讀后續(xù)寫：騎馬迷路 遇困難不放棄 課件 【知識建構(gòu)+點播拓展】高考英語作文備考

ContinuationWriting騎馬迷路任務(wù)：1.找出文章中的when,where,who,what,how2.結(jié)合原文，由第一段首句和第二段首句推出故事情節(jié)。3.找好主題立意：結(jié)合上文，想好一個升華句或者方向（體現(xiàn)故事圓滿結(jié)局的句子或故事給我們啟示的句子）readingforplot01

It

was

summer,

and

my

dad

wanted

to

treat

me

to

a

vacation

like

never

before.

He

decided

to

take

me

on

a

trip

to

theWild

West.

We

took

a

plane

to

Albuquerque,

a

big

city

in

the

state

of

New

Mexico.

We

reached

Albuquerque

in

the

late

afternoon.UnclePaul,

my

dad’s

friend,

picked

us

up

from

the

airport

and

drove

us

up

to

his

farm

in

Pecos.

His

wife

cooked

us

a

delicious

dinner

and

we

got

to

know

his

sons

Ryan

and

Kyle.

My

dad

and

I

spent

the

night

in

theguestroom

of

the

farmhouse

listening

to

the

frogs

and

water

rolling

down

the

river

nearby.

Very

early

in

the

morning,Uncle

Paul

woke

us

up

to

have

breakfast.

“

The

day

starts

at

dawn

on

my

farm,”

he

said.

After

breakfast,

I

went

to

helpAunt

Tina

feed

the

chickens,

while

my

dad

went

with

Uncle

Paul

to

take

the

sheep

out

to

graze(

吃草

).

I

was

impressedto

see

my

dad

and

Uncle

Paul

riding

horse.

They

looked

really

cool.

In

the

afternoon,

I

asked

Uncle

Paul

if

I

could

take

a

horse

ride,

and

he

said

yes,

as

long

as

my

dad

went

with

me.

Iwasn’t

going

to

take

a

horse

ride

by

myself

anyway.

So,

my

dad

and

I

put

on

our

new

cowboy

hats,

got

on

our

horses,and

headed

slowly

towards

the

mountains.

“Don’t

be

late

for

supper.”

Uncle

Paul

cried,

“and

keep

to

the

track

so

thatyou

don’t

get

lost!”

“Ok!”

my

dad

cried

back.

After

a

while

Uncle

Paul

and

his

farm

house

were

out

of

sight.

It

was

sopeaceful

and

quiet

and

the

colors

of

the

brown

rocks,

the

deep

green

pipe

trees,

and

the

late

afternoon

sun

mixed

tocreate

a

magic

scene.

It

looked

like

a

beautiful

woven(

編織的

)

blanket

spread

out

upon

the

ground

just

for

us.注意

:

1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為

150

左右；

2.

應(yīng)使用

5

個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.

續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph

one:

Suddenly

a

little

rabbit

jumped

out

in

front

of

my

horse.

_____________________________.Paragraph

two:

We

had

no

idea

where

we

were

and

it

got

dark.______________________________________.

范例解析

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。原文分析Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.我和父親開始一場從未有過的旅行。原文分析HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.

IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

我和父親開始一場從未有過的旅行。原文分析Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don'tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!""OK!”mydadcriedback.z我和父親騎馬上山，注意環(huán)境描寫原文分析AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.ItwassoPeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees^andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（編織的）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.z我和父親騎馬上山，注意環(huán)境描寫回答下面幾個問題，檢測一下你是否讀懂了原材料。Q2:Whatdidthewriterwanttodothenextafternoon?Why?Q1:WheredidthewriterandhisfatherstayinAlbuquerque?Q3:Didthewriterridebyhimself?Q4:WhatdidUnclePaulremindthembeforetheysetout?Q5:Howdidthewriterfeelonthehorseback?回答下面幾個問題，檢測一下你是否讀懂了原材料。Q2:Whatdidthewriterwanttodothenextafternoon?Why?Q1:WheredidthewriterandhisfatherstayinAlbuquerque?Q3:Didthewriterridebyhimself?OnUnclePaul’sfarm.Totakeahorseride.Becausehewantedtobecoolaswell.No,hedidn’t.Hisfatherwentwithhim.回答下面幾個問題，檢測一下你是否讀懂了原材料。Q4:WhatdidUnclePaulremindthembeforetheysetout?Q5:Howdidthewriterfeelonthehorseback?Verypleased/satisfied.Keepingtothetracktoavoidgettinglostandreturningontimeforsupper.寫作思路02首句精研：研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse.Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.路上遇到兔子迷路了首句精研：研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse..Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.1.Howdidtheygetlost?2.Wheredidthehorsescarrythem?3.Howdidtheyfeelaboutanddealwiththesituation?1.Didtheyeventuallymakeitbacktothefarmhouse?2.How?閱讀完材料，試著完成下面的故事山吧！WhatdidIdo?SeeingDadandUncleridinghorses,Iwantedtotryhorseridingmyself.Alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse…Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

Ending1.

OpeningMydadtookmetoUnclePaul’sfarmtoexperiencethefarmlife.Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.plotHowdidwegetlost?…panickedthehorse…chasedtherabbit…照應(yīng)原文：para4.keeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost.Howdidwefindthewayback?Wefollowedtheriverbackto…(自救）UnclePaulfoundus(hat).（他救）Thelightguidedusback.（自救）照應(yīng)原文：Para3.…listeningto…waterrollingdowntherivernearbyclues(線索）in

thepassage1.時間表達2.情感表達3.心理活動；4.動作描寫；5.事件及經(jīng)過；6.感悟；7.可套用的句式。Justthen,…=Justatthatmoment

正在那時擴寫句子1.我追著兔子跑2.馬跑的很快3.我不想摔下馬4.爸爸讓我平靜下來5.我不想馬傷到兔子

6.爸爸想到方法7.看燈光，我們感到激動。8.我感到特別害怕.9.我希望我們不會看到餓狼。翻譯1.我追著兔子跑我毫不猶豫地追著兔子跑從來沒有見過這么可愛的動物以至于我毫不猶豫地追著她。IhadneverinlifeseensolovelyacreaturethatIchaseditwithouthesitation.NeverbeforeinmylifehadIseensolovelyacreaturethatIchaseditwithouthesitation/thinkingtwice.so...that...如此...以至于...never倒裝句

翻譯2.馬跑的很快馬被嚇?biāo)耘艿暮芸煳业鸟R嚇得跑得比我想象的還快。MyhorsewassostartledthatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.so...that...倒裝句翻譯3.我不想摔下馬我努力保持平衡不讓自己掉下馬盡管我很害怕，我努力保持平衡不讓自己掉下馬。ThoughIwasfrightened,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.spaprednoeffortstokeepmybalance,preventingmefromfallingoff.4.爸爸讓我平靜下來爸爸盡力讓我平靜下來爸爸感覺到了我的恐懼和擔(dān)憂，盡力讓我平靜下來。Myfathersensedmyfearandconcerns,andhetriedtocalmmedown.Sensingmyfearandconcerns,mydadtriedtocalmmedown.非謂語動詞：v-ing作狀語佳句翻譯5.我大聲喊著，猛地一拉韁繩，防止馬兒傷到這個小東西。（yellout,pullbackthereins,v-ing）6.我?guī)缀跻紳⒘?，突然爸爸想到了一個好辦法。7.一看到遠(yuǎn)處的微弱燈光，我們感到一陣激動。8.想到我們被困森林，沒法找到回去的路，我感到特別害怕.9.帶著懷疑的念頭，我希望我們不會看到餓狼。5.我大聲喊著，猛地一拉韁繩，防止馬兒傷到這個小東西。（yellout,pullbackthereins,非謂語v-ing）Iyelledoutloudly,pullingbackthereinsinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.6.我?guī)缀跻紳⒘耍蝗话职窒氲搅艘粋€好辦法。（beontheedgeof...when...）Iwasalmostonthevergeof

breakingdownwhenagoodideahitmyfather.7.一看到遠(yuǎn)處的微弱燈光，我們感到一陣激動。（themoment/minute;arushof...）Themomentwesawthefaintlightinthedistance,wefeltarushofexcitement.8.想到我們被困森林，沒法找到回去的路，我感到特別害怕.Atthethought

thatwewerestuckinthedarkforestunabletofindthewayout,Iwasseizedwithastrongsenseofhorror.9.帶著懷疑的念頭，我希望我們不會看到餓狼。Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Ending:

Afterwhatseemedlikeages,thefarmhousefinallycameinsight.Finally,wearrivedatthefarmhouse,safeandsound.Whatanight!Finally,wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper.Whatathrillingbutmemorablevacationitwas.Itturnsoutthereisalwaysawayoutofanyplight(困境)aslongaswestaycalm.

Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventurewithmydad.Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.自然式結(jié)尾留白式結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)原文式結(jié)尾點題式結(jié)尾反思哲理式結(jié)尾

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwassuchalovelycreaturethatwedecidedtorunafterit.Intheprocessofchasing

it,Iwastotallyattractedbythecharmofbeautifulflowers.Afterawhile,wecompletelygotlostintheforest.Therewasnobodyinoursightbutthetrees.

“Wemaynotbeabletomakeitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper.”Ithoughttomyself.Afterlongwalk,wefelthungryandtired.feelingdialogue（內(nèi)心獨白）actionsurroundingsExample

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thecoldwindwasblowinghard

andthedarknessmademescared.“Dad,whatcanwedo?”“Allisgoingwell!”

Dadanswered.Wewanderedintheforestanddidn'tknowwhatwouldhappentous.Suddenly,weheardthesoundofariver.Wedecidetofollowtheriver.Afterawhile,weheardthefamiliarsoundofsheepandcaughtsightofthefarmhouse.surroundingsdialogueactionfeeling

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpe