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高一段參賽人：宋潔玉Welcometoourclass

通過提供一些圖片和提示詞，運用自己的觀察、分析、理解能力及語言表達能力，發(fā)揮想像，寫出一個句子。

play,guitar,3yearsShehasplayedtheguitarfor3years.英語書面表達(Writing)

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根據(jù)提示寫一篇完整的短文，所給材料入手，分析、理解，抓住中心要點，組織語言，使文章流暢。第一步：認真審題具體做法：用筆勾畫或?qū)懴?:體裁2:人稱

3:時態(tài)

4:提示5:要求明確寫作體裁、人稱、時態(tài)、提示和要求第二步：列出提綱（Outline）。具體做法：根據(jù)段落整理寫作要點不要遺漏要點！擴展成句把要點變成完整的句子。注意使用介/副詞第三步：連句成文詞與詞搭配，句與句相連。增加細節(jié)呼應首尾。第四步：美化文章選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。第五步：書面表達寫作技巧審列連擴美Let’senjoyacomposition!

假如你是王林。你所在學校的“愛心俱樂部(HelpingHandsClub)”將吸收新會員。你想加入該俱樂部，請根據(jù)下面表格和圖片的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一封申請信。

姓名王林性別男本人特點身體健康；學習刻苦；樂于助人；與同學友好相處“愛心”表現(xiàn)（見圖片）加入目的.….1.要求：1.表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；

2.要點須包括表格和三幅圖片中的信息，但不得使用真實姓名和校名等；

3.表格中“加入目的”一欄內(nèi)容由考生自擬；

4.詞數(shù)：100字左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChairman(主席)，IamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Yours, WangLin

假如你是王林。你所在學校的“愛心俱樂部(HelpingHandsClub)”將吸收新會員。你想加入該俱樂部，請根據(jù)下面表格和圖片的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一封自薦信。

姓名王林性別男本人特點身體健康；學習刻苦；樂于助人；與同學友好相處“愛心”表現(xiàn)（見圖片）加入目的1.…2.…1.審題第一步：用筆直接勾畫1:體裁:Thinking:寫下1:體裁2:人稱3:時態(tài)4:提示5:要求2:人稱:3:時態(tài):4:提示:5:要求:申請信“我”-----第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時想加入俱樂部?！拔摇钡奶攸c,愛心表現(xiàn)等。

要寫表格,圖片中的內(nèi)容,100字,加入的目的。

假如你是王林。你所在學校的“愛心俱樂部(HelpingHandsClub)”將吸收新會員。你想加入該俱樂部，請根據(jù)下面表格和圖片的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一封自薦信。

姓名王林性別男本人特點身體健康；學習刻苦；樂于助人；與同學友好相處“愛心”表現(xiàn)（見圖片）加入目的1.…2.…1.WriteanOutlineIntroduction介紹Mainbody正文Conclusion結(jié)束{{Iwanttojoin…

本人特點

“愛心”表現(xiàn)加入目的看表格看表格看圖自擬Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.

姓名/性別易漏掉的要點！“愛心”表現(xiàn)(examples)Picture1

help…with…h(huán)elpclassmateswithlessons我的I

oftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.Picture2“愛心”表現(xiàn)(examples)看圖givemyseatto…givemyseattopeopleinneedIoftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.“愛心”表現(xiàn)(examples)看圖Picture3cleanuphelpcleanuptheparkIoftenhelpcleanupthepark.DearChairman,IamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.MynameisWangLin.I’mhard-workingandI’mhealthy.Ioftenhelpothers.Andalsoamfriendlytoclassmates.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.

Onabus,Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneed.Ioftenhelpcleanupthepark.Iwanttotakepartinthisclub,becauseIwanttohelpmorepeople.IwillbegladifIamreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.yours,WangLin增加細節(jié)生動描述DearChairmanIamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.MynameisWangLing.I’mhardworkingandI’mhealthy.Ioftenhelpothers.Andalsobefriendlytoclassmates.

Whensomeoneisintrouble,I’llgoandhelpheorshe.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.

Theyoftensaythankstome.Onabus,I’llstandupwhenawomanwithhersongetonthebus.EverySaturday,I’llgotocenterparktopicktherubbish.Iwanttotakepartinthisclub,becauseofIwanttohelpmorepeople.IwillbegladifIamreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.yours,WangLinDearChairmanIamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.MynameisWangLin.I’mhard--workingandI’mhealthy.Ioftenhelpothers.Andalsobefriendlytoclassmates.Whensomeoneisintrouble,I’llgoandhelpheorshe.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.

Theyoftensaythankstome.Onabus,I’llstandupwhenawomanwithhersongetonthebus.IneverySaturday,I’llgotocenterparktopicktherubbish.Iwanttotakepartinthisclub,becauseofIwanttohelpmorepeople.IwillbegladifIamreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.yours,WangLin大家來找茬咯！DearChairmanIamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.MynameisWangLing.I’mworkinghardandI’mhealthy.Ioftenhelpothers.Also,Iamfriendlytoclassmates.Whensomeoneisintrouble,I’llgoandhelpheorshe.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.

Theyoftensaythankstome.Onabus,I’llstandupwhenawomanwithhersongetonthebus.IneverySaturday,I’llgotocenterparktopicktherubbish.Iwanttotakepartinthisclub,becauseofIwanttohelpmorepeople.IwillbegladifIamreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.yours,WangLinhimorherEcleanitup.

joinbecauseandgivetheseatstotheladywithababy.DearChairman

IamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.MynameisWangLing.I’mhard-workingandI’mhealthy.Ioftenhelpothers.Iamalsofriendlytoclassmates.Whensomeoneisintrouble,I’llgoandhelphimorher.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.

Theyoftensaythankstome.Inthebus,I’llstandupandgivetheseattoaladywithababy.EverySaturday,I’llgotocenterparktocleanitup.Iwanttojointhisclub,becauseIwanttohelpmorepeople.IwillbegladifIamreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.yours,WangLin第一人稱DearChairmanIamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.MynameisWangLing.I’mhard-workingandI’mhealthy.Ioftenhelpothers.Iamalsofriendlytoclassmates.Whensomeoneisintrouble,I’llgoandhelphimorher.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.

Theyoftensaythankstome.Inthebus,I’llstandupandgivetheseattoaladywithababy.EverySaturday,I’llgotocenterparktocleanitup.Iwanttojointhisclub,becauseIwanttohelpmorepeople.IwillbegladifIamreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.yours,WangLin一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。DearChairmanIamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.MynameisWangLing.I’mhard-workingandI’mhealthy.Ioftenhelpothers.Besides,Iamalsofriendlytoclassmates.Whensomeoneisintrouble,I’llgoandhelphimorher.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirlessons.

Theyoftensaythankstome.Inthebus,I’llstandupandgivetheseattoaladywithababy.EverySaturday,I’llgotocenterparktocleanitup.Iwanttojointhisclub,becauseIwanttohelpmorepeople.IwillbegladifIamreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.yours,WangLinIamingoodhealth.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletohelpmorepeople.選好詞句，美化文章,展示自己的語言功底。Let’stryappreciatingourcompositions報告內(nèi)容日期：2011年5月6日天氣：晴出勤情況：滿勤

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根據(jù)下列表格中的信息，用英文寫一篇值日報告，介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)——社旗。社旗概況提示詞:history;population;placesofinterest;;ShanshanmuseumNorthHills要求：1．必須用上所有的信息，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范；2．詞數(shù)100左右，已給出的句子不計入總詞數(shù)。Goodmorning,everyone!I'mondutytoday.————————————————————————————————————————————————That’sall.Thankyou!1:體裁:Thinking:2:人稱:3:時態(tài):4:提示:5:要求:值日報告。“我”