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foradvice假如你叫孫軍，是興海中學(xué)的學(xué)生，要給市長寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點：參考詞匯:穿行threadone’sway天橋overpass問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對著主街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要。現(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的題材是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點的順序？

(order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài))

(when)第一人稱一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況說理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對著大街standnext/near/beside

to…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…There’saprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.推薦句型：Therebe+并列句非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.潤色小建議Nexttoaprimaryschool將介詞短語提前（全倒裝）

stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.可將standnextto替換為高級詞匯/短語belocatednextto(near/beside/by)

border/adjoinvt.beadjacentto與…毗鄰在…對面beoppositeto

Thetrafficisbusyduringtherushhours.高峰期交通繁忙…..traffic….duringtherushhoursDuringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.so….that…with結(jié)構(gòu)Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…潤色小建議“高峰期”可意譯:atpeaktime，alargecurrentofcarsandpeople“交通繁忙”可譯為:trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞bechokeupwithbecrammedwith被…堵塞/塞滿

加之孩子小,家長接送,交通更擁擠

send…to…,fetch….,非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.

,which….加之孩子小，家長接送，交通更擁擠What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethings

worse/what’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.makingthesituationmoreserious.makingthetrafficheavier可意譯為：

so….that….=too…toThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,which

makes/makingthetrafficheavier.making可替換為：causing,leadingto,resultingin“send…fetch…”可替換為短語：pickup潤色小建議

學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險threadone’sway，whendoingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.for…todo….Studentsarerisking

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tothreadtheirwayamongcars.潤色小建議2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.靈活運用其它的短語進(jìn)行意譯：適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞：

itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreat/tremendousdanger政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。suggest/suggestion,

takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchasMysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…表語從句固定句型Itishightimethat…(虛擬語氣)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass.簡單句1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…潤色小建議2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…A.適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過渡句）Thegovernment

shouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit.B.語義的意譯3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…C.添加形容詞和副詞Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures第三步.連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatA.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例不推薦字體優(yōu)秀作文范例1優(yōu)點：考生能靈活地處理各個信息點，大量運用非謂語，介詞短語，從句，連詞等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個性和語言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例2優(yōu)點：考生的書面整潔，字體美觀，運用therebe句型，介詞短語，從句，非謂語，套用句式等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例3優(yōu)點：考生運用倒裝句，so…that句式，精彩的表達(dá)以及虛擬語氣等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例4優(yōu)點：該考生最大的特色是運用了大量的高級詞匯等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語言底蘊(yùn)。優(yōu)秀作文范例5優(yōu)秀作文范例6Congestionn.阻塞,擁擠,充血適當(dāng)運用模板Dear____, Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere. Inmyhumbleopinion(依我拙見),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____. Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails. Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXXDearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

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(表達(dá)愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫回信。要點：⑴參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； ⑵看中文書刊、電視； ⑶學(xué)唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中國朋友。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語已給出。DearPeter,

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