讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)環(huán)境描寫(xiě)速記情景交融法課件 【知識(shí)建構(gòu)+點(diǎn)播拓展】高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

ContinuationWriting

EnvironmentalDescriptionFormulae

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)——環(huán)境描寫(xiě)

Story=narration敘述(plot)+description描寫(xiě)

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)

心理描寫(xiě)

語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)

環(huán)境描寫(xiě)

Story=narration敘述(plot)+

description描寫(xiě)

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)

心理描寫(xiě)

語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)

環(huán)境描寫(xiě)

Obviously,astormwasonitsway.AsuddenwaveoffearenvelopedSarahatthethoughtofhowterribleandseverethestormcouldbe.Secondslater,Sarahsawsomethinglikeagrayfunnel(漏斗)movinginthedistance.Tornado(龍卷風(fēng))!Inaflash,withaburstofthunder,rainpoureddownonceagain,beatingheavilyagainstthewindows.Thewindwasroaring,uprootingabunchoftreeslikeawildbeast.Thestormlasteddays,whichmadeSarahincreasinglynervous.Coldandhungry,sheregrettedshehadmadenopreparationfortheterribleweather!Trappedathome,Sarahwonderedhowshecouldsurvive.Neverhadtherainstoppeditspace,blockingeverychanceofgoingoutsideforSarah.Justthen,shethoughtofthecommunityhelpline.Shetelephonedtostateherdifficulties.Anhourlater,Sarahheardaknockatthedoorandincamethecommunityworkerswithfoodandnecessities.Shewasreallygratefulfortheirtimelyhelp.Itisthetruekindnessandloveinthecommunitythathelpedhersurvivetheterribleweather.環(huán)境描寫(xiě)作用：交待故事背景襯托人物渲染氣氛推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展首先要明確的是，把主旨想清楚，時(shí)刻不忘“寫(xiě)景乃為主旨服務(wù)”這句話。如果景物與主旨無(wú)關(guān)，就是為寫(xiě)景而寫(xiě)景，就是無(wú)效的寫(xiě)景?！扒榫敖蝗凇狈∣nthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Therainpoureddown,withcolddropsandangrywindsslappingmyface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtearsandfreezingrain.

回校那天，烏云低低地懸掛在天空中，大雨傾盆而下，冰冷的雨滴和憤怒的風(fēng)拍打著我的臉。我淹沒(méi)在陣陣冰雨和熱淚中。Thewindwas

howlingdreadfullyandtherainwas

pouring

fromtheheaven,

whippingagainstthebranchesoflined

trees.

Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorror

creepingupon

me.

風(fēng)可怕地嚎叫，雨從天傾斜而來(lái)，拍打著成排的樹(shù)枝。我被自然發(fā)怒的力量抓住了。一種恐懼感悄悄爬到我身上。

寫(xiě)景后，再添加一個(gè)明顯的情感描寫(xiě)，就是指：有時(shí)在景物描寫(xiě)之后，加上一兩句自己的情感態(tài)度。這樣做的整體效果就是：情境交融。當(dāng)然，如果你想造成“留白啟發(fā)思考”的效果，那么就沒(méi)有必要添加這種顯性的情感態(tài)度描寫(xiě)了。F:

寫(xiě)景.

+感受.F:意象+動(dòng)詞.

+感受.情感名詞形容詞歡欣，高興joy/delightjoyful/delighted惱怒，生氣irritationirrated悲傷，悲痛griefgrieved恐慌，驚慌panicpanicked震驚astoundmentastound無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：1.Darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Arippleof+情感名詞ranthroughsb’sheart.2.Darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Afloodof+情感名詞welledupinsb.人稱主語(yǔ)：1.Darkcloudshunglowinthesky.sb.wasbrimmedoverwith+情感名詞.1.Darkcloudshunglowinthesky.sb.wasimmersedin+情感名詞.F:意象+動(dòng)詞ing，+感受.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：1.Darkcloudshanginglowinthesky,arippleof+情感名詞ranthroughsb’sheart.2.Darkcloudshanginglowinthesky,afloodof+情感名詞welledupinsb..人稱主語(yǔ)：1.Darkcloudshanginglowinthesky,sb.wasbrimmedoverwith+情感名詞.1.Darkcloudshanginglowinthesky,sb.wasimmersedin+情感名詞.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：1.Darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Arippleof+情感名詞ranthroughsb’sheart.2.Darkclouds

hunglowinthesky.Afloodof+情感名詞welledupinsb..人稱主語(yǔ)：1.Darkcloudshunglowinthesky.sb.wasbrimmedoverwith+情感名詞.1.Darkcloudshunglowinthesky.sb.wasimmersedin+情感名詞.并列句狀語(yǔ)Practice根據(jù)以下意象，用情景交融手法(意象+動(dòng)詞ing，+感受.)描寫(xiě)環(huán)境。1.wind_______________________________________________2.sun________________________________________________3.moon______________________________________________4.snow

_______________________________________________5.rain________________________________________________6.crowd

______________________________________________Theicywindhowling,arippleoftensionranthroughhisheart.Themorningsunlightfloodinginthroughthecurtain,arippleofsatisfactionranthroughthetwins’heart.Thesilverymoonglowinginthesky,arippleofgriefranthroughJane’sheart.Featherlysnowflakef