)容要包含所給的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.不少于100字。

任務(wù)一：

口述文章的開頭Agoodfriendislikeamirror.MybestfriendisTom.Insomeways,welooksimilar,Insomeways,welookdifferent.Myfavoritesayingis,“Mybestfriendhelpstobringoutthebestinme.”Idon’treallycareifmyfriendsarethesameasmeordifferent.Appearance外貌Character性格Hobbies特長(zhǎng)愛好相同點(diǎn)不同點(diǎn)比我高的多性格比我更外向他更擅長(zhǎng)打羽毛球我考試成績(jī)更好都長(zhǎng)一雙大眼睛都很勤奮都喜歡旅游travel喜歡閱讀，經(jīng)常周末一起去圖書館任務(wù)二：（小組合作）S1S4：文章結(jié)尾S2S3Webothhave…Weareboth…Weenjoydoing…

比較級(jí)談不同開頭相同點(diǎn)和不同點(diǎn)結(jié)尾Insomeways,welooksimilar,insomewayswelookdifferent.自己的朋友觀Mybestfriend結(jié)構(gòu)提綱式寫作法，就是寫作前采取列表格、畫腦圖等列提綱的方式將文章的篇章布局和寫作重點(diǎn)清楚地羅列出來(lái)。策略三：結(jié)構(gòu)提綱式寫作法書寫（衡水字帖）內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)完整語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確標(biāo)點(diǎn)/大小寫/拼寫語(yǔ)言豐富(好詞好句)Writingtime

Webothhave…Weareboth…Weenjoydoing…

比較級(jí)談不同開頭相同點(diǎn)和不同點(diǎn)結(jié)尾Whoisyourbestfrien