專題20 讀后續(xù)寫：情感刻畫(原卷版)-2022年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心素養(yǎng)與實戰(zhàn)演練

專題20讀后續(xù)寫：情感刻畫(原卷版)情感細節(jié)包括人物的感受、情緒，是續(xù)寫中必不可少的細節(jié)描寫之一。合理的情感情緒描寫與刻畫，可以凸顯人物的性格、人際關(guān)系的特征、以及烘托故事高潮進而突出語篇主題等。因此，合理的情感情緒刻畫在續(xù)寫中是非常必要的。以下就是讀后續(xù)寫過程中，刻畫人物情感情緒的四個方法：［一、直接描寫法直接利用恰當(dāng)?shù)谋砬楦械男稳菰~、副詞或名詞、介詞短語等表達人物的喜怒哀樂例如：快樂(happy,delighted,pleased,joyful,enjoyable等)、吃驚(surprised,shocked,amazed,astonished)等形容詞或介詞短語(toone'ssurprise,inrelief,inpanic)等描述人物的情緒。［二、環(huán)境烘托法利用環(huán)境細節(jié)“融情于景”烘托人物的情感【例1】Dellafinishedhercryinganddriedherface.Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutunhappilyatagraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagraybackyard.(小、說《麥琪的禮物》中利用3個形容詞gray，體現(xiàn)了Della的難受和不開心。)【例2】涌上心頭sth.welluponme/sth.sweptovermeAfloodoffearwelledupinme.—股恐懼涌上心頭。高考真題：［2020.7全國新爆米花］Hewassodelightedthathecouldhardlyspeak,buthisbrightsmilefacespokeforhim.［2020.1浙江給Poppy買狗作伴］Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittledog.［2017.11浙江與善忘母親一同旅游］Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourney,apleasantsmilewouldspreadoverMom'sface.［三、動作反映法利用恰當(dāng)?shù)膭幼髅鑼懛从橙宋锏那榫w例如：下面文章片段中的句子：Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturned..around,.hopingtoseethelake.（動作描寫，說明Jane滿懷期望）To.her.,surprise,（利用介詞短語體現(xiàn)Jane的吃驚）shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop.（寓情于景，體現(xiàn)Jane的無望失落）Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.［四、句式變換法利用高級句式和修飾成分細化情感細節(jié)句型1獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)“Absolutely！”repliedJohn,excitementshinninginhiseyes.（利用名詞excitement和獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，描寫John的興奮激動）約翰答道，“一定”，他兩眼興奮地閃閃發(fā)光。句型2：so???that結(jié)構(gòu)Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.（so...that侄U裝句型）熊怒火中燒，開始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍擊護欄。句型3：how+賓語從句Youcannotimaginehowfrightenedwewereattheapproachofthepolarbear.（how弓丨導(dǎo)的賓語從句，介詞短語）你無法想象北極熊向我們逼近時我們多么的恐懼。句式4：非?！璉ammorethan+情感類形容詞to…I'mmorethanhappytolearnthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity得知你被北京大學(xué)錄取，我非常高興。句式5：讓我非?！氖恰璏uchtomy+情感類名詞，…Muchtomydisappointment,noonecameuptogivemeahelpinghand令我非常失望的是,沒有人站過來幫助我。［句子演練I?按要求補全下面動作、情感和心理細節(jié)的句子簡又害怕又無助，靠著一棵樹坐下，歇歇疼痛的雙腳。,Janesatagainstatree,.（形容詞短語/非謂語動詞作狀語）“如果我沒有和湯姆吵架，我現(xiàn)在就不會被困在這里了，”她想，悔恨的淚水模糊了她的眼睛?！?，”shethoughttoherself.（虛擬語氣的倒裝句，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）她掙扎著站起來尋找那個湖。她精疲力竭，她爬上一塊大石頭，躺了下來，很快睡著了。（so...that狀語從句，一連串的動作）簡醒來時天已經(jīng)亮了。盡管很沮喪，她還是決定繼續(xù)前進。,shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.（讓步狀語從句）,shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.（狀語從句的省略句）隨著小溪的聲音，她向水邊走去。,shewalkedtowardthewater.（非謂語動詞作狀語）突然，她注意到遠處有一個熟悉的身影向她走來。（非謂語動詞作賓補）II?將以上補全后的各句合并為短文，注意恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯舆^渡［【補充語料1】憤怒類Hewasfumingwithrage.他氣得大發(fā)雷霆。(fumev.發(fā)怒)Hecouldhardlycontrolhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。⑶Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得臉色陰沉。(臉上一塊烏云)悲傷憂愁類⑴Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她手在顫抖，她快要哭了。(verge邊緣)Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathewasdrownedwithsadness.聽到消息，他淹沒在悲傷中。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirface.他們坐在那里，帶著一臉憂郁。害怕類［2018.6浙江卷：農(nóng)場游玩迷路］Tearsoffearandregretrolleddownmycheeks.［2017.6浙江卷：與朋友騎車遇狼］AfterhearingMac'sexperience,theyfroze,theirmouthshangingopen.Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他轉(zhuǎn)過身來，眼里充滿了恐懼。⑷Fearsslowlycreptuponher.恐懼慢慢蔓延到她身上。(5)Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她臉色蒼白站在那里，舌頭打結(jié)，說不出話。［【補充語料2】關(guān)于情感句子的積累：(表達情感的形容詞+動作具體描寫)，用so??that???1、興奮：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我激動得跳了起來2、開心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown我高興得上躥下跳。3、感動：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword我感動得一句話也說不出來。4、悲傷：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands我難過得用手捂住了臉。5、生氣：IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我氣得一句話也說不出來。6、害怕:Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded我害怕得手心冒汗，心怦怦直跳。7、羞愧：IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning我羞愧得感覺自己的臉在燃燒。［模擬練習(xí)01讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。MissusSommersonedayfoundherselftheunexpectedowneroffifteendollars.Itseemedtoheraverylargeamountofmoney.Foradayortwoshewalkedaroundinadreamystateasshethoughtaboutherchoices.HerdaughterJaniewaswearingwornshoesandneedednewones.Shewouldbuyclothfornewshirtsfortheboys.HerdaughterMagshouldhaveanotherdress.Andstilltherewouldbeenoughleftfornewstockingsforherchildren.Theideaabouthowtospendthedollarsmadeherrestlesswithexcitement.Onthedaysheplannedtogoshoppingwiththemoney,sheatealightmeal-no!Betweengettingthechildrenfedandthehousecleaned,andpreparingherselftogoshopping,sheforgottoeatatall!Whenshearrivedatthelargedepartmentstore,shespottedapileofsilkstockingsattheentrance.Asignnearbyannouncedthattheyhadbeenreducedinpriceayounggirlbehindthecounteraskedherifshewishedtoexaminethesilkylegcoverings.Shesmiledasifshehadbeenaskedtoinspectdiamondjewelry,andstartedtofeelthesoft,expensiveitems.MissusSommerspickedupablackpairandlookedatthemclosely.Tworedmarkssuddenlyshowedonherpaleface.Shelookedupattheshopgirlandsaidproudly,“Well,Iwillbuythispair."MissusSommerschangedhercottonstockingsforthenewsilkonesintheladies'restarea.Shehadletherselfbecontrolledbysomemachine-likeforcethatdirectedheractionsandfreedherofresponsibility.Howgoodwasthetouchofthesilkonherskin!Thensheputhershoesbackonandputheroldstockingsintoherbag.Next,shewentt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