英語筆記2017考研寫作沖刺講義

2017考研英語寫作沖刺班（英語一與二均適用第一次講義后續(xù)補充：

Youarestudyingatuniversityandoneofyourlecturershasaskedhisstudentstowriteandsuggestwaysinwhichhecouldimprovehisteaching.Writeantothelecturer.Saythewayyouenjoyabouthislecturesandsuggesthowtheycouldbeimproved.YoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERDonotsignyourownnameatoftheletter.Use“LiMing”Donotwritetheaddress.（10Lastweekyouaskedstudentstowriteandgiveyoufeedbackonyourlectures.Therefore,Ihaveoutlinedmythoughtsbelow.Ingeneral,Ifindyourlecturesveryinformativeandinspiring.Indeed,Iparticularlylikethewayyoudemonstratecomplexissueswiththeuseofsimpledrawings.Thismakesyourlessonsbothinterestingandmemorable.However,Idofeelthatyoucouldprovideuswithmorehandouts,asIoftendon’thavetimetotakedownalltheimportantpoints.Iwouldalsoliketoseemorediscussionwork,asIfindthismethodthemostsuitablewaytoclarifyanddeepenmyunderstandingofthesubjectcontent.I’dliketothankyoufortheinterestyouaretakinginyourstudentsandlookforwardyournextLi和加深我對課程內(nèi)容理解的最佳方式，因此有的課堂討論。非常感謝您對學生的關(guān)注，的下次課程。您的Youhaverecentlyreturnedfromatrip.However,youweredissatisfiedwiththeserviceyoureceivedatthehowhereyouwerevisiting.Writealettertothemanageroftheho.Givedetailsofwhenyoustayed,explainwhywereunhappywiththeserviceandsaywhatyou’dliketobedoneaboutYoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERDonotsignyourownnameatoftheletter.Use“LiMing”Donotwritetheaddress.（10DearSirorIwritetoexpressmydissatisfactionwiththeserviceIreceivedwhilestayingatyourhoduringmyvacationbetweenthe2ndand11stAprilthisyear.Althoughyourhoisratedasafivestar,Ifoundthattheroomswerenotcleanedonadailybasis,andthatmybedwasmadeuponlyeverythreedays.Inaddition,thefoodintherestaurantwassimilarlydisappointing.Notonlywasitextremelyoverpriced,butthequalitywasverypoor.Iwasthereforeforcedtohavetoeatoutinlocalrestaurants.Itrustyouwilltakemycomplaintsseriously,andmakeeveryefforttoimproveyourserviceinthefuture.Iwouldalsogreatlyappreciateadiscountonmybill(receiptenclosed).Ilookforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.Li4211日，我假期期間曾住在貴飯店。我寫信是為了表達對于貴飯店服務的（附上收據(jù)。期待盡快得到您的答復。您的Supposeyouaregoingtostudyabroad,writeanofapplicationtoaforeignYoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERDonotsignyourownnameatoftheletter.Use“LiMing”Donotwritetheaddress.（10DearSirorPleaseacceptthisapplicationtostudyatyourinstitutionfromthecommencementofthenextacademicyear.Iamattachingmyresumeandqualificationsforyourpreference,withaletter mendationfromthedeanofmycurrentHavingsuccessfullygraduatedandattainedmyBachelor’sdegree,Iwishtocontinuewithmypostgraduatestudiesoverseas.Myresearchindicatesthatyourinstituteisattheforefrontinmychosendisciplineand,assuch,canofferthebestup-to-datetuitionavailable.Ithankyouinadvance,forconsideringthisapplicationandtrustitwillmeetwiththeapprovaloftheenrollmentboard.Iwouldbepleasedtoprovideyouwithanyadditionalinformationyoumayrequire.Icanbecontactedviamyaddress,asabove,orbythemobilephonenumberattached.Inappreciateofyourhelp.Li我現(xiàn)在已順利拿到學士，非常希望在國外繼續(xù)深造，攻讀。經(jīng)過調(diào)研，您的Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youdescribethedrawingexplainitsintendedmeaning,giveyouAsisshowninthepictureabove,therearetherenownedfiveOlympicringsrepresentthefivecontinentsontheEarth.TheyellowcolorsymbolizesAsia,theblackrepresentsAfrica,theblueepitomizesEurope,theredisnaturallyassociatedwithAmericaandthegreensymbolizesOceania.Thecaptionindicates:“Sportsmanship”.Enthusiasmforsportsisoftremendousbenefittoyoungpeopleandshouldbepromotedasanintegralpartoftheireducation.Themainreasonforpromotingsportsmanshipamongyoungstersistoencouragethemtoleadahealthylifestyle.Exercisingandplayingsportscanhavehugebenefitsfora’sstrength,agilityandfitness,aswellasheltoreducestressandimprovetheimmunesystem.Anotherreasonthatschoolsshouldfosteryoungchildren’sinterestinsportsistoinstillinthemthevaluesofteamworkandsportsmanship.Enthusiasmforsportsingeneral,whetherindividualorteam-based,canteachchildrenhowtobesportsmanlikeincompetitivecircumstances,includingplayingbytherulesandbeinggraciousineithervictoryordefeat.Fewpeopledevelopaninterestinsportsaftertheiradolescence.Incontrast,thosewhodevelopaninterestintheirearlyyearsarelikelytoremainenthusiastswellintoadulthood,ifnotforlife.Byfosteringenthusiasmforsportsaspartofchildren’seducation,societycanensureagenerationofhealthy,sportsmanlikecitizen.是歐洲的，紅色自然與美洲聯(lián)系起來，綠色象征著大洋洲。文字說明顯示：“體育精Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youdescribethedrawingexplainitsintendedmeaning,giveyouThehumanhistoryhasbeenconsideredasacourseofman’smigrationfromthecountrytothecity,sourbanizationisseenasthesymbolofhumancivilization.Nevertheless,asisshowninthecartoon,asweenjoytheconveniencesofurbanlife,wealsohavetosuffermanyproblemsthaturbanizationbringstous.Amongthem,theenvironmentalpollutionisoneofthemostserious.Tobeginwith,theexplosionofcitypopulationcausesharmtoournaturalenvironment.Thegrowingurbanpopulationdamagestheecosystemwithahugeamountofhouseholdrubbish.Rubbishhillsdumpedontheoutskirtsareacaseinpoint.Evenifpeopleburyorburnthewaste,itmaybringaboutsoilorairpollutions.Furthermore,hundredsoftonsofwastewaterfromfactoriesarecontaminatingcityriversdayandnight.Gonearethedayswhenpeopleenjoyedswimmingintheriverandfishingonthebank.Sometimes,worsestill,untreatedsewagepouringfromchemicalfactoriespoisonsdirectlyurbanwatersupply.Drinkablewaterhasearareresource,andpeoplehavetotakeinsomewhatpollutedwater.ThenoneofitsresultshasbeentheemergenceofmanynewdiseasesandmoreandmorecancerAccordingly,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronething,weshouldappealtotheauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrolurbanization.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethatsustainabledevelopmentisextremelyvitaltous.壞了生態(tài)系統(tǒng)。一個恰當?shù)睦泳褪莾A倒在郊區(qū)的山。即使人們填埋或，也能泳，岸上垂釣的日子一去不返。有時更糟的是，化工廠處理的廢水直接毒害了城市供水。Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youdescribethedrawingexplainitsintendedmeaning,giveyouTheancientcultureofChinaisoneofthegreattreasuresofhumancivilization.Inthephotoabove,aforeignladyispleasantlyappreciatingatraditionalChinesehandcraftinamuseum.Atthesametime,itseemsthatthelittlehandiworkissmilingaswell.Inmyopinion,thetraditionalChinesecultureisnotonlycertaintosurvive,but,infact,isdestinedtothriveandprosper.OnefactorthathasalreadybeguntocontributetothepreservationofChinesetraditionalcultureisitscommercialization.AnotherreasonthatthefutureofChina'sancientculturecanbeconsidered"safe"istheactiveeffortstoprotectitonthepartoftheChinese ernment.Finally,thecultureofChinaisbuttressedandsupportedbywidespreadandgrowinginternationalinterestinChinaanditstraditions.ForChina,asforanyotherrapidlydevelocountry,thereisadangerthatage-oldcustomsandtraditionsmay elostintheshadowsofmodernization.Iftaichichuan,kung-fuorPekingoperaeverperishedfromtheearth,itwouldbeatragedyofimmeasurableproportions.Fortuna y,asaresultofsuccessfulcommercializationefforts,unwaveringernmentsupportandgrowinginterestsoverseas,thefutureofChina’straditionalculturelooksbrighterandmoresecurethaneverbefore. Writeanessaybasedonthefollowingchartinyourwriting,youinterpretthechart,andgiveyourcommentsAscanbeseenfromthebarchartabove,thepopulationaginer60yearsoldinChinahasincreasedmarkedlyfrom2000to2050.Fromthestatisticsgiveninthediagram,weestimatethattherewere120millionagedpeoplein2000,accountingforabout10%ofthetotalpopulation,whileitwillshootupto450millionin2050,approximay35%ofthetotal.Frommypointofview,theernment,thesocietyandthechildrenoftheoldallshouldcaretheoldratherthanoneortwoparties.Howwellwehandlethissocialissuereflectsthecivilizationofourcountry.Tobeginwith,allcitizenspaytaxestotheernment,sotheauthorityisobligedtoensureastableandhappyrestlifeofitspeople.Inaddition,thesocietyincludingcompanies,associationsandorganizationsshouldplayapositiveroleinhelagedpeople,bothfinanciallyandspiritually.Lastbutnotleast,thechildrenoftheelderlyshouldberesponsiblefortheirparents,becauseparentsnotonlybringthemtotheworld,butalsoraisethemtobeausefulcitizen.Inconclusion,Isuggestthatthewholesocietyshouldcreateanenvironmentconducivetherestlifeoftheold.Noonecanescapethe在我看來，、社會和兒女都應該照顧老年人，而不只是一方或兩方。我們?nèi)鏦riteanessaybasedonthefollowingchartinyourwriting,youinterpretthechart,giveyourThecolumnchartaboveillustratestheonlineshoptransactionsandthegrowthrateinChinafrom2001to2008.Duringtheperiod,therewasadramaticincreasefrom0.6billionin2001to125billionin2008inthetransaction.Meanwhile,thegrowthratedecreasedfrom200%to110.4percent,adeclineofabout90%.Whileonlineshopisnotwithoutitsrisks,itoffersanexcellentalternativetotraditionalshopforpeople.Thefirstreasonthate-shopissoappealingisitsrelativeeaseandconvenience.Forconscientiousstudentswithhecticschedules,purchasingitemsoneBayor isanexcellentwaytofreeupvaluabletimefortheirstudies.Thesecondadvantageofonlineshopisthatitisavailable24/7.Beingabletoshopatanyandallhoursofthedayisnotonlyconducivetothelatenightsassociatedwiththemodernlifestyle,butalsomeansthatpeoplenolongerhavetoplantheiractivitiesaroundstores’openinghours.Despitetheadvantagestopeoplesofmakingpurchasesonline,therearealsoafewcaveatsthatyoungpeopleshouldbearinmind.Firstly,thespeedandconvenienceofe-shopmanyencouragefrivolousorunnecessaryspendingbyinducingpeopletobuymorethantheyhadinitiallyintended.Secondly,thereisachancethatthosepeoplewhoarealreadyintrovertedmay eevenmorealienatedfromtheoutsideworld.上述柱狀圖揭示了2001至2008年中購交易額和增長率。在此期間，在交易額方下降了90%。NumberofpeopleinCityXabroadNumberofpeopleinCityXabroadin1995,2000andNumberof