2020年中考英語作文專項訓(xùn)練

中考英語作文專項訓(xùn)練一、考點分析：在中考中，寫作占20分，分值所占比例大，而寫作考察學(xué)生的英文綜合運用能力，因此非常關(guān)鍵?！局锌加⒄Z作文的評分標準】比較為學(xué)生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4”結(jié)構(gòu)，即：（一）內(nèi)容：7-8分：內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。5-6分：內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達基本清楚、但不夠完整。2-4分：內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達不夠清楚、有些離題。0-1分：文不對題，表達不清。（二）語言：詞數(shù)：每少5個字扣0.5分，以此類推。只寫出個別單詞、詞不成句不給分。拼寫：每錯扣0.5分，同一錯誤不重復(fù)計數(shù)。語法：同②標點符號、大小寫：每兩處錯誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過1分。（三）組織結(jié)構(gòu)：內(nèi)容充實、上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達準確、無語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語者，可給3-4分。內(nèi)容充實、不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達準確、無或少見語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語者，可給2分。一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語言累計得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。內(nèi)容和語言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表達，可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。通篇句型、句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，一般也不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。二、寫作中常見問題：內(nèi)容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表達能力不強，表達生硬呆板，甚至中式英語翻譯思維。議論過多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情況下，把議論當成的作文的重點，常常跑題。句式單一，都是簡單句，缺少復(fù)合句。結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，思維跳躍，文章缺乏條理性。連詞的使用較少，并且使用單一，句子之間的連接很生硬。文章平淡，無亮點短語和句型，連接詞等。三、寫作技巧分析：【高分作文的必備元素】書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有涂改痕跡。2.不出現(xiàn)語法，拼寫，標點，大小寫等錯誤。3.文章字數(shù)最好控制在80-100字之間，切記過長或者過短，8-10句即可。4.要點齊全。為了避免遺漏要點，可以將題目中給出的要點標注出來。5.開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。6.連接詞使用恰當，不重復(fù)，上下文有連貫性，使之自然成一體。應(yīng)用詞匯:高級詞匯的合理使用、同義詞的變化使用、短語的恰當使用。多用亮點短語，并且使短語多樣性，盡可能使用多種表達方式。比如：同一個意思“幫助”，假如你就用一個動詞“help”，顯得詞匯貧乏。如果能在作文中不斷地變換方式，用help、givesb.ahand、dosb.afavor、beinneedof等以表達“幫助”，表達更靈活生動。句式多樣性，可適當使用陳述句，疑問句，祈使句及感嘆句，強調(diào)句，倒裝句，定語從句，狀語從句，賓語從句等。能夠恰當使用諺語、格言、名言等給文章添彩。語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣性,主動被動交叉用，原級比較級靈活用，非謂語動詞恰當用。靈活使用萬能句型，增添文章亮點。四、中考經(jīng)典范文解讀：VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Iwanttoinvent”（以“我想要發(fā)明”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）（注意：1、在答題紙上將題目補充完整。2、短．文．中．不．得．出．現(xiàn)．任．何．人．名．、．校．名．及．其．他．相．關(guān)．信．息．，．否．則．不．予．評．分．。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.（以下表達僅供參考）Itcanbeusedto...Itwillbeexciting/necessary/helpfhlto.范文精選一及點評：IwanttoinventaflyingcarItisnotuncommontomeettrafficproblemsandseriousairpollutioninbigcity.Itisamusttohaveaplantoimprovetheseriouscondition.Igetanideatodesignmyownflyingmachinelikeacarwhichcandrivewellinthestreetaswellasflybetweenthehighrisestoavoidthetrafficjam.What'smore,whenitismoving,itcantransformthemotionenergyintoelectricitytodrivetheengine.Thus,itispossibletosavealotoffuelandreducetheairpollution.Itisofgreatusetosolvetheproblemsoftrafficjamandairpollution,andevensavethenaturalresource.Brightideacanonlybeachievedwiththedeterminationandcourage.Ibelievemyideawillturnanewleafoffuturelife.精彩亮點分析：亮點一：高分短語亮點二：itisamust活用高頻詞亮點三：定語從句描述自己設(shè)計的汽車亮點四：高分短語亮點五：beofgreatuse名詞結(jié)構(gòu)更高端亮點六：被動語態(tài)，豐富句式亮點七：turnanewleafoffuturelife翻開未來生活的新篇章范文精選二及點評：IwanttoinventatimemachineAsastudentwhoisexperiencingunprecedentedmodernlifenowadays,Iwouldratherlearnaboutthehistoryandthefuturelifeofhumanbeingfromarealexperiencethanlearnfromatextbook.That'swhyifIcanworkasagreatinventor,inventingatimemachinewillbemyfirstchoice.ThemostimportantusageofmytimemachinewillbevisitingoneofbestschoolsinTangDynasty.Asweallknow,TangDynastyisfamousforitsopen-mindededucation.Therefore,whenIvisittheschooloftheancientcity,Icannotonlytrydifferentwaysofstudyingbutcommunicatewithpeoplefromdifferentcountriesaswell.Usingatimemachineisthemostvividwaytolearnhistoryasitisbotharecordofmankindandamirrorofpast,Iamlookingforwardtothedaywhenmytimemachinecomesout.精彩亮點分析：亮點一：定語從句修飾對學(xué)生現(xiàn)在的生活亮點二：用wouldrather…than…表達學(xué)生的意愿亮點三：用if條件狀語從句表達主題亮點四：befamousfor因…而著名亮點五：notonly...but...aswell不但…而且…亮點六：用動名詞詞組做主語亮點七：用idiom突出歷史的重要性亮點八：定語從句表達學(xué)生的期待范文精選三及點評：IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobotIwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,whichcanbeusedtocuretheillnesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfilledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.精彩亮點分析：亮點一：全文巧用“first,furthermore,inshort”等連接詞，把家庭機器人醫(yī)生的好處寫的非常清晰，讓閱卷老師一目了然。亮點二：全文采用了定語從句、狀語從句、并列句等多種長難句，為文采分增色不少。亮點三：文中出現(xiàn)了“extremely,makecontributionto”這些超綱單詞及詞組，恰到好處地強調(diào)了家庭機器人醫(yī)生的重要性，且為文采再次進行潤色。VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“I'mready”（以“我準備好了”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標題符號不占格）你對明天一定有著美好的憧憬，為此，你已經(jīng)做好了哪方面的準？請結(jié)合你的經(jīng)歷或特長等，選取一個角度具體談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫鰷蕚涞?。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.（以下內(nèi)容及供參考）Independentbegoodat...Responsibletakepartin...Hardworkingithelpsmeto...范文精選一及點評：I'MREADYSummerholidayiscoming,allmyclassmatesarepreparingtohaveawonderfulholiday,includingme.IamreadytogotoBeiDaihe,theseasideholidayresort,forswimmingandhavingagoodtimeontheseaside.Icannotonlyappreciatethebeautifulscenerybutalsobreathethefreshair.Itlooksgood,isn'tit?BeforeIgototheseaside,Ithinkit'simportanttotakesomethingusefulwithmesuchassunglasses,bathingsuit,suntanoilandmyhomeworkandsoon.Well,thelastIwanttocarryissomemedicine,whichcankeepmesafe.AfterthatIshouldplanwhereIstay,playandhowtogetthere.Inconclusion,IdobelieveIcandoitperfectlyandenjoymyself.精彩亮點八、、分析：亮點一：八、、?非謂語動詞including的巧妙使用。亮點二：同謂語的恰當使用，說明目的地是一個海濱度假圣地。亮點三：notonly…butalso…表達度假不僅可以欣賞美景還可以呼吸新鮮空氣。亮點四：運用反義疑問句，加強語氣。亮點五：運用定語從句，修飾medicine。亮點六：巧妙使用“do“這個詞，加強語言表達力度。范文精選二及點評：I'MREADYI'MAreyouapersonwhoalwayslikestogetreadyforeverything?Doyouoftenmakeafullpreparationfor

somethingbeforedoing?Iamsuchaguyduetoanunforgettableexperience.Istillrememberitwasafinalexam,Ihadbeenplayingalldaybeforeit,believingthatIamcleverenoughtogetahighscore,however,theresultwasveryawful.Fromthenon,Iknowifyouwanttosucceed,themostimportantthingistogetreadyforit.Therefore,duringthelastwholeyear,Idevoteallmytimetoreviewingmylessons.TheonlyreasonisthatIknowthereisn'taluckydogintheworld,andonthewaytosuccess,hardworkingisthekey.精彩亮占八、、分析:亮占一-?八、、?疑問句開頭,引發(fā)閱讀興趣亮點味二：過去完成進行時的使用使文章意思表達的更清晰亮占三：八、、?分詞做伴隨狀語,使文章檔次提升亮點四：be+adj.+enoughtodosth.足夠…做某事亮點五:條件狀語從句的使用亮占八、、六:不定式做表語亮點七：devoteone'stime(in)to...把…奉獻給亮點八：表語從句的使用五、連接詞匯總：表起始:firstofall,tobeginwith,inmyopinion,accordingto,sofar,asfaras等表時間:first,atfirst,then,later,intheend,finally,afterwards,afterthat,sincethen,forthefirsttime,atlast,assoonas,thenextmoment,meanwhile,lateron,soon,finally等表空間:ontheright/left,totheright/leftof,ononesideof...ontheothersideof..atthefbot/top/endof,inthemiddle/centreof,nextto,farfrom,infrontof等表因果:for,becauseof,onereasonisthat.anotherreasonisthat...,since,as,asaresult(of),so,thus,therefore,asaresult等表轉(zhuǎn)折:but,yet,however,afterall,infact,while,insteadof,unlike,although,afterall等表列舉:forexample,suchas,like,inotherwords,andsoon等表推進:what'smore,furthermore,ononehand.ontheotherhand.,inadditionto,aswell,still,also,inotherwords,notonly.butalso.,besides,moreover.等表總結(jié):generalllyspeaking,inshort,inaword,ingeneral,inbrief,inall等表示目的：forthispurpose,forthisreason,sothat,inorderthat,soasto,inorderto.表示讓步：although,though,eventhough/if,nomatterwh—六、從句在寫作中的使用：1.不用說..Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.=(Itis)needlesstosay(that)=Itisobviousthat.例：不用說早睡早起是值得的。Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.在各種……之中，……Amongvariouskindsof…，…/=Ofallthe…，…例：在各種運動中我尤其喜歡慢跑。Amongvariouskindsofsports,Ilikejogginginparticular.就我的看法……；我認為……Inmyopinion,…=Tomymind,…=AsfarasIamconcerned,…=Iamoftheopinionthat…例：Inmyopinion,playingvideogamesnotonlytakesmuchtimebutisalsoharmfultohealth.就我的看法打電動玩具既花費時間也有害健康。隨著人口的增加……Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation,…隨著科技的進步……Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,…例：WiththerapiddevelopmentofTaiwan'seconomy,alotofsocialproblemshavecometopass.隨著臺灣經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了?！潜匾腎tisnecessary（forsb.）todo/that………是重要的Itisimportant/essential（forsb.）todo/that………是適當?shù)腎tisproper（forsb.）todo/that………是緊急的Itisurgent（forsb.）todo/that…例：Itisproperforustokeepthepublicplacesclean.Itisproperthatwe（should）keepthepublicplacesclean.我們應(yīng)當保持公共場所清潔。花費spend…onsth./doingsth.…例：我們不應(yīng)該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時間。Weshouldn'tspendtoomuchtimeonsomethingwearen'tinterestedin.how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句例：那至少可以證明你很誠實。Atleastitwillprovehowhonestyouare.狀語從句A）如果你不，你就會Ifyoudon't...，you'll...例：Ifyoudon'tkeepworkinghard,you'lllosethechance.如果你不堅持努力工作，你就會失去這次機會。B）如此..，以至于..so.that.例:Atthatmoment,IwassoupsetthatIwantedtogiveup.當時，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。C）每當我聽到..我就忍不住感到興奮。WheneverIhear.，Icannotbutfeelexcited.每當我做..我就忍不住感到悲傷。WheneverIdo.，Icannotbutfeelsad.每當我想到我就忍不住感到緊張。WheneverIthinkof...,Icannotbutfeelnervous.每當我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。WheneverImeetwith…，Icannotbutfeelfrightened.每當我看到..我就忍不住感到驚訝。WheneverIsee.，Icannotbutfeelsurprised.例:WheneverIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhome,Icannotbutfeelsad.=EverytimeIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhome,Icannothelpfeelingsad.每當我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲傷。9.賓語從句我認為，../我認為..不Ithink/Idon'tthinkthat.我想知道是否..Iwonderwhether.例：Hedoesn'tthinkIshouldstophimjoiningtheclub.他認為我不應(yīng)該阻止他參加這個俱樂部。10.Since+S+過去式，S+現(xiàn)在完成式。例：Sincehewenttoseniorhighschool,hehasworkedveryhard.自從他上高中，他就一直很用功。專項練習(xí)（p