2023屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)人教版（2019）讀后續(xù)寫講解和句型練習(xí)

題目：

讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩端，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Mikelickedthelastofthemintchocolatechip

icecream.Itwasalmosttimetoleave.Hejumpedintothecarwithhis

parents

andheadedofftotheOlympic-sized

pool

forthebigswimmeet.

Whenhis

race

cameup,Mikewasconfident.Hewasstrongandswift.Mikeclimbedoutthepool,smiling.Hehadjust

won

firstplace,makinghimthefastestboyinhisagegroup.

"Congratulations,son,"hisfathersaid.Hismomgavehimahug,eventhoughhewassoakingwet.

Aweeklater,itwastimeforanotherswimmeet.Likebefore,Mikedecidedtoenjoyhisfavoriteicecreamflavor.Mikerememberedthatthelasttimehehadwonarace,healsoatemintchocolatechipicecreamfirst.Maybehe'dwinagain.

He’staken

firstplace

againinhisrace.Mikewasfeelingprettygood.Asitturnedout,MikedecidedtohavesomemintchocolatechipIcecreambeforeeveryoneofthenextfewswimmeets.Hebegantothinkofitashis

luckycharm.Afterseveralmonthsofplacinginthetoppositionsofeveryraceheswam,Mikewasfeelingunbeatable.Andhewouldn’tadmitit,butallthaticecreamwasaddingafewpoundstohisathleticswimmer'sbuild.

Itdidn’ttakelongafterthatforMiketostartcominginsecondplace-andthenthird-andthenlastplaceinhisraces.Theluckymintchocolatechipicecreamhadlostits

magic.

Onthedayofhisnextswimmeet,hismothersatdownatthetablewithhim.“Mike,weallloveicecream,butit'snot

healthy

foryourbodytoeatsomuchofit.Maybeit'stimetoquitthesweettreatsforawhile,especiallybeforeyougoswimming.

Mikeunwillinglyagreed.Hewenttotheswimmeet,anddidn’t

perform

well.Hisfatherofferedtogorunningwithhimafewdaysaweektohelphimfeelbetterandstrengthenhismuscles.Theextraweightsoondisappeared,andMikefoundhimselfbreathingeasieratswimpractices.

It

was

the

last

meet

of

the

season,

and

Mike

wasn’t

sure

what

to

expect.He

felt

healthyagain,but

he

didn’t

know

if

he

still

had

any

speed

in

the

pool.

注意:

1.

所續(xù)寫短文的字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

至少使用五個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.

續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)Paragraph

1:As

he

drove

into

the

water,

he

kicked

his

legs

and

stretched

his

arms

as

far

as

he

could.Paragraph

2:His

jaw

dropped

as

he

realized

he

had

beaten

his

own

best

time

,and

everyone

else

too.

如何快速寫：

第一步：Analyzethestory：5Rs

1.Readforcharacters:Mike,hisparents,Icecream,teammates

2.Readforconflict/problems：IcecreamandMike’sperformance:WhetherisitaLuckycharm

3.Readforplot:

4.Readforemotionalchanges:

Whenhisracecameup,Mikewas

confident

Mikewas

feelingprettygood.

Afterseveralmonthsofplacinginthetoppositionsofeveryraceheswam,Mikewas

feelingunbeatable.

Mike

unwillingly

agreed.

5.Readfortheme

WhatcontributestoMike’ssuccessinswimming?

第二步：四句步定框架：

寫讀后續(xù)寫不同于寫其它作文，有可能需要先倒著寫的

Step1:

先把最后一句寫好，即：主題句

Mikerealizedthatone’sluckycharmwasnothingbuthisdiligence.

Step2:

再把銜接句寫好，即第一段的最后一句：

Hedashedtothefinishline.

Step3:

緊接著每段的提示語(yǔ)句寫角色的情感：

Ashedoveintothewater,hekickedhislegsandstretchedhisarmsasfarashecould.

Itstruckendlessenergyandmotivationintohisbody.

Mike’sjawdroppedasherealizedhehadbeatenhisownbesttime,andeveryoneelse’stoo.

Theflowersinhisheartwerealreadyinbloom.

接下來(lái)就是把每段的中間補(bǔ)充完整，記住三大原則：

1.Action—Response原則：角色A的所言、所行、所感、所想會(huì)引起其它角色的一系列反應(yīng)的。每段對(duì)話1-2句，不一定兩個(gè)人都要說(shuō)話，無(wú)聲的動(dòng)作也是一種response。

2.Conflict—Solution原則：一般而言第二段會(huì)有問(wèn)題的solution，但本文和高考的讀后續(xù)寫文章出題不一樣，因?yàn)閟olution在所給文章中就已經(jīng)有了。同時(shí)思考：能否在第一段出現(xiàn)一個(gè)問(wèn)題，然后把它解決了或者沒(méi)有解決。一方面是增加看點(diǎn)，另一方面也是給第二段鋪墊。

3.Negative—Positive原則：寫作中一定要體現(xiàn)情感的變化，無(wú)論前面是這樣的變化，最終都是積極的。

最終：

Ashedoveintothewater,hekickedhislegsandstretchedhisarmsasfarashecould.

1.Itstruckendlessenergyandmotivationintohisbody.

（心情）

2.“ThisiswhereIbelong.Ican

win

the

race,”thoughthe,histeethclenchedandhiseyesfixedonthefinishlineforward.

（內(nèi)心獨(dú)白）

3.Suddenly,twofigures

whizzed

past,whichstartledhim.

（心情變化））

4.Fearingtofallbehind,hefelthisheartpoundedfranticallyandhismindwentblank.

（解釋心情變化和問(wèn)題）

5.Justthen,hethoughtofhissweatandhisfather’sencouragingsmile.

（問(wèn)題的解決方法）

6.Gradually,hisworrygavewaytohisconfidenceandthelast5minutessawhimdashtothefinishline,followedbytheendoftherace.

（銜接句）

Mike’sjawdroppedasherealizedhehadbeatenhisownbesttime,andeveryoneelse’stoo.

7.Theflowersinhisheartwerealreadyinbloom.

（心情變化）

8.However,heknewhedeservedthehonorofchampionship.

（拓展）

9.

Hisparents

cameupandgavehimahighfive,grinningfromeartoear.

（次要角色的回應(yīng)）

10.“Hey,whynottryyourfavoriteicecreamandcelebrate!”saidhisfather,pattinghisontheshoulder.

（對(duì)話1）

11.“Thanks,Dad,butIhavegivenupthe

icecream.It’snotsucha

luckycharm

atall.”Hiseyesshonewithwisdom.（對(duì)話2）

12.ItwasthatdaythatMikerealizedthatone’sluckycharmwasnothingbuthisdiligence.（照應(yīng)開頭的主旨句）讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：動(dòng)物描寫1.

The

bear

_____________

them

(對(duì)……低聲吼叫),

________________

(小心翼翼地靠近).2.

Thebear

_____________________

and

___________

(露出巨大的牙齒吼叫著).3.

Thebearwaspacingbackandforth,

____________

(嗅)

theground.4.Theirhowlsandcries

_________________

(空中飄蕩著嚎叫聲).5.Thebearroseupand

___________

me

(對(duì)……吼叫),

________________

(露出巨大的牙齒).6.

Atany

moment

(隨時(shí))

themonsterwould

____________

and

___________

(會(huì)一躍而起將我撕成碎片).7.

Itlookedaround,and

_________________

(突然停下).8.Itstoodthere,

_________________(準(zhǔn)備攻擊).9.Theenormous

grizzly

bear

(灰熊)

_________________

(生氣地嚎叫)and

_________________

were

_________________

(張開它滴著口水的嘴).10.

The

polarbear

letoutonelastroarandthen

_______________(跑了).11.The

dog

_________________and

_________________(跳起來(lái)，興奮地?fù)u著尾巴).12.Thedogsuddenlystarted

_________________(瘋狂地對(duì)我們汪汪叫).13.Thedog

______________________

roaringbarks

(發(fā)出一連串咆哮的吠聲).14.Thedogwas

______________,

______________and______________(撕咬著，咆哮著，搖晃著尾巴).15.Thedog

______________________________

(蜷縮在他身邊).16.

Thedoglickedhishands(舔了舔他的手)

and

_________________(用它的頭推他的腿).Thenthedogsatdownandlookedupintohiseyes,barking

______________________________

(好像告訴他救援馬上就到).He

____________

(彎腰)

and

_____________________

(拍了拍它的頭).17.

Butbeforehecouldgrabthedog,it

__________________________(發(fā)出猛烈的叫聲)

andrammed

(撞)

itsbodyagainsthim,

________________________(幾乎要撞倒他).18.Amother

crocodile

wascarryingtheirbabies

_____________________

(在它張開的大嘴里).19.

Thedogsatpatiently

________________________________

(它的舌頭從嘴里伸出來(lái)).He

_____________________

(抱住)

hisdog,

______________________

(把臉埋在它的毛皮上).20.The

wildboar

(野豬)

_________________

(發(fā)出哼聲)asitstaredathimwithbeady

(圓溜溜的)blackeyes.Suddenlythemonster

_________________

(猛沖),itssharptusks(獠牙)

aimedrightforhisstomach.【參考答案】1.

The

bear

snarledat

them

(對(duì)……低聲吼叫),

inchingcloser

(小心翼翼地靠近).2.

Thebear

bareditsenormousteeth

and

growled

(露出巨大的牙齒吼叫著).3.

Thebearwaspacingbackandforth,

sniffing

(嗅)

theground.4.Theirhowlsandcries

filledtheair

(空中飄蕩著嚎叫聲).5.Thebearroseupand

roaredat

me

(對(duì)……吼叫),

baringitsenormousteeth

(露出巨大的牙齒).6.

Atany

moment

(隨時(shí))

themonsterwould

leapup

and

tear/ripmetopieces

(會(huì)一躍而起將我撕成碎片).7.

Itlookedaround,and

stoppedshort

(突然停下).8.Itstoodthere,

readytoattack

(準(zhǔn)備攻擊).9.Theenormous

grizzly

bear

(灰熊)

roaredwithrage

(生氣地嚎叫)and

itsdrippingjaws

were

openwide

(張開它滴著口水的嘴).10.

The

polar

bear

letoutonelastroarandthen

scamperedoff

(跑了).11.The

dog

leapt

and

waggeditstailinexcitement

(跳起來(lái)，興奮地?fù)u著尾巴).12.Thedogsuddenlystarted

barkingatuslikecrazy

(瘋狂地對(duì)我們汪汪叫).13.Thedog

letoutastring

of

roaringbarks

(發(fā)出一連串咆哮的吠聲)14.Thedogwas

biting,

growling

andwagging

itstail(撕咬著，咆哮著，搖晃著尾巴).15.Thed