高中英語(yǔ)寫作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤句子

書(shū)面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)句分析Aims:1.Toknowthecommonmistakesthatyoualwaysmakeinyourwriting.2.Tofindthereasonwhyyoumakethemistakes.3.Tolearnhowtoavoidthesamemistakes

研究表明，多數(shù)同學(xué)在寫作上的主要欠缺不是系統(tǒng)的寫作理論和方法，而是最基本的單句寫作能力。

nextProblemsinwritingsinglesentences單句寫作過(guò)程中存在的問(wèn)題5Problemsinwritingsinglesentences1.TheChinglishexpression2.SubjectandVerbDisagreement3.Misuseofthewordsforms4.MisuseoftheTenseandVoice5.Missingofessentialpartsofthesentence6.Misuseofwords61、TheChinglishExpressionManisiron,andfoodissteel.infrontoftheflowersandunderthemoonMybodyisgood.Wecollegestudentsarethesonsofthesky.Peopletakefoodasheaven.Breadisthestaffoflife.Staybyfloweringshrubsorunderthepuremoon.82、SubjectandVerbDisagreementMysistergotothecinemaatleastonceaweek.Tomwithhistwobrothersaregoingtothecountry.HesavedenoughmoneytobuytheworksofShakespearewhichhethoughtwasworthbuying.93、MisuseofthewordsformsHewasveryhappiness.Hewashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.Allthepeoplearelikemusicverymuch.104、MisuseoftheTenseandVoice在一般的闡述中，作文的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該定位在現(xiàn)在的時(shí)間。除了闡述過(guò)去或?qū)?lái)發(fā)生的事情。Theharderyouwillpractice,thegreaterprogressyouwillmake.We’regoingtodivideintofourgroups.Thisfishwascaughtwherethewaterdidn’tpollute.115、MissingofessentialpartsofthesentenceThere’snobuscomestoouruniversity.Jennyoftenlateforschool.thatis/was缺主語(yǔ)缺謂語(yǔ)12Ihaveseenthefilmseveraltimes,butIstillliketosee.Isthisuniversitywhereyoustudiedthreeyearsago.theoneit(缺賓語(yǔ))(缺表語(yǔ))136、MisuseofWords1)中學(xué)畢業(yè)后，他參加了工作。Aftergraduationfromhighschoolhetookpartinwork.(誤)Aftergraduationfromhighschoolhegotajob.（正）

2)我們勸他休息，但他就是不聽(tīng)。Wepersuadedhimtotakearest,buthejustwouldn’tlisten.advised143)中國(guó)電影很受新加坡人的歡迎。TheChinesefilmsarewelcomedbythepeopleinSingapore.popularwithSolutionstotheseproblems解決方案正確連接分句1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.避免誤置修飾語(yǔ)3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.4.Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject.Igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject.注意邏輯主語(yǔ)5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.避免指代不清7.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn’tinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn’tinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn’tIinvitedtotheparty?”避免人稱代詞混淆8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.避免重復(fù)9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.盡量避免漢語(yǔ)干擾10.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.11.DuringstayinginBeijing,Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest.DuringmystayinBeijing,I…WhilestayinginBeijing,I…12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.13.Iwillnotforgetmydearfriendsforever.Iwillneverforgetmydearfriends.14.Theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient.Theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.Theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience.注意時(shí)態(tài)一致15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed.WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired.注意時(shí)態(tài)一致Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneeded.WhenIfinishedmyshopping,Iwassotired.29“Therebe”StructureWrongSentences：Therearemanypeopleliketogotothemovies.Therearedifferentkindsofvegetablescanbeboughtonthemarketbypeople.whothat30Because---structure

WrongSentences：Therealreasontoourfailureisnotfartoseek.Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.forthatWriteashortparagraphabout:Lackofsleep(

睡眠不足的原因，危害）Wearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime.Everyeveningweworktillverylate.Wedon’t

haveenoughtimeforsleep.I’mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth.隨堂練習(xí)Summary正確連接分句避免誤置修飾語(yǔ)注意邏輯主語(yǔ)避免指代不清盡量避免漢語(yǔ)干擾注意時(shí)態(tài)一致

THANKYOU!34文明的社會(huì)里關(guān)愛(ài)無(wú)處不在。以一只小貓照顧一只生病的小鴨為例。Thereareconcernandcareeverywhereinacivilizedsociety.Taketheexampleofacatlookingafter