托福寫(xiě)作范文(13)政府應(yīng)該花更多錢資助藝術(shù)而不是體育

13）Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:governmentsshouldspendmoremoneyinsponsoringartsthanonathletics?開(kāi)頭：不同意政府花更多的錢在資助藝術(shù)上而不是體育。（話題引入+他人觀點(diǎn)+明確立場(chǎng)+過(guò)渡句）Artsandathleticsbothplayindispensablerolesinpeople'slife,forartsnurturepeople'smindswhileathleticshelptobuildahealthyandstrongbody.Thus,therehasrecentlybeenaheateddebateonwhichonedeservesmorefinancialaidfromthegovernment.AsfarasIamconcerned,thegovernmentshouldgiveprioritytoathletics.Iamgoingtoelaboratemypointofviewinthefollowingparagraphs.中間段1：現(xiàn)代人缺乏鍛煉意識(shí)，多數(shù)處于亞健康狀態(tài)。（主題句+說(shuō)理論證+細(xì)節(jié)例子）Firstly,thephysicalqualityofmodernpeopleisnotasgoodasinthepast,whichcallsformoreexercises.Alongwiththehigh-speeddevelopmentofsociety,people,especiallyyouth,areconfrontedwithunprecedentedcompetition.Theyneedtoworkveryhardtoguaranteeadecentlife,whichcausesmostofthembeinthestateofsub-health.Therefore,itishightimethatthegovernmenttooksomemeasurestoreinforcecitizens'healthcondition.Forexample,thegovernmentshouldbuildeasilyaccessiblesportsfacilitiesintheneighborhoodsandmakeknowntothepublicthebenefitsofdoingexercisesthroughmassmedia.中間段2：體育強(qiáng)是國(guó)家實(shí)力的體現(xiàn)，能增強(qiáng)人們的自豪感和凝聚力。（主題句+說(shuō)理論證+細(xì)節(jié)例子）Secondly,asthesymbolofnationalpower,acountry'scompetitivenesshelpstoboostpeople'scohesionandpatriotism.WhenpeoplewatchsportscompetitiononTV,theywillbeveryexcitedandproudtowitnesstheirsportsmenstandingonthepodiumwithnationalanthemringingandthenationalflagrising.Itisnodenyingthatitisanexcellentopportunityforthepopulationtodevelopanidentitywiththestate.Itisthegovernment'sresponsibilitytocreatemoreopportunitieslikethisbyputtingmoreemphasisonsports.Forexample,galvanizedbygovernmentalfinancialaid,Chineseswimmingteamhasrecentlymadetremendousachievementsininternationalcompetitions,whichgreatlybooststhemoraleofallChinesepeople.讓步段：當(dāng)然，藝術(shù)也很重要，能提高民族的品位和修養(yǎng)。但是跟藝術(shù)相比，體育有更基礎(chǔ)的重要性，或者說(shuō)體育是“雪中送炭”，而藝術(shù)只是“錦上添花”。（承認(rèn)漏洞+堵漏）Admittedly,theimportanceofartsshouldneverbeoverlooked.Thecreationofartisticatmosphereisconducivetocultivatingpeople'stasteandtemperament.Ifasocietyisartisticallycultivated,itspeople'ssoulsarehardlytobecorruptedbymaterials.However,comparedwitharts,athleticsismorefundamental.Inotherwords,withoutagoodhealthcondition,peoplewouldnotbeabletoachieveanythingincludingarts.Thus,thevitalimportanceofathleticsisself-evident.結(jié)尾：重申觀點(diǎn)+歸納理由/升華主題Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthatthegovernmentshouldgivemorefinancialsupporttoathletics.ChairmanMao,thefounderofPRC,oncesaidthatagoodbodyistherootofrevolution.Thefundamentalsignificanceofathleticstohumanbeingscannotbeoverestimated.【重點(diǎn)表達(dá)】playanindispensablerolein…：在中扮演了不可或缺的重要角色nurturepeople'sminds：滋潤(rùn)人的心靈givepriorityto：優(yōu)先考慮physicalquality：體質(zhì)callfor：需要alongwith…：隨著beconfrontedwith：面臨beinthestateofsub-health:處于亞健康狀態(tài)itishightimethat…：到了的時(shí)候了makeknownto:向宣傳massmedia：大眾傳媒nationalanthem/flag：國(guó)歌/國(guó)旗Itisnodenyingthat…：毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)developanidentitywiththestate：培養(yǎng)一種國(guó)家認(rèn)同感putanemphasison：重視boostthemoraleof…：增強(qiáng)的士氣beconduciveto:對(duì)有利agoodbodyistherootofrevolution：好的身體是革命的本錢fundamentalsignificance：基礎(chǔ)性的意義cannotbeoverestimated：再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào)也不過(guò)分【必備素材】*論述現(xiàn)代人亞健康的橋段Alongwiththehigh-speeddevelopmentofsociety,people,especiallyyouth,areconfrontedwithunprecedentedcompetition.Theyneedtoworkveryhardtoguaranteeadecentlife,whichcausesmostofthembeinthestateofsub-health.隨著社會(huì)的高速發(fā)展，人們（特別是年輕人）面臨著前所未有的壓力，他們需要更努力地工作才能確保一種體面的生活，這使很多人的身體都處于亞健康狀態(tài)。*論述體育能帶給人們國(guó)家認(rèn)同感的橋段WhenpeoplewatchsportscompetitiononTV,theywillbeveryexcitedandproudtowitnesstheirsportsmenstandingonthepodiumwithnationalanthemringingandthenationalflagrising.Itisnodenyingthatitisanexcellentopportunityforthepopulationtodevelopanidentitywiththestate.當(dāng)人們?cè)陔娨暽嫌^看體育比賽時(shí)，他們會(huì)非常興奮和自豪地看到他們國(guó)家的運(yùn)動(dòng)員站在領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)上，伴隨著國(guó)歌的奏響和國(guó)旗的升起。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這是一個(gè)培養(yǎng)人們國(guó)家認(rèn)同感最好的機(jī)會(huì)。*論述藝術(shù)對(duì)人心靈的好處Thecreationofartisticatmosphereisconducivetocultivatingpeople'stasteandtemperament.Ifasocietyisartisticallycultivated,itspeople'ssoulsarehardlytobecorruptedbymaterials.藝術(shù)氛圍的打造對(duì)提升人們的品位和修養(yǎng)是至關(guān)重要的。如果一個(gè)社會(huì)的藝術(shù)氛圍好，人們的心靈很難被物質(zhì)侵蝕?！緟⒖甲g文】同不同意：政府應(yīng)該花更多的錢支持藝術(shù)而不是體育？藝術(shù)和體育在人們的生活中共同扮演了不可或缺的角色，藝術(shù)滋潤(rùn)了人的心靈而體育強(qiáng)健了人的體魄。因此，出現(xiàn)了一個(gè)熱議的話題，關(guān)于哪一個(gè)應(yīng)該得到更多的政府經(jīng)濟(jì)支持。依我看，政府應(yīng)該更加重視體育。我將用下面幾個(gè)段落來(lái)論述我的觀點(diǎn)。首先，現(xiàn)代人的體質(zhì)已經(jīng)不如以前了，這種局面需要加強(qiáng)運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)扭轉(zhuǎn)。隨著社會(huì)的高速發(fā)展，人們（特別是年輕人），面臨著前所未有的壓力，他們需要更努力地工作才能確保一種體面的生活，這使很多人的身體都處于亞健康狀態(tài)。因此，現(xiàn)在到了政府采取措施增強(qiáng)民眾體質(zhì)的時(shí)候了。舉個(gè)例子，政府應(yīng)該在社區(qū)建造更多唾手可得的體育設(shè)施，并且通過(guò)大眾媒體加強(qiáng)宣傳運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處。第二，一個(gè)國(guó)家在體育上的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力是國(guó)家實(shí)力的標(biāo)志，能增強(qiáng)民眾的凝聚力和愛(ài)國(guó)主義情懷。當(dāng)人們?cè)陔娨暽嫌^看體育比賽時(shí)，他們會(huì)非常興奮和自豪地看到他們國(guó)家的運(yùn)動(dòng)員站在領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)上，伴隨著國(guó)歌的奏響和國(guó)旗的升起。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這是一個(gè)培養(yǎng)人們國(guó)家認(rèn)同感最好的機(jī)會(huì)。政府應(yīng)該通過(guò)大力發(fā)展體育去創(chuàng)造更多這樣的機(jī)會(huì)。例如，受到國(guó)家經(jīng)濟(jì)支持的激勵(lì)，中國(guó)國(guó)家游泳隊(duì)最近在國(guó)際比賽上捷報(bào)頻傳，這